FF_MANAN_MADLY_IN_LOVE {index-page-13} - Page 4

Damn cute...really like fab 2 banter & Manan lift scene was cute, please continue !

part - 10 (B)


cabir knock at manik door..
manik shouts from inside leave mee alone
cabir shouts it's mee manik plz open the door.. talk to mee for once he again knock at his door.. manik opens door .. cabir sighs nd enter in his room.. he look at manik he was sitting at edge of bed.. nd was looking at floor he went toward him.. sit beside him ask him what happen..

manik look at him then again at floor.. nd narrated him whole lift incident.. how he was struck there in lift with nandani there fight even that kiss part he told him everything cabir look at manik with a serious look..
cabir- ar u serious u manik malhotra kissed a gal.. who never let any gal come close to him.. he kissed a gal wo bhi kaun.. then he start laughing lyk a maniac..
manik- shouts CABIIRR shutup or I'll kill u..
cabir- ok ok again start laughing..
manik -took a,pillow and throw at his face..
cabir- manik stop ok sorry.. do tell mee one thing why u kissed her..
manik - I don't know nd I don't want to talk abt it.. now.. plz.. cabir-ok ok.. chl to fresh hoja or bhr aja atleast..
manik-ok
cabir smile and leave from there..

NANDANI HOME
nandani lock herself in her room.. lying on bed and was hugging her pillow nd was crying bitterly..
mean while veer nd tanu also reached home.. everyone was sitting in living area.. they wished good evening to them nd walk toward nandani room.. knock at her door.. nandani getup from bed wipe her tears nd open her door.. veer nd tanu look at her worriedly .. nd ask her what happen to her so she suddenly disappeared from mall without informing..
nandani try to make an excuse..
nandani- wo actually ph agya tha office say.. kuch files urgently office bhijwani Thi to.. mujhe waha say ana pda..
tanu- was nt convinced with her excuse so she asked ph kr ri thi to pick kyu ni kra
nandani-wo network ni tha..
veer- ghr pohnch kr to kr sakti thi na call kyu ni kra
nandani-bhool gyi yr sorry
now both were convinced
veer chl fr neeche chl khana khate hai
nandani-Mann ni kr rha
.mujhe neend ari hai
tanu- omg tujhe khana khAne ka mann ni .. yeh kaise hua..
nandani- plz yr
veer - acha baba theek hai so ja tu..
nandani- smiles at him.. she wished them good night
nd then sleeps..

precap -club
nd drunk nandani :P

Originally posted by: Serendipity2015

Damn cute...really like fab 2 banter & Manan lift scene was cute, please continue !

thanku so much :)
nd next part is on next page u can read it
:p

Now I finished all parts. Awesome.. Continue it..u penned it very well.

part-11

manik home
after dinner every one leave for there respective rooms
manik was unable to sleep so he start playing guitar.. nd was l lost in his own thoughts.. cabir ques is running in his mind.. why he kissed he.. he himself don't knw how when he kissed her.. he was annoyed at his own thoughts he kept guitar on table.. nd walk toward his bed nd was trying to sleep..


NEXT MORNING

NANDANI HOME

nandani woke.. she reclt yesterday incident.. nd was again sad.. after freshnup she went down stairs nd saw her chacha was leaving for office so early she went toward him hug him.. nd ask him why he is going office so early.
chacha told her they ar launching New housing project for middle class.. nd sum malhotra constructions got there tender.. so they ar collaborating with them for this project.. malhotra construction will work under them.. they ar having meeting today so he is leaving for office so early..
nandani-ok chacha
chacha- bye
nandani-bye
after breakfast she too left for office
in afternoon she got call from her one of clg friend rohan..
he invited her nd her friends for his b'day party..
nandani said they Will definitely come. .. she wished him happy b'day.. then inform alvira tanu nd veer abt party..
clock strikes 5 pm
then she leaves for home
rest of her gang also reached home..
they got ready for party nandani was wearing black colour gown nd was looking extremely beautiful nd sexy..
al her friends were waiting for her in living area badimummy chachi.. pooja.. veer nd tanu mom lavnya.. sidharth mom namrta was also sitting there.. when nandani came down.. all were looking at her
. veer - hot lg ri hai
nandani- mai to paida he hot hui thi
namrta- pulls her ear achha
nandani- mom plz ouchh chodo dard hora hai plz sorry (actually namrta kapoor is sidharth mom but nandani too calls her mom.. she too love nandani lyk her own daughter she always wanted a daughter but god blessed her with two sons but she never complain bcz for her nandani is her own daughter)
namrta- ek condition pr waha jkr koi masti ni no pranks no shararat
nandani -made face ok mom abto chodo dard hora hai..
then chachi put some tikka behind her ear nd says mere nandu ko kisiki nazar na lge..
alvira - playfully ha ha sari nazar isi ki uttaro sara pyaar isi ko karo hum to kuch hai he ni she said this with fake anger
nandani-giggles
veer- to joins alvira haan humse koi pyaar ni krta humari to srf badimummy hai
he hugs badimummy
veer mom achha beta btau tujhe
veer - sorry mom mai to mazak kr ra tha ap to seriously le gye
they al starting laughing
nandani- arey ab chalo
tanu - ha chalo
warna hum party khatam hone k bad pohnchege
with this they al leave for party venue..
they reached venue with an hour..
party was at rohan farm house
nd together enter ..
as soon as they enter they saw rohan was standing there near a table and was talking to someone..
that person back was visible only..
veer waved his hand rohan.. rohan looked at him nd excuses himself and went toward them..
they together wished him nd gave him his b'day gft

precap- same

ok bye ^_^

Originally posted by: Lovelylav7

Now I finished all parts. Awesome.. Continue it..u penned it very well.

thanku so much ^_^

Originally posted by: HTA111

Truly nice continue soon

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Part-12

nandani luk at the person with whom rohan was talking.. she thought kahi to dekha hai isse.. face bhi to ni dikh ra..
suddenly that man turn his face toward them.. nandani was shocked to see him here.. she least expected this to be happen she thought.. that man is equally shocked.. well it's none other than our very own MR MANIK MALHOTRA.. well fab 5 is also invited :P
rohan call his name.. manik cum near them nandani put her hand on her forehead.. rohan introduce them.. nd told them.. manik nd he together working for an music album.. then he luk at nandani..nd told her abt fab5 how much famous they..are.nandani was nt interested in there talk so she was only nodding her head in yes or no.. manik was continuously staring at her.. he mummurs hot.. then he cum back to his senses and realised what exactly he was thinking..
before rohan told abt nandani nd bird.wings..
veer interrupts ohk yr abhi k liye itna he.. today is ur b'day lets enjoy that..
rohan- ohh yr ha.. see udhar ek disco thek type arrangement hai u guys go there and enjoy,i'll join u guys with in few minutes
veer- ok.. he holds nandani hand nd took her to dance floor alvira nd tanu followed them..
manik- notice this he didn't lyk it he luk annoyed..
as soon as they reach there nandani pull veer nd mummmers in his ears -pagal hai kya tere gf waha khadi hai nd tu mere sath dance karega.. u idiot kbhi to gf bf ki tarh behave karo..
veer- achha bachu or jo tujhe problem mai padhne ki or girne padne ki,adat hai uska kya kare..
nandani-tujhe yaha bhi mere papa ki tarh behave krna hai..
veer dumbly look at her while alvira nd tanu were laughing
fab 4 was also at dance floor but they didn't see nandani there
manik was sitting at bar counter.. nd was holding a drink but. his eyes were fixed on nandani..
nandani- veer
veer- ohk mere maa.. but promise mee yahi rahegi idhar udhar nhi,jaygi ohk
nandani-ohk Papa or kuch..but I'm feeling lyk pyaasi chidiya mai pani pee kr ayi..
veer- dhyan say
nandani-ok
nandani walk toward bar counter he notice manik there he try to ignore him
nandani to bar tender
one glass water..
manik was pissed off he hold nandani hand..
nandani- what r u doing leave my hand..
manik was nt listening to her he was angrily looking at her
nandani - I said leave my hand..
manik-leaves her hand.
nandani saw a glass full of water she thought bar tender place it there she finish it in one go..
manik -was shocked
bcz she actually drink manik drink..(vodka)
she demanded one more glass .. bar tender gave it to her..
now she is full talli
veer notice sumthing is wrong they al ran toward nandani..
nandani was looking at her feet
veer shook her..
nandani- mill nhi rha
veer-kya ni mill rha
nandani- pair
veer-alvira-tanu - together what
nandani-mujhe mere pair nhi mil rhe..
veer - notice nandani is holding a glass..
he check her glass
veer- ho gya kaam
tanu - kya mtlb
veer- vodka pee li isne
alvira - worriedly ab kya hoga humara
veer- to bar tender kitni glass piye isne
before bar tender ans to his question
manik - 2
veer- what adha glass to sambhal ni pati 2 glass
alvira- better we should leave for home.. isse pehle yeh yaha kuch kand kre.
tanu- haan or waise bhi we can't handle her yeh to sid kr sakta hai nd he is nt here..
veer- yes I think hume chlna chaiye
he hold nandani hand
veer- chl nandu
nandu- no meko nhi jana meko to apne pair dhundne hai
tanu- tere pair tere pairo mai he hai
nandu- kaha
tanu- tera gown uske neeche dekh
nandu - check her gown
ohh ha mai bhi kiti budhu hu na nd she start laughing
tanu-chale
nandani- no
veer-ab kya hua
nandani - dance... dance to kiya ni
alvira- ghr chl kr karenge dance chlo
veer drag nandani..
nandani was shouting no nhi jana
manik was looking at them he was smiling
he msg fab 5 he is going home

precap- nandani in manik car

part-13

manik - open his car.. he get call from cabir he received his call nd was busy talking to him
nandani tricked veer she ran toward manik car nd hide in it..
veer thought she again ran into party.. they al ran inside
manik - cut cabir call.. he went inside his car nd start driving..
5 minutes later.. nandani who was sitting behind manik
nandani- bhooo
manik- was shocked..
he look behind and saw nandani
manik- he stop his car
manik tum yaha what ar u doing inside my car
manik was scolding her
so she start crying
nandani- crying tumne mujhpe chillaya..
manik- realised she is drunk
so he calm himself
manik- nandani stop crying
nandani-no
manik- plz
nandani- pehle mujhe sorry bolo
manik- sorry ab plz chup
nandani- aise nhi kaan pakard kr bolo sorry
manik- gets little angry but then again calm himself
manik hold his ears sorry ab plz chup
nandani- start crying more loudly
manik- ab kya ho gya
nandani- kaan pakard kr murga bn kr bolo sorry
manik- angrily what listen I'm nt going to do that
nandani- start crying more loudly
manik- ok ok kr rha hu kha fass gya mai
nandani- happily kro
manik - did as nandani told him to do
ab ok
nandani- hmm
manik- where is ur home I'll drop u
nandani- again start crying
manik- ab kyu ro ri ho..
nandani- mujhe ghr ni jana
manik- to kaha Jana hai
nandani- mujhe gola khana hai
manik - what tym dekha hai iss tym koi gola nhi milta
nandani- plz
manik- look at her puppy face - ok
chalo
nandani - happily hold his arm and kissed him on his cheeks
manik - was surprised at her sudden gesture.. he hold his cheek with his hand..
nandani- went inside his car..manik too start driving..
after few minutes they reached gola shop..
nandani- demanded 2 golas
and start eating lyk a small baby
manik- was smiling at her nd thought how cute she is
then he again start driving,
suddenly nandani start removing her gown
manik was shock he pulls car breaks
nd asked nandani yeh kya kr rhi ho tum
nandani- garmi lg ri hai
manik - listen stop mai ac on kr deta hu ok
nandani - ok he pulls his cheeks ur sho shweet
manik- ouchh nandani stop
manik reached malhotra mansion
he thought I ddon't know her no or address its safe for her ki wo yahi rhe.. aaj he took her into his room.. made her sit on his bed
manik- nandani w8t tum yaha rest karo mai tumhare liye lemon juice lata hu
nd he leave for kitchen
mean while fab 5 also reached home.. servant open door for them.. cabir notice lemon juice in manik hands

precap- manik hidding nandani from fab 5

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