Fan-Fictions 21st-27th August 2005 - Page 20

Thoda Sa Pyaar Hua Hai...Next Part

Subbah hoti hai,roshni ki kirnain window ke zariye aik kamrey main ati hain aur bed per leta hua Sujal apni neend sey uthata hai...uss ki mumma kamray key darwazay par khatkhata rahi hoti hain...woh kamray ka darwaza kholta hai...
Sujal: Good-Morning mumma...(neend main hai bahi bhi)
Veena: Good Mroning beta...uth gaya?
Sujal: bass nabi utha hun mumma...
Veena: raat ko late soya hoga...
Sujal: haan woh bass kaam kar raha tah...
Veena: kaam kar raha tha ya Kashish sey phone per baat ker raha tha?
Sujal: mumma....ap bhi na...main kaam kar raha tha
Veena uss ka kaan khenchti hai
Veena: tu ne jhoot kab seyu bolna shurroo kar dia?? main bhi teri maa hoon..janti hun raat ko tu Kashish sey hi baat kar raha tha...
Sujal: mumma...ap harr baat kaisey jaan leti hain
Veena: bass...acha sun jaldi sey neechey aja nashta thanda ho raha hai aur phir tujhey terey papa key saath office jana hai...koi meeting hai na
Sujal: lekin woh meeting to Kashish present kar rahi hai...
Veena: jee nahi...aj sey Kashish office nahi arahi iuss liye tu ja...ab jaldi kar...aur haan...abhi Kashish ko call na karbna, so rahi hogi khawamakha ussey disturb karay ga...
Sujal: arey wah!! ap ko uss bahu ki abhi sey fikar hai jo abhi iss ghar main ayi bhi nahia ru jo beta ap key saath hai hamesha uss ki koi fikar nahi?
Veena: pagal! kuch bhi bolta rehta hai...jaldi aja..
She goes aur Sujal office key liye tayar hota hai...tayar hotay huay kamray main harr jagah ussey Kashish nazar ati haii..
Sujal: sach main pagal ho gaya hoon...pata nahi kya ho gaya hai mujhey
Varrun at the door: BIG-B!!! ap neechey arahay hain keh nahi?? jaldi karain papa bula rahay hain
Sujal: araha hoon yaar!
he goes down to breakfast aur wahan ussey aik plan soojhta hai
Veena: kia ley ga? toast?egg?
Sujal: nahi mumma...kuch dil nahi hai...
Veena: kia matlab dil nahi hai? tabiyat to theek hai teri?
Sujal: bass kuch beychaini si ahi..mujhey lagta hai keh aj mujhey gahr per hi rehna chahiye
Veena: haan...aj ghar hi reh aj..yeh na ho baad main tabiyat kharab hojaye...
Sujal: lekin woh meeting??
Lalit: beta...meeting main handle kar loon ga...tum rest karo
Sujal: theek hai papa
Khushi khushi woh apnay kamray main chala jata hai...yeh sab drama Kashish sey milnay key liye
woh kashish woh call karta hai...after 6 calls Kashsih phone uthati hai
Kash: (sleeply) hello...kaun??
Sujal: main aur kaun
Kash: Sujal...tum?? itni subbah...
Sujal: bass yaar bore ho raha tha...
Kash: tum offie nahi gaye?
Sujal: anhi...meri tabiyat kharab hai
Kashish aik damm uth bethati hai, anxious
Kash: kia hua? tum theek to ho na?? ziada tabiyat kharab hai?
Sujal: haan....tabiyat to kharab hai...isssi liye office nahi gaya
Kash: acha...abhi time kia hua hai...oh 9 bajjey hain
Sujal: haan...aur Varrun,Kasak college gaye hain aur Papa office...mumma kisi kaam se bahir gayi hain aur main akela hoon...
Kash: what?? tumhari tabiyat kharab hai aur tumharay pass koi nhai hai??
Sujal: nahi na...kisi ko mera khyal hi nahi hai...isi liye tumhain call ki...lekin tum bhi nahi asakti na
Kash: kyun nahi asakti?
Sujal: woh rasam na milnay walli...
Kash: bhar main gayi rasam! main pandrah minute main pohanchti hoon...ok bye!
Sujal phone rakhta hai happily keh Kashish sey mill ley ga...woh bed per lait jata hai night-suit pehan ker pretending to be sick..
Kashish neechey jati hai kamray sey
Prerna: arey...aj itni jaldi..beta tu office nahi ja rahhi...
Kash: mumma...office nahi ja rahi...aik bhut important kaam hai iss liye...bass ghantay takk ati hun...bye!
woh Prerna ko kuch bolnay ka mauqa hi nahi deti aur garri ki chabi ley ker Sujal key ghar ke liye nikalti hai!
taqreeban 15 minute baad, Sujal ke ghar per bell hoti hai aru 10 second baad Kashsih bhagti hui Sujal key kamray main enter hoti hai
Sujal: arey tum agayi...main tumhara hi wiat kar raha tha..\
Kash: kia hua tumhain?tum theek to ho? kitni baar kaha tha keh tahnd main coat pehana karo elkinn suntay hi nahi...ab bukhto!
Sujal uss key shoulders per haath rakhta hai
Sujal: calm down!! chill karo..
Kash: kia chill karoon? tumhari tabiyaat kharab hai aur...bhukhar to nahi hai...
Sujal: kuch bhi nahi nahi hai...
Kash: kia matlab?
Sujal: matlab yeh sab tum sey milnay ke iye nattak...
Kash: WHAT!!! tumhain sharam nahi ati...pagal...milnay key liye yeh sab...meri to jaan hi nikal gayi thi...
Sujal smile karta hai aur phir ussey hug kar leta hai
Sujal: God i missed u soooooooooooooooo much!
Kash: choro Sujal!! kisi ney dekh liya na to...
Sujal: tum na...thora sa romance bhi nahi karnay deti...
Kash: shadi ke baad jitna romance karna hai kar lena...filhal main ja rahin hun
Sujal: arey itni jaldi?
Kash: mumma wiat ker arhi hongi
Sujal: jahan atkk amin tumhain janta hoon tum mumma ko kam sey am aik ghantay ka time de ker ayi ho...to betho na yaar
Kash: koi agaya to?
Sujal: 2 ghanton takk yahan gahr main koi nahi ayega main ney iss ka bandobast kar liya hai....
Kash: sirf aik shart per keh ainda aissa nahi akrogay??
Sujal: ok baba nahi karoon ga
Kash: theek hai
woh smile karti hai...Sujal apna dil pakar leta hai
Sujal: uffff!!! isi muskarahat per to hum fida hain...
Kash: Sujal!! tum ney mujhey paka embarass karnay ka zima le liya hai...
Sujal: embarass kia yaar... i am ur going to be husband
Kash: GOING TO BE na huay to nnahi ho...
Sujal: acha yeh sab choro...decide kartay hain...shadi key baad ghar ana chaho gi ya hotel main madam ke liye kamra book karain?
Kash: of course ghar angi...apnay ghar..
Sujal: theek hai...aur honeymoon per kahan jayen??
Kash: ummm....lets see....London??
Sujal: main ney aik tour socha hai...pehley London,phir Dubai, phir Morocco aur phir ghar...kia kehti ho?
Kash: excellent!! aur kitni dair key liye??
Sujal: yaar do amhinay to...
Kash: DO MAHINAYYYYY!!!! itni dair sab ke beghair...
Sujal: jab main wahan hoon ga to sab ki kia zaroorat....
(btw this conversation is taking place on a sofa in sujal's room)
Kash: nahi...phir bhi its too long....
Sujal: theek hai...merey saath akeley do mahinay bardasht nahi hotay aur iss gahr ain poori zindagi guzar sakti ho...fine
Kash: acha naraz na ho..theek hai jaissa tum kahoo....
Sujal: aur shadi ke 2-3 saalon main humaray paanch chay bachay to ho jayen gay na....
Kash: pagal ho agye ho?? 2-3 saal main paanch chay bachay?? main insan hoon koi machine nahi...
Sujal: yaar insan jab chand per ja sakta hai, k-2 sarr ker sakta hai to panch chay bachay paida karna to mamooli baat hai...
Kash: jee nahi...mujhey paanch chay bachay nahi chahiye...
Sujal: yaar woh Anish, uss ki bhai key janti ho kitnay bachay hain? saath....uss ki bhabhi ney kabhi kuch nahi kaha
Kash: uss ney nahi kaha matlab main bhi chup chap sarri takleef sehti rahoon? na baba na...mujh sey yeh takleef nahi sahi jaye gi...
Sujal: uff o kashish! kia takleef??
Kash: ab tumhain poora process bataon?? sab jantay ho lekin bholay bantay ho...main ney keh dia na sirf do bachay...nahi to takleef se to main marr hi jaon gi...
Sujal: main ney agar tumhain marnay dia to na?? tum mujhey chor ker ja hi nahi sakti...
Kash: kyun? maain koi immortal hoon...
Sujal: woh oopeer wala hai na uss ney humari qismatain akhatai likhi hain...matlab hum marrain gay to akhatay hi...
Kash: acha baba...tumhain chro ker kabhi nahi jaon gi ok...
Sujal:...hmmm thats better
Kash: acha ab main chalti hun
Sujal: kahan ja rahi ho??
Kash: ghar....bhut dair ho gayi hai...arey main naukar ko abta doon keh tumharay liye soup bana dey...
Sujal: yaar mujhey kuch anhi hua hai...
Kash: acha theek hai main chali...bye
Sujal cute sa chehra bana ker beth jata hai,....Kashsih darwazay takk jati hai aur phir murr ker wahan sey ati hai, Sujal ko hug karti hai aur aik simple si cute bki kiss karti hai cheek per phir wahan sey bhaag ker chali jati hai.....

To Sangeet ke liye wait karain aur next part main sangeet millay ag...bhut fun hoga...ok PLZ GIVE UR COMMENTS luv kira

natz...tahnks a ot for tyhat comment...i have started writin thoda sa pyar after a long time and i enjoy it really...thansk everyone...now tell me how is this part...i loved it!!

kiran it was awesome.......i just loved it......sujal and kashish are sooo cuteeeee........write more!!!! 😛 😃

farah

2 da riter of thoda sa pyar hoa
i think its kiran.k whoever it iz i wana no dat uh in 1 of da previous part jab s n k shoppin jate hai den u no ka k behosh ho jati hai n den s tak her 2 hospi.yaar wo hospi wala cene mein s n k ki batein shaid tumna nahi likhi.u said in da endin part ka kuch conversation hoti hai.if i av not read it plzz mujha batadana.n u no wat u n ur story both rok!! 👏 plzz cont karo
nids

THODA SA PYAR MILEGA..PART-11...akshat's mom slaps him:how cud u do this?how cud u cheat rishi? rishi pretends 2 be sad..another devdas.so every1 feels pity. rishi:its ok..i giv imp 2 akshat's & charu's happiness. charu gets irritated by rishi's acting & slaps him. mom:charu..how cud u slap such a nice guy who supports u. charu:this is his drama aunty.plz don't blame the poor akshat.he cares 4 rishi & he was willing 2 sacrifice his happiness 4 him.but i begged him 2 marry me. kashish:what?but that day u said u like rishi..u see him as ur wud be.. charu:it was a lie 4 certain foolish reasons.u don't no the true color of rishi.he is pretending 2 support us.u no what happened? she explains the whole incident. rishi:no its a lie..charu weeps & shows her pink arms:see,this skin color of mine is bcoz of rishi's attack on me.believe me. rishi:no its a lie. suddenly rishi's mom slaps him:i no who is lying.i'm ur mom & i no u very well.u were a big flirt in usa. rishi:i flirt with girls..during parties & all i luv flirting with them in hotels.but charu is my real luv.how can i do this 2 her? his mom:u'll do anything..his mom cries:i apologize 4 my son. charu:now u ppl tell.did akshat do anything wrong?he did this 2 protect me. he saved me...akshat's mom becomes sad :i'm sorry beta..he:its ok mom. sujal's dad:we shud conduct akshat's & charu's wedding immediately.they smile each other. the wedding arrangement go on.kashish thinks about her wedding arrangements.sujal thinks about the sudden wedding they had unexpectedly..

wow so many slaps.... 😆 😆
very nice jasmine....keep it up!!! 👏 😛

next part to do naam ek jaan!!!

.........kashish gets a call from the party, telling here that "charu ne" but then the line dropped.
kashish: sujal.........muje college jana hoga, charu kisi problem mein hai....
sujal: par huwa kya?
kashish:(tensed) yeh mein nahi janti..........bus college pohanchna zaroori hai...
sujal: ok theek hai.........chalo mein bhi chalta hon...........rishi.....tum bhi ajao!
rishi hesistates a bit but then sits in the car with them. they arrive at the college!

College...........
a girl:(runs upto kashish) ma'am.........woh charu.....
kashish: kya huwa charu ko........kahan hai woh (she looks around the ground)
girl: usse ghar le gaye hain.......she was drunk aur shayad drugs bhi........
kashish (shocked) WHAT!!!! charu.....drugs.......
sujal and rishi were shocked too.........
sujal: kashish, chalo jaldhi ghar chalte hain.....aunty wahan akeli hongi!
rishi goes along too!

Kashish's house!
they go upto charu's room where they find her unconcious...........
kashish: mama.....yeh charu........
tulsi: kashish......tum kahan thi...........dekho yeh charu ko..........
sujal: isse to hospital le jana chahiye tha, yahan kyun
rishi: acha huwa nahi le kar gaye......warna police case ban sakta tha!
sujal: (looked at him suspiciously) rishi, tumhe iske bare mein kuch maloom hai kya?
rishi: nahi big b , mein to charu keh wahan ane se pehle hi nikal chuka tha!
kashish is consoling tulsi......while charu still lies unconcious......
tulsi: doctor ko ghar bula liya tha........woh keh rahe the keh thodi der tak hoosh ajaye ga isse!
kashish: sujal thank you.......kafi late ho gaya hai......tum logon agar jana....
sujal: thank you ki zaroorat nahi hai....waise ab hum chalte hain, magar kisi cheez ki zaroorat ho to call kar lena..... (he gives her a smile)

Next day..............
kashish goes into charu's room.........she was getting ready........
kashish: ab kaisi tabiyat hai?
charu: ....behtar hai
kashish: charu.......tumhe kya zaroorat thi sharab ko haath lagane ki......aur yeh drugs.....how could you?? (she was angry now)
charu: di....aap yeh kya keh rahi hain......mein aur drugs..........mujhe to woh drink ek larke ne di thi.... mujhe to pata bhi nahi tha keh us mein kya hai...
kashish: larka?.........kon tha woh?
charu: mein nahi janti...........shayad woh rishi ka friend tha.........but i m not sure
kashish: (to herself) rishi!!!!!

College time...................
kashish was in college now, with charu! kashish kal keh incident keh bare mein principe se baat karne jati hai unke office mein......but to her surprise wahan to kuch aur hi ho raha tha.......
principle: rishi garewal.........last time mein ne tumhe maaf kiya tha tumhare bare bhai keh kehne par...........magar is bar...........tumne sari haadein par kardi.................yeh koi tareeka hai kisi larki se peesh ane ka...........tumhari is harqat se charu ki jaan bhi ja sakti thi! koi andaza hai tumhe!!!!!!!!!!!(shouts)

charu, rishi, charu's friends were all standing infront of the principle..........
and kashish was silently listening to all this.............
kashish:(to herself) yeh sab rishi ne kiya............woh aisa kaise kar sakta hai..............kya yeh sab usne mujhe se badla lene keh liye...............chi...itna gir sakta hai woh.................mujhe uske bare mein ab sujal se baat karni hi hogi (woh issi soch soch mein chalte chalte neeche canteen ke paas agayi thi jahan usse kuch larkon ki awaaz ayi!)

a guy: are yaar, fit ho gaya mamla.........kiya tum ne sab kuch aur bhogaadna us rishi ko hoga!
kashish yeh sun kar udhar hi ruk jati hai!
another voice: haan! itne saalon se us rishi ki batameeziyan bardasht karta araha tha..............this will teach him a lesson!
kashish deewar se jhankti hai to see............swayam!
swayam: ab usse pata chale ga........swayam se panga lena ka anjaam!
a guys(who was standing there with swayam) .....us charu ko drink dilwayi tumne aur ilzaam laga diya rishi par............manna pare ga......your'e too good!
swayam: ab kya karein...........na sunne ka shauk mujhe bhi nahi hai.........aur kal jab charu ne mujhe reject kiya tooo..............................ha, ab dekhta hon us rishi ko kon bachaye ga!

..................udhar principle sujal ko bulalete hain! sujal arrives!
principle: mr garewal...apke hi kehne par hum ne rishi ko waapis liya tha, likin kal keh haadse keh baad i am sorry to say keh we have to throw him out of the college! (all the senior teachers were now present too)

sujal is extremely embarrassed and looks with disgrace at rishi! : plz......mein iski taraf se maaf.................
kashish: koi zaroorat nahi hai sujal!
all of them turns towards kashish, who was standing near the door along with swayam!
sujal: kashish ............tum!
kashish: haan! aur koi zarorrat nahi hai tumhe ya rishi ko maafi mangne ki! kyunke iske peeche zimidaar rishi nahi koi aur hai!................sab ko sach batao swayam!
.......swayam: jee........woh....yeh sab mein ne hi kiya tha.........out of jealousy..........mein cahru se pyaar karta hon aur woh rishi keh saath kal...............(he felt soooo embarrassed)
ab swayam ne sach kyun bataya! well.........kyunke kashish ne usse warning di thi keh she will delibretaly fail him in the examination and will see to it keh he doesnt get admission anywhere!!! (are wah.........kashish bhi dadagiri peh utar ayi ..lol)

yeh sunkar principle fixes his glasses.
principle: swayam.........i am shocked.......tum jaisa student aisa kar sakta hai............you are suspended for two weeks and i want a written apology for charu and rishi from you,.............today!!.................kashish....thank you beta......
swayam: (just nods his head and walks out likin jate jate gives kashish a "i'll-teach-you-a lesson" look)

principle: i am sorry rishi..............mujhe tum peh yunhi shak nahi karna chahiye tha! i'm sorry mr garewal mein ne aapko bhi kham kha mein zehmat di!
sujal: its alright sir! likin plz.........agli bar rishi par ilzaam lagane se pehle puri maloomat kar le jeeyga.........mein apne bhai koi achi tarah se janta hoon.......woh kisi larki keh saath aisi harqat nahi kar sakta!
rishi felt proud of what sujal said about him
sujal: chalo rishi!..............thanx kashish
kashish: phri wohi! mein ne tumhe kaha na thanx ki zaroorat nahi hai! mujhe bhi rishi par pura bharosa hai!
rishi looks up at kashish! (with ........................well yes tiny bits of respect)
sujal: rishi.....tum kashish keh bare mein jo sochte ho woh sahi nahi hai! likin mein jnata hon keh yeh baat ek din tum khud samjho ge!

well after all the thankyous and sorrys exchanged sab apne apne kam par lag jate hain!!!!

its now evening aur ek bar phir se kashish college mein hi reh jati hai.
kashish: oh no! 6 baj gaye.............(she quickly collects her stuff and goes out to get a cab)
sarak sun san hoti hai! , kashish tries to stop some taxis but none of them do,,,,,,,,,,,,,when suddenly she sees some guys coming towards her.......
kashish: tum log!
swayam: jee maa'aam,,,,hum.............aaj subah aapne jo kiya uska thankyou kehne aye hain!
kashish: matlab.........
swayam: matlab............so guys ab humein ma'am ko matlab bhi samjhana hoga! (they all start to laugh and make a circle around kashish)
kashish: dekho swayam........
swayam: dekh hi to rahe hain, (he tries to come forward)
kashish: swayam.........mujeh se door raho warna.........
swayam: warna........kya............aap cheekein gi ya mujeh maarein gi........are mein to daar gaya! (huuuuu....such a pain)
swayam aur uske friends kashish ko dara rahe the when a car stops right next to them.................
likin nahi nahi...........is bar sujal nahi tha.................is baar tha ............rishi!!!!
rishi (gets out of the car) swayam aaj jo tumhari wajah se huwa.....uske liye mein ne tumhe kuch nahi kaha......likin abhi agar tum yahan se nahi gaye to mein khud nahi janta keh mein tumhare saath kya karonga!
swayams friend: chal swayam chalte hain..........iska koi bharosa nahi!
swayam: (looks at him and then turn towards kashish) aaj to tum bach gayi .......likin agli baar..........
rishi steps forward but before he could come close to them swayam and his friends run away!

kashish (now relieved) .........mm....thanx...rishi!
rishi: iski koi zarorat nahi hai, subah aapne mujeh bachaya....aur abhi mein ne .........so hisaab bara bar!
kashish: (gives a weak smile) mein......chalti hoon!
rishi: aayen mein chor deta hoon!
kashish: nahi. its ok...mein taxi le longi!
rishi: jaanta hon keh aapko taxi mein janne ki adaat hai.........likin mein apni hone wali bhabie ko taxi mein jate nahi dekh sakta.......so plz
kashish :(shocked) KYA!!!!! ..........kkya kaha tumne
rishi :(blushes) .....mein ne kaha .......plz....
kashish: usse pehle............
rishi: aapko taxi mein janne ki adaat hai! (trying to avoid)
kashish: (sighs) rishi.......uske baad!
rishi: wohi kaha jo kehna chahiye tha........ab plz........chalein..........bhabieee
kashish looks at him and they both smile at each other!

garewal house!!!
rishi enters.......
veena: kahan the itni der tak!
sujal was also sitting there on the sofa!
rishi: woh....kisi ko ghar chorne gaya tha
sujal looks at him: kisse?
rishi: apni hone wali..............
sujal: kya?
rishi:big b.....kya kya.........apne hone wali bhabie ko.....(he smiles)
sujal gets up................he is happy!
sujal: bhabie.....tumhara matlab kashish!
rishi: kyun.....apka kahin aur bhi chakar hai...(mischievously)
sujal: shut up!! (they hug each other....ufff ...........finally sujal khush huwa)

veena: rishi, mein aaj bahut khush hoon!
rishi: mom!!
veena: are tum dono ki baaton mein mein batana hi bhool gayi........
sujal: kya mama?
veena: aaj tumhari bua aur archie arahe hain....mumbai se..............rishi tum jake le aoge unhe airport se!
rishi: WHAT!!!! mein............................

ok guys..abhi keh liye itna hi! so rishi acha ho gaya!!! happy !!!!!!!!!!!!!! to ab yeh naye log kaun hai....kahin ye sujal aur kashish ki zindagi mein koi nayi musibat to nahi lane wale..............well.........hope not! keep commenting guys!!!!

..........farah

nids...i do not get what u r trying toi sya...plz elaborate tahnks!

yar kiran hospital wala scene mein s n k ka beech mein tumna kaha tha ka batein hongi.wo batein kya thi mujha nahi pata agar tumha pata hai to plz likh do 😊
nids

THODA SA PYAR MILEGA...Part-12...rishi's mom dares 2 see him.rishi who luves his mom very much cud'nt bear it:mom,plz don't be cruel 2 me..mom:u r being cruel 2 me.u r bad 2 others & that gives me pain 2 me.i'm shame 2 tell others that u r my son. rishi was touched by it.he thinks over it & cries.he falls on his mom's legs:mom,plz 4giv me..i won't repeat it...atlast thepoor mom hugs him. akshat-charu wedding takes place. while walking in the crowd kashish falls on sujal's body.he catches her. then she goes awaty from him. sujal thinks about what swayam told him about kashish's mind.he thinks:i no that what swaym told is not exactly correct.but its true that kashish does'nt like me.what if i hand over her 2 piyush bhayya?will she be happy?