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Posted: 10 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: Sanskruti16499

Wow awesome start

Plz post nxt part soon
Eagerly waiting for nxt update
Plz PM me if you can
😊😊


thanku :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
None other than our lambu manik...post tge next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART 4-

she closed her eyes due to fear as she thought she is going to slip on floor.. when she feels sum one is holding her..
she slowly opens her eyes one by one.. and luk up.. she saw two anger filled eyes luking at her.. then she luk down again luks up try to luk at his face.. when he shouts..
andhi ho kya dekh kr ni chl. sakti..
she gets angry and shouts..
tumhare pass ankhien hai button tum dekh kr ni chl sakte..
everyone luks at her with shock expression.. lyk she is sum alien.. who don't knw with whom she is messing..
that person again shouts.. how dare u talk to mee lyk Thai.. do u even have any idea who I am..
and stare at her with angry eyes
nandani- kyun tumko nhi maloom tum kaun ho??
he is shocked
he again shouts - I'm manik malhotra
before he could say anything else nandani interrupts..
nandani- to arti uttaru tumhari.. ya tumhare nam ka Prasad bantu.. she luks up.. and say aiyappa kaise kaise namune bnaye hai apne..
now manik is supper angry -
he shouts - kya kaha tumne
dekho tum bhot galat insaan say panga le ri ho..
tumhe pta ni hai mai tumhare sath kya kr sakta hu..
nandani - irritated.. she saw a boy is drinking coffee.. she grabs his mug and pour it on manik heads :P
before he could realise what is happening..
he shouts ouchh..
nandani laughs and runs from there..
manik to his friends (cabir mukti dhruv alia navya) I'm nt going to leave her...
and everyone broke into laughter...manik pass angry glares to them and they al shutup at once
cabir was the frst one to ask.. yr waise manik thi kaun jo tere the manik malhotra ki band bja gyi...
manik luks at him nd says I don't knw nd I'm nt going to spare her... nd they al leaves from there..

precap - hospital :P


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome manan first meeting fantastic
😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15




:)
Edited by masoomii - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
part - 4
they al reached near that man who was standing there holding fab 5 name plate...
and told him they r fab 5
nd leaves from airport..
they ar seating together in car..
when cabir ask manik where they ar going to stay..
manik say he had a house in Mumbai.. they al ar going to stay there..


MANIK INTRODUCTION
he is lyk coconut.. rude arrogant stubborn from outside.. Sweet caring loving from inside.. his soft syd is preserve for only few ppl.. for cabir mukti dhruv alya... then few years back navya came into there lyf she is cabir girlfriend from past 3-4 years.. she is very sweet by nature.. totally opposite from cabir.. manik sumtym wonder how can they both fell in luv.. being so different from each other.. and luv is blind he always thought while luking at them.. and navya she is nt part of there group she is jaan of there grp.. everyone needs her help now and then.. she also become part of manik lyf.. manik is protective for her.. for him they ar there only family.. he never feels lonley when he is with them when he alone he miss her sister roshni the most.. he had only few memories with her.. he was 10 yr old when his mom dad separated.. roshni was 5 yr old that tym... the reason of there mom dad split was her mom.. he hates his mom.. alot... reason is unknown only manik knw.. roshni lives with his dad in London.. nd he lives with her mom neyonika in dehradnoon.. he never calls her mom.. he hates her somuch that nw it was getting impossible for him to live with her in same home... so he decided to move from there.. so he nw moved to Mumbai permanently... with his friends...
he is going to be the next md of malhotra construction.. malhotra construction is a world famous construction company.. malhotra construction has two head office.. one is in London.. and second one is mumbai.. manik is joining mumbai company from next week.. he only met with his dad when he cum to India for buisness deal.. they hardly talks with each other on ph.. but he never talk or meet his sister ever.. he does abt her lyf this thing always makes him sad.. he miss his dad sis alot..
he runs a music company along with fab 5.. do concerts with them..
he doesn't believe in luv at al.. his fans go gaga over him but he dnot give a damm..


in my story harshad is alia cousin he live in London with his family married to a britisher..
alia and dhruv are nt in relationship..
mukti is also single


precap - same
Edited by masoomii - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
part-5

AIRPORT

nandani was laughing continuously when she again bumped
into someone..laddoo dekh kr chla kr tujhse kitni br kaha hai.. abi gir jati to.. a lady in her 50's start scolding... then a man speaks - offo giri to ni na dant kyu rhe ho aap usko
nandani - shouts in excitement bhua fufu and hug them..
they too happily hugs her back.. when her bhua start scolding her husband apne he bigard rakha hai isko..
nandani- giggles..
jai-isko bigardna ni,kehte lad pyaar say palna kehte hai
pooja- rolls her eyes
jai- achha laddoo tu itna kyun hass ri thi.. kya kr k ayi hai ab..
nandani-.. narrates,whole incident to them.. how she throw cold coffee on sumone head..
pooja- looked at her with shocked expression
jai- start laughing
pooja- ye jo tere logo ko sahi raste pe lane ki adat hai na ek din tujhe achha fasaygi..
nandani- mujhe kuch ni ho sakta bhua mere sath ap log ho mujhe bchane k liye.. then she again hug her..
nd says chalo sari batien yahi thodi karni hai chalo ghr chale.. mere tosty bechari kbse bhr dhoop mai akele khadi hai.. chalo chale and they leave from there..
now they al r seating in there car (tosty).. nd leave from there for home..

MALHOTRA MANSION

manik nd al ar luking at a big bungalow.. when navya ask they ar going to stay here?.. manik nods his head in yes.. he took out his ph nd dialed sum one num told him to bring keys.. they al standing outside of the house waiting for that person.. and that person reached there.. he was the caretaker of malhotra mansion.. he hand over keys to manik... and left from there manik open mansion.. and went insdie every one follows him..
he was luking here nd there.. lyk he was searching for something.. cabir notice this and ask him what happen..
manik was luking al lost.. mukti dhruv ask him if he is ok.. he nods his head in yes.. nd again start thinking. abt sumthing.. navya put her hand on his back gently rub it and ask him to speak.. he smiles nd put his head in her lap.. closed his eyes nd start blabbering.. when we were kids we cum here for holidays.. that rooms he indictes to a room.. mee nd roshni use to stay there.. wo uska fav room tha.. nd when dad moved from dehradoon for the very few.years... they stay here in Mumbai in this house.. then they shifted to London..
he finish his talk and open his eyes.. everyone has tears in there eyes.. he indicates everyone nt too cry.. nd ask them too choose there room... nd he is going to stay in roshni room.. he took his bags nd guitar nd left from there..
..

NANDANI HOME

THEY reach Home.. every one hugs them.. nd told them how badly they al r missing them.. pooja nd jai said they al r missing them too.. nd indicates towards a bag.. there gifts ar in it.. everyone got excited.. they handover there gifts to them.. andstart chit chatting..
they were so engross in there talk they didn't realise.. abt time.. when badepapa cums and inform them abt dinner.. they al went on dinning table.. after there dinner they went to sleep


MANIK HOME
manik refused to have dinner.. he said he is nt feeling hungry.. nobody force him.. bcz they knw he is missing roshni today he won't eat.. he was in his room nd playing guitar.. he didn't realise when he injured his hand.. but he kept playing.. in moring around 8'o clock cabir entire in his room nd was shocked at view.. mmanik was sleeping.. nd blood was dripping from his hand.. he shake him wake him up make him wash his hand.. nd drag him to the nearest hospital.. manik protest but he didn't listen to him..


HOSPITAL
a nurse did bandage to his hands.. doctor prescribe him painkillers they ar coming out from hospital when he again bang into sumone..

precap- no precap.. bcz u guys cn guess :P
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: samaman22jan

liked it

plz cont. soon


thanku..
next part updated u can read it
Edited by masoomii - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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part-6

nandani was coming inside.. she was reading sum.file nd walking when she bang into sumone she didn't realise..bcz she was busy in reading files..due to dis sudden accident al her files dropped from her hand.. but manik didn't let her fall he was holding her waist from one hand.. nandani face was covered with her duppata so manik didn't realise whom he was holding.. he removed duppata from her face.. nd was shocked to see her.. nandani was equally shocked.. both shouts on same time TUM :P.. manik drops her on floor.. bcz of sudden shock.. nandani in pain shouts OUCHHH..
nandani gets angry on him and shouts
NANDANI-mujhe neeche kyu fainka.. u monster

MANIK-he didn't do it intentionally nd was feeling guilty for that nd was going to apologize to her.. but after listening to monster word he again gets angry..

MANIK-kya bulaya tumne mujhe ..
NANDANI- MONSTER she said dis with a smirk..
MANIK- if I'm monster then ur nt less than a chudail.. he too said dis with a smirk..
NANDANI- gets angry she tumne mujhe chudail bulaya.. haww do I luk lyk a chudail??
MANIK-do I luk lyk a monster..
nandani- yes..
manik -u
nandani- ha mai.. kya.. bolo
manik-chudail..
nandani- don't call mee chudail
manik - u don't call mee monster then

and there tu tu mai mai starts.. whole scene is witnessed by cabir.. he was sitting on bench and enjoying..there fight..
manik and nandani ar fighting lyk Tom nd Jerry.. forgetting there surrounding.. forgetting that there surrounding..
suddenly sumone hide behind nandani.. she didn't realise bcz she was busy in her fight..
when a nurse came near nandani nd calls her...
NURSE- nandani beta..
NANDANI- After listening to her name nandani cum back to h er. senses and luk at the direction of vvoice.
marium- head nurse was standing there nd calling her..
mums nandani whisper her name..
manik to luks in that direction..
marium cums near nnandani and indicates her with hands that sumone is behind her..
nandani- understood at once whom she talking abt
nandani- achha mums.. arohi uth gyi kya..
manik nd cabir was listening to there conversation
mums- ha bete it uth gyi.. uski medicine ka tym ho gya hai or wo pta nhi kaha jakr chup gyi hai..
both mums nd nandani knws she is behind nandani..
nandani- then little loudly said achha chup gyi mil ni rhi..
theek hai.. mai to uski fav choclates layi thi.. ab to wo yaha hai he. nhi to mai kisi or ko De dete hu...
nandani pretends she is going from there..
suddenly they hear voice no ye mele choclate.. slf mai khaugi.. a 4-5 year gal. cums out from behind she was holding nandani duppata..
along with a teddy bear ..

to be continued...


NOTE- ok guys plz do cmnts u lyk my story or nt should I continue with this ff or nt.. ??
:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update and pls continu

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