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Posted: 18 years ago
#31
lol wow this is great so far! cant wait for more, please continue soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thankyou so much for all your comments...here's the next part

CHAPTER 5
Pranay and Mallishka
Mallishka stood with her back to pranay pretending to sob. Pranay always had a soft spot for her even though he hated her…but he hated to see her cry…I hate to see anyone cry he tried to convince himself…
P: Mallishka….what happened?? You're crying…
M: its..its nothing…
P: tell me…what happened
Mallishka continues to sob… "you know there is a unit test tomorrow, I'm going to fail in that…because I don't have notes for it."
P: ask Adi…he'll have notes
M: adi…adi wont have notes because he bunked that lesson and he behaved rudely when I asked him for notes. Please Pranay help me…
P: um…ok I'll give you my notes…
He turned her round and wiped her tears… "don't cry…its ok.." Mallishka's heart drowned by the sympathy he showed her. Pranay gave her the notes and real tears came out of her eyes… she hugged him tightly…
Pranay was shocked. Mallishka released and wiped her tears….
M: I'm sorry…you'll find out…here are your notes…
She went away leaving Pranay completely stunned
Meanwhile bharat slowly crept into Pranay's room and started displacing all the neatly piled files and books…bharat threw the pillows around and messed the bed sheets…, he put honey on the sofa seats and scribbled on his notes

Maithili and Adi…
M: ahem…she cleared her throat
Adi looked up reluctantly…
A: what??
M: i...i need to talk to you
A: yea…he said sipping his bear casually
M: I…I want you to come to the garden…to talk privately...you need to help me!!!
Adi had an expression of shock on his face…
A: You!!! Need help!!! From me?!?!?!
M: yes..you see…maithili sat next to adi…I need to tell you my heart's feelings
Adi looked extremely freaked out…WHAT????
M: adi…she said edging closer to him…I…I
Before she could complete her sentence Adi interrupted: STOP!!! I don't want to hear the words!!!!
He got up. Maithili got up too
M: why adi...why??? mujhme kami kya hai??
Adi looked almost disgusted…I…I hate you!!!!
M: nafrat, pyaar mein badal gaya hai adi!!! I love you!!!
Adi now looked like he would puke….go away!!! Just go away!!!
Maithili pretended to cry and shed fake tears…she turned round and had her hand over her mouth trying the control her laughter…she had held back adi for a long time now and went away

While Maithili spoke to Adi, bharat had managed to go into his room and spray shaving foam under adi's sheets and pour honey on the bed. He replaced the shampoo and liquid soap with chocolate sauce and oil. Bharat also turned off the taps from the basement so no running water would come out.

Adi, still in wonder of what maithili had told him, went into his room and sat himself on the bed…he didn't notice anything wrong with it until he completely lay down on it and tucked himself under the sheets…
Thoughts of maithili shifted as he felt a sticky feeling under him…
A: aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh adi jumped up and rushed to the bathroom…he stripped off his shirt and jumped into the shower cursing under his breath "bharat you dog!!" he turned on the taps and water started trickling, he put shampoo and soap on his body ,he felt his hair sticky…the taps stopped… "BHARAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Adi got out of the shower and out into the coridoor where he met Pranay in the same state…both boys had whipped cream and shaving foam on their body and honey and oil on their face and hair.
They were joined by Shikhar, Mayuri, Prem and Shruti all laughing their heads off. Maithili, Tannu and Mallishka stepped in front with cameras to take photos….Bharat stood furthest away and smirked…
Adi and Pranay knew Bharat was involved In this somewhere…
Adi: BHARAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Pranay: YOU WAIT TILL WE'RE CLEAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Mayuri was laughing so much, "bh…bharat…turn on the taps…."
Bharat obeyed and the boys cleaned themselves

After dinner the boys went into their rooms, which were already cleaned by the maids. Both the houses are opposite each other so from adi's room you can see maithili's room
From Pranay's room you can see Mallishka's room
Form bharat's room you can see Tannu's room.
Adi went to his balcony and maithili went to her balcony…both the balcony's out stretched quite a bit so both of them could talk to each other as if they were having a conversation.
Maithili was still laughing… "you..you thought i..i'd love you…ha ha ha ha me…and love you!!! Ha ha ha"
Adi just got enraged and closed the curtains

Pranay looked out of his balcony…
P; Mallishka…is this why you cried and...and I fell for it…
M: pranay really…
P: I'll make it a point, never to trust you again you …you…
M: no Pranay, really I cried I just didn't know you'd be so nice..so i..i though of warning you
P: hell you did!!!! you stuck-up cow!!!
M: huh!!! How dare you!!!! You monkey…donkey…toad…pig!!! I really was being nice to you but now I say forget that I ever hugged you!! Because nothing like that will happen ever again!!!! GOODNIGHT!!!!!!!!!!
Saying so Mallishka closed her curtains.

Edited by tsamhita - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#33
heyy
this is soo interesting
vvv humorous
luvvv bharats revenge
n bharat tannu chemistry roxxx
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Posted: 18 years ago
#34
oohh i love the setting .....
😃
the opposite windows ....the bedrooms corridors ....

great style of writing and i can smell romance already.... 😃 😳 i am waiting for adi maithili romantic chapters.... 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: angel_tia

heyy
this is soo interesting
vvv humorous
luvvv bharats revenge
n bharat tannu chemistry roxxx

thankyou....i'll be postin gmany more fun parts soon....and Adi-maithili romance will rock!!! as well as Bharat-Tannu's

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Posted: 18 years ago
#36
OMG its awsome, loved it esp Adi-Mets part sigh i cud actually visulize the entire scene beautifull cant wait for the next part 😳

Luv,

Shagun [JD]
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Posted: 18 years ago
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loved the part!!! 👏 👏 love is brewing somewhere 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#38
CHAPTER 6
In the morning all six wake up. Mallishka opens the curtains and pranay opens the curtains too. Both look at each other and frown. Adi and Maithili look at each other and smile sarcastically. Tannu and bharat grin at each other and show thumbs-up.

In college everybody is gathered round the school notice board. Adi and Pranay enter the college, all the girls laugh as they walk past..
Girl 1: adi..you look so cute!!!
Girl 2: honey suits you sooo much!!!
Adi looks at them weirdly…he looks at pranay and both of them walk to the notice board…there on the notice board are all pictures of adi and Pranay only in jeans with honey and whipped cream on their face and bodies.
Guy: must have had a tough time cleaning yourself…
Adi and pranay took all the photos off and scurried away nervously.

They all met at break in the canteen where bharat stood on the tables and confessed that he took the photos. Once bharat got off the tables he started running for his life as his brothers were chasing him.
A: don't leave him bhai
P: oh I won't
A: I'll not allow him to enter the house tonight!
"I'll go to prem chachu's house!!" bharat screamed as he ran faster. He felt something grip his collar and drag him in…
B: aaaaaaa…
"Shut-up!!! Bandar kaheka!!" Bharat recognised that voice
B: phew!!! Thanks tannu…
T: ya ya …but you owe me one
B: anything jaan!!!
T: ab chalo!
Bharat and tannu crept out and into their class.
Teacher: all those who want to join basketball should have enlisted their names at break with the class prefect.
Tannu shot up her hand; sir.. I didn't have time can I do it now???
Teacher: only if the class prefect agrees…
The lesson continued.
Tannu texted bharat on his phone.
Bharat come wid me 2 bktbal court.
Y?
Cuz pappu won't allow me to enlist
Pappu?!?lol
Prafect!!! Come!!
Wid hocky bats???
No!! just come…
Kk
And look up u moron…proff meheta's suspicious
Bharat looked up and smiled at the staring teacher he looked back and pretended to take notes.
The lesson continued.

Adi and maithili's class:
Adi: ya babe…ok…he kisses her on her cheek and she goes
Adi's friends gather round him
Mayank: yaar how do you do it?? Aneesa is like the most popular girl in college and you got her just by smiling at her!?!?
Adi: that's the power I have over all the girls…I'm an expert at this!
Karan: dude…are you ever going to be serious in life with girls?
Adi: probably not!
Karan: oh you will…I'm just waiting for the day you'll fall in love
A: ha!! Love and me…don't go together mate!!
M: ok tell me...if you had to marry, what type of girl will you marry?
A: umm…someone who I can derive up an interest in…I mean I don't want a wife who gossips and talks about make-up and clothes all day!
M: hmm….so definitely not who you're currently dating.
A: of course not! Ok so she has to be really beautiful in whatever she wears…infact she has to make clothes and make-up look better because she puts them on, not they having an effect on her!
K: ok...continue
A: she has to be graceful at the same time childish…she had to love nature and love my family a lot…
K; in short…something only dreams can carve…right?!!?
Adi: exactly!! So you won't see me getting married any time soon!!!

Maithili comes into class with books in her hand…he hair loose, wearing a red churidar with white dupatta. The churidar had silver sequence spread across it and the white dupatta was plain. Maithili wore long silver earrings and light make-up on her face. Every boy in the classroom turned his heads apart from Adi.
Mayank: see, now that's beauty in true sense!
Ad: uggh!!! Maithili!!! Seriously…what happened to your taste???
K: your just used to her adi!!! I mean you see her day and night! You live opposite her…you take her for granted! I'd be the happiest person alive to live where you live…maithili and Mallishka…in front of me everyday…and night…
Mayank sniggered and Adi whacked karan on his head…
A: whatever! I mean Mallishka is OK but Maithili!!!!! uggh! Adi gets up and walks with his friends…he turns back to look at maithili
She does look beautiful...red is most definitely her colour!!----uggh!! I can't believe I thought that!!! uggh!!! Adi turned round again and walked away.
Edited by tsamhita - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#39
great part!!!! i think adi will start loving mathilli soon enough.. plz continue soon 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Great update hun 👏 👏 👏 It was Rawking 👏 👏 👏

Do post the next part as soon as u an 😃

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