Fan-Fictions 21st-27th August 2005 - Page 11

superr storyyyss 😊 guyz u rokk 👏 plzzzz cont.

nids

superr storyyyss 😊 guyz u rokk 👏 plzzzz cont.

nids

aray yahaan tou koi story aagay barh hi nahe rahee hai 😡

all of u guyz rock..........and genius420 i like ur story...kinda new..... and bst part was tahmoor supporting mahrokh....

ok guys i'll continue.....(do naam ek jaan)

....kashish aur sujal gari mein ake bhet the hain.
sujal: kya baat hai?
kashish: kuch nahi(she was looking tense, after seeing rishi's reaction)
sujal: mujhe pata hai.......kuch to hai.....
kashish: (looking at sujal) kya???
sujal: kya kya kya! kuch to hai......ek dum flop film hai
kashish: film? tum film ki baat kar rahe the....
sujal: haan....wohi kekta jee ki....kuch to hai!! main to teen baar theatre gaya tha.....
kashish: woh film dekhne.....?
sujal.... nahi....yeh dekhne keh abhi bhi chal rahi hai ya bandh ho gayi!
kashish: kya sujal tum bhi na! (and laughs)
sujal: kashish main bhii nahi.....main hii!
kashish: jo hukaam....ab mujhe ghar chor do ge.....
sujal: nahi!
kashish: ab nahi kyun?
sujal: nahi....ya ni maza nahi aya.....tum bina bole, bina jhagre.....meri baat kaise maan gayi!
kashsih: SUJAL! isse pehle keh mein tumse jhagrana shuru ho jaon.....tum mujhe ghar drop kar do......warna....
sujal: ...warna......(kashish ki taraf pyaar se dekhta hai.....
kashish: warna....(kashsih sujal ki taraf dekh kar thoda sharma jati hai) ......warna.....mein taxi le keh chali jaongi........jaon kya?
sujal: kya kashish......mere romantic mood ka kabara kar diya!
kashish: koi baat nahi......abhi to puri life tumhare saath hi rehna hai........bahut mokeh milnge ......romaancee keh! (she smiles)
sujal looks at her and smiles too
kashish: ab kya dekh rahe ho...
sujal: apne liye tumhara pyaar......
kashish:(cuts in) humara pyaar..........

guys,sorry again a short part.....par sach bataon to bilkul dil nahi kar raha .....after hearing about sujalfan's father.......i came in the afternoon to write the next part but i just couldnt..........abhi bhi i wrote a light part........not very interesting.....kyunkii mera aapna mood nahi tha......anywayz......life must go on......may his soul rest in peace!!!aur Allah Tallah unhe himmat aur sabar diye rakhe! Ameen......

farah

AWWWWWWWWWWW.........SO ROMANTIC!!!!! SUJAL N KASHISH!! LOVELY SCENE..WITH LOVELY DIALOGUES!! GREAT WORK FARAH!! 😛 😛 😛

all of u done great work 👏 👏 👏 and aamna plz post the next part 😊

well again pyaar to hona hi tha........................

kash n sujal walk into their room

kash:tum yahan room mey change karo mey bath room mey change kerti hoon

sujal:haan to mey kab kaha k haal mey jaa ker change kero......................

kash:sujal u r much....... she slams thedoor at his face

sujal:mey kyun is k batein berdasht kerraha hoon

kash:(suddenly open the door) kyun ki tum mujh say pyaar kertey ho

sujal:ohhhh forget it .............may pyar wo bhi tum say in dreams

kash:kahin na kahinto kertey ho na .. dreams mey hi sahi

sujal:kash change ur dress tumey gahr chor ker mujey kahin jana bhi hai plz ab mera sir maat khao..................

kash:make a puuppy face: sujal..........

sujal:kya hai

kash:mey tumey appney app say pyyar kerney per majboor kerdoongi

sujal:sorry kash but pyaar kabhi majboori nahi hota..................

kash:mey nahi jaanti kya hota hai....... bas itna jaanti hoon k tu merey ho merey they or merey hi rahoogy

sujal:kitni dafa or kahoo gi yeh

kash:hamesha..........................she again close the door

sujal:smiling at her behaviour.................suddenly he thinks ..........yeh mujey kya horaha hai............

this is for the day.......... sangi........vaada nibha kerna zara mushkil hota jara hai

amna gr8 stroy.... aap toh apna vada ab bhi nibha rahey hain..intni achi parts likhar....

Amna you're great yaar... please continue this story...