||Yaariyan|| One Shot- Fab 5! - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: BeyondWords



I❤️You!
P.S.-Pari layi tujhe is forum mein na? And Manik je prem niwas mein?



I love u too
Na...uska bas chale toh ghusne na de mujhe iss forum mein...she is acting like a sautan 🤣
m a good stalker...u see!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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loved it yaar iptisha
truly awesome
Mukti is dead ,nd all things r messed up bt u touched my heart by your this piece of work 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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IT really brings teard to my eyes dear.. So, emotional...

Touched my heart the way you described each and everything... was like i should give an applaudes...

I wasn't able to write the words as somethings are not meant to explain but you insisted so tried my best to explain my part...


The way you describe dhruv and mukti was awsome yeah and goes to his ball. as he knows how to deal with situation and knows people...


Maanik and Mukti convon in flashback and the petrol scene amazing...

Cabir and Mukti scene was full of humor and emotion... its like getting my eyes wet... and when cabir says lets not stop here... was like awwieee... what happen...

but this para "The Fab 5 sat inside the garage. Cabir played the water drums as if he was playing the drums of the best brand, while Dhruv played the guitar while Alya and Manik were trying to calm themselves after their heated argument. How hard she tried to make everthing normal between her two best friends, she failed everytime. How was she supposed to make them realize in the strength of love? Wasn't she a failure in her love story too? She had loved the wrong person already. She looked around only to find a huge void in Fab 5 yet again. This time it seemed more devastating than Manik and Dhruv's fight. Just then her phone rang and as he heard the voice at the other side, something in her broke into pieces and she could no more bear the pain and finally shouted as loud as she could, letting all her pented emotions out though her tears and shriek"

i am confuse not able to draw much please explain when you have time...

And last part was like that made me cry loud...

Koi mar gya hai kya if there is no you than there is no music...


its always hard to loose a friend or their dear ones...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
Ipshita!!! We miss you on this forum! Where have you disappeared to?
Tears in my eyes yet again. The bond Fab 5 share is so endearing. Again my fears for Mukti have resurfaced. She is so broken and so damaged.😭 My heart feels for her. I hope someone intervenes soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
This was soo heart touching :'(
Loved it <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
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i have posted my comment baba read it and explain tooo
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: dhruvika1991

i have posted my comment baba read it and explain tooo


Oh! Sorry!

Will reply soon! :*
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: malavikajoshy

loved it yaar iptisha
truly awesome
Mukti is dead ,nd all things r messed up bt u touched my heart by your this piece of work 🤗



Aw! Kishu! Thanjie! :*
Glad it touched!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: dhruvika1991

IT really brings tears to my eyes dear.. So, emotional...

Oh...I am SO glad that you like it! 🤗
Touched my heart the way you described each and everything... was like i should give an applaudes...
Oh My! Thankooh! ❤️
I wasn't able to write the words as somethings are not meant to explain but you insisted so tried my best to explain my part...
Oh Yes! Just like you, even I crave to get reviews, even if too harsh and negative!😉

The way you describe dhruv and mukti was awsome yeah and goes to his ball. as he knows how to deal with situation and knows people...


Maanik and Mukti convon in flashback and the petrol scene amazing...
I really admire MukMan in the show, they have even made place for themselves in my SS: Manmarziya.

Cabir and Mukti scene was full of humor and emotion... its like getting my eyes wet... and when cabir says lets not stop here... was like awwieee... what happen...
Cabir and Mukti are truly too adowwable! If you want you could read Millions of Little things! Their bond has been focused there! :D
I think every girl should a bestie, like Cabir to Mukti <3
but this para "The Fab 5 sat inside the garage. Cabir played the water drums as if he was playing the drums of the best brand, while Dhruv played the guitar while Alya and Manik were trying to calm themselves after their heated argument. How hard she tried to make everthing normal between her two best friends, she failed everytime. How was she supposed to make them realize in the strength of love? Wasn't she a failure in her love story too? She had loved the wrong person already. She looked around only to find a huge void in Fab 5 yet again. This time it seemed more devastating than Manik and Dhruv's fight. Just then her phone rang and as he heard the voice at the other side, something in her broke into pieces and she could no more bear the pain and finally shouted as loud as she could, letting all her pented emotions out though her tears and shriek"

i am confuse not able to draw much please explain when you have time...

And last part was like that made me cry loud...

Koi mar gya hai kya if there is no you than there is no music...


its always hard to loose a friend or their dear ones...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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