TS - Kaash Aisa Koi Manzar Hota (Final Part-Page 8 updated) - Page 7

Originally posted by: manan_flab

Hawww luna made a new part n mainu hundh pta lag rha h... 😭

Ur gazal... m in love wid uh all over again... tell ur hubby dat he has got a competitor now... 🤣

N uh knw na i love uh ❤️

N dis part... hayyee mai marr jawan dis morning is really a good one... 😆

N dnt forget about my demand i just want it by today itself... 😃

Originally posted by: Muggle_Diaries

Aww... love you too Simi..🤗

Your demand is fulfilled, mere aaka... go check it out...

Love

MD

Originally posted by: manan_flab

dats not my demand luna... i wanted to uh write something on manan... i mean about der scenes n bond in last episode n everything dat uh write 😭

Originally posted by: Muggle_Diaries

Aww...rote nahi Chutki...🤗

Definitly will write something on Manik and Nandini..thoda wait kar bacchaa...

Love

MD

Originally posted by: basket_101

Hey Di!!!

First thing first, that was a beautiful ghazal!

Great job with that :D

You've written it so well! It's perfect for them <3

-- Thanks a lot.😊 I could not find one to fit them perfectly, I thought, chalo I will only write. Thanks for liking it..

Reading Manik's POV was heart-warming.

I felt satisfaction in reading this TS because you've done such a great job putting words to his emotions!

My favourite part of the ghazal was: Hum jahan khade hain, saamne manzil humari

And my favourite part of his bit: I am at home finally

Those two bits really nailed his emotions, bang-on!

--Yeah. For Manik, she has always been a home. A place where he can forget the world, for she will shield him, a place to rest.

Coming to Nandu's POV

My favourite bit was: I am at peace finally

It's a small line but it says so much, means so much.

-- Yup. She got answers finally, all her raging pain, anger finally quietened.

You've done suuuch a brilliant job!

Seriously!! 👏

--Thanks..I am getting fatter by all your compliments...😳

Aapki tareef karne ke liye mere paas shabd nahi hai
Ijaazat ho toh hum bhi kuch arz karna chahenge

Kya hua agar hum aapko jaante nahi

Kya hua agar hum aapko jaante nahi

IF pe friends hain, koi rishta hai toh sahi

Waise I know I'm talented, but don't compliment me too much. 🤣

- Wah Wah! Kya baat hai! This is too good...😃 Seriously..

Okay that was a random shayaari I made while writing this comment 😆

Aapki ghazal padh kar mujhe inspiration aa gaya :P

hehee

Anyway chalo..

Bahot lamba comment ho raha hai 😆

I really loved the TS!! Keep writing and flooding my inboxes <3

Sach mein it's a pleasure to read your work (:

Take care di

Love, Hinal 🤗😳

--Thank you...you too take care..

Love you.🤗

Originally posted by: chair1992

She only wants him that was is so true

Beautiful 👏👏👏

Originally posted by: rima4ever

loved it