MANAN FF - LONGING (last part pg 20)

Hi., I'm a silent member of this forum. I have been thinking to write this since the spoilers of I hate you track but couldn't because of my lack of writing skills. At last decided to try once. Hope u ppl like it n feel free to criticize.

PART: 1

so story starts after dreadful valentines date. life has been miserable for both manik and nandini. Nandini keeps trying to talk to manik n manik trying his best to ignore her. Manik is angry with her even after knowing that nandini has been manipulated by nyonika. He couldn't believe that their bond is so weak that it shattered so easily. On the other side nandini wants to explain him that she trusts him and loves him a lot and doesn't want to loose him like this. Every time she tries to speak to him either he ignores her or lashes on her n even alya n mukti starts bashing her saying she ruined their future n her being selfish. All these added to her guilt n she wanted to set things straight in their lives but couldn't figure out how. All this chasing after manik is depressing her, making her loose her identity but she cannot help. Even manik couldn't see her like this but he couldn't even forgive her.

This situation continued for a week. At last one day nandini confronted manik when he is in the canteen with fab5 "manik please last n final time. I just need to speak to u. Just once manik n then I LL never disturb you. Please. Just once". Before manik,could reply anything alya came to nandini n started insulting her saying mean words. Cabir tried to calm alya but in vain. Even manik couldn't bare those words for his nandini. He asked alya to stop to everyones surprise n took hold of nandini n said " can't you what I want?? I want you stay away from my life. I don't want to see your face. Get that straight n get lost from my life for gods sake". Saying this manik left canteen leaving behind distraught nandini. She felt like someone has stabbed in her heart. She ran from there n went straight to her house.

After crying to her heart out she slipped into deep sleep after so many days. The next dawn was a new beginning for nandini. She woke up with a new determination. She went down n asked her chacha , chachi to come n sit with her as she wants to share something important.

making them sit in the living room she said "chacha n chachi. im really missing ams so I want to go to manglore n stay there for sometime. I don't know how many days I ll stay there but I promise I ll return soon. please allow me n rishab to go pls." she pleaded them chacha n chachi had no choice but to agree to her request as rishab also wants to go to manglore.

After convincing chacha n chachi nandini came to her room n made some calls n booked tickets to manglore for her n rishab n started packing her luggage.

Its a different feeling for nandini in college today as she doesn't know whether she ll return there or not. that day she tried her max to follow manik without being noticed by him. she wants to save his mage in her mind so that she can spend the days when she cannot see him. manik could sense nandini around him but couldn't see her. he strongly resisted the urge to search for her as today she didn't even tried to talk to him. he was already feeling angry at him for saying those word to her yesterday but he cannot see her in that state or being insulted by his friends infront of him anymore.

Nandini bid her goodbyes to navya n asked her not to tell about her leaving to cabir or manik n promises her that she will return ones she finds her true self n sort out everything. Before she leaves the college for the last time she sees hm standing with fab5 near the entrance n couldn't help but stare at him with tear filled eyes. that was when manik saw her for the first time that day. he felt that he has seen her after ages he wanted to run to her n hug her n ask her where she has been all the day. but his stubborn mind stopped him saying that " she don't trust you manik. where there is no trust there is no love. she doesn't love you" they stayed staring at each other like that with longing in their eyes. their thoughts have been interrupted by cabir stupid joke n remaining laughing for it. manik looked at her once more n left from there saying he has some work. she stood there like a statue with a broken heart n said to herself " Thank you manik for making my decision easier n I made a promise to u that I ll always protect you n I ll keep that promise n set everything straight in your life. I LOVE YOU manik. I broke a promise that I ll trust u humesha but that is the last promise I ll ever break. u said that im ur star n I bring light to u. I promise manik I ll again come into ur life only when I bring the smile n light to ur life again. its a nandini promise". Feeling determinwd she left the college to leave to manglore.

This is my first time ever attempting to write so please feel free to criticize n help me improve.

Thank you

PART 1 Pg 1

PART 2A pg 3

PART 2B pg 5

PART 3 pg 8

PART 4 pg 9

PART 5 pg 11

PART 6 pg 13

PART 7 pg 15

PART 8 pg 17

PART 9 pg 18

PART 10 pg 20

congo on the story gal

i dont knw why but i had a feeling tht maybe smething like this happens in the show too an u wrote it loveed it alot 👏👏👏

continue soon 😉

very interesting start..

pls update next part soon.:)

continue soon