DARD ~ AN ANUGUN OS - (UPDATED ON PAGE~2)

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Just an idea about Gungun's pain in my mind .and I thought I should write.



But but but I'll update this story in a day or two..........

most probably tomorrow or latest the day after it......



I'm writing but need your suggestions too to add up some masala........you know!!!


Be ready guuuyyss and please give your ideas as well!!

Its only because of you that a horrible writer like me is confidently telling everyone to wait for the story update🤣






~SAM❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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So excited to read this one. Update soon

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I am eagerly waiting n kahin pe speed breaker aa jaye toh PM kar dena will be happy to help 👍🏼🤗

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Waiting for this ! PM me if you want to ask something 🌼

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Originally posted by: dusk2dawn

I am eagerly waiting n kahin pe speed breaker aa jaye toh PM kar dena will be happy to help 👍🏼🤗


Means a lot thanks....I'll update soonest now....I've applied for leave to complete these things you

know🤣

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Im Waiting GIFs | Tenor

Thank you for the tag😳

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So here is the update....

I know I'm a bit late but helplessness you see....

Its not proofread so ignore the mistakes!!!

Enjoy!!!

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DARD





It is 2 months after their marriage.


Anubhav and Gungun fought like wild animals but somewhere within they had started to like each others' company. They started to understand each other.



Anubhav had understood that maybe Ms. Gomti Nagar was very rowdy and rude...but she was a very pure soul by heart who just needs love.

Gungun had understood that maybe that Chant Chashmish was impolite ,boring and fighter cock......but he is very loving and caring towards his family and sometimes also her.



One fine evening , Anubhav returned from his institute .

"Ab tak to Ms. Gomti Nagar ne pura ghar sar par utha ke rakha hoga jaise har shaam rakhti hai........mere shant ghar ko chidiyaghar bana diya hai is ladki ne", thought Anubhav while entering the house.


But to his surprise, there was pin drop silence . This is something new.

He saw Bade papa was sipping his tea along with badi maa , papa and maa.
Goli bua was sitting with chachi and chatting .
The Golu gang i.e. Golu chachu, Neeti bhabhi and Yug bhaiya were sitting with stoic faces and Chhavi was in her room.



His eyes were searching for her which was noticed by our very own Golu chachu. He smiled a bit.



"Aaj Gungun bimaar hai to ghar kitna khamosh aur gambhir lag raha hai na", said Golu chachu to the family. Anubhav frowned hearing this .


"Haan Golu baat to tune thik kahi....wo bacchi jab hasti hai to uski goonj se ghar chehek uthta hai" , said bade papa smiling brightly . Anubhav too smiled agreeing to the fact but hid the smile as dare he admit it that he liked Gungun's smile.


"Par ka kar sakte hain hamaar bas me kachhu naahi hai na...hamaar pyaari gudiya bimaar hai na ........ab to ohki hasi sunne ke liye thik hone ka intezaar karna parega na hame" , said badi maa dejected with the fact that her dear Gungun is not well. She loves her company and also learn latest technological things from her and then flaunt in front of Bade papa.



Till now no one has noticed Anubhav except Golu chachu.



"Pichle mahine bhi bimaar thi Gungun ....hame ek baar doctor ko dikha lena chahiye", said papa worried about Gungun. Now Anubhav was getting restless...she was ill and not only now she was ill last month also and he doesn't even know.How can they hide it from him??She is his wife damn it!!
Wait what??Did he just refer her as his wife??He was shocked by his own thoughts.




"Nahi nahi uski zarurat nahi hai....hamne ghar ki dawai de di thik ho jayegi wo ", hurriedly said Sargam maa who knew what has happened to Gungun. Goli bua also nodded agreeing to her understanding what has happened.

Anubhav was confused that why his mother ,who loved Gungun so much was not agreeing for her check-up .


He thought to check on Gungun himself to ensure that she is fine...he didn't know why he felt like that but he was more worried for her to think about these thoughts.


He was sneaking towards his room which was spotted by Golu but he thought to let go the teasing for sometime. Gungun might feel better with Anubhav by her side and maybe they both bond over the situation.He prayed for the couple and got busy with his gang now to narrate Golu ki manohar kahaniya relieved by the fact that now Annu is there to take care of Gungun.


Anubhav reached his room to find that the door was not locked. He shook his head at her carelessness.Not that anyone would do something in this house but atleast she could be careful....it could have been anyone instead of him and he felt possessive.


He shook his head vigorously to clear his head and entered the room to find her coiled on the bed in a weird position. He was worried now as he could hear her groaning in her sleep as of she's in pain.


He rushed to her and shook her a bit after calling out her name.


She slowly opened her eyes and smiled a bit seeing him. He too returned a small smile happy to see her smile at his sight.


Then realization dawned her and her smile vanished and now she was angry. He was amused to see such a quick change of expressions.



"Tumhari himmat kaise hui mujhe jagane ki haan???Dikh ni raha ki main so rahi thi???Kitni mushkil se neend lagi thi aur tumne kharab kar di.....kyu jagaya bologe???"She bombarded him with questions and he was dumbfounded. He didn't know what to say. He can't admit that he was worried and when he saw her groaning in sleep , he decided to ask her what happened so that he could help her.


"Ab bologe bhi??", she shouted breaking his trance but suddenly there was a sharp pain in her stomach. She held her stomach in due to the immense pain and hissed.


"Kya hua Gungun???....tum thik to ho????", he asked concerned for her. She looked into his eyes only to see pure concern for her. She was pleasantly surprised.


"Kkk-u-ch n-nahi main thik hu", she said fumbling a bit hesitant to tell him .

Maybe he sensed her hesitance so decided to let go but soon she again whimpered due to pain .


Now he had to know .


He strictly said," Batao Gungun kya hua??Mujhe pata ni hoga to main help kaise karunga??Mujhe pata chala tum pichle mahine bhi bimaar thi....kya hua hai bolo".


She glanced at him and his expression demanded answer. She knew now she had to give in.


She sighed still hesitant but nevertheless said looking anywhere but him,"Ww-w-o mujhe periods hue hai....aaj 1st day hai isliye bahut zada DARD hai but it'll be fine in a day or two...tumhe tension lene ki zarurat nahi hai".She didn't want him to get worried unnecessarily when it was a monthly normal to her.


He now understood why she was a bit hesitant and his mother was apprehensive for doctor's check-up. Maa knew its normal.


He sighed a bit easing his worry and went out of the room.


Gungun was a very slight disappointed...she didn't know why but she felt he won't go.


She shook her head and was going to lie down again when Anubhav entered the room with hot water bag. She looked at him surprised.



"Aise kya dekh rahi ho??Itni si baat batane me hesitate kar rahi thi....I know its painful but its also normal aur yahan main kitna dar gaya tha ki pata nhi kya.......", he stopped realising what he was going to say and looked at her only to find her looking at him with wide eyes .Her eyes are beautiful....what was he even thinking today??This is so not him...but his trance broke when Gungun groaned with pain again.


"Pehle to tumhe aise ni dekha ....is baar itna DARD kyu??", he asked concerned simultaneously adjusting the pillows for her comfort and she was gazing at him with unknown emotion seeing his care.


Seeing her lost...he snapped his fingers and asked her to answer.


She composed herself and said,"Do hi to mahine hue hai hamari shaadi ko.....pichle mahine is time tum seminar k liye Delhi gaye the aur is mahine yahan ho to ......."she didn't complete the sentence.


He comfortably made her sit with the support of pillows and handed her the hot water bag not sure whether she would be comfortable with him doing her hot compression.She was overwhelmed because of hormones and his care.



Suddenly her phone rang. It was an unknown number.


Her hands were busy so she asked him to answer the phone,put it on speaker and stand there holding it. He shook his head at her tantrum throwing and bossy nature but did what she said.


"Hello....who's this??", Gungun asked .


"Gungun....", the caller said and Gungun immediately recognized her.


"Dr. Maya...", She said and Anubhav looked at her shocked.Last time she was very disturbed when her mother called..today she was already moody due to her condition and now this.


"Chalo atleast bhuli to nahi ho meri awaaz nahi to mujhe laga har cheez ki tarah ye bhi bhul jaogi..", Maya said taunting. Anubhav frowned looking at her and the phone.


"Kya matlab hai aapka?.....aapki birthday party me koi hai nahi kya jo aap mujhe call kar rhi hai??", Gungun said knowing its her birthday .Anubhav now understood the taunt and was a bit angry on Maya now.


"Kaisi beti ho tum???janti ho maa ka birthday hai par fir v itna ghamand ki ek phone bhi na karo.....", Maya said. Anubhav looked at the phone frustrated. Gungun was a bit hurt.


"Main waisi hi beti hu jaisi aap maa hai......main apne life me aapko nahi chahti to please mujhe baar baar pareshan karna band kariye......", Gungun said almost in a pleading tone now....she was fed up of the pain her mother gives her. Anubhav felt his whole world was upset looking at her face now.


"Ab tumhari shaadi hogyi hai Gungun...apna attitude sudhar lo warna tumhara pati bhi kahin tumhe chor na de.....", Maya spat and cut the call. There was silence for a minute. Gungun was shocked ,hurt ,dejected ,angry and what not. Anubhav felt he could kill this lady with his bare hands for hurting Gungun. He looked at her with a lot of concern to find her sobbing a bit.



He kept his hand on her shoulder to console her but she shoved his hand away vigorously.



He got a bit unbalanced by the sudden force but handled himself and looked at her shocked when she shouted,"Koi zarurat nahi hai mujhe tumhare sahare ki ya tumhare daya ki.....I don't need anyone...DARD hota h kisi ki aankhon me apne liye daya dekh ke ......." she threw the hot water bag and he was dumbfounded at her vigorous outburst. But he understood that she is already very moody due to her hormones .



"JUST LEAVE I SAID ....JUST LEAVE........", she shouted again at him and he went out of the room.



Gungun sat there alone and disheartened. Somewhere deep within she wished him to cajole her ........but he went away....but soon she saw him entering in the room with a smile.



She looked at him confused....didn't she shout on him now??and he is smiling....what is wrong with him??


He forwarded her the chocolate he brought for her and she looked at him with tear stricken face.


He wiped her tears and said,"Maine padha hai periods me chocolates khane ka man karta hai....also jo us lady ne tumhara man kadwa kar diya tha socha use meethe se meetha kiya jaye.....". He fed her the chocolate and she ate it still looking at him amazed by his actions and also happy for his support. He picked up the water bag and started compressing her stomach while she was still staring him.


"Kya hua aise kya dekh rahi ho??? kya laga tumhe ???chilla ke jane bol dogi to chala jaunga???Tumhara emotional aur physical DARD baant to nahi sakta ....par usse samajh ke kam karne ki koshish to kar hi sakta hoon na?........", he asked her very softly. That was it for Gungun. She jumped into his arms ....hugged him as her life was dependent on the hug and started sobbing.



Anubhav was shocked by the sudden action ...but then reciprocated the hug when he felt her sobbing and caressed her hair to calm her down.



After a good number of minutes....he found no movement and looked at her to see her snoring away in his arms. He smiled seeing her and felt he has everything now.



He positioned himself sitting on the bed along with her in his arms so that her sleep doesn't get disturbed. He kept caressing her hair.



Something has changed today and dare he say he wasn't happy with the change.

He promised himself to protect her from the world.



He will never let her be in DARD alone.
























~SAM❤️❤️

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FINALLY FINISHED THIS😇😌

HAPPY READING😍🤩

Edited by chulbul2111 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Aww this is lovely..❤️

You made my evening n bhagaao my DARD by writing this beautifully 😍😍

While reading this I was like this 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Love this piece ❤️. I want this scene too!!🙊 The way he takes care, Aww!! The last part where he takes her in his arms, them cuddling is gonna be cute!!🥺 Please write more, more and more!!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This is so good

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