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this is a new fanfic i'm starting and i hope you all like it...pls comment...this is the intro

Shikhar mehera - adi's dad

Strict but loving. Rich business man, loving husband and father, willing to do anything for both his sons, treats Prem's daughters like his own

Mayuri mehera:

adi's mother, loves the family a lot...cares for her sons a lot and loves them very much, is like a sister to Shruti and treats maithili and mallishka like her own daughters

Pranay – 23yrs

loves adi and Bharat...older brother, always saves adi from getting punishments..very protective but loving, adivises adi and bharat to not flirt and date so much

adi – 21yrs

brat, arrogant, misunderstood, massive flirt...best friends with mallishka.

Bharat 19yrs

The youngest son and is loved by all, follows the footsteps of Adi and is the most careless, is best friends with tannu

Prem Bajaj

Rich business man and MD of Bajaj industries, loves both his daughter's very much can do anything for both of them, treats Shikhar's sons like his own

Shruti Bajaj

Maithili's , Tannu's and Mallishka's mother...is like a sister to Mayuri loves her daughters very much and treats Adi, Bharat and Pranay like her own sons

Mallishka: 21yrs

Older sister of mets..best friends with adi, daring and modern, flirts with guys and is smart...tells everything in her heart to maithili and would do anything for her sisters' happiness.

Maithili: 20yrs

Kind, loving, down to earth, simple but argumentative...best friends with Pranay

Tannu – 17yrs

The youngest daughter, sweet and tomboyish, is like a sister to all but is best friends with Bharat. She's the trouble maker along with Bharat

Adi-Mets always argue with each other

Pranay-Mallishka also argue with each other

Bharat-Tannu are best friends

all six hang out together in college

but what the future holds for these six people is unknown

Both families are old friends and neighbours...their companies are merged and Prem and Shikhar plan to hand their business over to their six children:

Pranay, Mallishka, Tannu, Bharat, Adi and Maithili

CHAPTER 1
It was a warm morning, the sun rose to fill the two neighbouring mansions full of its radiance. Some appreciated it and frankly some didn't.
"Prem…uttho!!!"
"Mallishka!!!, Tannu!!!!"
shouts from the Bajaj mansion were heard, Shruti Bajaj's face is shown as she turns around. She frantically opens and closes drawers, and then looks up-she smiles…
S: good…you're here…now wake up the lazy bunch!!

The same wake-up call is heard only a few minutes later, yells were heard from the mansion neighbouring the Bajaj house…the Mehra house
"Adi….Bharat!!! get-up!!"
Mayuri Bajaj turns round and takes out prasaad from the pooja thaali and gives it to her husband Shikhar Mehra and son…
M: Pranay beta…prasaad khao aur apne bhai ko uthao!!

A girl dressed in white salwaar runs up the stairs and goes into a room. The room is covered in posters of rock bands. The walls white and red, the bed sheets red and the pillows white. Laying in the bed is a girl of 17, neatly on the chair beside the bed is a red guitar and on the table beside it is a stereo system. The girl in white turns the stereo system on and blasts the music.

"Aaaaaaahhhhhhh…Maithili di!!!!" the girl laying on the bed jolts up and her face is seen…she's Tannu…
The girl who woke her up turns round too, its Maithili.
Maithili giggles…you deserve that!! Now come to wake Mallishka!!"
Tannu smirks at this "chalo!!!"
Both the sisters enter a room covered in pink and red. A girl sleeps on the bed with a face pack on…maithili and tannu exchange grins and pour a jug of water on the sleeping figure…in an instant the house is filled with an ear crackling scream
The scream dies down as mallishka opens her eyes and stares at her sisters… "I'll not leave you!!!" she jumps off the bed and wipes her face with a towel and runs after her sisters…all three sisters end up in the master bedroom. They look at each other and smirk…they quietly walk over to the bed and attack the figure covered in bed sheets only to find that its not a person but a pile of pillows…they turn around to find their dad leaning against the wardrobe smiling…its Prem Bajaj…

P: girls!!! I'm your dad…you can't fool me!!!
"oh yeah!!!" says Mallishka, Maithili joins in and so does Tannu, all of them are standing in a line with their hands behind their backs smiling…Prem looks curious…
the girls step closer to their father and take out whistles and blow them loudly in his ear…."aaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh" they girls laugh and run leaving their father to recover from the shock of nearly becoming deaf.

Prem Bajaj slowly descends down the stairs and looks at all the girls in disappointment. He slowly comes and sits on the dining table and looks at mallishka who avoids his gaze, at maithili who quickly looks at the ground and at tannu who nervously smiles at him.

P: BASANTI!!!! Breakfast lao!!!!! Shruti rushes in and serves him his breakfast, but Shruti can't control her laughter and starts laughing at what happened, slowly mallishka, maithili and tannu start laughing and Prem just frowns..

P: I'll going mad in this house!! He does not look as angry anymore but still has a frown on his face. The three girls get up and hug their dad….
Mall: we love you dad!!!
Mai: very very sorry we did that
Tan: but we were tempted…and mom encouraged us
Shruti gave him a guilty look,
Prem laughs at his daughters and his wife but hugs them all… the girls walk back to their seats and continue their breakfast.

Promo: what happens in the Mehra mansion??