Fan-Fictions 21st-27th August 2005 - Page 7

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Posted: 19 years ago
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and call me ana
it so long to call cool_SK
just call me ana
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Posted: 19 years ago
#62
PLZ SOME1 CONTIUNE THE "KEEP IT GOING"
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Posted: 19 years ago
#63
FARAH?!! PLZZZ WRITE MORE!! IM WAITING!! 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ok guys........and sara. (lol) i'll now end the wait hehehehehe. here's the next part (do naam ek jaan)


...........sujal sits in the car with kashish and drive off................
kashish: (thodi age ja kar khamoshi tor ti hai) hum kahan ja rahe hain?
sujal: pata nahi
kashish: sujal...
sujal: kashish
kashish: tum phir shuru ho gaye
sujal: kya karun aadat se majboor hon....(and smiles while looking at her)
kashish: sujal, plz batao kahan ja rahe hain? mujhe class bhi attend karni hai.
sujal: kashish: kaha na.......nahi maloom
kashish: theek hai jao mein tum se baat nahi karti (she starts to look out of the window)
sujal: are...........abhi se jhagre shuru............waise kisi ne mujhe kaha hai (coming close to kashish and whispering in her ear) keh pyaar ka doosra naam takrar hai!
kashish: acha (now looking at him) janab ko pyaar keh bare mein kafi malumaat hai......kis kis ke saath pyaar ki takrar mein ulhaaj chuke ho........
sujal: kis kis ke saath matlab
kashish: matlab......tum to aise baat kar rahe the jise pyaar karne ka experience reh chuka ho............
sujal stops the car................. and freezes in one position......total silence
kashish :(thoda ghabra jati hai, she doesnt understand keh sujal ko kya huwa hai) sujal...............tum theek to hona........gari kyun ruk di.............
sujal: tum ne sahi kaha...............
kashish: kya sahi kaha?
sujal: mere pehle pyaar keh bare mein............
kashish is shocked to hear this:
kashish: yeh tum kya keh rahe ho..........pehla pyaar!!!
sujal: haan pehla pyaar...................meri mangetar................Nisha!
kashish: sujal agar yeh mazak hai to bahut bura mazak hai,,, mein tumse kabhie baat nahi karungi
sujal: nisha ne bhi kuch aisa hi kaha tha................aur phir waqai itni dur chali gayi keh mein kabhie usse baat hi nahi kar sakta!
kashish (with tears rolling down her cheek) sujal tum mazak kar rahe ho na, (holds onto his coat)
sujal nods in a no manner!
kashish: matlab mujse pehle tumhari zindagi mein...........
sujal: haan..........tum se pehle thi ek........woh bahut........
kashish: plz, sujal........ mujhe age kuch nahi sunna! (she is now weeping and pulls the door to get down when sujal holds her hand)
sujal: are are..........kahan ja rahi ho? (he is laughing like carzy) mein mazak kar raha tha!
kashish: (looks at him with surprize) MAZAK!!
sujal: haan to aur kya..............
kashish: sujal...........yeh mazak tha............how dare you (she starts to slap sujal in a playful manner) khabar dar jo dobaar is kisam ka mazak kiya to.............tum jante nahi mein kya kar bheti.................mein tumse bahut pyaar karti hon, aur yeh pyaar sirf mera hai..........samjhe............
sujal: mein to samajh gaya..................likin tum bhi dobara mere aur apne naam keh beech mein kisi ka zikaar sochne ki koshish bhi mat karna..................warna mein jeete jee mar...................(kashish puts her hand on his lips)
kashish: sujal! dobara aisa mat kehna..........
sujal cleans her tear and they hug again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

they leave each other after a while and kashish says: sujal mujhe college jana hai, wahan tak chor do ge
sujal: nahi!
kashish: sujal......plz...students wait kar rahe honge
sujal: to ek din chuti karlo..........yakeen mano students ko koi problem nahi hogi! they'll be more than happy! (winks at her)
kashish: SSUJAL!
sujal: ek bar phir se
kashish: kya ?
sujal: mera naam lena
kashish: sujal tum pagal ho..........acha ab plz mujhe college chordo. mein leave nahi le sakti kyunke mein ne abhi tak application nahi di hai.........
sujal: well...........tumhe aaplication dene ki koi zaroorat nahi
kashish: woh kyun?
sujal: aap shayad bhool rahi hai keh aap garewal khaandan ki hone wali bahu hain aur Sujal garewal ki hone wali dharam patni...................so..........
kashish: so.................
sujal: so Mrs Sujal garewal ko koi kaam karne se pehle kisi ki ijazat ya application dene ki koi zaroorat nahi! get it!
kashish: uff.......... tumhare issi attitude ne na..................
sujal: (cuts her in btw) tumhara dil le liya..........hai na!
kashish: (smiles) khush fehmi hai aapko!
sujal: aapki hi badolaat hai! (they look at each other once again with laaooooooove)
sujal: ahem (coughs) kya kashish tum bhi na.....jis special kaam keh liye nikla tha woh to bhula hi diya...........kitna bolti ho tum
kashish: han bolti bhi hon aur hansti bhi hon............tumhari tarah nahi...........MR ATTITUDE garewal!
sujal :(looks at her and smiles ) yeh lo...........khush
kashish: bahut!...........waise kya kaam karne ja rahe the tum...........
sujal: bata hon bata hon.............wait.

sujal drives the car and comes at his place..............THE GAREWAL HOUSE.......................

sujal: (before entering) kashish tum yahin khari rehna, jab tak mein na bulaon tab tak mat ana.......ok
kashish: theek hai...............

sujal goes inside where veena and chetan were already disscussing about sujal...............and how kashish ne inkaar kiya.

veena: (when she noticed sujal who was standing with his arms crossed)
sujal tum kahan chale gaye the. mein aur tumhare papa kitne pareshan the! dekho beta zindagi mein aisa kabhie kabhie hota hai.............jo hum chahte hain woh kabhie kabhie humari kismaat mein nahi hota..................isse dil chota nahi karna chahiye

sujal: (holds veena's arms) mama, mein ne zindagi mein kabhie kuch nahi khoya aur na kabhie khoun ga...................sujal garewal ne kabhie haar nahi maani,,,,,,,,,,,,meri kismaat mein ne hamesha khud banayi hai aur age bhi banaonga.............
veena puts her hand through his hair!
sujal (cont).............aur yeh hai uska saboot...................(he turns around and calls) kassshhiissh!

chetan and veena get surprized and shocked too as kashish walks in...........
veena: sujal yeh...........
sujal: aapki hone wali bahu..............(he is all smiles)
so is veena and chetan who move forward and give their ashirwaad and later hug her.
veena: mein janti thi tum ek din maan jaogi..........mere sujal ki khushi waapis le aogi! aaj mein bahut khush hon! (she then hugs both sujal and kashish............uff hoooo bahut zaida hugs ho gaye hain ..hehehehe...lol........isliye beech mein dalte hain kuch tension.........of course who else................rishi boy)
rishi: kis baat ki khushiyan manayi ja rahi hain (rishi enters inside the room, kashish as her back towards rishi)
veena: aaja.....tumhari hi kammi thi!
rishi steps forward as he steps forward.............kashish turns around to face him.............................................
rishi looks at her and gets a shock..........
rishi: TUM!
veena: tum nahi aap............tumhari hone wali bhabie!
Rishi now gets the biggest shock of his life.......................: BBHHHAABIEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!

..............ok so i'll finish it here. hope you liked it. aaj zara sujal kashish ki baaton peh zaida zor tha..................hope it didnt bore you guys..........actually its quite hard to write romantic dailogues...........but i still tired! (wonder how kiran, amna, rameena and mehraal manage it.....way to go guys)

so coming up, rishi's face to face talks with kashish...........will he accept her or not....................ab yahan hai twist!!!! wait and watch...........oops.......read!!!
luv farah
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Posted: 19 years ago
#65
hi ana. great part. i love it!!!! 👏 😃
jaldhi se ake continue karna 👏

farah
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Posted: 19 years ago
#66
farah
u r just too good
u kill me.......
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Posted: 19 years ago
#67
hey thanx nida......hope you guys enjoy it..........and hope its not "pakaofying" (irritates) 😆 😆 😳

luv ..........farah
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Posted: 19 years ago
#68
Wow, great updates 👏 ..love ur story rajeev1 👏 👏 plz cont
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Posted: 19 years ago
#69

that is sooo sweet ana!! well. waiting for your next part!!!!!!!! 😃 😳 👏

and thanx fallen angel!!!!! you're a great reader...hehehhe!!!😳😃

Edited by rajeev1 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#70
loved your part Rajeev1
please continue

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