Fan-Fictions 21st-27th August 2005 - Page 9

ok ppl so i am writing in here with thsi story after avery long time...and i knwo u few ppl who read it waited for it...so here is a long one dedicated to all the ppl who like this story!!
Thoda sa pyar hua hai

A small recap: Sneha and Rishi come to India...Kashish meets them at airport...Sneha, Shruti and Kashish get together at Kashish's house and Sneha tells them how Rishi has ruined he life...Sujal takes Rishi to his own home but Rishi resfuses to go and says that he wants to stay in a hotel...now Rishi has NOT met the Garewals...and Kashish supports Sneha..they are going to get a divorce...so leyts see whats happened

Shruti and Kashish convince Sneha and they support her to get her divorce.Actually Rishi had been in India since 2 months or so and Sneha had come to India to apply for a divorce and they (rishi and sneha) were happy to get rid of eachother...Next day Kashish and Sneha go to ytheir lawyer and apply for the divorce...they come out of the lawyer's office and Kashish is calling Sujal
Sneha: kissey phone laga rahi ho Kashish?/
Kash: Sujal ko..us ne kaha tha keh woh humain yahan sey pick karay ga aur hum lunc akhatay karain gay
Sneha: kashish...main tumhari bhut shukarguzar hun ke..
Kash: bass...koi thanks ki zaroorat nahi hai..we r friends...aur main tumharay kaam nahi aon gi to kaun ayega?/
Sneha: aj main iss pabandi sey bhi azad ho gayi..thank God...main aj bhut khsuh hoon
Kash: haan...aur issi khsuhi ko aj hum sab mill ker celebrate karain gau
Sneha: hum sab??
Kash: matlab main, Sujal, tum, aur Shruti and co.
Sneha: SHruti and co...yaar tu ney yeh to bataya hi nahi keh SHruti ki shadi kaisi hui??
Kash: matt poocho..hazaron pappar beley thay unhain milanay kay liye...khair yeh choro...yaar yeh Sujal kahan reh gaya...hamesha late hota hai...kabhi time per nahi aya...
Sneha smiles aur uss key shoulder per tap karti hai
Sneha: lo agaya Sujal
Kash: tameez akro...after all main tum sey pooray 5 mahinay 6 din barri hun aur Sujal tum sey ziada barra hai
Sneha: ahahhaaa...5 mahinaya nahi 5 saal ho gaye...chalo agaye Sujal JEEJU!!
Kash: better...(laughs)
Sujal comes up on teh stairs where they are standing
Sujal: ziada late ho gaya kia??
Kash:nahi...ap to as usual waqt se pehley agayen hain...wiasye anney ki zehmat kyun ki ap ney??
Sujal: yaar tanney na marro...office main kuch kaam tha...tum logon ka kaam ho gaya??
Sneha: haan...kaam ho gaya...thanks to u both
Sujal: no problem at all....
Kash: pata hai Sujal aj lunch key ba hum shopping per phir...
Sujal: ab ap ko late nahi ho rahi?? (wickedly)
Kash: baad main dekhoon gi tumhain...chalo Sneha garri main
they recah the car
Kash: Sujal please aj main drive kar loon??
Sujal: No way...last time yaad hai an kya hua tha...
Sneha: kia hua tha?
Sujal: humari larayi ho gayi to madam ko garri sahi drive karni ati nahai hai lekin garri ley ker nikkal gayi...phir hospital sey phone ata hai keh Miss Kashish yahan admitted hain un ka accident ho gaya hai...3 stitches forehead pe aur garri tabah
Sneha: kashish...itni burri garri chalati ho??
Sujal: meri to jaan hi nikal gayi thi...
Sneha: zahir si baat hai...ap ki nahi nikalay gi to kiss ki nikalay gi??
Kash: ho gayi burai??ab chalain?/
Woh ghussay main garri main beth jati hai ..SNeha aur Sujal aik dosray ko dekh ekr Kash ke attitudeper hanstey hain phir garri main bethtey hain...Sneha peechey aur Sujal driving...garri chalti hai...SUjal ko masti charhati hai aur woh SNeha ko wink kerta hai...kashish abhi bhi ghussay main hai
Sujal: yaar Sneha....garri main bhut garmi nahi ho gayi??
Sneha: haan...bhut gari hai...kuch jalnay ki smell bhi arahi hai...
Sujal: tumhain bhi arahi hain...bhut strong smell hai jalnay ki...lagat hai kisi ka dil jal raha hai
Kash ghussay maian ussey dekhti hai
Sujal: arey baap re...kashish aissey na dekho main darr gaya....acha baba naraz na ho...i am sorry...mazak kr raha tha yaar
Kashsih chup rehti hai
Sujal: kashish yaar tum aissa react kero gi to yar lunch per kya maza ayega..mera bhi mood kharab hoga...aur sneha kia sochey gi keh yeh donon hamesha lartay rehtey hain...ok...agar tum ab razi na hui o main aj poora din kuch nahi khaon ga...theek hai?? ab khush??
Kssh:nahi aissa nahi karna..pata hai an tumhari tabiyat kharabb ho jati hai...ok..its alright..
Sujal: ab ap sey aik aur guzarish hai please!!
Kash kia??(cutely)
Sujal: aik baar smile kar do
Kash: nahi...
Sujal: ok...
2 minute baad, SUjal garri rokta hai....kashish ki taraf aik damm dekhta hai aur kehta hai
Sujal: kashish..yeh tumharay chehray pe kia hai??
Kush:kia hai??(confused)
Sujal:woh tumharay cheeks per...tumharay cheeks key pass...
Kash: kia hai sujal batao na!!(she thinks its an insect aur something)
Sujal uss key honton ker kareeb haath lagata hai
Sujal: yeh mill gayi!!
Kash: kia hai??
Sujal: tumhari smile...gum ho gayi thi lekin ab mill gayi hai
Kashish smiels aur shies down...SUjal uss key kareeb ata hai aur uss ko cheek per kiss karney lagta hai when a voice comes
Sneha: AHEM AHEM!!!!
sujal aik damm seedha ho jata hai
Sneha: i think keh is ultra-romantic jagah main mera damm ghut raha hai...waisey bhi main kebab main haddi kyun bann rahi hun??
Kash: arey nahi Sneha..its nothing like that...yeh Sujal hai na hamesha aissi i koi harkat karta hai..choro...haan to tumhain pata hai Nisha ka...woh na..
Sujal starts driving the car and they reach Silver Oak Restaurant.
they go inside aur abhi bethey huay do minute hi huay thay keh Shruti aur Sameer wahan ajatay hain
Kash: HI!! itni dair laga di anney main??
Shruti: haan bass woh traffic...
Sneha: arey Shruti bachay nahi aye?/
Shruti: nahi mumma ne unhain rok lia...actually mumma chahti thi keh hum log akeley jaye...warna Roshan bhut tang karta hai...
Sujal: acha chalo betho..aur suna Sameer kaisa hai??
Sameer: aik damm theek
They sit there talking for some time...
Sujal: ab order dein...
Shruti: haan...mujhey to bhut bhok lagi hai
Sneha: hmm....waiter
and who comes here but our waiter Gurry
Sujal: waiter, please order note down kar lo...
they all give their order
Sujal: aur han zara jaldi karna
Gurry: jee?
Sujal: main ney kaha keh jaldi karna
Gurry: sir kia jaldi karmna??
Sujal: abey yaar order jaldi lana
Gurry: abhi ley aon?
Sujal: yaar jab bann jaye to ley ana mere baap..ab ja
Kash: daant kyun rahey ho ussay?
Sujal: dantoon na to kia karron...kashish..
Gurri has gone from there
SNeha: ok ppl to main ap ko aj ki taza tareen news deti hun..hum garri main bethey thay aur Kashish naraz thi to Sujal...
Sujal is sitting next to Sneha aand on his other side is Kashish
SUjal Sneha key moun per haath rakh deta hai
Sujal: Sneha! no...nahi..Sneha nahi
SNeha: ok baba nahi batati
Sameer: kia hau batao na Sneha
Kash: anhi kcuh nahi...yeh to aissey hi...
Shruti: hmm....to Sujal tum mujhey aik baat batao...
Sujal: poocho...
Shruti: tumhara shadi ka koi plan nahi hai kia??
Sujal: bilkul hai...kyn?/
Shruti: bhai kab sey sun rahey hain keh ap donon ki shadi hai...lekin kab hai??
Sujal: arey yaar itni jaldi kai hai...
Shruti: jaldi?? poora aik saal ho gaya ap ki mangni ko mister...ab shadi ka koi plan nahi hai??
Kash: Shruti...tujhey sach bataon to Sujal acting kar raha hai...rozana kehta hai 'yaar humari shadi kab hogi' aur tumharay samney...
Sujal: yaar mainey kab kaha??
Kash: Sujal...jhoot na bolo..hann Shruti woh bass aj tareekh pakkii honi hai..isi liye aj jaldi jana hai ghar
Sneha: ohhh!! aur yeh achi news ap ney pehley kyun nahi batayi madam??
Shruti: chor na...Sneha isi baat per aik gana ho jaye yaar
they both start singing but not loudly
MERI PYARI BEHNIYA BANNEY GI AJ DULHANIYA...AND DULHAN HUM LAY JAYENGAY
SUjal kashish key haath per haath rakhta hai...Kashish is smiling and blushing at the same tiem..she is beet-root red...
Sameer(to Sujal): bhai sahab...haath ahta lijiye
they all laugh and then they get their meal...start eating...after a lot of time Shruti and Sameer leave with Sneha...now only Sujal Kashish are left
they go out in the parking...SUjal leans against the car aur Kashish uss ke saath kharri hai...Sujal kisi gehri soch main hai
Kash: kia soch rahay ho Sujal?
Sujal: soch raha hoon key jab sapnay sach hotay hain to insan ko kitni khsuhi hoti hai na
Kash: kaun sa sapna??
Sujal: tumhain pannay ka sapna...tumhain ani dulhan bana ker apnay gahr lanney ka sapna...tumhain dulhan key roop main sajjay huay dekheny ka sapna...tumharay haathon per apnay naam ki mehendi laganay ka sapna...tumhain apnanay ka sapna...kuch dinnon baad tum meri ho jao gi kashish!!
Kash is silent...she has tears in her eyes
Sujal: arey yeh kia...main itni romantic baatain kar raha hoon aur tum ro rahi ho?? yeh anssoo kiss liye Kashish??
Kashish:Sujal..main ney kabhi spanay main bhi nahi soch atah keh mujhey tum jaissa saathi milley ga...lekin yeh anssoo iss liye hain..keh main soch rahi thi keh jiss ghar bmain main palli bhari, jahan apnay achay burray waqt guzaray aur jin logon ko itna pyar kia...iss sab ko chor ker main kaisey....
Sujal is silent aur woh uss ke samney akey kharra ho jata hai
phir woh ahista sey apna haath agay kashish ki taraf bharata hai...aissey like ussey tham lo...kashish usey dekhti hai aur phir apna haath sujal key haathon main dey deti hai
Sujal: bass....ab tumhain fikar akrnay ki zaroorat nahi hai!
Kas:kai matlab?/
Sujal: jab tum eny iss haath ko thama hi liya hai to ab tumhain apnay sarray gham sarri pareshanian aur sarray khauf bhool janney chahiye...iss haath ko tham liya matlab yeh haath zindagi bhar nahi chootay ga aur hamesha tumhain sahara dey ga...aj sey tumhari sarri pareshanian meri...main aj tum sey aik wada karat hoon kashish...main wada karta hoon ekh tumhain zindagi bhar khsuh rakhoon ga...tum per aik anch bhi nahi anney doon ga...tum merey peechey nahi hamesha merey saath chalo gee...merey saath merey gahr main tumhain koi takleef nahi hogi...aur gara koi takleef hui to uss takleef ki jarr ko hi khatam kar dalloon ga...tum per ksii ki nazar takk nahi uthnay doon ga...yeh mera wada hai tum sey!!
kashish ussey dekh arhi hoti hai with love and a bit surprised
Sujal: mujh per bharosa to hai na??
Kash: yeh pooch ker kyun humaray pyar ko, humaray bharosay key rishtay o kamzor bana rahay ho...main tum per apnay ap sey ziada bharosa karti hoon...main janti hoon keh tum apni baat per kharray sabit hogay...main wada karti hoon keh zindag bhar tumhara saath doon gi aur kisi aur key barray main sochna door ki baat hai tumharay ilawa ksii ko nahi dekhoon gi!
THEY BOTH LOOK INTO EACH OTER'S EYES...bavkground ( ji yeh chahey yeh lamhay)
tehn kashsih at once comes running into sujal's arms and hugs him tightly
Kash: i love u Sujal..i love u!!
Sujal: i love u too!!
they hug for some time (actually there is no one in the parking lot if u r wondering) aur phir kashish aur sujal garri main beth ker ghar jattay hain..go staright to Sujal's house
Veena: arey acha hau tum log agaye...
they enter aur Raheja's aur Garewals sarray bethey hain to decide te ady of marriage
Prerna: beta...shadi ki tareekh nikal ayi hai...
Kash:: jee mumma
Gunn: janti hain Di...shadi ki tareekh kia nikali hai??
Kash: kia nikali??
Kasak: aj sey theek aik haftay baad ap iss gahr main ajayen gi!
Kash: matlab??
Veena: beta Saturday ko sangeet hai aur Sunday ko shadi!!
Sujal: kia?? itni jaldi...
Lalit: waisey to jaldi parri hui hai shaid i aur ab...
they all laugh
Veena: to Prerna...tayarian shuroo kar do...bhut jald tumhari beti ko apnay ghar ley ayen gay hum
Prerna smiels aur phir kharri hoti hai aur Kashish ko forehead per kiss karti hai
Prerna: meri achi...itni barri ho gayi aur mujhey pata hi nahi chala!! (tears in eyes)
Kash: mumma!!! (crying)
she hugs Prerna phir Sujal Kashis ashirwad letey hain sab ka...kashish is crying badly
Sujal: aunty (prerna)...yeh bhut burri baat hai...mushkilon sey main ney issey normal kia tha aur pa ney phir sey rulla dia!
Prerna: aunty nahi..ab mumma kaho! aur haan abhi issey jitna rona hai ro ley...kyunki main janti hoon keh shadi key baad tu issey ronnay ka mauqa nahi dye ga!!
Akshat: arey ab dulha dulhan ka moun to meetha karaiye!
Veena: haan haan...yeh meri beti key liye (kashish ke mou main mithayi) aur yeh terey lie! (in sujal's mouth)
tehn it proceeds on...hopr u liek it...PLZPLZPLZ give ur comments luv kiran!!

Lovely story Kiran!!! Keep up the good work!

farah kiran khushe amna all of u rock....wish v had creatives like u in balaji....who actually have sum creativity.........

hi! everyone

Sorry for not posting teh next part of the story. Will post teh next part by tmrw night. Sorry for the delay

Golu

hey kiran thanx 4 writin sooo suuuunnnn 😡 well now u av i must say itna wait karna ka phal bhi meetha hota hai 😊 i really enjoyed dis part it was very gd man.agli barrr plssss jaldi likhna.ill be waitin.

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RAAH – E – ISHQ…………………


Mumbai say seedhay flight laytay hai Jubbharti ko aur phir Wahan say Train ka Ek Lamba safar shuru hota hia……
Kashish train may window ki taraf baithi hai aur Jaise Jaise Khait aur scenaries dekhti hia…….Kuch Mahsoos karti hai……
Yes Yaar aur kya Sujal….
Woh sab Shimla Pahochtay hai.Wahan Nani nay already Car bhijwaayi hai inlogon kay liye.....
They reach Nani's House in few Minutes.....

Nani's Villa.....

Its Evening time.The Dark Mansion Lay in its Late 60's Look...It Looks So gloomy, It looks as if it has been ruled by the Ghosts, no lights, The white Painted walls has been shining as the moon light is falling on them........The Villa has been handed down to Kashish's Nanu from His ancestors and it had been Seen by every generation that It does not looses its charm.....Infront of the Main Black Gate its Inscripted

.........."Sehgal Villa"............

Kashish, Kanan and soniya reaches the Sehgal Villa..
They all go inside...Soniya is really scared as Kanan had told her some notorious stories of ghosts seen in Nani's House...They go to Nani's Room........
Nani is laying on her bed..........
They greet her.She sees them and Then she jumps on her Bed as though a New life is poured into her....
They Freshen up and Had Their Dinner...
Nani Makes them all feel at home......
Nani shows them their Rooms but as its new place for Soniya.....They decide to Share only a single room...
Soo Nani also sits with them in their room..
They all start talking.
Kashish is sitting beside Nani, Kanan and soniya is laying on the Bed.......
Nani : tum bachchay aagaye Meri to Jaan may Jaan aagayi..Warna soncha tha ki akeli hi marjaungi..
Kashish : Nani, ab hum sab yahin hai na phir aisay kyun kah rahi hai aap...
Soniya : Nani aap ko Dar nahi lagta akelay yahan rahnay....
Nani : oye Puttar, Is Khandar may ab tum sab hi ronak laogay.........
Nani : Kashish tujhe yaad nahi, Yeh Shimla Kaisa Tha….
Kanan : Kahan Nani Hum sab kitnay chotay thay jab shift kiya tha…
Kashish : Haan Nani Kuch dhundla sa Yaad hai...
Soniya : Naniji aap hi bata di jay na…….
Nani : Oye lardkiyon ab itni Zid Karti ho toh Suno….
Teray Nana Mujhe Jab Yahan Laykar aaye Thay..Toh Yeh Haveli chand si roshan Rahti thi...Ek Jannat tha Shimla…Har Taraf Baagh.Nehar….Kya Kya Bataun…
Nani tells about the Beauty of shimla and looks tired………
So Kashish takes Nani to her room, Nani sleeps..... ……..
Kashish comes Back to her room where She finds kanan, Soniya talking on Kashish's Cell With Sujal……
Kashish runs to Takes her cell, Par Kanan aur soniya Kashish kay cell kay saath khelna shuru kardaytay hai….Atlast Kashish takes her cell, goes and sits in the Big window and starts talking with sujal………
Kashish : Hello, sujal..
Sujal : Haan kashish kya hua, Zara soniya say baat karwa na.
Kashish : soniya say, Jab say kissay baat karray thay…..
Sujal : soniya say….Woh kitnay pyaar say baatay karrahi thi, tum toh har …….
Kashish : Pyaar say, Main kya lardti hun tum say…Ok,Tum soniya say baat karo main usko cell dayrahi hun….
Sujal : suno toh, Im sorry bas Mazaak karraha tha yaar tum bhi na, itni si baat ko……..
Kashish sujal is involved in talking…….
Kanan and soniya is making a hell.
Kanan Makes soniya see "The Village", Horror Movie…..They gets soo scared, Kashish is still Talking with sujal …..Kanan aahistay say Jaati hai aur Soniya Ka mu peechay say Band karti hai……….Soniya screams in terror but Kanan is Laughing...In sab jhagrdo may Kashish concentrate hi nahi karpaati hai, isliye woh sujal ko kahti hai ki woh dono kal baat karengay kyun ki abhi Soniya aur Kanan usko baat karnay nahi daygay……….
Kashish screams ……….
Kashish : Kanan, soniya Bassssssssss…….Stop it.kya laga rakha hai, Yaar do minute Baat bhi nahi karnay daytay tum log………
Kanan : sorry kashish, hum toh…….You know time pass karrahay thay..Tum toh masroof thi isliye ……
Soniya : kashish, come on cheer up…..waise Mil kab rahi ho……Bataya tum nay kay hum India aagaye hai…..
Kashish : Nahi abhi nahi, bataya…..I want to give him a surprise……Waise tum dono itna shor kisliye karrahay thay…….
Kanan : Miss soniya ko Darr lagraha tha, aur main usko samjharahi thi ki yahan par chotay motay bhoot hotay hai jo bas idhar udhar haseen lardkiyon ko dekh kar time pass kartay hai…..
Soniya : haan Kashish, Hum nani kay paas ja kar sojaatay hai…..
Kanan : Kashish abhi toh main nay usay woh waala kissa bhi nahi sunaya……
Kashish : Kaunsa ?
Kanan : wohi, Shimla Ek Eternal Love story.Kitna dard tha na us story main……
Soniya ; kashish, yeh kanan na mujhe ullu samajhti hai.Yeh stories mujhe nahi sunni, Boring yaar…….
Kashish : Par Soniya woh story sach hai…..Bahut bura hua tha undono kay saath…..
Kanan : Rahnay do kashish, yeh kya jaanay Sachcha Pyaar kisay kahtay hai…..
Soniya gets tempted……….
Soniya : aisi baat hai, Plzzzzz sunao na kya story hai…….
Kanan : oye story nahi hai, it's a true incident……
Soniya : achcha Baba, abhi sunao na…….
Kashish, kanan and soniya lays on the bed………Kashish starts narrating the story……..
Kashish : Baat undino ki hai jab Main Kanan aur archie bahut chotay say thay, Tab Ek din Shimla Daily main hum nay ek News Pardhi…….
Woh new Yeh thi……….

Flashback…….

Prem ek meritorious student tha Mumbai university ka, Woh Apni family kay saath Vacations spend karnay Shimla aaya tha………Yahan usnay Ek Lardki ko Dekha aur It was Love at first sight……..Dono ek doosray ko bahut pasand kartay thay…….Par Prem ko Uslardki kay baaray may kuch pata nahi tha… Par usnay us lardki ko dhoond liya aur ussay apni dil ki baat bhi kahdi……Par shayad unki kismet may Woh saath hi nahi tha……..Prem ko abhi Mumbai wapas jaana tha….Usnay Suman uski GF ko Kaha ki who log Shopping mall may milaygay aur phir kuch sonchaygay ki ghar waalon ko kaise bataye unkay affair kay baaray may…..Woh us mall may milay..saaara din saat bitaya aur Jab shaam hui tab……..
Soniya : Tab Kya..?
Kanan : Tab Woh apnay apnay ghar lot gaye……
Doosray Din…Prem nay suman ko phone kiya kay woh ja raha hai, aur aakhri baar Suman say milna chahta hai….suman daurti hui Station pahuchti hai….woh Road kay is paar thi aur Prem road kay us paar tha…Prem nay suman ko dekha aur jhat say apnay Bag say kuch nikala , shayad woh Suman ko kuch gift karna chahta tha….Par jaise hi prem road cross karraha tha Ek Lorry aati hai and Hits prem……Suman screams….Premmmmmm..
Suman Is shocked…she runs and takes his Face in her hands she is crying,….Calling for help…Prem ka Itna khoon bahraha tha……..Par is halat may bhi woh Suman kay baaray may sonch raha tha……..Prem gives the gift( A white Gown ) to Suman and makes her promise that after him she will not depart from this gift as this is his gift to her and will do what her parents will ask her to do……Suman agrees.Prem dies……
After 4 months…….
Suman's parents makes arrangements for her Marriage……..
Suman is upset as she cannot forget Prem….She sleeps thinking of Prem……While Suman is still asleep Prem comes in her dream…He says suman to throw the gift..and vanishes…..Suman awakes and sees the Gown she notices that it has Blood stains of Prem..She thinks that she will take this Gown with after she gets Married….So she sits to wash the stains….But the stains are not going……She washes the Gown for 3 continuous days then on fourth day……..while she was washing the Gown….Someone comes and touches her shoulder….Suman Darrjati hai aur palat kar Dekhti hai kay Ek Safaaid libaas may ek Budha aadmi jis ka mu poora jal chukka tha….Usay ghoor raha hai aur jab suman bhaagna chahti hai tab woh budha uski taraf haath bardhata hai aur Suman ko pakard layta hai aur kahta hai..
Soniya : Kanan…………..( Screams, )
Kanan : Aisay daagh ho waise daagh ho.Yaar surf excel hai na……….
Soniya : Kanan…..you stupid…………..Mujhe pagal banaya tum dono nay…………
Three of them fight……..
Kanan : Soniya mujhe toh pata bhi nahi tha kay yeh surf excel hota kya hai….Kashish nay hi bataya……..Hum toh tide use kartay hai…..Hahaha…
Chalo its sleeping time……….
Kashish : ok guys abhi bahut late hogaya hai….Good night……..
They all sleep …………..


Sorry guys.Itna pakaya………..

Rameena.............

great rameena as alwayz, 😉 waitng for the next part!!! 😛

farah

ok so guys, the story continues.........(do naam ek jaan)

Rishi: (gets a huge shock when he gets to know that kashish is going to become his bhabie) BHHHHHAAAABIIEE!!!
yeh....ms. Sinha!
veena: haan,likin yeh ms. Sinha kya laga rakha hai, iska naam kashish hai aur tum jald se jald bhabie kehne ki aadaat dalo!
rishi: magar....mom......yeh.......(he was all confued and kashish was very well understanding his confusion!)
sujal: kya huwa rishi! kal to bara khush ho raha tha apni bhabie se milne ke liye aur abhi.......
rishi: nahi big b, aisi baat nahi hai, magar mein inko pehle se jaanta hon isliye bus thoda sa.......
Sujal was smiling while looking at kashish!
veena: acha tum jante ho isse, lo yeh to aur bhi acha hai, waise tum dono kab mile??
rishi: mama, yeh mere college mein ek.....maamuuli si teacher hain.
sujal looked at rishi when he said mamuli! but before he could say anything veena interrupted
veena: RISHI! kashish is ghar ki hone wali bahu hai aur tumhari hone wali bhabie.......(in angry tone and then she turned towards kashish, jo sar jhukae khari thi)
veena: aur phir yeh to mere sujal ki pasand hai (kashish keh sar par haath phirte huwe)......humare liye yeh to anmol hai!
sujal: mama! (whispers to her) you're the best!
veena kisses sujal on his forehead!!! while rishi still stands there in confusion!!
kashish: um... sujal....mujhe ghar tak chor do ge....
sujal: haan....chalo....mama mein kashish ko.....
veena: jao, aur dehan se chalana. (as kashish comes towards veena to take her blessings veena says)
veena: agli baar jab is ghar mein aogi to is ghar ki bahu ban kar aogi! jeeti raho!
chetan to gives her ashirwaad! sujal leaves first and kashish walks behind him. Rishi was standing by the front door! while kashish walks past him they both give each other a not-so-friendly stare!

rishi is now in his room!
rishi: ....yeh kashish.........big b keh saath.......zaroor uski koi nayi chal hai mujhe neecha dekhane ki..........mujhe is bare mein sab kuch maloom karna hoga........kahin yeh kashish Big b ka faida to nahi utha rahi..................

guys abhi keh liye itna hi.......i hope zaida boring na raha ho, likin i'll write the next part soon! keep reading guys.......ho sakta hai kuch twists a hi jayein. lol

cheers.......farah