FF - DESTINY...? Adi/Metz Upd. Part 6 Pg7 - Page 4

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Posted: 17 years ago
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aww looks like mets is falling for our handsom stanger! hehe continue soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Robin_M

aww looks like mets is falling for our handsom stanger! hehe continue soon!

u bet she is!😛

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Posted: 17 years ago
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so sweet!mets havin feelin 4 jatin! 😳 😳 👏 do con asap! 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesum!!! 👏
mets falling for jatin 😳
hmm i wonder if he feels the same 😃
cnt wait
continue soon 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Lolz... I guess... you guyz will soon find out😛😉... next part cming in an hour or so 😃😛

Edited by jjknrokz - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#36
Mets has feeling for Jatin....how cute. Can't wait to read further!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 5

Hours, days, weeks and a month or two had passed since that stormy encounter that Metz and "Jatin" had shared. The time was very eventful in Metz's life. Now, Jatin was simply all that Metz could think about, day and night, in and out—just him. Tanu and Metz would often discuss him, whenever they met. He had become the daily spice of their lives. Metz would be eagerly fishing for topic to bring up Jatin and Tanu would gladly provide her with them thinking not knowing the truth.

"Jatin" had become an obsession for Metz. Moreover, the fact that he was always around her didn't help things a wee bit. No matter where she went, she would always find him around. In the morning when school started, on her way to her classes, lunch, after school and even in malls. By god Metz didn't know what to do. She honestly thought she would loose her wits if she ever came in a closer contact with him. He was slowly taking over her. It was true, but Metz wouldn't agree to that, no, not ever! Her ego was a big problem. She had told her friends she hated the word "love" or anything that had to with it. Every time, she and her friends had one of those little gatherings she would often be heard boasting around that she was never going to fall in love while her friends rattled on about their respective boyfriends. Her friends would always tell her that she would definitely fall in love. Tanu would always argue Metz, "Metz, pyaar par kisi ka bas nahin chatla," while Metz would retort back by saying, "She could control anything." Boy! She had it all wrong. She wouldn't admit that she liked him, not even if all hell broke loose.

--On to the school grounds--

The sun was shining bright at the peek hours of noon. It was unbearably hot, and yet Metz had forcefully dragged Tanu outside from the comfort of the air-conditioned building. She was only out there for a reason. What might be the reason you might ask? The answer was simple. Like everyday she was there to catch a glimpse of Jatin. That was the only comfort she had from all the turmoil that was going inside her mind. It was quite surprising how Tanu couldn't tell what was in Metz's heart, but then again she had always been quite low in the love section. It just wasn't in the list of one of her many expertise. Despite, this there was one thing that Tanu did notice, and it wasn't related to Metz, but Jatin. She had often seen that whenever he was around his gaze never left Metz. It didn't matter to him whether he was with someone or alone, or whether Metz was alone. He would gaze at her regardless. Tanu had often felt like telling this to Metz, but every time she tried something else came up.

Metz was edgily searching around for Jatin, but unfortunate for her he couldn't be seen around anywhere. Metz couldn't think of any other place where he would be at the moment. He was always here, in the school parking lot chatting around with his friends. She was sure of it!

Tanu: Metz, bahot garmi hai yaar! Chal na andar chal te hain.

Metz: No Tanu! You know I love the outdoors. When we came out, we came out for good and we are not going back in.

Tanu: Ok baba! Ab mera sar mat chaba jaana. Chal wahan us tree ke niche beth'te hain.

Metz: Ok Chal!

Metz and Tanu walked over to a shady tree and took their respective seats. Metz gave a long sigh and removed her cell phone from her handbang. She furiously punched some buttons and a song began to play, its melody ever so sweet. Metz closed her eyes aand tried to calm down.The song went something like this:

Akhinyon Ke Jharokon Se Meine DekhaJjo Saanwre

Tum Durr Nazar Aaye Badi Durr Nazar Aaye

Band Karke Jharokon Ko Zara Bethi Jo Sochne

Mann Mein Tum Hi Muskaye

Mann Mein Tum Hi Muskaye

Metz's curled lips turned into a sweet smile as Jatin's face wandered in front of her eyes. She slowly opened up her eyes and to her amazement found Jatin right in front of her eyes. The timing was just impeccable. There was a goofy smile on his face and he looked as cute as ever… Metz wished that this moment never ended…

--xxx--

Here ya guyz go. Another boring episode... and I'd like to let u guys know that this is going to go on for another couple of episode, before the story truely unfolds. Im so sorry about the short length of the parts was well, but i promise all will change soon😊. Do let me know, how are you finding it so far. I hope not TOO boring.

Regards,

RJ

Edited by jjknrokz - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#38
That was really good, twas not boring. Mets is obsessed!!! As is Adi! 😆
Keep it coming! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#39
Ur FF always reminds me of my school.... 😆 ...

tht wasnt boring...and the last part was too yummy... 😆 😳

cont.soon... 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: ~*~A~*~

Ur FF always reminds me of my school.... 😆 ...

tht wasnt boring...and the last part was too yummy... 😆 😳

cont.soon... 😳

lolzz u guyz are just too sweet😳 next part cming up soon.. the story if gonna fast forward real fastt and get to the real thing 😃

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