Love Story with Suspese Part 10 PG 24 - Page 4

Originally posted by: nasartaurus

YAAR ITS REALLY V GOOD!!! WE NEED SOME MORE PASSIONATE MOMENTS B/W DEVKAAJJAL IN REAL YAAR PLZZZZZZZZZ!
WRITE MORE

Thanks Kitty and the Dk scene were the best and I will try to add more of the DK scenes.

Your FF is going reaaaaallllllllllllyyyyyyy verry verry good! I love it! Continue soon. I will be waiting impatiently

Originally posted by: gambi

Your FF is going reaaaaallllllllllllyyyyyyy verry verry good! I love it! Continue soon. I will be waiting impatiently

Thanks Zareen I am glad you liked it.

hey star great goin....i like DK stalking the new guy.... 😆 after all both dev and kaajjal have a phd in stalking each other...bahut experience hai....

and awww 😳 ...the tie scene...my fav....gurl....
i have weakness for these wifey scenes...button toot gaya...tie nahin bandh raheee...hai...kyun bhai patis dev...shaadi se pehle toh achhi khaasi bandhthi thi aap ki ties 😆 😆 😆

keep it goin....starr 👏
sammy 😛

G88 job i would love to continue my comment but i dont have time rite now! Good! i cant wait for the next part! 😉

Originally posted by: dudleysam

hey star great goin....i like DK stalking the new guy.... 😆 after all both dev and kaajjal have a phd in stalking each other...bahut experience hai....

and awww 😳 ...the tie scene...my fav....gurl....
i have weakness for these wifey scenes...button toot gaya...tie nahin bandh raheee...hai...kyun bhai patis dev...shaadi se pehle toh achhi khaasi bandhthi thi aap ki ties 😆 😆 😆

keep it goin....starr 👏
sammy 😛

Thanks Sammy I am glad you like it and the tie scene was the best of all of them😆

Originally posted by: cool_rashi

G88 job i would love to continue my comment but i dont have time rite now! Good! i cant wait for the next part! 😉

Hey Rashi thanks for your comments and I am glad you liked it.

Part 3

Scene 1


So when Dev and Kaajjal found out that the new guy kidnap Sonia they were in shock.

Kaajjal: Dev I think we should call the police or Adi's mom.

Dev: yea we should.

When dev tired to call the police then the new guy spotted them.

NG: what are you guys doing here?

Dev: we followed you because we know you are the one who got Adi in jail.

NG: so you know my secert do you?

Kaajjal: yes we do know

NG: Adi was my old friend who I use to live with but ever since he gotten famous then I thought to hate him because the fans liked him instead of me.

NG: Now you know my secert and me kidnapping Sonia now I will hurt you guys.

DK are shock and saw some goons coming in.

Scene 2

Kaajjal: What do we do?

Dev: I am going to fight and you will recuse Sonia.

Dev starts fighting with goons and the NG.
Kaajjal starts opening the rope and tries too let Sonia out.

When the goons and NG were help less and tried and Kaajjal opened all the ropes.

then they all escaped and went into the car very fast.

Kaajjal: Sonia are you ok?

Sonia: yea I am fine I am glad you guys were there too save me.

Dev: How did the NG kidnap you?

Sonia: Well it was a long story..... someone rang the door bell so I was like checking who was it and then I knew it was goons and the put something on my mouth and then I fainted. then I saw it was the NG who planned all this and he said to me that if you want too see your brother again then you have too sell the house. then I was in shock.

Kaajjal: OMG that too bad you can't sell the house.

Dev: I agree with Kaajjal you can't.

Sonia: I have to it is the only way that Adi can get out of jail.

Dev: we'll try something to not sell the house and just save it.

Sonia: thanks.

when they reached to Sonia's house Sonia said thanks and DK said your welcome.

Scene 3

when they reached the house then Kaajjal noticed something?

Kaajjal: Dev how come you hands are so red?

Dev: is like well when I fought the goons then they were attacking me with something.

Kaajjal: OMG I have to get a first aid box.

Dev: No there is no need.

Kaajjal : but Dev...

dev: Its ok

then Kaajjal kissed his hands and then they stared at each other and huged.

Dev: I love you Kaajjal

Kaajjal: I love you too Dev.




Hope you liked Part 3

do comment.

wowo ellina. ... this is great. i am liking the story and am really enjoying it.

keep up the good work. looin forward to read more 👏

Originally posted by: thesaint148

wowo ellina. ... this is great. i am liking the story and am really enjoying it.

keep up the good work. looin forward to read more 👏

Thanks Kashish I am glad you like it and i agree its story is really good its like a mystery with the NG but inculdes DK's love story.😊