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Posted: 18 years ago

All the right ingredients, 👏👏

Cheers,

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Posted: 18 years ago
mindblowing part!!!!!!!! 👏 👏
continue soon 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
i just read ur whole ff and ILOVEIT!!!.. plz continue!
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Posted: 18 years ago
i'll continue 2morrow...and thanks for all the replies! keep commenting!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
Awsome!
AMtaboulous! AM, BT parts are just hilarious and also cute! Wish Ekta takes some ides from u!
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Posted: 18 years ago
heyyy
that was awsumm
luvvd it..........
twas gr8
spclly the A-M parts
last scene was cute toooo
bharat tannu rockd as usual...
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Posted: 18 years ago
well here's the next part

Chapter 14

There had to be three people in one room so Adi, Pranay and Bharat were in one room, while right above them were Maithili, Mallishka and Tannu. Everybody went to sleep. Thunder struck and the rainfall cascaded to the ground, it awoke the three girls who looked at each other and grinned. They jumped out of bed and ran outside causing much noise. The boys below, a.k.a Adi, Pranay and Bharat could hear exactly what was going on upstairs and knew what would happen next
"oh no…"

The boys rushed outside only to find the girls completely drenched and dancing in the rain.
"they do this every time!!!" moaned Pranay
"I mean do they think they're film actresses???" Adi groaned
"i think tannu looks hot when she's wet…" bharat blurted out his thoughts, he immediately covered his mouth… "I didn't say that…"
Adi and Pranay looked at Bharat with shock… "no...you didn't…I'll choose to ignore to ignore that!" adi said after recovering from what Bharat said

Adi heard a serene voice, he turned to look..it was maithili singing

Saawan mein moorni banke main to cham cham naachu
Saawan mein moorni banke main to cham cham naachu
Saawariyan teri yaad mein teri chittiyaan baatu


Mallishka
Saawan mein moorni banke main to cham cham naachu
Saawan mein moorni banke main to cham cham naachu
Saawariyan teri yaad mein
Saawariyan teri yaad mein
teri chittiyaan baatu


Tannu
Saawan mein moorni banke main to cham cham naachu
Saawan mein moorni banke main to cham cham naachu


The girls dance around and swing on the swings

Maithili
Teeron se chubtee hai, saawan ke sab ye boonde
Chitti ka har akshaar meri udata hain needen


Mallishka
Ek to yeh tanhayi ghayal hai sitam
Usspey yun saawan mein jalte hain hum


Tannu
Saawan mein moorni banke main to cham cham naachu
Saawan mein moorni banke main to cham cham naachu
Saawariyan teri yaad mein
Saawariyan teri yaad mein
teri chittiyaan baatu


Maithili
Saawan mein moorni banke main to cham cham naachu
Saawan mein moorni banke main to cham cham naachu


Mallishka drags Pranay into the garden
Haa jaanam
pyaar ka hai yeh mausaam
Mitwa hai bearish ke, aao zara bheege hum


Tannu dances round bharat
Ek sapna lagta hain aana tera
Aaoge kehta hai yeh dil mera


Maithili dances round adi
Saawan mein moorni banke main to cham cham naachu
Saawan mein moorni banke main to cham cham naachu
Saawariyan teri yaad mein
Saawariyan teri yaad mein teri chittiyaan baatu


Mallishka
Saawan mein moorni banke main to cham cham naachu
Saawan mein moorni banke main to cham cham naachu
Saawariyan teri yaad mein teri chittiyaan baatu


Tannu
Saawan mein moorni banke main to cham cham naachu
Saawan mein moorni banke main to cham cham naachu

They stop singing but are still jumping up and down… Bharat come closer to tannu and she stops moving about…
T: kya hua bharat?
Bharat doesn't say anything and moves closer to her. She questions him with her glance. He still does not respond, instead he grabs her waist and pulls her into a very passionate kiss. Tannu is paralysed by his actions and can't respond to his kiss. When Bharat does not get any response, it dawns upon him of what he had just done…and is doing. He suddenly stops, just as tannu wanted to respond to his kiss. He stared at Tannu and she stared back.
He was afraid to speak…

She felt too akward to speak…

What had he done?

Why did she not respond?

He really wanted to do that…

She wanted it too…

Why did I have to be sooo stupid!!!

Stupid!! Idiot!! Why didn't I respond???

Edited by tsamhita - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
awww poor bharat! i bet they will be the first couple to fall in love. looking forward to more adi-mets scenes! continue soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey thts not fair tht was such a short update if u exclude the song part 😆 .....gr8 work, do continue soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
nice part hun...awwww i feel so sorri 4 bharat cntinu sn

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