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Posted: 18 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: Alif52
excellent FF
keep it up n updaye as soon as possilbe :)

thanks...will update soon!😃

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Posted: 18 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: Robin_M
lol that was very funny! even the parents are conspiring! too good! i bet tannu and bharat will try to get them to fall in love, and maybe in the process fall in love too! oh i cant wait, sounds like its going to be fun!

😆😆😆lol...you didn't think i'd leave shruti and Prem to the sideline did ya!😉

Edited by tsamhita - 18 years ago

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Posted: 18 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: *Shifali*
U go girl! Loved it!
Will wait for next update and I will visit ur new FF too.

thankyou!!! and pls comment...chapter 2 is updated for Love's last...😳

i will update this ff in the evening!😳

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Posted: 18 years ago

#184

Chapter 19

Shruti and mayuri agree to give Adi and maithili 'time'. Shruti and mayuri immediately go to Bharat and tannu…
S: tannu beta…meri pyaari bacchi
Tannu laughs…: mamma…kya hai…??
Mayuri: bharat!! Mera laadla…tum dono ko humari madat karni chahiye!
B: kya!!! You want us to help YOU!!!
S: yes beta…we want adi and maithili to fall in..in LOVE
Bharat an dtannu burst out laughing…: this is impossible mamma…did you the the two in GOA…they were eating each other alive!
S: that's why we need your help…to create situations by which they fall in love!
T: oh!! I see!! So what do we get in return..??
S: sharm nahi aati!!! Mamma ko blackmail kar rahi hai!!
T: mamma!!! Its not called blackmail!! Its called a deal!!
Bharat smirked…: I like you're thinking tannu!!!
B: so mom! What will you give us??
Shruti and mayuri discussed it all and came back to bharat and tannu..
We'll raise you're allowance by thousand rupees each
Bharat beamed but tannu frowned… "thousand's not enough mamma!!"
"ok 2000!! But that's the limit!!"
Bharat ecstatically hugged tannu… "I love you!!"
Shruti and Mayuri stared at each other…then smiled slyly…
Tannu and bharat saw this.. "woah!! He just meant it in a friendly way..you know… 'friendly'
Shruti nodded… "sure we do…"

The next morning all the kids were having breakfast at the Bajaj mansion..
May: adi…maithili you two have to go to Panchmeshwar today to check out the cottage we are staying at…there's some problems with the hotel reservation…
A: ok…bharat! Start packing!
B: woah!! I'm not coming!
A: ok…pranay bhai..
P: nope! Not coming! I still have to take mallishka shopping and throw a bachelors party and what not!
A: so…so its just me and ..and this thing!!! Adi said pointing at maithili
Maithili frowned and stood up… "BHARAT AND TANNU!!! You are coming with us right now!!!!
T: di I would love to..but I have to break you're heart…me and bharat have an exam today…right bharat…
B: we do???
Tannu stamped bharat's foot..
B: ow!! Oh!! That exam!! He he..i ..i remember now!!

Adi and maithili started packing
A: I can't believe I have to put up with you for a whole day at Panchmeshwar!!!
M: I'm not to pleased about that either Aaadi!!
Mayuri: now now!! Its only a day, then bharat-tannu will come and the day after…the rest of us!
Adi and maithili rolled their eyes

I know exactly what you're planning mamma!!! But it won't work on me..on VIKRAM-ADITYA MEHRA!!

Oh mom!! I know all about you're schemes!! But it just won't work!

Adi sat in the jeep… "are you coming or what!!!" he yelled at maithili
Maithili dumped her bags in the seat next to adi's and sat in the back
A: I'm not you're driver!!!
M: hmm…strange! I thought you looked just like him!!
A: sit in the front!!
M ;no!!
A: NOW!!! Or else I'll drop you off half way!
Maithili frowned: you wouldn't!!
A: oh really!!!!
M: fine!!
Maithili sat in the seat next to adi and they drove off.

Adi turned on the radio and listened to some songs..
"who let the dogs out!! Who who who who!! Who let the dogs out!!
"ADI shut-up!!!" maithili roared over the music. He clearly wasn't listening so maithili turned off the radio..
"hey!! I was listening to that!!" Adi moaned.
M: that!! huh! Only dogs listen to that!
Maithili tuned the radio to another station.. "aah! this is what you call music!"
The song Jab koi baat bigad jaye was playing…
A: oh madam! We're not in the middle of a romantic dance for us to listen to this song!! We're on the highway! Maithili scowled as adi turned it back to who let the dogs out. Maithili turned it back ot her radio station…
A: you!! adi turned it back to his…
Both, one after the other pressed so many buttons that the player froze….
"look what you did!!" both yelled at each other
A: your fault!!
M: no yours!!
Both argued while Adi turned the corner and maithili fell on adi. Both stared into each other's eyes. Meanwhile, the player tuned itself onto another radio station…

Tum paas aaye, yun muskurai…
Tumne na jaane kya sapne dikhaye
Aab toh mera dil jaage na soota hai
Kya karu haaye Kuch Kuch hota hai

Both stopped arguing and listened to the song
A: n..nice song..
M: yeah..nice..
Both remained silent after what happened. How they felt. Maithili closed her eyes and fell asleep

Bharat and tannu paced round a room.
T; hmm…phase 1 completed…now start planning for phase 2…
B: hmm yes…what if we manage to scare maithili.
T: …what???
B: what if in the middle of the drive, some…gangsters attack the jeep and scare maithili…and you know adi!! Trying to be the hero!! Huh!! Who does he think he is..
Tannu whacked bharat on his shoulder…: don't talk about bhai like that!!
B: who's bhai is he anyway!!!
T: by the way…like you're idea…I just need to modify it!
B: how?? I mean how will thugs 'accidentally' reach adi and mets on the highway??
T: I have 'sources'…tannu mysteriously spoke
The thugs wil only threaten maithili di and adi will obviously protect her…
B:ok!! Time to put the plan into action!!!

Edited by tsamhita - 18 years ago