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Posted: 10 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: SONIAGHOSH

awesome story

continue soon



thanku :)
updated :p
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
Loved it he is totally different person with her can't wait for more update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
awesome story
cont soon 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54
Hey! I started reading your FF today and Man! I salute you.👏👏
Perfect mixture of comedy and drama!
Please PM me if its not a problem :)
Love, Pari 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55
Hi I read your ff today I loved can you pm me when u next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
(note- in my story Chachi doesn't cook experimental
food but nandani does .. she try to cook normal food..
but don't knw how.. poor Manik malhotra )
part-19
they reached manik home.. manik rangs bell but nobody
opens it.. he thought kaha gye sb
then he checked his ph saw sum.missed calls nd msgs
he rubs his forehead.. nd click on msgs..
it was cabir msg that they ar going out for dinner .,cabir
msg him hotel name nd told him to cum there
manik saw nandani luking at him.. he thought mai isko
yaha laya or isko aise kaise akela chodh Doon..
he had spare key in his pocket.. he thought..
nandani-manik it's ok.. mai ghr. chale jati hu..
manik- no no I have spare keys cum plz
they he unlock main gate.. nd they went inside
nandani- pani
manik- u sit here mai kitchen say lata hu
nandani- ok
manik- goes in kitchen search kitchen slab found
nothing there .. to eat.. he thought now what she will
think abt mee he byte his nails in tension..
nandani witnessed whole scenario..
she thought may be he is hungry..
she went near him she asked him
nandani- May I help u
manik- turn his face saw nandani standing behind him..
manik- no no mai mange kr luga u drink water.. he
gave water bottle to nandani
nandani sit on kitchen slab -ok nd start drinking water..
manik was scratching his head.. nandani again asked
May I hhelp u..
manik- thought I don't knw how to cook so he said
yeah
nandani happily to hato syd nd do tell mee what u want
to eat.. manik- he recalls nandanieating cake.. metha I
luv metha food
nandani- ok tum bahr jao I 'll cook sum metha for u
manik- nandu let mee help u
nandani- no I said na plz go
manik- mujhe mere kitchen say nikal diya ok
After one hour
manik was sitting on dinning table.. nandani walk there
with her dish in her hand.. she placed it on dinning
table
manik thought smell to bdi achi ari hai khud bhi to bdi
sweet..hai.. dish bhi apne jaise sweet he bnai hogi
..
manik - so kya bnaya tumne
nandani- halwa
manik- wow.. bhook lg gyi name sunn kr..
nandani-giggles. she serves halwa in his plate..
manik- happily took one byte..
he was stunned shocked speechless
nandani- hwz it
manik -al he was able to say amazing very tasty..
yummy delicious ( in mind yuck what is this)
nandani bcm happy wow u lyk it so much yeah lo or
khao..
she pour more halwa in his plate
manik - arey nandani mai le luga tum baitho. ( in mind
hey bhagwan kaise khau isko) nandani yeh kaunsa
halwa hai wo kya hai hai maine pehle kbhi ni khaya
nandani- beetroot ka halwa
manik - bcm expressionless.. wow.. kaise I mean itna
tasty halwa wo bhi beetroot ka.. kaise bnaya tumne..
nandani- acha finish to karo
manik - doesn't want to hhurt her so he sumhow finish
entire halwa..
manik to nandani mai ye plates rakh kr ata hu he ran
into kitchen throw plates in wash basin.
nd grab sugar box.. put 7-8 sugar cubes in his mouth
after few minutes.. he feel relaxed.. feww he cum
outsyd saw nandani was sitting on sofa watching tv..
he went near her..
precap- nandani friendship with navya nd fab 5
she cums to knw abt manik past nd roshni

(every one who is reading my ff I want u al to cmnt for
this part plz its a rqst ok bye )
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: HTA111

Loved it he is totally different person with her can't wait for more update soon



u notice na thanku this is what I'm trying to potray :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: NAVYA64

awesome story

cont soon😊


thanks :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: manya_189

This was a goood update :D



next part is hilarious :P
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: DWJensenackles

Hey! I started reading your FF today and Man! I salute you.👏👏

Perfect mixture of comedy and drama!
Please PM me if its not a problem :)
Love, Pari😊



:)
Edited by masoomii - 10 years ago

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