FF - DESTINY...? Adi/Metz Upd. Part 6 Pg7 - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 2

Metz and Tanu sighed as they waited in the long queue outside McDonalds. It seemed that the line would never end. Metz absolutely hated standing there, she hated the crowds, yet she was very patient. Both the facts were quite contradicting, but that's what made her different from the rest. Patience was her best quality. She would wait her all her lifetime for something (ahem someone *hint*hint*) if she had a reason to.

Tanu: Metz, yeh tumahara idea tha na "lets go out for lunch". Ab khade raho yahan ghanta line mein… {before Tanu could blabber more, Metz cut her off}

Metz: Shhhh! Tanu! Tu kabhi chup bhi karti hai ya nahi… zyada uchal matt araam se khadi reh… humari baari bhi aa jayegi… the line is almost done.

Metz had barely finished her sentence when she spotted a not so unknown figure. It was HIM again. It was Mr. Cool, wait Jatin, that's the name she and Tanu had agreed to. It was him alright but this time he wasn't alone. He had his arms around Samiara. Metz knew her well, back from middle school. She was one of those typical ***ts, dressed in a low cut halter and a micro-mini. "Uff", Metz let out a sigh as she averted her gaze, "The world is coming to an end."

Although she was fully turned around now, she couldn't resist but look back, this time not at her though but at him. Why couldn't she stop herself? It was all out of her understanding. It was weird attraction that pulled her gaze towards him every time he was around her. It wasn't the typical attraction that was at work here – you know the lust, love crush type. No-no it certainly wasn't. This was an attraction that no one had ever heard of before, a genre that didn't exist in the typical "Book of Types of Attraction". Metz just couldn't quite put her finger on.

---End of Part 2---

This is a short one guys, but I'll be posting another one later this evening with Adi's point of view😊. Lemme know if u are still interested 😊😳.

Regards

RJ

Edited by jjknrokz - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow awesum!!!!👏 👏
continue soon 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Plz continue! That was too short for my liking. 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: maplez13

Plz continue! That was too short for my liking. 😆

lolzz true.. a part comung up in a cpl of hrs... just gotta finish my hw first *sigh*🤔

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: luxs

Cooool! Do continue.

Im posting the next part now :)

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 3

"Good Morning Alexander High," a voice echoed through the speakers as Adi entered the school. "Be ready to cheer your football team members as they face K.C. High in a home game tomorrow night after school," the voice continued. "Sweet," Adi murmured, " we are going to kick some major butt today," he smiled to himself and made his way to his World Religion class. There were still 10 minutes to class, so he decided to stay in the hallway to chit-chat with his friends, who were gathered in a remote corner, near the school entrance.

Bharat: What's up man?

Adi: Nothin' just a lil excited about the game tonight. We are gonna get them back for good this time. We just can't let them go like that tonight, not after happened at the last game where they butchered us.

Bharat: That's the spirit man. They are in for some a** kicking.

Before Adi could reply Samiara joined in the conversation, giving a cheeky smile to Adi.

Sam: Hey Baby!

Adi sounding a little irritated: Uh.. hi samiara

Sam: Aaaddiii, you know it's SAM not Samiara

Adi: Samiara.. you should also know its "ADITYA" –"VIKRAM ADITYA MEHRA", not Adi.

Samiara: Oh ok alright. Call me whatever.

Adi had totally lost interest in the conversation. Why did this drama queen had to intefere in all of his personal matters, conversations? So what if they were dating, he would dump her sooner or later- everyone knew that and he was pretty sure she did too. After all Vikram Aditya Mehra always loved his freedom.

--Triiingggg--

The bell had rung and Adi hurriedly jogged towards his class. He didn't want to be late again. His teacher already had a grudge against him and he didn't want it to get any worst than it already was. In the middle of his way Adi had realized that his first period class was cancelled today due to a class trip and like always he had forgotten to bring in the signed permission form. This period was a freebie for him. He could go out for a stroll or a drive perhaps. The weather was neat outside, it was raining heavily. Of course that wouldn't be neat for anyone, but Adi loved the rain.

He smiled to himself as he glanced outside. It was just so beautiful. The rain falling, drop after drop, the leaves rattling as the wind swayed through them, the dark red sky, the sound of thunder and the bright light of lightening. He simply adored it, all of it. He pushed the door open and ran his finger through his hair. God! He loved the sensation of cool wind that had just brushed against his cheeks. Before he could move any further, he saw a figure approaching towards him. For a second there he couldn't make quite make out who it was as the rain was falling too swiftly, but as the figure came closer and closer, he could tell it was a girl. To his delight and surprise, it was the same girl from the hallway. He had come to acknowledge her as the hallway girl. He had felt that she had a knack of bumping into him time and again.. He didn't quite think that she was stalking him, like most girls do, but simply around coincidently. And these coincidences were occurring far too often. He couldn't help but stare at her. She was simple, much too simple yet stylish. He had never seen her with any make up or heavy jewellery. She had a spunky dressing style and had the most beautiful eyes in the world. He could tell because he had the chance of looking into them not once but twice. They were the soft colour of honey with a hint of green. He had never seen eyes like that before - ever. They were like a void, and he could imagine himself falling into their abyss and never coming out.

Before, Adi could ponder more on her eyes, she was standing right in front of him, mumbling something in gibberish. He snapped out of his thoughts and looked down at her. She was soaking wet and shivering, her cheeks were ruby red and so were her hands. "Probably because of the cold," he blurted out involuntarily."Shit! What the heck did he just blurt out," he cursed at himself. Before making any more stupid comments, for the first time he paid attention to what she was saying. "Excuse me, could you please move?," she requested in the sweetest voice he had ever heard. If words could kill, they would have to come out of her mouth. He was dead sure about that. Adi stood there for a while absorbing in the echo of her voice and noticing her bewildered expressions. He could sense her discomfort. "Oh! Sorry," he mumbled as he moved out of her way. She hurriedly thanked him and disappeared into the dark hallway...

There guys...a bigger part. I hope u enjoy it.

Coming up next: The football game and Metz finds out Adi's real name. If you have any suggestions please let me know. 😊

Regards,

RJ

Edited by jjknrokz - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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That was cute. Coincidental meetings are goooood. 😉
Continue soon. 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow great!!!! love all ur parts!!! do continue!!! 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏 👏 GR8 PART. DO CON ASAP!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: maplez13

That was cute. Coincidental meetings are goooood. 😉
Continue soon. 😃

lolz u bet they are... 😉

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