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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
good
continue sson..
pm me if possible..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
good
plz cont
i just hope somehow roshini and nandani bothknow eachother from before
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
NOTE- Actually guys its my first ff I was confuse to write ff on current story Lyn.. or write my own story.. but then I noticed here lots of ff already based on current story so I decided to continue with my own story..
I was confused whether u guys may lyk or nt .
thanku guys :D

part- 7

no mele choclate hai.. mai ni dugi..
nandani- bends down infornt of arohi nd holds her hand and speaks arohi ne to medicines ni khaye.. or marium Aunty. ko bhi tang kiya isliye arohi ko chocolate ni milegi..
arohi- agal mai apni medicines taugi ol Aunty ko palshan ni kalugi to ap meleko chocolate doge..
nandani - yes
arohi- plomise
nandani- nandani promise
arohi- (smiles hugs nandani ) I luv u didi popo (teddy bear) too luvs u .. mai medicine kha kr ati hu..
arohi holds marium nd leaves from there..
nandani-gets up nd turn around.. ( manik nd cabir was nt there ) she thoughts wo monster kaha gya.. darr gya lgta hai.. Milne do dubara chodugi nahi nd leaves from there..
here manik was in parking alot.. thinking abt nandani nd arohi conversation nd smiling.. which is nt unnoticed by cabir.. he shakes him nd ask him what happened to him.. why is he smiling.. manik told cabir he is thinking abt arohi.. she is so Sweet.. just lyk roshni ...she too luvs chocolate alot.. without choclates she doesn't eat at al.. nd never listen to anyone.. he smiles with tears in his eyes... cabir put his hand on manik shoulder nd ask him if he is ok..
manik nods his head in yes... nd speaks I'm ok cabir.. the thing is I miss her so much.. I only had her childhood memories with mee.. I don't what she lyk nd don't lyk.. where she study what she study her friends I don't knw anything abt her I only knw she is in London.. I can't meet her bcz of neyonika.. I hate her.. bcz of her dad nd roshni r nt with mee... he luks down.. cabir luks at him helplessly..
he then speak..
cabir- don't be sad manik sb theek ho jayga..
manik - laughs nd. then bcm serious.. I don't know cabir.. I don't want to think abt it it hurts..
then they leave from there...

2 days later..

NANDANI HOME
nandani was talking with tanushree nd veer.. she was actually complaining to VEER ( veer nd tanushree r siblings)
bcz tanushree luvs to shop.. nd she wwanted to take nandani along with her in sum xyz mall
NANDANI- yr veer tere bhen pagal ho chuki .. abhi kl shopping kri hai isne or isse aj fir shopping pe Jana.. jana hai to jana hai.. pr mujhe ni Jana.. iske sath..
tanushree- kyu pr maine kya kra..
nandani- kya kra.. last tym jb shopping pe gye the.. to iska ek fav nhi milne pr pura mall sir utha liya tha.. isne mai ni jaugi..
veer- was laughing he said mai bhi to tbhi ni jata iske sath..
tanushree- she picks cushion nd throw on them the tum dono mujhe parshan mt karo.. I said na nandani u r coming with mee means ur coming. with dis she drags nandani with her to a mall.. before she protest..

MANIK HOUSE

navya alia mukti settling there Home.. they ar making list for the things they want .. mukti handover the lists to manik nd dhruv.. nd shouts in excitement time for sum shopping .. dhruv luk at both lists nd teasingly speaks mukti jyada choti ni ho gyi tum logo ki list
... mukti hit him nd speaks to kaun kaun chalega.. cabir said his fav program is cumng so he is nt cuming..
mukti shakes her head in disbelief..
nd then luk at manik nd dhruv.. tum dono ka koi bhana ni chalega tum log chl re ho humare sath..
manik nd dhruv in union.. do we have any other option..
mukti navya alia in union - no

manik- to chlo fr..
they al leave together for shopping...
they too went too same mall

precap- hum tum lift mai band ho or achanak say light chali jay :P ;)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: samaman22jan

good

plz cont
i just hope somehow roshini and nandani bothknow eachother from before


well that's a surprise ;)
:D
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Posted: 10 years ago
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part-8

they al reached mall
nandani with tanushree
manik with fab 4 along with navya..
navya got a call she excused herself..
alia mukit drags manik nd dhruv to some shops..
here nandani was getting irritated bcz of tanushree they ar at zara showroom nd tanushree was trying dresses pe dresses.. and was nt selecting anyone of them.. nandani was hell bored.. finally tanu lyk one dress there.. nd told shopkeeper to pack them..
nandani happily ask her tanu ghr chale..
but tanu is tanu..
tanu - no baby.. mere shopping ho gyi ab ur turn..
nandani- give nervous luk to her.. nd ask mtlb?
tanu- mtlb I selected few dresses for u go nd try..
nandani - achha
tanu- ha
nandani- thought for a while nd shouts wo dekh tere pair k pass chipkali..
tanu- due to fear start shouting jumping where where..
nandani tere peeche nd ran from there..
here tanu was shouting where where then she realized nandani actually fooled her.. shopkeeper was staring at her .. tanu embarrassed pay her bill took her bag nd ran from.. nd thought nandu ki bachi tujhe to mai chodugi ni.. nd start searching for her..
nd there nandani was running nd bumped to navya.. she said sorry to her and ran from there.. navya thought I had seen here somewhere but where..nd start walking
nandani enter in lift.. as soon as she enter.. she saw a guy nd she shouts tum..
nd that person shouts not again.. (nd that person is none other then or very well knwn manik malhotra)
nandani cum close to him ask tum yaha kaise tum mera peecha to ni kr re.. jasoos ho tum kya.. lyk james bond 007 kisine secret mission pe bheja hai mere jassosi krne ko..
manik try to speak
but nandani is nandani she continue..
dekho mujhe boxing ati hai judo krate mai black belt hu mai.. aisa marugi sari jassosi bhul jaoge..
manik was already pissed off..
to keep her mouth shut he closed her mouth with one hand and with other he pinned her to wall..
he luked into her eyes..
nandani was nervously luking at him
manik- while luking into her eyes chup bilkul chup.. bolti hoto bolti chali jati ho .. mai jassos ni hu.. neither I'm inrested in spying u.. u got that
nandani mummers sumthing under his hand..
he ask what
she indicate with her eyes..
she was actually saying remove ur hand..
manik understood.. he removes his hand from her mouth.. feel lil embarrass.. nandani took a deep breath. they both on same tym try to say sumthing.. but suddenly light went off

to be continued

precap-
fight
kiss
:P
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Posted: 10 years ago
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part-9


suddenly light went off ..
nandani hold manik hand.. manik.. hugged nandani.. he tried to call sumone.on . but no network was available.. he stamp his feet in frustration.. nd looked at nandani who was standing there holding his hand.. he looked at her face she was looking scared.. he thought how can sumone look cute nd hot at same tym.. nd her eyes.. he want to see his face in them.. her lips.. ar so perfect.. feel lyk kissing it.. manik cum back to his senses nd realise what he was thinking.. kissing her.. her nandani.. one who dare to shout at him..fought with him.. nobody never dare.. to do that.. not even in there dreams.. nd she did.. he should be angry on her.. nd here he was thinking.. abt her.. he look at her.. nandani to look at him on same tym they had an eye lock..
nd there.. there friends ar looking for them.. they were searching for them.. tanu had no idea abt manik ... bcz that day nandani didn't mention his name.. nd fab 5 too don't knw.. nandani,is also here in mall.. navya was thinking where she met her.. nd suddenly she shout ..
navya- mujhe yaad agya.. :D
fab5- together kya??
navya- wo ladki..
fab5- kaunsi ladki
navya-arey wo jo airport pe mili thi.. jisne manik k sir pr cold coffee daal di thi..
alya - haa wo to
mukti- dumbo hum yaha manik ko dhund re hai.. or tujhe wo ladki ki padi hai..
navya-arey
dhruv- navya chup.. manik k samne uske bare mai koi baat mt krna.. warna tujhe koi ni bcha payga
navya-arey yr she is here..
fab5- what?
navya- ha Maine thodi tym pele usko dekha..
dhruv- ohno manik ne dekh to ni liya usko..
mukti-kahi wo uske sath to ni..
alia-(dumbly) achha iska mtlb manik gum ni hua..
muknavruk luk at her in disbelief..
navya isko chodo yeh to hai he budhu... hum chlo manik ko dhundte hai.. isse pehle kuch kand ho jay..
alya- make angry pout
nd they start searching them.. but they don't have any clue that both ar struck in lift together..
nd tanu- was trying to call nandani... but she is nt picking up her call.. so she called veer nd told him.. that nandani is missing.. veer said - don't take tension I'm coming till then try to search nandani in parking area.. with this he hangup call.. nd leave for mall...
nd here nandani nd manik lost in each other eyes.. nandani is holding manik hand.. manik another hand is on nandani waist.. tthey r so lost in each other eyes that they didn't realise what they r standing so close to each other.. manik move little more closer to her face.. he bent down nd touch her lips with his.. nd start kissing her.. she too responded..
suddenly light cum back.. they both cum back into there senses.. nd realise what they r doing.. nd move from other with a jerk.. both r feeling embarrassed now there was an awkward silence between them.. neither of them was talking to each other.. nor looking at each other..for few seconds
manik was thinking-
shit what I have done how can I kiss her.. no no but she too responded
nandani was thinking
how can he kiss mee
she shouts how dare u.. manik- what..
nandani- has tears in her eyes.. how dare to kiss mee..
that was my first kiss.. nd u ruined it.. she was crying..u cheapster.. I will never forgive u for this..u too ar lyk other boys who ar behind gals for only one thing.. so cheap chii.now I understand that day in hospital nd now mall.. ur doing purposely na how could u think so low.. but let u tell u mai koi aise waise ladki nhi hu mera nam nnandani murthy hai.. nd I'm nt going to spare u..still crying..

manik- angrily look at her.. nd was frustrated nd annoyed.. with her words how can she think so low abt him.. he angrily hold her hand.. pull her toward on him.. pinned her to wall.. nd angrily staring her.. nandani was shouting.. leave my hand.. she was crying bitterly.. nd was not luking at his face.. manik was annoyed with this.. he shouts chup bilkul chup.. mai chup hu iska mtlb yeah ni I'm wrong.. tumne bhi mujhe respond kiya tha.. he said this with a smirk.. nandani turn her face.. feel disgusted.. manik was pissed off with her behavior.. he turn her face toward him.. nd mai bhi aisa waisa ladka ni hu mera bhi yeh first kiss tha.. nandani jerk his hand. move from there press lift button.. to open it. manik bang his hand on lift wall look at her.. nandani turn her face look at him
nandani just want to say one thing for the last tym
I don't want to see ur face ever again..
manik angrily shouts same here..
nd nandani leave from there.. manik was looking at her from behind.. he kept looking at her till she vanished.. then he also move from there..


note- feww enough for knw.. now plz read nd cmnt.. hwz it thanku bbye (^_^)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Their fights are always the best ;P
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Posted: 10 years ago
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part-10 (a)
nandani was so annoyed nd angry.. nd crying on same tym.. she cums out from mall pick taxi nd leave for home.. she forget to inform tanu that she is going home.. nd here tanu was al worried she was searching nandani here nd there.. she tried to call her but again her but now her cell is switched off.. now she is hell worried for her.. mean while veer also reached mall.. he call tanu.. she look at her ph screen at once pick his call.. nd told him that she is standing in parking.. veer ran there.. tanu saw him coming start crying..
veer - sshh don't worry mill jaygi..
tanu- pr aise kaise gayab ho gyi,..
veer- just wait for a sec ghr pr call krkr check krte hai shyd ghr chali gyi hogi.. he call at home no.. servent pick up ph..
veer asked him abt nandani
and servent told him that she cum home few min back nd is in her room..
with this he hang up ph veer felt relieved
veer- feww she is at home.. chalo chale..
tanu- what bina inform kre
ghr jkr khbr lete hu iski..-,
veer -ha meri maa ab chale
nd they also leave for home

nd here in mall manik was hell angry.. he saw dhruv is standing there near a showroom.. he went toward him.. nd start shouting.. kahan the tum log.. mall mai shopping krne aye ho picnic manane nhi.. dhruv was shocked he never talk to him in this angry tone.. mukti alya navya was also standing there they were equally shocked what happen to him al of sudden frst he was missing nd nw this..
navya try to speak sumthing but manik interrupt hogya tum sbka to ghr chlo..
they nod there head in yes nd leave from there.. al were sitting in car nd there is pin drop silence in car manik was driving dhruv was sitting beside him.. alya mukti navya on back seat.. al were stealing glances at each other but no one dare to speak anything.. after few min they reached Home.. manik was continuously ringing bell.. rest were looking at him.. cabir was sleeping on couch.. he get up with a jerk..
cabir- to himself kaun aise bell bja ra hai kaan k parde bhi khade ho gye aise bhyanak bell baji sunn kr..
with this he opened the door nd was shocked to see manik there.. he notice manik expression nd thought what happen to him.. he put his hand on his shoulder .. manik jerk his hand away.. nd leave for his room.. cabir luk at his friends who were still standing outside ab tum logo ko kya watchmen giri krni hai jo waha bhr khade ho . they shout together CABIIIRRR..
cabir- mujhe pta hai mai cabir hu ab chalo andr
mukit- seriously tujhe tension mai mazak kaise sujhta hai..
with this they al cum inside
dhruv- exactly,.
alia - again kyu tension mai mazak nhi krte kya..
cabir - start laughing
mukti - dhruv - navya- together- alia chup
cabir- waise,yeh manik ko kya,his
nd mukti narrated whole incident to him
cabir- shitt maine movie miss krdi.. mujhe bhi Jana chahiye tha bbetter lluck next tym cabir..
navya - what do u mean?
cabir- baby kuch nhi pehle mai samjh lu fr I eexplain to u ok
navya-hmmm ok
nd cabir leave twrd manik room

to be continued-

plz do cmnts ok bye :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Their fights are always the best ;P

:p but I love there romantic fights
Edited by masoomii - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thankeww next part is updated u can read it :)

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