MANAN FF - LONGING (last part pg 20) - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Its a lovely is fr d first time... Do update soon
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😊😊 Thank you so much for ur support. I LL try to complete the other 2 parts today itself or max by tomorrow.
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Update the next part soon.. You gave a great start to the story.. 👍🏼
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congrats for ur new story...👏
wow amazing start...u penned it beautifully...especially in case of nandini...😊
would love to read more...so pls continue soon...take care😊
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awesome... too emotional...
waiting for next update ...

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wow awsm start
very emotional
loved it
continue soon
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Hai guys. thanks for all your support. here is the next part. this part
PART:2A

Recap; manik asking nandini to get away from his life and nandini leaving for manglore.

manik reached home n crashed on his bed. he never felt this much tired. ignoring nandini is the most tyring thing he has ever done. he did his best to hide his pain with his anger but with a little success. He closed his eyes trying to get some sleep thinking he could forget everything.

Next day before entering into college he prepared himself like every day to ignore nandini. But once he entered the college a strange emptiness surrounded him. He could feel that world around him came to a stop but couldnt understand what that is. He brushed those thoughts and went to canteen to join remaining fab5. The remaining day was all their routine with jamming n some chit chatting. but even surrounded by his friends his eyes were searching constantly for her. waiting for her to come and speak to him but he couldnot find her. College came to an end but she didnt come to him that day. He waited near the entrance chatting with fab5 just to get a glimpse of her like the previous day. But to his disappointment he couldnt find her. just then he spotted navya. he expected her to be the next one coming out. But no. she is not there. Feeling frustrated he barged towards his car n left without speaking a word leaving fab5 in a startled condition.

This routine continued for the next 3 days. He felt anger building up in him. He wanted to punish her by ignoring her but here he thought she avoided him for giving him punishment. for what for asking her to stay away from his life..?? But today he determined to make her come infront of him by any means. He thought " Fine nandu. u dont want to come infront of me then fine. but i ll definitely make u come to me by hook or crook. u dont like my monster side right. today this monster side only will make u come to me." making a plan in his mind n selecting an innocent target he instigated other fab5 members to rag him infront of college. He was successful in his ragging session but was not successful in making nandini coming to him. through out the ragging his eyes searched for a small girl to come and stand against the fab5 to save the innocent target but no.. there is no response..

He tried his best for the next 2 days to be in his monster mode infront of the college. His friends couldnt understand him. one min he was in his monster mode but the next min he was gloomy sulking at a corner. Cabir could clearly see the pain in his friends eyes. He even tried asking navya about nandini but navya because of her promise could only tell him that " she is fine, thats all i could tell."

At last manik gave up he could take the pain of her not trusting him but he couldnt take the pain of missing her. He accepted his defeat n started searching for her in the entire college. but couldnt find her. feeling defeated he came behind the music wing n sat on the stairs remembering all their moments. a sudden thought struck him" what if i couldnt see her ever again??". this very thought made his heart stop. The next moment he was in his car frantically trying to call her n driving towards nandinis house. but her phone is switched off. he cannot get through her phone.

He reached her house n started ringing the bell but no one answered then he realised that door is locked. He waited outside for more than an hour. When he thought of going to enquire in the neighbouring house he saw chachi coming from outside. he immediately went to her n greeted her. Chachi was very happy to see him n invited him into the house. He was desperately waiting to ask her about nandini but chachi went on with her babbling. when his frustration is increasing chachi said " I thought u forgot about me. now that nandini has left for manglore i thought u would never come here. " The next min everything went blank for him. his world stopped. seeing his pale face chachi got worried and asked him to sit and went to get some water. when she returned manik has already left.


This part is getting a little big so thought of breaking it into two parts. hope u ppl njoy it. n feel free to criticize n help me improve.

Thank you
Edited by chinni557 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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poor manik... plz update nxt part...
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Great update loved every part of it.. Want to read the next part soon.. 👍🏼
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amazing update loved every part of it.. read the part twice
egarly waiting for next part, please update soon...

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