A/M FF: Hate2Love: Mods pls. close topic - Page 5

[LOL] im loving this! so sweet and fun! love the fighting and bickering! love will definately hit those boys! lol continue soon, you ff is great!

OMG OMG OMG lovely, Adi without realising actually described Methali, cant wait for the next part such an interesting ff do continue soon

AWSOME CHAPTER YET AGAIN 👏

Luv,

Shagun(JD)

wooh wooh
sooo adi likes maithili in red!!!!
maithili u better buy some red coloured dresses!!!!!
once again
tannu-bharat rockkkk

here's a long part coz i'm moving house and will be inactive for a few days...and thanks for all your comments!

CHAPTER 7
Tannu goes down to the basket ball court and speaks to the prefect who's nickname is pappu. He has glases and a big prefect badge
T: can I sign up
P: no..time is over
T: lekin at break I didn't have time…please….
P: no…
T: are you sure….
P: what?
T: no body ever says no to tannu…and if they do…they suffer the consequences!!!
P: I'm sure…NO means NO!!!

Next scene is shown where pappu is hanging ulta from a tree and bharat, Pranay and adi and standing in a triangle around him holding hocky sticks.
B: kya keh raha tha???
P; nobody says no to my sister!!!
A: and if they do…they pay the price…
Pappu: you can't scare me…I'll complain to the principal!!! She's not even your sister!!
Adi smiled, "she's as good as one!!" saying so he took off his jacket to reveal his perfectly toned muscles that the tank-top he was wearing did full justice to.
Pappu swallowed nervously as he saw adi's muscles…
"ooh's and aah's!" were heard from the girls circled around him
Pappu: no no no don't hit me…tannu you can sign in…just tell your brothers to stay away!!!
Tannu giggle and signed in. adi and pranay left and bharat remained…
Pappu: bharat..is tannu your girlfriend?
Bharat laughed…"tannu….and me…." He threatened to punch pappu and left.

Loads of mallishka's friends were gossiping about the Mehra brothers…the gang includes:
Mallihska, Maithili, Sonia, Neetu, Tannu, Sapna and Nissa
Neetu: did you see adi today..he looked sooo hot!!!
Sonia: especially when he took of his jacket…
Neetu: yaar pranay looked so cute na…the way he supported tannu…and he's hot too
Sonia: I mean in those bathroom photos…he was without a shirt…he has a six-pack!!!
All the girls giggled.
Mallishka: puh-lease!!! That toad-faced ape sucks!!!
S: mallishka don't you think you underestimate him?
M: huh??!?!no!!! he deserves the worst!!!
S: why do you hate him so much??
M: I don't know…I just do…

On the other hand Pranay chatted with his friends. The whole gang consisted of
Pranay, Adi, Bharat, Raj, Vikram, Mayank and Karan and tannu used to sometimes hang around with them.
P: you know she hugged me!!!
V: huh!! Never!!!
P: no she actually did!!!
B: whatever brotha!! She only did that so you'd be occupied and I could sneak into your room
P: If I were you right now…I'd shut-up!!! Because I still haven't forgiven you!!!
B: hey!!! Tannu was the master mind!!!
T: who said my name? Tannu ran to the table and sat down next to Pranay and adi
P: tannu could never have done this!!!
Bharat gaped and tannu innocently asked
"what have I done bhai???"
B: that's it…trust your laadli…don't trust you brother!!! Trust this girl!!!
A: bharat!!! You know what tannu means to us!!! She's the only safe girl in the bajaj family!!
P: her sister Mallishka has "problems!!"
A: huh!!! I'd think Maithili has some too!
Tannu smirked at bharat who looked like he was going to murder her…
Tannu slowly got up and whacked bharat on the head then went and hid behind adi
B: look!! You saw that!!!
A: so!!! You deserve that for what you did to my room!!!
B: I am gonna kill you!!!! TANNU!!!!
T: oh no!!
Tannu started running as fast as she could but bharat caught-up with her and grabbed her by the waist…he swung her round and both landed on the grass. Both stared into each others eyes…he looked at the pool of hazel eyes looking down upon him…his heart melted. He turned her over so he was on top and raised his eyebrow…
"you won't be doing anything like that again…I guess!
"I guess…NOT!!!"
"tannu you just wait…" he gripped her waist tighter pressing his weight on her..
"ow!!! Bharat you're pinching my stomach!!
"Bharat Mehra…stop!!!" a loud stern voice boomed over them…
tannu gulped…
bharat murmered "shit…"
he slowly turned round and saw what he feared to see… "maam..."

A towering figure stood behind…
Bharat got to his feet and smiled…tannu followed
"janki dadi!!!!!"
J: dadi ki bache!!!! She came foreward and pinched his ear…
J: what did you get in your report card??? 30% in history??!?!!!!
B: sory dadi ow…ouch! Sorry dadi…kaan toh chodiye!!!
J; you got such great marks in business studies….
B: dadi dadi dadi!!!! Please…dad's already given me a lecture!!!
J; what!!!!!janki held his ear again!
T: hit him dadi!!! Hit him!!!
J: tanu!!! Tum kkuch kam nahi ho!!!!
Both of you come…come home!!!

Janki takes tannu and bharat to bajaj mansion where shruti, prem, mayuri and shikhar are sitting…
Mayuri: aare!! Badimaa!!!!
Shruti: mamma…come come…
Bharat and tannu follow behind…
Prem laughs looking at their faces…
P: now what has my pari done??!!!
J: pari?!?!? Tannu toh shetaan hai!!!
Prem laughs…what has she don Bigmom???
J: tannu hung the class prefect upside down on a tree and threatened him if he didn't sigh her name for the basketball team-she would hit him with hockey sticks!!!
Prem laughed louder and tannu smirked…
P: way to go tannu!!! That's my girl!!! But as soon as prem saw shruti's and janki's disappointed faces he quickly stopped the laughter…tannu followed
J; and shikhar…your sons helped pari or should I say devil!!!
Shikhar smiled…so I guess they hung him upside down and did the threatened part of it…
Mayuri: while tannu stood "supervising"!!
Everyone laughed…
S: well my sons all love tannu and would do anything for her…
Tannu and bharat hi-fyed and tannu sat next to prem….
Coming down the stairs, maithili and Mallishka frowned…
Mai: see…this is what I mean by partiality!!!
Mal: just because she's the youngest!!!
Tannu: hey…maithili di! mom favours you because your most like her an ddad favours me because I'm most like him!!
P: well said pari…well said..
Mall: and who favours me??? No one!!!
Janki: I favour you beta!!! and both your parents!!!
P: you've got your mom's brains and beauty while you got my guts and cleverness!!!
Everybody laughed and sat down for dinner together.
Mai: ahem...mayuri mamma…where's ADI???
Mallishka frowned and kicked her foot from under the table…maithili winced…
Mall: why do you always try and get him into trouble??? She whispered
Shikahar: ye…maithili, where is adi??? Mallishka…where's Adi?
Mal: umm…i..he's …actually… he's
"here!" adi came running into the house…
A: dad I'm here…
S: and where were you all this time?
A; I was…um..at at
"he was at school…to pick me up because I was supposed to have basketball practice today…so he went to pick me up"
A: yes!!! I mean yes…I went to pick her up but she wasn't there so I waited then came back home….
S: ok..come sit for dinner….
Adi scowled at maithili and she stuck her tongue out at him. Prem laughed at that…
P: well shikhar…no matter how close friends we are…maithili and adi will always be enemies…Pranay and Mallishka will always be enemies and tannu and bharat will always be best friends!!!!
Mayuri and Shruti quietly muttered… "or not…"
Shruti looked at mayuri and had a twinkle in her eyes

Thanx for the nice part hun.

Awesome part hun 👏 👏 Have fun moving.. can't wait for the next part, seems like love is gonna happen 😛

thnx ur ff is sooo good cant wait til da next part

great part!!! especially prem's part.... do continue soon 😊

fantastic p art! 👏 👏 good luck moving! 😛

fantabuluous part!!!!!
tannu relationshp with the mehras is soo cute
adi n tannus chemistry as bro-sis rokk!!!!!
ahem ahem
so bit of romance in this part!!!!
y do shruti nd mayuri have twinkles in their eyes????
something fishy???