Fan-Fictions 21st-27th August 2005 - Page 12

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Mere Dharkano ko Qarar do

Episode 2

Esha ki namaz se farikh ho kar jab rakhshanda mahrukh ke kamre main dakhil huwen to mahrukh hamesha ki tarah bari laparwahi se bister par ari tirchi so rahi the unho ne age barh kar use seedha kar ke pillow us ke sar ke neeche rakha abhi woh kamre se nikal hi rahe then ke un ke nazar samne dewar par lage apni aur zafar ki shadi ki pic par pari
15 saal guzar jane ke baad bhi jab bhi who es pick o dekhte un ki aankhen nam ho jaten tasweer k odekhte dekhte un ke damagh ne mazi ka safar shuru kar diya
FLASHBACK
Un ka es duniya main sawai apne mamu ke aur koi nahi tha after great effort she only able to qualify till F.A who din raat kam main masroof rehte thin aur apni mami ke tane sunte rehte thin es ke alawa un ke pass aur koi chara bhi nahi din ese tarah guzar rahe the
Pata nahi khuda ko un ki kon se ada pasand ai thi ke zafar ka rishta un ke liye aya who apne are bahi aur bhabhi ke saath rehte the zafar se shadii ke baad bhi unhe apne khush kismati par yaqeen nahi ata tha zafar ke ghar wale un ka itna khiyal rakhte ke kabhi kabhi woh maghroor se ho jaten
Phir ek saal baad en ki duniya main mahrukh ne a kar mazeed rang barh diye jis waqt mahrukh paida (born) huwe muzaffar bahi ke 4 bache the sab se bare Tania 6 saal ki tahmoor 5 salman 3 aur sehar 1 saal ki thi who itni pyaari thi ke sab use besakhta pyaar karte who buhat kam un ke pass rehte thi ziada tar who Tania tahmoor ke pass hoti waqt apni rafter se guzar raha tha jab achanak ek baar phir un ki duniya andher ho gai
Mahrukh do saal ki thi when zafar got an accident and died aise main muzaffa bahi aur bhabhi main sahi maino main un ka saath diya har guzarte pal ke saath un logon ke liye un ke dil mian izzat aur ehtram ke jazbat barhte gai ghar main jab bhi koi cheez ati sab se pehle mahrukh ko milte phir koi aur le sakta tha muzaffar bahi ki to es main jaan thi us ke mun se nikalne wali har baat ko poora karna who apna farz samajhte the un ke beja lad ne use kafi hat tak munpath aur ziddi bana diya tha jab bh iwoh us par sakhti karten yaan use samjhaten woh seedha apne bare papa (muzaffra) aur mumma (haleema) ke pass pouhanch jate aur agar who na milte to tahmoor ke pass
FLASHBACK ENDS
Watchman ki awaz par unho ne ghari ki taraf dekha jahan ek baj raha tha unh one apni nam aankhon ko saaf kiya aur lite off karde

Next scene
Now its morning and time is 10:00 clock
Mahrukh (neeche se ate muzaffar sahib ki awaaz par us ka bread ki taraf barhta haath ruk giya tha us ne chor nazron se apni maa ko dekha jo onion kat rahe the aur chupke se kursi khiska kar uthi
Rakhshanda: mahrukh
Mahrukh: ami bare papa bula rahe hain
Rakhshanda: mujhe to awaaz nahi ai
Tabhi ek dafa phir mr. muzaffar ki awaaz ati hai
Mahrukh: suna (yeh kehte saat hi us ne neeche ki taraf door laga di aur seedha dinning room main pohanchi )
Muzaffar: kab se tumhara intezaar kar raha tha
Mahrukh seedha ja kar un ke gale lagte hai and he kisses on her forehead
Haleema: agar aap baap beti ke laad khatam ho gain h oto naashta kar len
Muzaffar: kyun mere sher abhi nashta to nah ikiya? Tumhare intezar main main abhi tak bhooka behta hoon
She nods her head in no
Haleema: ek to aap log 10 baje so kar uthte hain jis waqt duniya dopahar ke khane ki fikar main hote hai main aap ka nashta bana rahe hoti hoon (chai cup main daal kar un ke age rakhte hain)
Muzaffar: bahi kiya karen begum hum huwe farikh log aur farikh logon ko aur kaam hi kiya hota hai (ab mahrukh ki taraf murte hain) kyun bahi bete tumhara result ka baa raha hai
Mahrukh: pata nahi bare papa kal sidra (her friend) ka phone aya tha woh bata rahi thi es month ke end tak aye ga ab dekhen
Muzaffar: chalo dekhte hain
Haleema: suniya ab aap farikh hain plz zara yeh phone ka bil jama karwa den
Muzaffar: bahi mujh main himat nahi hai itni lambi line main khare hone ki tahmoor ko de dten woh ki karwa deta
Haleema: tahmoor university geya hai phir job par jaye ga raat ko thaka huwa aye ga ab woh kab jama karwae ga
Muzaffar: aur salman kahan hai
Haleema: who bhi college giya huwa hai (she goes to kitchen)
Muzaffar: acha baba jata hoon mahrukh tum carem set karo wapis aa kar hum khelte hain
Mahrukh: ok bare papa done agar aap har gai mera burger paka
Muzaffar: ok beta lekin agar main jeet giya to aap mujhe apne hathon se coffee bana kar pilao ge
Mahrukh: done
Muzaffar bahir chale jate hain aur mahrukh aur haleema upper aa jate hain mahrukh apne kamre main carem lene hale jate hai and haleema rukhshanda ke pass beth jate hain
Rukhshanda: ho giya nashta
Haleema smiles
Haleema: kyun bahi aaj kuch nahi pakaya
Rukhshanda: yeh larki nashta khana aksar neeche hi kar lete hai ab apne akele ke liye kiya ehtamam karon wese bhi raat ka sara salan wese hi para huwa hai
Haleema: es liye kehte hoon tum bhi neeche aa jaya karo
Rukhshana : (smile)bhabhi pehle hi karne ko kiya hota hai ab handiya bhi na pakaon to kiya karon aur mahrukh to jab se farikh huwe hai bekar ho gai hai sara din tv yaan khel main to heraan hoti hoon bahi jaan sara din es ke saath lage rehte hain thakte nahi
Haleema: (kheka lagate huwe) farikh jo hain jab se unho ne bank se retirement li hai bache ban gae hain
Just then mahrukh enter aur woh neeche jane lagte hai
Rukhshanda: tum kahan chale
Mahrukh: main neeche jaa rahi hoon ami bare papa aa gae hoon ge main un ke saath carem khelne jaa rahe hoon aaj mere un ke saath burger ke shart lage hai
Woh neeche chale jate hai aur peeche rukhshanda aur haleema hans parte hain us ke bachpane par
Episode end
To be continue
Do comment guys
Sorry 4 spelling mistakes and other things

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hi! friends sorry for the delay.

Continuing my story A Love Story

Sujal calls the office and asks for some files to be brought home. Though he is still unwell but wants to get back to work. Mr. Shah who works for R&G and Sujal's PA gets the files home.

Piyush who at that time in sujal's room is surprised.

Piyush: Sujal yeh sab kya hai? aur Mr. Shah maine aap ne mana kiya tha naa sujal ko disturb nahin karne ke liya phir yeh sab.

Mr. Shah: Piyush sir woh sujal sir ne kaha tha.

Sujal: Piyush Mr. Shah ko gussa kyon ho rahe ho maine hee unhe kaha tha. Tujhe toh pata hai naa ki mein bore ho jaaonga saara din aaram karke. Bas isliya.

Piyush: Tujhe doctor ne rest karne ko kaha hai and rest means rest no work at all.

Tabhi veena enters

Veena: Mr. Shah aap iss waqt ghar par. Dekhiya agar aap ko koi kaam hai toh office mein piyush ya akshat se baat kar lejiya. Sujal 3-4 din tak office nahin aayega aur naa hee koi office se isko disturb kareinga.

Sujal: (Thinks mumma ko kya boolo) Mumma woh maine hee....

Before he cld complete

Veena: Janti hua tuna hee bolo hoga. Bahut aache se jaanti hua. Mr. Shah aaab aap jaa sakte hai aur yeh files bhi lejaye.

Sujal: Mumma files kyon.

Veena: mr. Shah aap wahi kare jo maine kaha.

Mr. Shah leaves and Here kashish enters.

Veena doesnt know kahsish is as entered the room.

Veena: Tujhe pata hai abhi bhi kitna week hai subha bhi tabiyat kharab hogayi thi.

Piysuh : Kya hua tha mumma.

Kashish: Woh sujal ko abhi bhi weakness hai subha mein sujal ko neeche leagyi thi simran se milwane aur jab upar aa rahe thea toh inhe chakar aaagaya.

Veena; Dekkho naa kashish beta subha aisi halat thi aur ab yeh aaram karne ki jagah office ka kaam ghar par karna chahta hai.

Sujal: Kya mumma aap bhi aap ko pata hai kaam nahin karoonga toh aur kya....

Veena: sujal ab tum yeh diwai khao aur aaram karo.

Sujal: (MAkes a face as he is unhappy) and takes his medicine.

Piyush, Veena and kashish go downstairs.

Suajl lies down bcoz of the weakness and medicine he goes off to sleep.

In the hall downstair. Piyush has left for office and kahsish is getting ready to leave. just then Veena gets a call from a friend of hers. Veena has to go to meet her immediately as her husband is unwell and in th ehospital.

Kashsih: Comes out to leave sees that veena is pareshan.

KAshish: Kya hua aunty aap itni pareshan kyon lag rahi hai.

Veena: Beti woh mujhe hhospital jaana hai zaroori meri friend ke husband hosp mein hai. Par samajh nahin aa raha kaise jaaon. Agar mein chali gayi toh sujal ko khana kaun dega. Agar naukar lejayega toh woh nahin kaheaga.

Kashish: Kyon aunty itne ziddi hai kya woh.

Veena: Nahin ziddi nahin laparwah hai apna bilkul khayal nahin rakhta hai.

Kashish: Aunty dont worry u go i will stay at home.

Veena: Thank u beta.

Veena leaves and now only sujal and kashish are a home and sujal doesnt know abt it. yet.

hellooooo budyzzzzz....... 😆
hoe r u all....... 😊 i hope that u all enjoying your
life ............ 😊 but remember one thing dont forget khusheeeee..... 😳 😆 ok ........ 😊
any wase i,ll contenue my story............ 😉

Kaisa Yeh Pyaar Hai.............
part5:
recap:kashish behosh ho gate hai sujal usko hospital le kar ja raha hota hai too uske car karab hoo jate hai or wo or kashish ek cottage main rat betatain hain....subah
kashish ke ankh kulte hai tab aabhe sujal soo raha hota
hai..kashish utt kar sujal ke pas jate hai utne deer main sujal ke bee ankh kul jate hai.....sujal kashish see bat karne lagta hai kee kashish sujal kee face per ek zor ka thaper marte hai.....or sujal ko bohut bura ballah kahte hai......or yeh kha ker bahir chale jate hai
bahir aabhe takk barish hoo rahe hote hai......ahanak hee sujal ko baher see kashish kee cheak sunaee dete hai or woo baher jata hai......ab aageeeee......
sujal bagta huva bhair jata hai......woo baher jaker deakhta hai kee kashish ka peer vesal gya or kashish
ka face kechar main hota hai....... 😆
sujal yeh deakh kar hansna start kar deata hai.... 😆
sujal:ohhh....... 😆
kashish ko sujal ke iss harqut per bohut gussa aata hai....... 😡 woo apna face apne dupatta see saf karte hai or bhir sujal kee tarafghor kar deakhte hai....... 😡
kashish:hum....it,s not funny....... 😡
sujal haste huve:yah... 😆 it,s.... 😆 😆 not ..... 😆 😆 funny....... 😆 😆 😆
then sujal start laughing again....... 😆
kashish,s eyes filled with tears.... 😔
then sujal realize ke usse kashish kee saath asia nahe karna cheaya thaaa..... 😳
sujal kashish ke pas gata hai or apna haath kashish kee taraf barhata hai....... 😳
sujal:hmm iam sorry...... 😳 may i help u...... 😳
kashish guse se sujal ko gorte hai........... 😡 😡
kashish:no thanks......i.ll manage....... 😡
sujalwith cute smile :ok as u wish....... 😳
kashish ke haath main sujal ka coat hota hai woo uska coat uske taraf bhankte hai......
kashish:take this...... 😡
sujal with cute smile on his face:ohh ....thanks.. 😃
than sujal wears his coat.......
kashish kare hone lagte hai too fhear see uska peer slip ho gata hai.......
kashish:ahhh.ouch..... 😵
kashish ke peer main moch aa gate hai or uska haath pee mor jata hai........ 😆 😉
sujal kashish kee pas gata hai or phir see apna haath
kashish kee taraf barhata hai....ab to kashish kee pas sujal kee help lene kee aleva koi or rasta nahe tha........ 😉
kashish bahut hee cute saa face banaker apna haath sujal kee hath main de date hai........ 😆
sujal kashish ko apne god main uuth leta hai..... 😳
sujal chalte huve musalsal kashish ke face per deakh raha hota hai....... 😳 sujal ko kashish bohut hee pyaree lagte hai..... 😳 kashish sujal ke taraf deakhte hai or foran hee apne nazran neeche kar lete hai........ 😳 kashish koo yeh accha nahe lagt hai😉
woo cottage ke taraf aa rahe hotain hain kee ahanak hee
zor kaa thander hota hai ....or kashish apna face sujal ke coat main chupa late hai.....or uske lips (jo ke kanp rahain hotain hain)sujal kee shirt ke battons ko toch kar rahe hotain hain..... 😉 or woo sujal ko or zor see paker late hai......... 🤗
sujal to bas kashish koo deakh raha hota hai.....sujal lost in his own world(his dream world 😆 )sujal koo kashish bohut hee cute lagte hai or woo ek pal kee liya bhe apne nazrain kashish per see nahe uuta ta...... 😳
song timeeeee friendzzzzz
music .......and song start......
hmm hmm hm hm hmm hmmm hmm hmhm hm hm......
thora sa pyaar huva hai....... 🤗
thora hai bake..... ❤️
thora sa pyaar huvaaa hai... 🤗
thora hai bake.....
❤️ musis again.......
thora sa pyaar huva hai........... 🤗
thora hai bake....... ❤️
thora sa pyar huvaaa hai ..... 🤗
thora hai bake...... ❤️
hum to dil dee hee chuke..... ❤️ ❤️ 🤗
oooooooooo
hum too dil dee hee chuke ❤️
bas tere hain hai bake... ❤️ 🤗
thora saa pyaar huva hai...... ❤️
thora hai bake....... 🤗
sujal sahab to apne dream world main bilkul gum thai... 😆 mager kashish nahee..... 😕 ahanak kashish ko
ahasas hota hai kee woo sujal kee ktna pas hai.... 😳
woo sujal kee coat see apne face baher nekalte hai or sharam se sujal kee tarafdeakhte hai....... 😳
sujl to kashish kee face see nazran hee nahe hata raha hota hai.....kashish apna face neacha kar late hai.....
mager dasare hee lamhe woo apne chara sujal kee taraf karte hai or uske cute see eyes main gumm ho jate hai...... 😛 😉 😆
sujal oe kashish apne dream world main gum ho jatain hain... 😳
song time.......
hmmmmm.....
aaj yeh kia huva hai dil nahe mera bas main.... 🤗
iss leya sochte hoin tor don sare rasmain..... ❤️
umer bher kay liy too aa mera saath de de..... 🤗
tera ho jayon ga main hation main haath de da.... ❤️
hathaion main haath sayhee..... 🤗
oooooooooo
tu mere saath sahee.... ❤️
pher bee tere hain hai bake..... ❤️
thora saa pyaar huva hai.....❤️ ❤️ ❤️
THORA HAI BAKE...........🤗
they are completly lost in thear dream world......but
ahanak hee dobara thander hota hai............ 😡
(yah thander bee naa...... 😡 galat time per hogya....... 😡 😆 😆 )
and then they both come out from their dream world.............. 😳
sujal kashish ko ander lake bed per betatha hai....kashish ko thand lagne start ho jate hai.....sujal apna coat utaar ker kashish ke taraf karta hai...... 😳
sujal:hmm...take this..... 🥱
kashish:no it,s ok..... 😊
sujal:no it,s not ok.....aap ko thand lag gya ge.... 😳 ⭐️
kashish uska ka coat le late hai or bahan latehai.....
sujal zameen per bath jata hai...... 😕
kashish koo yeh acha nahe lagta ke woo bed per
hai or sujal zameen per..... 😳 (acha lagta bee kaisa
akher sujal ke perva kashish nahe kara ge to or kon
kare ga........ 😉 )
kashish:amm....woo aap...bed per bath gaye plzz...... 😳
sujal:no it,s ok....... 😊
kashish:nahe aase acha nahe lagta aap plzzz......
sujal:ok .okkk...legeya main uper bath gya.....ab khus...... 😊
kashish:hmm..... 😃
kashish see sujal.....
kashish to her self:yehmuje kiy ho raha hai.....main kyun iss ke kareab.....main kase kisse ajnabe per barosa.....oh God.....plzzz help me...muje kia ho raha hai.......... 😕 (are kashish yar u love sujal.....stupet)
sujal kashish ke taraf deakhta hai......
sujal to him self:yeh muje kia ho gya tha ...main kyun ase react kar raha hoin....yeh larke kitne sweet hai...kitne masooo see bil kul ek pare jase.....
inn ankhion main kitne KASHISH hai...... 😳
kahean main iss se pyaar....nahe asia nahe hosakta....
noo......it,s not posable....
sujal apne khaylon main itna gum tha ke akhre line kuch
onche awaz main bol gya....... 😆 or kashish ne sun liya......
kashish:what is not possable mr garewal....... 😊
sujal:hain.....woo...nahe kuch bee too nahee... 😕
kashish:app nee abe to kaha na ke...... 😕
sujal:woo main kuch sock raha tha.....
kashish:ohh... 😊
sujal; 😕
then woo dono barish ke rukne ka intazar karte hain.....
or kabhe ek dasra ko chore chore deakhta hain.....mager kabhe in ke nazrain mill jate hain.....or bher foran sharam se juck jate hain..... 😆

ok friendzzz that,s 4 today
take care
byee... 🤗

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guys i m speachless.......................... i m addicted to all these stories😳

they couldnt get any better😉

they r sooooooooooooo romantic and also soooooooooooooooooooo funny...........................love them alll 😛

ok so i'll continue......(do naam ek jaan)

....sujal aur kashish ki pyaar ki baatein tab anjaam peh pohanchti hain jab kashish ka ghar ajata hai....
kashish: thanx sujal......main chalti hoon.
sujal: hmmm.......
kashish: bye!
sujal: hmmmm
kashish: kya huwa..bol kyun nahi rahe.....
sujal: kya bolun?
kashish: kuch bhi.....
sujal: theek hai......kashish mat jao!
kashish: sujal.....tum bhi na....yeh bhi koi baat hai
sujal: filhaal mujhe iske ilawa aur koi baat sujji hi nahi!
kashish smiles: filhaal yeh kehne ka haaq tumhare paas nahi.....pehle humara rishta to jur jane do.....phir jo dil mein aye woh kehna aur mangna!
sujal:.....rishte ka kya hai...jab dil mil chuke hai to naam bhi jur hi jayeinge......kyun??
kashish: likin main naam jurne tak intezaar karungi.....aur ab bye.....tumhe der ho rahi hogi!
kashish gets out of the car,likin uska dupatta ek bar phir se sujal keh haath keh neeche ajata hai, she turns around.....but beore she could say anything sujal bhi dekh leta hai.....
sujal: are baap re.....isse pehle keh tum chilao....tumhara dupatta galti se mere haath mein agaya tha.....
kashish: (she smiles and pulls her duppata) pagal! (kashish ghar mein chali jati hai)
sujal :(in his car) haan woh to hoon.....tumhare liye!


KASHISH"S HOUSE:
kashish enters.......tulsi is sitting really worried with charu by her side
tulsi: (kashish ko dekhte hi) kashish....tum theek to ho. itni der kahan lag gayi thi...charu bata rahi thi keh college se sujal tumhe le gaya tha......beta tum.....
kashish....(hugs tulsi) jab aap meri itni fikar karti hain to bahut acha lagta hai (and smiles while letting go off her)
tulsi: kashish.....mein kya puch rahi hon aur tum kya bol rahi ho
charu: di....bolo na....sujal bhaiya kyun le gaye the
kashish: woh.....woh.....woh sujal mujhe
tulsi: tujhe.....tujhe kya?
kashish: mama.....main ne sujal ko haan kehdi!
tulsi: kis cheez keh liye( still confused)
kashish is now embarrassed akhir apne rishte ki baat woh khud to nahi kar sakti thi apni mama se......likin not to worry....charu hai na.....sab kuch sambhalne keh liye!!!!!)
charu: What!!! DI!!!! aap sach keh rahi ho.......i cant belive this (she runs and hugs kashish) i am soooo happy for you.....
tulsi: charu....kashish....yeh sab kya hai....????/ (Gosh such a duffer....eeekkkss joking!)
charu: mama aap bhi na! kashish di ne sujal bhaiya ko shaadi keh liye haan keh di!
tulsi: kya! (in happy mood but with tears in her eyes....yani khushi keh ansoo)
tulsi: kashish....kya yeh sach hai.
kashish silently smiles.
tulsi: aaj mein bahut khush hon.......jeeti rahe! isse zaida achi baat ho hi nahi sakti thi.......likin ab tum hum se door chali jayo gi......zindagi bhar mere pyaar keh liye tarasti rahi aur aaj jab mein ne tere is pyaar ko samajha to tum mujhse door chali jao gi (she gets all emotional and hugs kashish).........

...phir kya tha.....agar is bar ankhon se ansoo bhe rahe the to dilon mein laddooo phut rahe the......all were really happy at the sinha's and at the garewal's too....except one.......yes rishi!!!!

rishi abhi bhi soch raha tha keh dal mein kuch kala hai...yeh kahin kashish ki koi chal to nahi!!!!

NEXT DAY AT COLLEGE........
.....rishi was with his freinds.....likin kuch khamosh khamosh sa tha....
friend#1: kya yaar, rishi aaj tu itna chup chup kyun hai?
friend#2: haan mein bhi yehi soch raha tha? ya huwa.....kisssi larki ne inkaar kar diya (all start to laugh and this irritates rishi even further)
rishi: (shouts) JUST SHUT-UP (he gets up and walks away)
friend#1: yaar yeh rishi ko kya huwa? itna ghusa....pehle to kabhie nahi kiya
friend#3: koi ghar mein problem hogi......koi baat nahi...lets carry on guys!

rishi was now sitting all alone jab uski nazar samne se ane wali do larkiyon peh parti hai! yes...kashish and charu........
kashish rishi ko dekhti hai jo uski taraf ghuse se dekh raha tha....she tells charu to go to the class while she goes towards rishi!

rishi and kashish were now face to face.....
kashish: rishi! woh kal shayad tumhe.....
rishi: tumhara plan kya hai?
kashish: plan? kya matlab rishi...
rishi: itni masoon nahi ho keh meri baat na samajh pao.....mere Big b ko apne pyaar mein phasa kar kya sabit karna chahti ho....keh tum mujhse jeet jaogi
kashish: (trying to convince rishi) rishi...tum galat samajh rahe ho.....mein sujal se....
rishi: (points towards kashish) naam mat lena mere Big b ka apni zabaan se.....warna.............


ooooookkkk..so warna rishi kya karega? kya kashish uski is warna ki dhamki se daar jayegi...ya daat ke samna karegi.........well.......wait till the next part arrives!
bye the way....juhi...rishi ne accident nahi kiya tha....he was there and saw everything and than ran away.....accident kissne kiya tha.....yeh ab bhi batana baqi hai!
so guys thanx a lot for your comments and plzzzz keep commenting and critizing!!!! luv it!

farah.........

great golu and khushe....great parts!!! 👏 👏
uff golu...ab age kya hoga....ghar mein akele hain dono..hmmmmmmm...i am waiting hahahahahahaha 😆

carry on guys!!!! 😉

farah..............AUR LIKHO?? PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ ZYADA SEE LIKH DIYA KAROOOOO!!! PLZZZZZZ!!!! 😉