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Posted: 18 years ago
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absolutely amazing...!!

the fight iss sooo not over!!


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Posted: 18 years ago
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rocking part!! the fight is really cute.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg that was awsome!!!!!! i was grining the whole time! these 2 are so immature! but its great! continue sooooon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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amazing!!!!
their fight was soo good
mets adi hug was juss so cute
specially adi being shirtless!!!!!!!
man this was juss soo gr8
but i want some progress in the pranay mallishka and tannu bharat story too
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Posted: 18 years ago
#95

Chapter 13

The next day the coach arrived in front of the Bajaj and Mehra mansion. Adi went on first…he was disappointed to see that every hot girl already had a boy or another girl sitting next to her…he frowned and sat in an empty seat. Pranay and mallishka sat with their friends…Maithili got on the coach and sat on another empty seat.
Tannu and bharat got on but there were only two spaces left and they were...one next to adi and one next to maithili.. Bharat frowned.. he wanted to sit next to tannu and it wasn't because Ronit would sit next to her if he didn't. He went up to adi and sat next to him…tannu sat next to maithili…
B: adi… I want to sit next to tannu!!!
A: so!!! I'd prefer sitting next to her right now…so don't disturb!!
B: what are you doing?
A: can you see earplugs in my ear? Can you see me with an ipod?!?!? Guess what!!! I'm listening to music!!!!!!
B: OK OK I get it!!! You know sometimes your sarcasm really hurts…
But wouldn't you much rather sit next to a hot girl rather that me?
A: you wish!!!
B: well then why delay?!?!? Tannu's sitting next to a hot girl and I'm sure she'd be willing to swap!

Maithili had her face turned the other way and Adi couldn't see who she was. Maithili wore a tight army tank top and well fitted jeans. Adi smirked at her.
Bharat smiled at tannu and winked at her...Tannu got up and exchanged seats with Adi…only when Adi sat next to her…to his shock and horror he realized it was maithili
She turned round…
Both: TUM?!?!?!?
A: you're not hot!!!
Maithili was taken aback…: shut-up kutta!!!(dog)
A: huh!!!---You didn't!!!!!
M: I did!!!!
Adi turned round and hissed: Bharat!!! She's not hot!!! I want my old seat back!!! Move your but!!!!!!!!
B: sorry brotha…bharat said resting his arms behind his head…no exchanges done!!!
Adi fumed with anger…you just wait till we get there!!! I'll kill you!!!!


Adi continued listening to his ipod when he felt a weight on his shoulder. Maithili's head rested on his and he saw she was fast asleep. He unknowingly smiled. She looked like an angel in her sleep…He rested his head on hers and fell asleep.

On the other hand Bharat kept annoying Tannu with weird questions…
B: so Ronit is not your boy-friend..??
T: for the hundredth time…NO!!!!
B: so he's just a friend??
T: ye Bharat!!! Well done!!! she sighed
B: but…
T: no bharat!!!! No more questions!!!! Just…just get back to your old habits!!
B: what old habits?
T: you know!! Flirting with girls and bla bla bla…
B: but you always used to discourage me from such things!
T: yes, but I didn't know it would be troubling for me!!!


The coach stopped with a jerk, it woke up both of them suddenly. Maithili grabbed onto adi's shirt and he automatically placed his arms round her protectively. Both looked into each others eyes until they were blinded by flashes…
A: ow!!! Adi turned to see bharat taking pictures of him and maithili
B; wow! What a pose! Dad will fix your engagement with maithili if he sees these snaps!
Adi immediately took his hands away from maithili and tried to choke bharat…


A teacher on the coach spoke..
"students we have come to a sudden halt and the bus will need fixing, we might have to wait 10 minutes before starting again!"
Adi and maithili looked away from each other…they didn't know what to say or what to do. Everything seemed so weird. Maithili felt so safe in his arms and so warm in his grasp while sleeping. She didn't understand why she was feeling anything but hatred for Adi. Adi didn't understand either…all he could do was try and avoid her and try not to think of her.
I have to be mean to her! That's it!!! I have to be Vikram-Aditya Mehra!!

I have to be mean to him!! Maihtili Bajaj hates Vikram-Aditya Mehra!!!


A fruit seller came onto the coach.
"pears lelo pears!!" (pears for sale-pears) there were only 2 in the fruit sellers hands.
A: I'll have the two…here adi handed him a 5 rupee note.
M: no! I'll pay 7 rupees you give both of them to me!

Oh so that's what she's playing at!

A: 10 rupees..give them to me!
M: 15 rupees…me!
The fruit seller was loving this argument...he got a lot of profit
A: 20 rupees!
M: 30 rupees!!!, saying so she grabbed the fruits from his hand and gave him the note


The bus was moving now. She tossed them up in the air and licked her lips… "juicy pears…yum!!!!" Adi laughed and took out four pears and tossed them up in the air..
A: maithili…I bought all four for 20 rupees!! Oh did i not mention he came on the coach when you turned the other way!?!?


Maithili fumed with anger and threw the pear at adi. He laughed seeing her angry…gussa was definitely good for her…she looked so cute the way her nose shrivelled and her eyes narrowed…
NO NO NO! adi man…stop thinking of her!!...She's getting to me!!

*sigh*

I have to do something…I cant just let him win!!

She looked at Adi, he was asleep…she smirked and took out her water bottle and poured water on his lap. She got up immediately..
"chi chi chi…teacher!! I can't sit here anymore! Vikram-Aditya Mehra just wet his pants!!!"
Adi looked at his pants with shock…did i…??? NO…I couldn't have!

All the girls laughed at him.
Maithili sat back down… "adi…are you still wondering about what just happened? I'll tell you...I 'accidentaly' spilt water on you!!" she laughed and Adi gaped at her.

The coach finally stopped at the hotel in Goa at night. Adi shifted maithili's shoulder… "look…" he pointed at tannu and bharat who were cuddled together sleeping. Tannu had her head on his shoulder and her arms wrapped round him while bharat had his head on hers and arms wrapped round her. Adi and maithili smiled looking at this and Adi clicked a photo on his phone
M: you're not going to show that to anyone …are you?
A: not if he deletes ours!

Well here was the next chapter...thanks for all your comments and there will be more Pranay-Mallishka scenes and Bharat-tannu scenes in the next part!

Edited by tsamhita - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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OMG, that was fantablous šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘ loved it, do continue šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘
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Posted: 18 years ago
#97
cute part.... plz continue soon 😊 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#98
brilliant... simply superb!!

please do continue soon!!


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Posted: 18 years ago
#99
After reading all the chapters I have to say they are mind-blowing and please do continue soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
šŸ˜† adi and mets are tooo funny! so petty lol the way they try to bring each other down is great! just so they can keep their feelings at bay, awsome! adi wetting his pants was the funniest! cant wait for more cute madi fights!

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