TS - Kaash Aisa Koi Manzar Hota (Final Part-Page 8 updated) - Page 5

Originally posted by: shefni

Wow..amazing for you to cover it from nandhini's side too.I personally wanted you to write one from her side too-her fears,vulnerabilities and insecurities.And i have got my Xmas gifts.😳

Taking in accordance all the help you recieved 😆, this is a wonderful post again, drawing the analogy of soul stirring music.Ghazals be love😳

It was against my nature not to fight. But I lost myself because of him and this one storm I could not face. I gave up. I gave up on him

so true to nandhini, a girl ,who stood tall amidst all crises, did succumb to this gutwrenching pain and took solace in tears.

I was ready to go against everyone and be with him. But what I can do, when he, himself did not wanted us to be together. I could not fight with him as well

These be the gems. Yes, she would have taken the world if against them, but it is his act of letting her go, in the first sign of trouble, that shook her.How can she trust him again? Even if she did gather all her scattered self , would she want to go through it again lest he leave her again.So intriguing and poignant.Want to rant a lot. but got to go

Shefni😳

Originally posted by: basket_101

Reserved (:
Will come back to it either by tonight or tomorrow 😳

Originally posted by: basket_101

Reserved (:
Will come back to it either by tonight or tomorrow 😳

-- Unres (:

Wow... I'm pretty much speechless.

Part 1, I thought you did an absolutely amazing job describing Manik's guilt. The ghazal was beautiful too, and reflected his situation quite aptly. It was a smooth read, with quite an impact. It hurts to think of him hurting this much, but what to do. You've done a fantastic job!!

Part 2, oh man. Nandu is a very strong girl, but the fact that she gave up on the relationship says a lot. And the lines that you used "gave up on us" were so powerful.

In both parts, you've done justice to their emotions. I felt the sadness as I read the TS.

Thank you so much for the pm!

I'm glad to have read this!!

In awe of your writing! Do keep writing more, and pm'ing me of course 😉

Looots of love,

Hinal 🤗

Originally posted by: Muggle_Diaries

Thanks Hinal. 🤗 The pleasure is mine!! 😳

Coming from a superb writer like you, this is high praise indeed. 😳 You're too kind ☺️ Thanks for the honour though. Although I think it should be vice versa 😉

I just love these Ghazals and suddenly it stuck me that they describe our Manik and Nandini to the core.So, I just had to write it. I'm glad you chose to write on them. They were beautiful! Poetry in motion I don't really listen to them, but I do love the words and the meaning behind them.

And I'm not even trying to be all extra, but I honestly loved this TS so much. I've always wanted to write this sort of a story, but it's so hard. That's why I'm so in awe of this! Do keep writing and pm'ing me 😈 Sweet dhamki hai. 😆

Love

MD

Originally posted by: basket_101

Lots of love <3 🤗

Originally posted by: Muggle_Diaries

Originally posted by: basket_101

Mutual admiration is good for friendship 😆 Much better than mutual jealousy 😉

I'm completely paagal 🤪 But somehow, when I write stories, I always write really emotionally heavy ones. So everyone thinks I'm some sort of serious person with lots of troubles in my life. But I'm just an impulsive writer. So when too many feelings haunt me, I start writing. And that's how it all begins :P

Ohhh that's not a bad thing 😉 I'll be waiting 😃