# MY WORLD'S KING # MaNan FF (UPDATED PART 23) Pg131 29/8

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anika mehjaben nahin

@mehjaben_nahin

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#71

aashi its awesome dear
u penned it beautifully
loved it thnx for the pm dear update soon
btw how r u feeling now?? take care of urself dear..
love u a lot :-))))))

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sehrish

@sizzysehrish

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#72

awesome update
get well soon... hope u r fine .. tc 🤗

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vanivartika

@vanivartika

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Posted: 10 years ago

#73

wow what a start dear.. very interesting

Love to read more

But I hv request pls update Ur other stores too ..pls

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deactivated_bye

@deactivated_bye

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#74

finally ur back eeshu hehe

i missed u!!!

ur unwell n in hospital!!!

do tc n get well soon eeshu!!!

bt wat happened??

cumin 2 d updt awsum as all ways!!!

i lov d way u write n make each scene special!!!

though i dont know d song!!!

now cont soon as m waitin 4 manan meeting!!

love u

Aresha

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crazydreamer

@crazydreamer

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Posted: 10 years ago

#75

wow yaar awsm i don't hv wrds for this amazing prt i read all on goo...

thnx tysm for pm plz post nxt part ASAP

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aishu3138

@aishu3138

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#76

That was nice..
Excited for next part..
Ty for the pm..
Continue soon

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aarohi arora

@aarohi_angel98

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#77

Update was awesome...
But i hope u are fine now???
Plz update when u feel comfortable..
Health comes first..
Get well soon...
Waiting for your updates..

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aairahahmad

@aairahahmad

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#78

wow..👏

awesome update..👏

n the way u made manik listen to her singing...it was so amazing..

keep up..👏

i love both the song u used..for manik too n for nandini too...😳

i heard u r unwell..😭

get well soon...🤗

n take care of yourself🤗

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cutypie04

@cutypie04

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#79

Awesome update dea. ..

Continue soonnn

If possible pm me nxt time

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Addrita Islam

@Addrita.Jesin

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#80

First of all so sorry for not reading this super awesome story before...
Have much to say..

Chapter 1 : Nandini is sooo much obsessed with Manik ! Itna jyada ki ghar parivar chod diya..!!! And doing puja of Manik..!!🤣 The best part is "ALL THE MANIK"..👍🏼

Chapter 2 : Entry of Manik was awesome..u described it superbly😳
Plus ekta bepar tomar, harika and amar kichu school frnd der dekhe nischito holam je IPKKND voot karor mathai ekbar chorle sohoje nambe na..Anrav as Maniks PA🤣
And your way is the best way to describe our dark infamous rockstar...

Chapter 3 : First of all why u changed PA s name❓ But the problem is it wil b Arnav only in my mind when i wil read any convo of PA🤣
And then na chaitei paowa...Manik was mesmerized by her voice..

Want to read more...nw m in a dilliema...it is becoming my 1st fav ff...if u keep describing superbly na..then i would need to say sorry to bff and add dat bff s place has been taken over by MWK...

.onek boro hoye gelo...ekta last kotha boli...love u apu eto osthir 3 ta storyer jonno...valo thako...All the Manik...get well soon..

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