MANAN FF - LONGING (last part pg 20) - Page 3

loved how u portrayed maniks feelings

continue soon

u have nailed it dear.

U penned down Manik's feelings n emotions so well...

kudos

me too😳

PART: 2B

Manik couldnt believe what he just heard. He was now in his messy room with all things scattered. he couldnt believe that she gave up on him so easily n left him.Yes he was angry on her for not trusting him but he couldnt expect that she would leave him like that. His heart was broken when she didnt trust him but now its completely shattered. He hated himself for depending on her so much. He couldnt understand the reason of his anger. he was angry on himself and nandini. He repented every word he said to her on valentines day and in the canteen. But he couldnt believe that the one he thought would be his life would leave him like that without even saying a word to him.

Next two days manik didnt show up at the college. He didnt even take anyone calls Fab 5 got worried and went to his house but he strictly ordered his servants not allow anyone in his room.. Feeling helpless they all gave up thinking its best to leave him alone.

Finally on the third day manik came to the college. In the mean time cabir managed to get the truth from navya that nandini left for manglore. He was worried for his friend. But seeing maniks expressionless face literally gave him heart attack. manik brushed his friends concerned looks and plastered a fake smile and said "Time for some music". Through out the day they were just practicing. he didnt even allow them to take breaks. he kept saying we should make our carrer. If not Q label then other company. All the members were completely tired but manik forced them to practice. It was cabir who gave up first n said they have done enough practice for today and its time for some rest and asked remaining members to leave. he came to manik and said " Manik are u ok?? Nandini..." His sentence was cut short by manik saying "I dont care about her anymore. If she thinks that I will break because of her leaving then she is highly mistaken. I ll prove her that Im Manik Malhotra and im unbreakable and unbeatable."

the rest of the days was a hell for fab5. manik used to force them to practice day and night. They came to know that nandini has gone back to manglore and thats the reason for maniks behaviour. they couldnt believe that manik loved nandini so much. They wanted to console him but dont know how..

Its been a week since manik knew that nandini left for manglore. He thought with time he could forget her. He could forget the pain she gave him He could miss her less. But all the pain in his heart has been increasing but not reducing. even music couldnot heal him. He felt completely helpless. On knowing that navya is staying with cabir he used to go to his house n spend some time there expecting to hear about nandini. He hated himself for behaving like that but he couldnt help it. Navya and cabir also can see the pain in his eyes but they were helpless.

after a few days when fab5 are in their usual jamming session principal sir came to their practice room with Mr Khurana to everyones surprise. With the request of Mr Khurana principal left the room. The entire room was silent. Manik couldnt understand how to react. Knowing the awkwardness Mr Khurana broke the silence saying " I know everyone must be surprised to see me here. I came here to apolozise to manik infront his most important people that is his friends. I have done so many mistakes. I couldnt be a good father to soha. When she was obssessed with manik i thought if i could give her manik she would be the most happiest person but i didnt know that i was spoiling her by accepting her demands. to fulfill her demands i even forced nandini to leave you before the auditions blackmailing her using the album. she loved manik so much that she even agreed to leave him for fab5s future" hearing this manik heart dropped. he couldnt understand what he was hearing. All the emotions he was trying to control for all these days starting bubbling in him. fab5s reaction is beyond imagination. they cant believe that khurana can stoop so low. Even seeing those hateful stares khurana continued "not only that soha is very much alive and i filled a wrong case on manik on nyonikas instructions. to save my reputation i had no other choice but to listen to her" Those words felt like a blow to already wounded heart of manik. He couldnt control his anger. He barged towards khurana to kill him. With great difficulty cabir and dhruv stopped him. manik kept shoutin " I ll not leave you. i ll kill u" cabir tried to calm manik asking khurana " why he is accepting his mistakes now after so many days" mr khurana said " he realised his mistakes n wanted to be a good father to soha atleast now. he wanted to rectify his mistake. for that he wanted to offer them album once again." manik couldnt believe his ears. "how could you say that?? u think we are toys?? to rectify ur mistakes u want to offer album for us. we are not in that pathetic situation mr khurana. we dont want ur album. just get lost from here.". Mr Khurana feeling defeated said "ok then thats ur wish. but im sure nandini would want u to take this album deal. im not asking u to take this album deal as a favour but im asking u to make this album because of ur talent. if u agree u ll have to give an audition for one song in one week. then the decision is yours". cabir convinced khurana to leave for now n they vll let him know soon

Manik couldnt believe that cabir is even considering taking the album of mr khurana who forced nandini to leave him. he was hell angry on him. but cabir didnt want to back out that day. He also started shouting." nandini didnt leave because of him. she left because of you. its u who shouted on her asking her get away from ur life infront of the whole college. its you who said that you hate her for doubting you just for a second n that too because of ur mother. can u imagine the pressure she went through the whole day when u were away.?? whole world was blaming her that it was her mistake that u r in that condition including ur so called friends. u always thought what u wanted from her but did u ever thought what she wanted from u.??"" hearing cabirs words manik slowly recalled the previous events during their date, in music room, nandini staring at their selfie, her hug in magistrates office n realised it was him who couldnt realise her stress because of his own problems. He couldnt stand the thought that he was the reason of her suffering. he felt miserable. he wanted to run. run to a place where he can hide from this guilt. without saying a word he left from there leaving behind his worried friends.

So this is the update friends. i have written it in a hurry. so dont know if i did justice to what u r expecting. feel free to give me suggestions.

Next update will be tomorrow morning.

Thank you.

love the flow of ur story...😳