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Posted: 18 years ago
#21
i love both parts!! 👏 cant wait to read the 3rd one. plz cotinue soon 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great start hun! i read your other 2 ffs as well, so im glad to see you have another one! but seriously, how do you find the time to write 3 fanfics!!! well whatever your secret is, keep it up cuz you rock girly!
bharat, tannu, mallishka and praney 🤢 lol sorry to those who like them! but i really dont, so im going to imagine them being played by other ppl! lol
adi and mets 😳 😃 yaaaaayyyyy! cant wait to see their love develop!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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heyyy
this ff is luvvly
all abt frndshp n luv i guess!!!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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I just finished reading 2 chapters and must say beautiful story looking forward to the coming chapters 👏 👏 👏

Luv,

Shagun
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Posted: 18 years ago
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sorry for the massive delay...i just got the internet connection back ...yaya!!!!! after spending 10 mins on the phone talking to Virgin Media people...lol.anyway here is are two parts....

CHAPTER 3
Adi and Maithili are standing opposite eachother an dare staring at each other….music plays…hey hey!!…hey hey!!….heeeeeeeeey hey hey!!!
They get into their own cars and drive off.

Tannu gets on her cycle as she's not permitted to drive yet. She peddles off in full speed. She's wearing brown capris, white half-sleeve top and a brown tank-top over it.

As she enters the college, music starts playing….

Dha dhin dha, dha dha dhin dha, ta dha dha, dhin ta, dhin ta
Na na na na na na na na na na na na na

What' s up?

Tannu:
Chale jaise hawaayein, sanan sanan
Ude jaise parinde gagan gagan
Jaayein titliyaan jaise chaman chaman
Yunhi ghoomoon main bhi magan magan
Hey hey! Hey hey! Hey hey! wo…
Hey hey! Oho aaha…aa…
Main diwaani dil ki raani, kabse anjaani
Sab kehti hoon woh karti hoon, jo hai thhaani
Chale jaise hawaayein, sanan sanan
Ude jaise parinde gagan gagan

College students:
Dhum dhum dhum!
Aa chak dhum, dhum dhum dhum -3
Aa chak dhum dhum!

College Boys:
What' s up?
Say what?

Tannu is dancing around the college grounds

Tannu:
Koyi roke koyi aaye, jitna bhi mujhko samjhaaye
Main na sunoongi kabhi
Apni hi dhun mein rehti hoon
Main pagli hoon main ziddi hoon
Kehte hain ye toh sabhi
Koyi…nahin jaana, ke armaan kya hai mera
Chale jaise hawaayein, sanan sanan
Ude jaise parinde gagan gagan
Jaayein titliyaan jaise chaman chaman
Yunhi ghoomoon main bhi magan magan
Hey hey! Hey hey! Hey hey! wo…
Hey hey! Oho aaha…aa…
Main diwaani dil ki raani, kabse anjaani
Sab kehti hoon woh karti hoon, jo hai thhaani
Chale jaise hawaayein, sanan sanan
Ude jaise parinde gagan gagan


College Girls:
Aa…

Tannu:
Na na na na na na na na na na na na na na na na -2

She turns around and smiles…a man on the bike makes an entry….its Bharat

Bharat:
Aaye haseena ye toh aaye, mujhko dikhaane apni adaayein
Main bhi kuch kam nahin yeah!
Aankhon mein aankhein jo daaloon
Dil main chura loon, hosh chura loon
Koyi ho kitna haseen
Mera..ho gaya woh…jo ik baar mujhse mila
Chale jaise hawaayein, sanan sanan
Ude jaise parinde gagan gagan
Jaayein bhawrein jaise chaman chaman
Yunhi ghoomoon main bhi magan magan


Tannu joins him in his routine
Tannu:
Hey hey! Hey hey! Hey hey wo…
Hey hey! Oho aaha…aa…

Bharat:
Main diwaana main anjaana, kabse begaana
Hoon awaara lekin pyaara, sab ne maana
Chale jaise hawaayein, sanan sanan

Tannu:
Ude jaise parinde gagan gagan


Bharat:
Jaayein bhawrein jaise chaman chaman


Tannu:
Yunhi ghoomoon main bhi magan magan


Both:
Chale jaise hawaayein, sanan sanan
Ude jaise parinde gagan gagan

At the end of the dance Tannu and bharat give each other hi-fives. Bharat enters his homeroom which is the same as tannu's even though he is two years older than her. He bows to all the girls and gives them flying kisses.
Tannu whacks his hand and tells him off.
Bharat stands at the front of the class on the desk and speaks "girls!!!and boys…Bharat Mehra is here with you all this year!!!" a cheer runs round the class and tannu just rolls her eyes.
B: you all are very lucky I chose this homeroom to do my history and Science with.
Tannu mutters: ek to fail hogaya upper se koi sharm nahi…
Bharat jumps off the desk as the teacher comes in. Bharat sits next to tannu…
T: bharat!! you don't have any shame? Two time you've failed in Science and history, your not even in this year group and you were supposed to graduate two years ago and still you stand on top of tables boasting about how lucky people are to have you in this homeroom!!??
B: tannu…don't' worry this year I have a full proof plan to pass…I'll copy from you!!!
Tannu whacks him with her files and moves a little away from him

Maithili is sitting in class and is wearing a white and turquoise churidaar with turquoise bangles and silver paayal. She is sitting with her friends and opposite her adi's sitting with his friends. One of Adi's friends speaks "yaar maithili is so pretty na…even though she wears salwaars she is still a popular girl in college…"
Adi grunts "popular…my foot!! Its only because of mallishka that anybody notices her!!" his friend disagrees "yaar she won the college beauty pageant last year" Adi's friend continues to praise her and adi gets a little uncomfortable.
Meanwhile maithili's friends are praising adi… "Ohhh he looks so hot!!"
Maithili replies "are you out of your mind??? He looks like a cockroach!!!"
The girls round her laugh…. "maithili why do you and fight so much…why do you hate him?"
M: I don't know…its just natural hatred…he's so arrogant, he treats girls like puppets…the list goes on….
The bell rings and they settle down.


CHAPTER 4
Its break and pranay and mallishka come to the table first…they scowl at each other and turn their heads round…
Adi joins the table followed by maithili and they too don't talk to each other…Adi and mallishka strike up a conversation with each other…
M: so did you tell Arjun that I wasn't interested in him???
Adi laughed: yes…his face turned into the likes of a shrimp…he said he thought you liked him and hoped he could go on a date with you…
M: seriously!!! They guys in this college!! She exclaimed…I mean how could I be interested in that geek??
A: he said he saw a "future"
At this both Adi and mallishka burst out laughing…
Maithili scowled…mallishka di…I really don't think you should laugh like that…I mean he probably liked you and its fair enough if you don't like him but you shouldn't be jeering him!!
Adi laughed again
Mai: and this monkey shouldn't be encouraging you either!!!
At this adi turned sour…well miss waitress…why don't you stop advicing your sister and lead a life of your own? Oh! I forgot…you don't have a life of your own!!! You depend on your sister's popularity to make you noticeable!!!
Mai: shut-up adi!!! Ifit wasn't for Pranay your dad would have probably disowned you from the family…time and time again Pranay hides all your errors in hopes of you improving but really I can't see what he expects from a circus monkey like you!!!

Adi stood up and maithili stood up too…mallishka stood up and Pranay too…
Mall: maithili!
Pr: Adi!!!
Mall: mets don't speak to adi like that and Adi..you don't speak to maithili like that!
Pranay: who are you to tell my brother not to speak to maithili like that??!?! adi…don't speak to mets like that and mets you don't speak to adi like that
Mall: ah!!! Don't you dare tell my sister what to do and what not to!!!
All for stood there bickering while a little away from them tannu and bharat stood frowning…they could not conceal their laughter anymore and burst out laughing….
Bharat: tan…tannu he said between breaths…maithili di called adi a monkey…GO MAITHILI DI!!!
After they restrained from their outburst…bharat put his elbow on tannu's shoulder and leaned towards her…
B: you think they should fight more?? I mean I quite enjoy their fighting…
T: NO…no bharat my sisters did nothing wrong…
B: its not like that…
T: shut-up bharat…you just want to take revenge for what adi and pranay did to you by posting your report card to dad…you wan't revenge don't you???
Bharat frowned: how do you know me so well???
T: I just do…saying so she left. "oh by the way…you'll need a plan to embarrass your brothers in front of your father…so start thinking…you might find me useful…
Bharat smiled: I Love you tannu…he blew a flying kiss to her and she merely rolled her eyes and walked off

Bharat and tannu were sitting in Bharat's room after school…
T: so what have you planned?
B: I was relying on your help…
T: ha…I thought it would be too hard of a task for you to think…
B: tannu, your underestimating me…
T: and your taking me for granted.
B: oh..pls…
T: ok!!! She whispered in his ear her plan…bharat smirked
Tannu went to her house and into maithili's room
T: di..bharat wants to get back at adi…
Maithili smiled and let her in…
T: we want you to keep adi "occupied" for some time…I'll tell you the rest later…
Maithili agreed but, "tannu, is bharat just planning to get back at adi or pranay too?
T: no no…she lied…bharat just wants to teach adi a lesson…pranay is not even involved..
M :ok..
Tannu then went to mallishka…
T: mallishka di..bharat wants revenge on pranay…mallishka grinned…come in!!!
T: we want you to keep Pranay "occupied" for some time…I'll tell you the rest later…she replied the exact lines to mallishka as she did to maithili
T: and before you ask…adi's not involved at all..
Mallishka too agreed.

Maithili and mallishka came to Mehra house…
The sisters lied to each other and said they came to meet mayuri aunty and shikhar uncle…
Mallishka went up to Pranay who was in the corridor while Maithili went to Adi who was about to enter his room

What are the girl's plans? and will they succeed? How will the boys react?

stay tuned!!!!!!!!

Edited by tsamhita - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#26
hey tsamhita u started another fanfic. cooool.
cont plzzz its so cool.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#27
i love your fanfic!!! great job! 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#28
great part.... loved tanu and bharat scenes... please continue soon can't wait to see their plan 😊 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#29
Great job 👏 👏 I really this part, it was soo funny and really cutee 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#30
OMG, just a lovely chapter, loved reading it, cant wait for the next part, actually cud imgine AM parts they were so cool😳😳😳

continue soon, and for the beautiful chapters bravo👏

Luv,

Shagun

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