FF_MANAN_MADLY_IN_LOVE {index-page-13} - Page 5

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part-14
cabir notice lemon juice. in manik hands.. he asked him
cabir- manik hangover tujhe kbhi hota nhi fr ye lemon
juice kiske liye
manik-fumbles arey cabir mai aise he lemon juice nhi
pee sakta kya
c- ha pee sakta hai na.. pee chal pee..
manik- ha yr pee ra hu
c- to fr pee na
manik- mai actually room mai jake peeta hu mujhe
washroom jana hai pehle
c- itne excuse bnayga wo bhi lemon juice k liye cabir
thought kuch to gadbad hai pta krna padega
MANIK- goes to his room lock it from inside.. he turn
around.. nd saw nandani was nt there
manik thought ab yeh ladki kaha chali gyi.. suddenly he
hear noises coming from washroom.. he put glass on
side table and walk toward washroom he slightly open
washroom door peep inside.. nd was shocked at the
view nandani was standing under shower.. nd singing..
he look at bathroom tub full with paper boats.. paper
were scattered on floor.. he shook his head.. nd thought
chalti firti musibat hai.. he bang his head on door.. nd
look at nandani.. who was dancing nd singing there..
nandani- thande thande pani say nahana chahiye gana
aye ya na aye gana chahiye.. she was singing lyk 2 year
kid..
manik - took a deep breath and walk toward nandani..
he hold her from shoulders
manik- nandani chalo
NANDANI- no mujhe barish mai nahana hai
manik- barish barish kaha say agyi yaha
nandani- indicated her hand toward shower yaha say
manik- was trying to cntrl his laughter.. nandani barish
ni ari wo shower hai chalo.
nandani- no barish hai mujhe rain mai dance bhot psnd
hai
she hold manik hands she put his both hands on her
waist nd put her both hands on his shoulder.. nd start
dancing with him.. manik was lost in her eyes.. nandani
put her head on his chest.. close her eyes and start
humming sum song..
manik feel his heart is beating so fast.. he realise there
position.. slowly remove his hand from her waist.. nd
close shower..
manik- nandani barish khatam ho gyi chalo chale..
nandani- what itni jaldi mujhe nahana tha..
he bring her out from washroom make her sit on
couch..
he bring towel nd hand over to her.. nd told her to wipe
herself..
nandani- no mujhe nhi krna tum krdo plz..
manik thought hosh mai nhi hai isliye aise bol ri hai
hosh mai aygi to mujhe kachha kha jaygi..
manik- wipe her head
manik brings sum clothes for her..
nandani- tum
manik- shouts no wo washroom hai waha jakr karo
khud..
nandani- no mai yahi change karugi
manik - no ways waha jao
nandani- again start crying
manik- ok mere maa.. yahi change krlo mai bhr jata hu
nhi manik tu bhr nhi ja sakta sbko shq ho jayga
manik- mai washroom mai jata hu
nandani- hold his hand no u too stay here
nd she start changing her clothes
mmanik at once closes his eyes turn his back
after changing clothes nandani shouts done ho gya
manik- hogya na now drink this .
nandani- yeh kya hai
manik- tasty tasty drink
nandani- achha she took sip.. spit on floor.. mai ni
piyugi kadwa hai.. she throw entire drink on floor
manik- yeah kya kiya hold his head..
uuu
manik- thought kuch krna padega
MANIK-goes to kitchen he lock nandani in room
he took lemon from fridge cut it into half
nd thought kya kya din agye apne ghr mai choro ki
tarah ghum ra hu.. cabir was watching al this.. he
followed him to his Room.. nd saw nandani was sitting
on floor he shouts yeh yaha kaise ayi..
manik- tujhe pta chl gya na yeh yaha hai to kya sbko
btayga ab dheere bol..
cabir- dhere bolu ok mai dhere bolta hu yeah yaha kya
kr ri hai
manik - andr chlpehle
cabir went inside his room manik lock his room..
cabir-mujhe na lga he tha kuch gadbad pr itni bdi nhi
pta tha
manik- ho gya tera ya mai bhi kuch bolu
c- bol bol
m- narrated him whole incident cabir was laughing
continuously he look at nandani who was busy drawing
sumthing on paper than at manik
c- seriously aj tk tune kisi ladki ko pass fatakne ni diya
or ek ladki ne tere bja rakhi hai.. on the serious note
abt this kuch baat krni hai pr tu isse sambhalne mai
busy hai to subh baat krte hai he wished him gud n8t
nd walk toward door
manik- cabir
cabir- don't worry mai kisiko kuch nhi boluga navya ko
bhi nhi
manik smiles at him nd then cabir leave from there
manik again lock his door
nd walk toward nandani who was still busy in her
drawing
precap- kuch to hua hai kuch hone lga hai :p

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Originally posted by: KewlaniGarima

Awsm parrs dear!!!
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Loved it!!!
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Continue soon!!!

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ok

part-15
manik took lemon in his hand.. nd too Sat on floor
beside nandani..
manik-nandani
nandani-humm
manik-yeh kya kr ri ho tum
nandani-drawing ur face
manik- happily dikhao plz
nandani- ye dekho
manik happily took paper from her hand
nd was shocked to see nandani drawing
manik- ye to giraff hai
nandani-ha tum giraff he to ho itne lambe..
manik- ha ha very funny.. tum bhi to chuhiya ho choti
si
nandani- mai chuhiya ni hu. I'm nandu
manik - laughs ok ok..
chalo bed pe Jake so jao
he gets up from floor nd offered his hand to nandani
nandani- opens her arm.. Nhi mujhe godi mai uthao..
manik- took her in his arms.. and place her on bed.. nd
thought how to make her drink dis.. lemon.. nandani
shouts - mujhe song sunao mujhe bina song sunne
neend nhi ati.. manik got an idea.. he sit beside
nandani.. nandani place her head in his lap.. manik sing
sawali si raat ho khamoshiyo ka sath ho (song) nd look
at her face she was sleeping peacefully.. he again
smile.. nd place her head on pillow nd cover her with
blanket.. took his guitar.. nd walk toward balcony.. he
sat on couch.. nd start playing his guitar nd
unknowingly start thinking abt nandani.. nd smiling
continuously.. suddenly he feel sum w8t on his shoulder
he open his eyes nd look s up and saw nandani
standing there..
manik- tum uth gyi go to bed nd plz sleep
nandani- still in effect of drink.. nodd her head in no
manik-nandani
nandani- jo log mujhe ache lgte hai wo mujhe nandu
bulate hai
manik-ohh to mai tumhe achha lgta hu
nandani-hmm
manik- to mai bulau tumko nandu
nandani- happily yes yes
manik-happily nandu
nandani- ur so cute he pull his cheeks
nd put her head on his shoulder Sat beside him
manik looks at sky
nandani notice ths she ask why ar u looking there
manik - I'm looking at stars
nandani- why
m- bcz they ar very beautiful they shine for us
nandani- u lyk them bcz they shine
manik - hmm
nandani-when I'm here why u want them to shine for u
don't worry I'll shine for u
manik- was speechless he wAs staring her continuously
manik - u''ll shine for mee
nandani-yes.. badepapa kehte hai I'm light mai jaha jati
hu waha sb happy ho jate hai to I'll shine for u.. tum
bhi happy ho jaoge.. she put her hand on his heart or
tumhara heart bhi..
manik- had tears in his eyes
nd thought how she knows I'm nt happy
nandani hugg him he too hug him back both slept lyk
this
precap- manik-cabir conversation

part- 16
manik wake up at 7 am in morning he look at nandani
who was sleeping in his arm peacefully he took her in
his arm and place her bed.. nd went outside in garden
and Sat there on chair.. cabir was already there.. he
saw manik sitting on chair he went toward him and Sat
next to him..
cabir- manik
manik- puchh kya puchna hai tujhe..
c- tu nandani ko ghr kyu laya tu to use psnd ni krta na
fr kyu use laya..
manik - look at him.. cabir yeh kaisa question hua I
told u I found her in my car she was drunk mere pass
uska no address kuch nhi tha so I brought her home
c- ok u don't have her no u don't knw her address tu
use wapis party mai bhi chodh sakta tha na fr kyu laya
use yaha
manik- was speechless he himself don't knw why he did
that cabir is right he should have drop her back in party
then why
manik - I don't knw us tym kuch or aya he ni dimag
mai
c- laughs nd tune ek br bhi socha kisiko inform kardu
uske ghrwale pareshan hore honge
m- shitt how can I forget that
c- don't worry maine raat mai he rohan say no leke
uske ghr pr baat krli thi ate he honge.. wo log
m- hugs him thanks yr tere bina mera kya hota
cabir-kuch,nhi hota
they both laugh
nd they notice veer cuming out from his car
veer cum near them he just hugged manik
veer- thanku bro thanku so much.. u don't knw hum
log kitna pareshan the wo to cabir ka call aya to we ar
ok..
cabir - it's ok yr..
manik - hesitantly asked him tum uske
cabir look at manik nd thought what he is upto itna
concern uske liye whom he don't lyk he smirk
veer - friend her best friend cum bro
manik after listening bro word he had a huge smile on
his face he just hugged veer
both veer nd cabir were surprised on his sudden
gesture.. cabir thought manik or smile wo bhi pehle br
kuch to gardbad hai cabir pta krna padega chl kya rha
iske brain mai
veer asked where is nandu
manik told him that she is sleeping in his room..
veer along with manik walks in manik room he took
sleeping nandani in his arms .. nd went toward his car
nd placed sleeping nandani on back seat nd drove his
car toward home..
manik thought when she was drunk she talk to him very
politely jagegi to fr gussa to ni ho jaygi
NANDANI HOME
nandani woke up around 10 am with a very bad
headache she start crying in pain... jai gave her cup of
coffee.. nd told her with eyes to finish it.. nandani took
a sip nd shouts kadwi hai..
pooja to kisne bola tha talli hone ko..
nandani - fufu see apki biwi mujhe dant ri hai
jai- pooja sshh uska headache hora hai na don't say
her anything
pooja- ha apki ladli jo hai
nandani giggles nd did hi 5 with jai
chachi enters in her room- chalo nandu jaldi tyaar hoja
bauji ko nhi pta ki tu puri raat ghr say bhr thi wo bhi
peekr.. unhe bhana mara hai hum sbne ki tu ashram gyi
hai waha say ph aya tha.. ab tyaar hokr waha bhag
nandani- ok boss
then nandani ask her mai pee kr bhr thi kahan thi ghr
kaise ayi
pooja - narrated her whole incident
nandani thought that manik malhotra helped her
Chachi- tu use ph krkr tq Boldena veer say no le lio
uske. pass hoga
nandani- hmm..
then she get ready and leave for ashram
in afternoon she call VEER nd told him to msg manik
no..
she call manik and told him that she want to meet
him.. she msg him sum restaurant name nd told him to
cum there..
precap- nandani manik manik nandani.

part-17
nandani was sitting in restaurant near glass pannel she
was again again looking on road manik is 20 minutes
late she is looking annoyed.. finally manik cums.. she
saw him coming inside.. manik cum near her.. before he
could say anything nandani start shouting 20 minutes
late.. tym ki koi value hai ya nai she started giving him
lecture on tym
manik thought bol to aise rhi hai... jaise isse jyada busy
or koi hai he ni ... thoda sa late hua to kya ab mere
jaan lelegi.. he thought I was struck in traffic mai
jaanbujh kr thodi late hua..
he also shouts chup bolti ho chup hone ka nam ni leti..
kbhi dusro ki bhi sun liya karo..
nandani-kyu tum koi yaha k pm ho jo mai tumhari sunu
manik-ha
nandani-nahi..
manik-nandani
nandani-manik
and they asusual start fighting lyk Tom nd Jerry..
nandani took a vase and throw it on manik..
manik- shouts have u gone mad..
nandani-she again pic a glass nd throw it on manik
manik- took plate for his self defense
mean while an old couple enter in restaurant they saw
manan fighting..with each other
manik-raat ko tumhari baatien Sun kr I thought nhi ur
nt chudail but no I was wrong u ar chudail
nandani- I'm chudail na.. ruko abhi btati hu chudail kya
kr sakti hai
manik- kya kar logi
nandani- took a knife tumhara khoon piyugi
manik- all shocked. he try to grab knife from nandani
hand.. nandani mazak mt kro lg jaygi..
nandani- shakal dekh kr lg ra hai I'm.joking.
manik-raat ko tumhari baatien sunn kr lga ki ur nt
chudail but no I was ur a really chudail..
nandani- thought maine raat ko isse kya kya bola pta
krna padega.. kya raat ko maine raat ko kya bola..
manik- raat ko bola tumne to kiya
nandani- kya kiya.. now she is scared
manik-kiss
nandani- eyes widened what
manik-mujhe yaha he indicated his finger on his lips..
nandani- tears start building up in her eyes
manik-notice tears in her eyes.. m
manik- ok ok look I'm joking kuch ni kiya tumne kl..
nandani- uu I will kill u
nandani punch him in his stomach
manik- ouchh
nandani- was going to punch him again
when an old couple cum near there table.. manan look
at them..
old uncle- sunti ho yaad hai tum bhi mujhse aise he
ladti thi jaise ye ladki iss ladke say lad rhi hai
old aunty-ha or app bhi aise he pite the mujhse
manan were confused they look at each other then at
old couple
aunty - tum dono,ek sath kitne ache lgte ho
nandani- aap aisa kyu keah re ho.. or mujhe iske sath
hamesha ni rehna isko or,ni jhelna
manik - angrily same here
uncle- bete husband-wife mai jhgdra ruthna mana
chalta rehta hai
manik-nandani-together-husband-wife
manik- ye mere biwi nhi hai
nandani-ye mera husband nhi hai
uncle-Aunty confusingly sorry tum dono jaise lad re the
husband wife lg re the..
manik-nandani laughs it's ok Aunty..
uncle aunty said chalo hum chalte tum log hamesha
happy rehna or jyada mt ladna
manik-nandanismiles at them..
manik-nandani again laughs hi5 with each other
nandani- friends
manik- ya friends
nandani- smiles at him
manik- so now we ar friends abto marne ni aogi
nandani- nhi pr khoon pee jaugi tumhara..
manik- ok they both
uncle aunty was watching them from window
uncle to Aunty
I can never be wrong.. I saw love between them..as for
now they don't love each other but one day they will
definitely going to fall for each other. .
aunty continues madly deeply in love.. nd forever.. she
hug her husband nd leave from there
precap- manik in nandani car.. he cum to knw abt nandani luv for food. :D

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Originally posted by: HTA111

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even I'm enjoying writing this ff.. don't worry I'm working on next parts.. trying to give u al more manan moments.. once I finish. writing i'll update.. thanku so much for ur love nd support for my story ^_^

part -18
manik became sad he thought she doesn't remember
any thing abt yesterday incident ..
nandani notice this that he is sad.. so he asked him
why,ar u sad..
manik- nothing mai kaha sad hu
nandani- yes ur.. mai logo ki ankho mai dekh kr dil
padh leti hu..
manik- smirks achha.. to kya padha mere ankho
mai..tumne nandu
nandani- nandu.. how u knw my nick name is nandu
manik- kyunki kl tum pee kr chila ri thi call mee nandu..
call mee nandu he mimics her..
nandani- laugh or kya kya bola Maine
manik- yehi jo tumhe achhe lgte hai wo tumhe nandu
bulate hai he try to look her in her eyes
nandani- embarass.. so she try to change the topic..
tum chalo mere sath I want to show u something.. she
hold his hand nd drag him near her car.. manik nandu
where ar we going.. nandani arey baba chalo to sahi..
she drag him near her car..
nandani- isse milo
manik - kisse yaha to koi ni hai
nandani-pointed at her car isse yeh toasty hai
manik-laughs.. continuously. he tried to control his
laughter tumne apne gadi ka nam rakha hua hai he
again start laughing..
nandani- became al angry.. ismai hasne jaisa kya hai..
nd don't call her gadi or car.. usko uske nam say bulao
manik - again start laughing ohh god
nandani-make angry pout tum yaha haste rho I'm going
huh
manik - notice this ohk ohk sorry.. ab nhi hasuga ok..
nandani- still angry
manik- I said na sorry
nandani-ok ab chale
manik-chalo pr kaha
nandani-kitne question krte ho tum chup chap chalo..
manik- chalna hai ya ismai baithna hai he pointed at
her car
nandani- baithna hai she push him in car
nd start driving. .. manik- hold on tum drive karogi..
then he look around in her car.. nd was stunned there
was a small fridge in her car.. a small cupboard.. and at
back seat Tiffin boxes.. manik - what is this.. I'm in
kitchen or in car he thought..
nandani- to manik yr wo plz fridge mai cake pda hai..
plz nikal do.. I'm hungry..
manik- nandani ur driving.. so how u'll eat..
nandani- I'll manage.. mujhe adat hai so
manik- no no listen mujhe abhi itni jaldi ni marna
ek kaam karo tum idhar ajao mai drive krta hu
nandani- nhi drive to mai he karugi
manik- don't be so stubborn
nandani- wo to mai hu idea tum mujhe cake khilao mai
drive krugi
manik-ohh God ur so crazy
nandani- proudly wo to mai hu
manik start feeding her cake..
nandani took him to park..
manik looks around.. he thought yeh to mere ghr k
pass wala park hai..
nandani comes near him.. he saw a packet in nandani
hands
manik- what is this
nandani-thodi Der mai Sb pta chl jayga
manik saw some kids and old ppl in park.. and they
were looking at them.. nd smiling..
(actually they were looking at nandani.. that park is
part of nandani ashram she daily cum there in morning
for jogging manik never notice this)
al kids went near nandani nd hugged..
nandani to happily responded she try to hug them.al
together..
manik- was just looking at them
then she went near old ppls nd hugged them al one by
one
she indicated manik to cum .. manik goes near them..
she introduced them..
suddenly al kids near nandani pull her near them..
kids- Didi ap humare liye kya laye aaj
nandani- mai nhi wo bhaia laye hai tum sbke liye kuch..
al kids went near manik
nandani with eyes told him to open that packet nd
distribute among them
manik- opens packet nd saw choclates in it. .. he one
by one distribute chocolates among kids nd old ppl
nandani goes near him asked him how ar u feeling..
manik saw al kids ar happy so he says I'm feeling gud
actually I'm feeling great.. u knw I never felt so much
peace
nandani- smiles tbhi to I bbrought u here... u knw kisi
ko thodi si khushi dene mai jo maza ata hai wo kisi or
cheez mai ni ata.. see u tried knw ur happy na
manik - ar u magician
nandani- no
manik- tum yaha aksr hoti ho tbhi everyone know u
here
nandani- yes actually wo sath mai jo building hai that
my ashram I wwork there..
manik- ohh
nandani- chale
manik-no
nandani- what kyu
manik- actually mera ghr pass mai hai I live there with
my friends cum have dinner with us
nandani- try to make some excuse.. manik - don't listen
to her and took her at malhotra mansion
precap- malhotra mansion
nandani is cooking for manik