Fan-Fictions 21st-27th August 2005 - Page 19

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plz continue Armaan the story is very gud
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genious420 kiran jasmine...all of u rock...
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Farah plzz continue do naam aik jaan😛.You've done a brilliant job👏.
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coooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool!!!!! 👏
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hey great juhi.....go ahead.......i am waiting!!!
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just read all d stories gosh u guys made my day ... gr8 going keep it up 😳👏
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ok..........i'll continue with do naam ek jaan!


........sujal and kashish were in a tight hug when they heard a voice..........
voice: ahem ahem!!
sujal and kashish leave each other to see who it is....yes kabab mein haadi..............none other than charu!
charu: agar aap logon ka ho gaya ho to neeche chalein........
sujal and kashish get a little embarassed!

GAREWAL HOUSE!
veena:(quite worried) yeh sujal is halat mein kahan chala gaya?
rishi:............mein achi tarah se janta hoon kahan gaye honge............
just then sujal arrives!
veena: kahan gaye the......mein kitni pareshan thi............tumhe kuch ho jata to....kaise reh pati mein tumhare bighar.....
sujal: mein bhi kaise reh pata mama........kashish ke binna!
veena: (usse pyaar karti hai) kashish ab jaldhi tumhari ban jayegi.....phir kon usko tum se alag karega!!! (looks at rishi)
rishi shakes his head in dissapointment and goes to his room..................

NEXT DAY........AT COLLEGE

rishi sees both charu and kashish entering college....as usual kashish staffroom ki taraf barti hai to charu class ki taraf............but before she could cross the ground rishi aur uske freinds charu ka raasta rok lete hain
charu: (looking at rishi) yeh sab kya hai?
rishi: tum se kuch baat karni thi
charu: kya? (suspicious)
rishi: aaj raat jo juniors ki welcome hai
charu: haan, janti hoon...........to?
rishi: to mein chahta hon keh tum meri.........patner bano!
charu is quite shocked!: kya! mein!
rishi: haan....tum!
charu: likin........mmmmmmmmmm
rishi: likin wakin kuch nahi.........muje NA sunne ki adaat nahi hai!
charu: ..............(ahista se) ok...........(and she walks off)

rishi's freind: are yaar...........yeh tumne kya kiya.tum iske saat jaoge?
rishi: haan.......aur aaj raat mein is chalu aur iski di ko aisa sabak sikhaonga keh yeh yaad rakheingi! (tannn tannaaa!)

after the class ek larka............(Swayam) charu keh pass ata hai.
swayam: charu..........hi!
charu: hi.........ummm....swayam.
swayan: yes........woh actually mein tumse puchna chahte tha keh kya aaj raat tum mere saath......party mein.......
charu: oh.........i am sorry swayam...........woh mein aaj raat rishi ki patner hon....isliye............im sorry............maybe some other time
swayan is dissapointed..............itne saal usne charu se baat karni chahi, aur aaj jab ki to jawab mein "na" sunne ko mila............!!!


KASHISH'S HOUSE!
the phone rings, kashish picks it up!
kashish: sujal! abhi to baat khatam ki thi!
sujal: haan......to ab phir shuru karte hain
kashish: ..............koi khaas baat hai ya phone rakhon
sujal: are yaar....tum itna ghusa kyun karti ho
kashish: kyunke tumhe bina dant khaye sudharte nahi ho, isliye!
sujal: hmmmmmmmmmmm
kashish: what hmmmmmmmmm? ab mein rakh rahi hon
sujal: nahi kashish....jo baat kehne keh liye phone kiya tha woh to sun lo
kashish: muje pata hai............(shies)
sujal: gosh tum larkiyan......humein khud ki tarah faltoo samjha hai.......mein ne i love you kehne keh liye phone nahi kiya!
(heheh bisti ho gayi kashish ki)
kashish: (dissapointed) to phir kis liye
sujal: ye batane keh liye keh aaj raat mein tumhe college ki welcome party se pick karunga......aur dinner saath kareinge! ok
kashish: likin yeh kaise ho sakta hai.....
sujal: ho sakta hai........college keh bahir mera wait karna......9.00 sharp!
kashish: su......
sujal: muje kuch nahi sunna! i'll be waiting there!
kashish: ...........theek hai..........
sujal: aur haan ek aur baat........
kashish: ab kya hai..................
sujal: i love you! (and hangs up)
udhar kashish reciever ko dekh kar smile karti hai and says: me toooo!!!!!!!

its almost time to leave for the party when charu comes in kashish's room.
charu: di, aap bhi arahi ho?
kashish: haan!
charu: likin subah tak to aap ka mood nahi tha...
kashish :(while brushing her hair for the final time ,picks up her purse and turns towards charu): likin ab mood ban gaya!
charu: (smiles at her) oh i see..........ok ab mood ban hi gaya hai to chalein!
kashish: (nods in yes) mein mama ko bata don.....................

ITS PARTY TIMEEEEEEEEEE!

rishi and his friends were standing outside the hall........rishi ofcourse waiting for the two sisters!!!!
rishi's freind: rishi, dekh woh dono agayi!
rishi: haan........likin yeh kashish andar kyun nahi arahi!
just then a car arrives.......uff car bhi andar bhete bande ki tarah fit thi! kashish sat inside,while charu waved at her!
rishi was noticing all this: Big b ki gari............yeh yahan kaise? dekhna parega! (he follows sujal and kashish)
charu: (to rishi's friends) rishi nahi aya..........
friend: haan......aya hai...........kahiin gaya hai abhi...........bus ata hi hoga!
charu: (nods and goes inside)......................

ab zara sujal aur kashish ki taraf! they enter a grand hotel.............
sujal: (to receptionist): mr sujal garewal ke naam se booking for two!
receptionist: jee sir....aapki table wahan hai............
sujal: (takes kashish's hand and proceeds towards the table............while rishi is spying behind and gets a table close to theirs!!!

kashish: itne mehnge hotel mein ane ki kya zaroorat thi........
sujal: zarorat thi isliye to ayen hain
kashish: i am sure iisse behtar khana woh humare ghar keh pass jo resturant hai wahan hoga...............
sujal: chalo theek hai..kal wahan chalein ge............
kahish: sujal!!!!!!............acha ab jaldhi order do warna der ho jayegi!
sujal: kya kashish.......hum pehli baar ek saath kahin akele ayen hain.......its such a romantic place aur tumhe jaldi machi hai...................deta hoon order!
sujal places the order!!
side mein soft music baj rahi hoti hai................candles were lit .........sujal and kashish ek doosre ki ankhon mein gum the.................while rishi was watching all this with anger!

sujal :(breaks the silence) kashish.......mein tumse maafi mangna chahta tha......
kashish: maafi ..kis baat keh liye?
sujal: jo rishi ne tumhare saath kiya................muje mama ne bataya tha......i'm really sorry........
kashish: (puts her hand on sujal's hand) sujal plz..........maafi mang keh mujhe sharminda mat karo................agar rishi tumhara bhai hai to mere bhi bhai jaisa hai.................uski kahi kisi baat ka mein ne bura nahi manaya (chal jhooti)

rishi to himself: yeh bhi sab natak hai!
kashish: jante ho sujal, tum bahut lucky ho............tumhare pass itne log hain jo tumse itna yaar karte hain! .................rishi ne muje se jo bhi kaha,sirf isliye kyunke woh tumse pyaar karta hai................tumhare liye fikar karta hai

rishi: (gets confused......likin andar se kahin woh yeh sab sunkar kashish ki izaat karne laga tha)
sujal: mein janta hon, jitna woh mujse pyaar karta hai,usse kahin zaida mein usse pyaar karta hon..........uske liye kuch bhi kar sakta hon................bus mein yeh nahi chahta keh uske aur tumhare beech kabhie koi misunderstanding ho!
kashish: nahi hogi! chahe meri aur uski soch na milti ho............magar hum ek doosre se tumhari wajah se jure hain..............aur yeh pyaar ka ehsaas hai................yeh kabhie nafrat mein nahi badal sakta! waqt ke saath saath sab kuch theek ho jayega...............

rishi was getting a little impressed by kashish aur uski baaton mein kho sa gaya tha keh he accidently hit his hand on a glass that was placed near by......
DHIIIIIISH!
everyone looked at him! sujal and kashish too
sujal: rishi! tum............yahan!
rishi: ya.....woh mein..............
sujal: tumhari to party thi na!
rishi: (confused didnt know what to say and how to say).......mmmmm....
sujal: chalo its ok.......ab aye ho to humare saath hi khana kha lo!..come!
rishi looks at kashish ............par is bar uski ankhon mein ghusa nahi tha.............well...............pyaar bhi nahi tha..........bus kuch mixed feelings thi...............
rishi jitna bhi inkaar karne ki koshish karta..........woh yeh baat nahi jhootla sakta tha keh usko kashish ki ankhon mein sujal keh liye behpana pyaar dikhta tha!!!!!!!..............kabhie woh sujal ko dekhta to kabhie kashish ko dekh kar nazrein neeche kar leta...............he was very confused!!!!!!!!!!!

all three of them start their dinner when kashish's cell rings.
kashish: hello!
a girl: hello....kashish ma'am
kashish: jee bol rahi hon
the girl: (tense) mein....mein charu ki dost bol rahi hon.........aap plz yahan college jaldhi a jayein............woh charu ne...........
kashish: charu ko kya huwa?...............(beeeeep.........line dropped) hello?hello?................................................ ....


ok abhi keh liye itna hi!!! to coming up................will rishi sudharofy! what has happened to charu!!!!!!!!!!!! and of course sujal aur kashish...............jin ke binaa kahani adhuri hai!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
A BIG THANKYOU TO EVERYONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!i really appreciate your comments............keep them going!

........luv.............farah!
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Posted: 20 years ago
great story farah 👏 amna where r u plz post the next part soon 😊
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Posted: 20 years ago
great job farah
please do write the next part ASAP!! 😛
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WHOZ GONNA con keep it going ..... i cant and thnx farah gr8 part too👏
Edited by vivacious_virgo - 20 years ago

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