||Yaariyan|| One Shot- Fab 5! - Page 2

Originally posted by: ArshiR

👏👏 i got no words to write...the last para made me shiver, m waiting for my dhruni ff...u are fab, continue with ur best shots...plz

Originally posted by: BeyondWords

I am really glad that it touched you so much! :D

Your DhruNi fiction will be up soon! :D Hopefully won't disappoint you! :D

Thank you for reading and commenting!

Originally posted by: ArshiR

this one was amazing m sure u'll come up with evn a bettr one 😉 CANT WAIT

Originally posted by: BeyondWords

Read the rest of my works soon! would be waiting for your opinion about them! :)

Originally posted by: Gargi.swaron

Ammy!!!

So,it's been long since I read ur works...it's really refreshing to read my bestie's work n admire just how gud she is in having her way wid words...now that d flattering is out of d way,lemme get to d update😛

Bwahahha! That;s why Basket rocks! :*

All the three boys reminiscing over their long lost friend fondly was cho chweet!!I could really feel for them!Not that i bawled or something, but it sure struck a cord n in d end,d feelings r all dat matter,right?

Yep! Feel it and melt in! :P P.S.-Did you melt? :o

Mukti's characterization was purrfect😊I mean I cud very easily imagine Charlie as Mukti, being her usual cheery self,ever d chatter box😃Just one complaint, y did u not kill Alya instead? ?u cud've gotten us free of d witch wid a capital B!!😉Jokes apart, I really luv d whole thing

Umm...would anyone miss Alya if she died? I won;t nor would theY! :o So the story won't exist if Alya died!

One more piece of advice (Man!!!cud I do any better in sounding lyk a 100 year old hag???🤢),anyway, don't take too much stress Nutcase! !!ur stress is making itself known in ur grammar😆lyk,is DRIVED even a word??My best frnd nvr makes such silly grammatical errors, y shud it change now??😊

I never realized (Cause I don't proof read *smacks herself hard*) Thankie meri Jaan! Will change right away! :) Keep giving such pieces of advice! <3

Hey, a request, write a dhruni friendship os nxt and plz kill Alya in it for my sake,ok??ur such a sweetie pie,thank u for agreeing to pen it down😃luv ya

Padhai mera tu karegi? I am not writing any-more (just one more, that too a one shot-Which is too long than a one shot tho! Also I write songs there days *bangs her head on the...pillow? :P )

Hugs n kisses,

Teri Basket❤️

Originally posted by: dhruvika1991

Kya commwnt karun emotional kar dita yaar

Originally posted by: sushie166

I ❤️ it
u rock as always!!