KaYu SS- Sanam Re (Part 6-Page 7) Complete - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
n the part was super dooper sweet...n ofcourse self sufficient...reading kayu together n imagining them gives everything to the story
i luved it
Edited by kashika_29 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
Kayu moment was just awesome
Waiting to read more
Why does dadi have to be so rude doesn't she sees that kali is pure and beautiful soul
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: kashika_29

❤️ a chotu dil for u for ur kaayu treat...

now tell me have u watched today's epi? m getting crazy nor my net neither my tv seems to wrk properly



Originally posted by: kashika_29

n the part was super dooper sweet...n ofcourse self sufficient...reading kayu together n imagining them gives everything to the story

i luved it


@bold, Thanks kash
@red, naa yaar...net slow and Papa was watching a match at 7😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: sweetcherry95

Kayu moment was just awesome

Waiting to read more
Why does dadi have to be so rude doesn't she sees that kali is pure and beautiful soul


@bold,Thanks dear😳
@red, will update ASAP😉
@blue, bad habits die hard😕...didn't want to spoil Daadi's character and turn it into super sweet all of a sudden😆...I love the rude Daadi (note the sarcasm😉)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
its sooo good
love it
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: BubliBag

its sooo good

love it
update soon


Thanks😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: Supheeaala

thank you ji very much


wrong thread buddy😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48


Yug was looking at Kali's pictures on his mobile, with a smile on his face. He was missing her like hell, but knew that she wouldn't like it if he had called her, between office.

Raghu entered his cabin and smiled, seeing his son's impatience.

Raghu- Missing her?

Yug-(still looking at the picture) like anything...

Raghu sat on the chair and tapped on Yug's head. He came out of his trance.

Raghu- Kya Yug? itne dino baad sab thikh hua hai, aur tumne uska itna thanda welcome kiya?

Yug looked at him in confusion.

Raghu- Tumne apna izhaar-e-ishq sare aam kiya, kabhi socha hai, ki Kali pe kya beeti hogi, when she had to confess her feelings infront of everyone? Yug, you need to give your relation a fresh start...I think tum dono kuch waqt saath bitaaoge toh accha rahega...

Yug nodded understanding what he meant.

~~~~

*Evening*

Kali was impatiently waiting for Yug to return but he didn't come. The whole day, Daadi was in her room, and Chulbuli in saloon, so she was bored.

Kali-(to herslef) Yeh Yug kahaan hain...

Her mobile beeped, so she picked it and blushed. It was a message from Yug,

"Itna bhi yaad mat karo... I am getting hiccups here... If you miss me, call me..."

Kali replied- "Aapko yahaan koi miss nahi kar raha..."

Yug smiled. Kali heard the door being knocked so opened it, to find the servant hold a box.

Servant- Yug baba ne bheja hai...

Kali nodded and took it from him. She closed the door and unwrapped it. Yug had gifted a pink sleeveless evening gown and a diamond necklace. Kali was surprised and blushing.

Yug messaged her, "Agar sach mein miss nahi kar rahi ho, toh mera gift pehenke gaadi mein betho... I have a surprise for you..."

Kali couldn't hide the pink hues on her face. She changed and looked at her mirror image. She never liked western clothes, but always had a wish to wear an evening gown. She let her hair fall straight on her shoulders and chose a light makeup. She adorned her neck with her mangalsutra and the necklace, and filled her hair parting with the sindoor. Looking at her mirror reflection for the last time, she stepped out of the room, only to bang into Sharmila.

Sharmila looked at her with a smile on her face.

Sharmila- Bahut khoobsurat lag rahi ho.

Kali- (blushing) Thanks.

Sharmila- Go, he must be waiting.

Kali nodded and left. Sharmila stared at her retreating figure, happy that at least someone's life was filled with happiness now.

Here Kali sat in the car, looking outside the window, remembering Yug and her every moment after her accident. She felt happy. There was no word to describe her happiness. She always wanted true love, and Yug was like a blessing in her life. "thank You Ramji" She said mentally, while her eyes captured the city's beauty.

In some minutes, the car stopped. Kali looked at the unknown villa in anxiety and stepped out of the car, only to see that the path was decorated with rose petals. She continued walking, with confusion crystal clear on her face. She stopped, when she reached the lawn, which was decorated with fairy lights. The lawn was deserted, except for a wooden platform. The platform was decorated with candles and a big heart of red rose petals was made on it. In the center of the heart, another heart was made of pink rose petals.

Kali's heart thudded in her ribcages as it felt him. She looked around and finally felt a pair of palms covering her eyes. She smiled and placed her hands on them and removed them. She turned to see a smiling Yug.

O ho...

Yug- Like it?

He was confused to see tears in her eyes. Kali realized that she was crying and hugged him. Yug understood her turmoil of emotions and held her in his arms, letting her pour heart out.

Kali stopped crying and broke the hug.

Yug looked at her and couldn't move her eyes off her.

Bheegi bheegi sadkon pe main
Tera intezaar karun
Dheere dheere dil ki zameen ko
Tere hi naam karun



Yug-(in a trance) Do you know, ki tum aaj kitni gorgeous lag rhai ho?

Kali blushed like anything. Yug held her hand and led her to the heart of pink petals.

Khudko main yoon kho doon
Ke phir na kabhi paaun
Haule haule zindagi ko
Ab tere hawaale karun



Yug- Kali, I don't know tumne apne life partner ke kya sapne dekhe the, but I know you deserve better...you deserve the best... Main koshish karunga ki you always see me as your perfect life partner.

Kali-(trying to explain) Yug main...

He kept his finger on her lips, because of which, she stared in his eyes, with her heart beating faster.

Sanam re, sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re
Sanam re, sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re
Karam re, karam re
Tera mujhpe karam hua re

Sanam re, sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re

O ho...

Yug- Don't ever leave me Kali... hold me, be with me... I want to be with you...stare in your eyes, get lost in your beauty, laugh at your innocence, cry when you are in pain... Tumse dur jaane ka sochu bhi toh maut yaad aa jaati hai...

Kali covered his lips and shook her head in no, as if telling him not to speak of death.

Yug sighed and removed her hand

Tere kareeb jo hone laga hoon
To toote saare bharam re

Sanam re, sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re
Sanam re, sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re

O ho...



Yug-Kali, promise me, ki hum dono humesha saath rahenge... We aren't perfect, but at least try to be perfect for each other, right?

Kali nodded.

Tere kareeb jo hone laga hoon
To toote saare bharam re

Sanam re, sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re
Sanam re, sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re

O ho...



Kali- Yug, aap humari zindagi ki woh roshni hain, jiske bina hum adhuri hain...aapko kaise chod jaayenge hum, boliye? Aap humari zindagi ho Yug... humari hard dhadkan ki wajah ho...aapse jitna dur rehna tha, hum rahe, ab aur duriyan humse bardaasht nahi hogi... Aap jabse humari zindagi mein aaye ho, hume jeene ki wajah mili hai... Hum humesha saath rahenge Yug, hai na?

Yug nodded and hugged her.

Sanam re, sanam re (sanam re..)
Tu mera sanam hua re
Sanam re, sanam re (sanam re..)
Tu mera sanam hua re
Karam re, karam re (karam re..)
Tera mujhpe karam hua re
Sanam re, sanam re (sanam re..)
Tu mera sanam hua re

O ho...

Mere sanam re mera hua re
Tera karam re mujhpe hua ye

Mere sanam re mera hua re
Tera karam re mujhpe hua ye

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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Beautiful
The Song and title of the story go hand in hand
I loved there last conversation
Superb
Waiting for another story from your side
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: sweetcherry95

Beautiful

The Song and title of the story go hand in hand
I loved there last conversation
Superb
Waiting for another story from your side


Thanks😳

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