Fan-Fictions 21st-27th August 2005 - Page 21

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Posted: 20 years ago
Great job guys
i loved everyone's part
please post the next part to all of them soon!! 😃
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Posted: 20 years ago
yaar golu plz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz write ur story i m dying to read ur story.
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yaar golu plz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz write ur story i m dying to read ur story.
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Posted: 20 years ago
hey...god..i posting afta such a long time...anyways...
amnadi plzzzzzz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...post da next part of pyaar to hona hi tah and some1 plzz continue keep it goin!!...
thanks guys!!..u guys rock!
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Posted: 20 years ago
All of you did a great job, Kiran, I meant what I said, 'Thoda sa...' is great... 👏 All of the stories are wonderful...

Golu, Aamna, Rameena... please continue guys, Aamna, please continue 'Pyaar tu hona he tha' is lovely!
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Posted: 20 years ago
👏 hey guys its great. keep it goin....koool 👏
come on yaar 😡 😳
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Posted: 20 years ago
guyz i ve made changes 😳

East or west
Pyaar is the best
CHARACTERS :
I wont bother describing them all

The garewals :
Chetan garewal : his character is like the 1 in kth
Veena garewal : same as in kth
Sujal garewal : same as in kth
Saahil garewal : brother of sujal. . Cute. Nice personality . Very popular .
Sneha garewal : very loving girl. She loves helping the poor while saahil will do nothing of the sort . Loves her father very much but dad has no time for her.
Charu garewal : same as in kth
The rahejas :
Lalit raheja : works and lives with chetan garewal.
Vassu raheja : she lives in u.s with her daughter , kashish . She went to u.s a year after kashish waz born. Her personality is better . U ll find out.
Rishi raheja : very naughty and 2 yrs elder to kash. Lives with lalit. He thkz of garewalz kidz as his own bros and sis.
Kashish raheja : same as in kth

The nandas :
Mihir nanda : loves his family very much . He is a very succesful business man.
Tulsi nanda : very sanskari mumma . Loves to sit at home and do pujaz and u get the point don't u ?
Akshat nanda : studies in us with kashish . They r very good frndz. Only frnz.
Kripa nanda : same as in kyph. She lives in us with kash and akshat.

The shergilz :
om shergil : dead . Not imp.
Rewa shergil : lives in india. Her character iz like vassu . She loves shopping and gossip and the like .
Angad shergil : sujalz best buddy . A very succesful ROCKER !
• Kumut shergil: same as in kusum
Hope u guyz like it . If u do then I ll continue . If not then wont bother. So do give ur comments , suggetions and advice.



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Posted: 20 years ago
•   ; east or west
pyaar is the best
hey guyz thiz is my frst fanfic do comment


Woh hari hari waadiyan , who bhare bhare perh , who rang birange phool , who bhayteehuin nadiyan , unn nadiyon kaa pani , who neela neela asmaaan , uss asmaan may sitaare , uss asmaan kay badal , who suraj ki roshni , woh baarish kay boonday , woh baraf ki thand , who sadak kay bache , unn gharon kay log , shimla ki sadkein , shimla kay log , shimla ki hawa , har aik cheez unki pyaar ki gawa thi . Har aik cheez.
• KYA WAQAY MAIN UNKA PYAAR ITNA GEHRA THA ?
• Thatz for u to decide.

• We see the same house in which the viranis live but it is now known as RAHEJA MANSION .
• Cut in to a room in the MANSION
• We enter and the first thing we see is a large photo stuck on a wall on which u can see a man , a young boy of arnd 3 yrs and a woman and a baby. YES thatz kashishs family 19 yrs ago. Nxt thng we see is a large showcase containing numerous trophies and framed certificates :
• THIS CERTIFICATE IS PRESENTED TO :
• KASHISH RAHEJA
• FOR HER OUTSTANDING ACHIEVEMENT IN JOURNALIST TRAINING
• WE ARE PROUD TO SAY THAT SHE HAS TOPPED THE WHOLE STATE OF OHIO
• CONGRATULATIONS MS.KASHISH RAHEJA
• MAY YOU ACHIEVE MORE IN YEARS TO COME
OK guyz the underlined parts are those I would like you to pay attention to.
Then we spot sum1 sleeping peacefully on the bed but we cant see her face as it is covered by her hair.
Then we shift to an alarm clock five secondz to six , four seconds to six , three seconds two seconds TRING TRING TRING ! But thtz not all we see a nokia 7610 the time is 05 : 59 we watch as it turns into 06 : 00. TITT TITT TITT TITT ! WOH ! Lagta hai inki neend kuch ZAYAADA hi gehri hai she needs extra ! Now u wld expect her to close her clock grumbling lekin WHAM !
That was the sound the clock made when it came in contact with the wall when thrown by this EXTREMELY sweet girl .lolz. Then we see her get up grab sum clothes and head towards the bathroom . Remember typically we havent seen her face yet. Then we see her cum out . Focus on the legs :
She has payal on both feet. Move upwards we see a cream parallel . Then a black shirt with cream work that starts frm the middle of the shirt and ends on the right side of her neckline . Then she puts on a gold necklace . Delicate with a dark saffire stone pendant . She already has another one on : a silver 1 with a silver heart pendant. Yeh hamesha isse pehenthi hain. Itz a gift by ……… mystery person .
Then she applies brown lip gloss . Next she puts on long cream hangings with black encrusted sones . Then her eyes we look into those dreamy eyes as she applies eyeliner , uske baad mascara . Phir creamish brown eyeshadow. Now fullshot we see a beautiful girl in her very late teens standing in frnt of us . Who apna dupatta pahenti hai ( itz wraaped arnd her neck style ) . We see ..breathtaking amna shariff in frnt of us . Well she IS pretty u know !
thatz all for now. hope u guyz liked it, eagerly waitimg for comments




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Posted: 20 years ago
great juhi......continue plz 👏 .....wah beautiful description! 😳
i hope sujal ki bhi kuch aisi hi ho....well.....not excatly payal and necklace...hehehehhe, 😆 😆 😆 just kidding!
great work keep it up 👏 .....i am waiting for MOOREE 😳 😛 😳

farah
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Posted: 20 years ago
ok....now i'll continue with (do naam ek jaan)

..........rishi had come home after dropping kashish at her house! when he comes home gets to know that his bua and archie (her daughter) are coming at their place!
veena: aaj tumhari bua aur archie arahe hain...tum ja ke unhe le lena!
rishi:What! mein.......mein kyun mama! no way,,,,mein nahi jaonga........aur waise bhi woh dono phir se kyun arahi hain.........abhi to ayin thi

sujal: yehi baat mein bhi mama se keh raha tha.

veena: tum dono to aise puch rahe ho jaise khud kuch jante nahi....woh log har saal hi to ate hain aur phir yeh to sujal ki shaadi ka mokah hai.......waise bhi tumhare papa apni behen se kuch puche bina nahi karte..........isliye unka ana to lazmi hai.

rishi: likin mom! you know how.....

veena: bus aur behhis nahi.........mein ne kaha na keh tum ja rahe ho matlab tum ja rahe ho!

rishi makes irritating faces and looks at sujal for help....but no no no! bua se bachne ka treeka to sujal keh paas bhi nahi hai! he smiles at rishi, pats him on his back and goes upto his room!

kashish's house!

charu and kashish are sitting in kashish's room............

charu: di. aaj jo kuch bhi huwa uske liye i am sorry, bina soche mein ne rishi ka naam le diya............aapke bare mein bhi nahi socha.....plz..mujhe maaf kar deejiye ga!

kashish: charu, pagalon jaisi baatein mat karo! tumne jo kiya woh tumhe sahi laga, aur mein ne to sirf sach sab ko bataya! ......waise mein ne rishi keh bare mein jo kuch bhi socha tha woh bilkul galat tha.........woh ek acha larka hai!

charu: (excited) haan di....woh bahut acha hai.

(kashish looks at her strangely) kashish: kya matlab bahut acha!

charu: matlab....kuch bhi nahi......

kashish:(innocently) kuch bhi nahi...........

charu: nahi hai.....likin (confused) kashish starts to laugh at her! just then tusli enters.......

tulsi: tum dono yahan ho!! kya baatein ho rahi hain!

charu: kuch nahi mama, yeh di bhi na......

kashish: are chup kyun ho gayi baaton na mama ko keh kya baat ho rahi thi! charu blushes and goes to her room! while tulsi and kashish start to laugh at her!

tulsi: kuch dino baad tumhari yeh hansi is ghar se bahut dur chali jayegi....

kashish hugs tulsi.....

kashish: aisa kyun keh rahi hain mama, mein aap se milne aongi na!

tulsi gets tears in her eyes and kisses kashish on her forehead.

kashish: mama, aapse ek baat puchna chahti thi...(a little hesistant).......

tulsi: haan pucho na!

kashish: mama, apne bare mein itni bari sachayi janne keh baad bhi mein ne agar khud ko kisi ki beti mana hai to woh aap hain..........likin.

tulsi: likin kya?

kashish: likin mama, mein janna chahti hon keh yeh sab....matlab meri asal mama..........kon.........

tulsi: gets up from the bed when kashish holds onto her hand...

kashish: mama, plz aap muje galat mat samajhiye..........ap nahi batana chahti to mein force nahi karungi.......likin papa ne aapke saath aisa kyun kiya............itna bara dhoka.......kya yeh janne ka haq nahi hai muje.....

tulsi turns towards her and sits down again.

Tulsi: pura haq hai! likin yeh tumhare papa ki bewafai nahi thi..........bus ek bhool thi.......jo kab haqeeqat bani iska andaza hi nahi huwa!

ok..........flash backs!!


yeh un dino ki baat hai jab meri aur tumhare papa ki nayi nayi shaadi hui thi aur hum log mumbai mein rehte the...........tumhare papa wahan ke ek college mein proffessor the! humara chota sa ghar tha....aur hum dono bahut khush the! keh ek din......woh humari zindagi mein ayi..........tumhare papa ki colleague thi woh.............tumhari ..........ma!........

unki doosti gheri hoti chali gayi.........aur ek din is doosti ne ek naya naam le liya! tumhare papa ki sab se bari bhool...........jo unhone jaan bhuj keh nahi ki! likin jab tak woh kuch kar pate tab tak bahut der ho chuki thi!
tum is duniya mein agayi thi aur tumhari ma ye duniya chor keh chali gayi thi............tumhare papa ke ilawa tumhara koi nahi tha.........
......unhone mujhse sari zindagi apni iss karni ki maafi mangi.......woh waqai sharminda the, is liye mein ne bhi unhe maaf.........likin jab jab mein tumhe dekhti mujhe unki bhool aur us aurat ki shakal nazar ati.....aur tumhari koi galti na hote huwe bhi mein tumhe saaza deti rahi!!

hum log phir yahan shift ho gaye,,,,,chor diya woh shehar jisse humari purani yaadein juri thi!!!.........

guys....abhi keh liye itna hi....well this was to connect the story! ab yeh to tha tulsi ki zindagi ka woh sach jisse woh mumbai mein chor ayi thi.............magar kya yeh sach ab duniya se chupa payegi.........ya koi purani yaadein ake phir taza kar jayega.........
keep commenting everyone!

luv..........farah

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