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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Junoonian

Awww ... the poor things - so much sadness in Prithvi - his tears and pain were heart rending.

And Meera is in tears too - why? Cause of her reaction to Prithvi that she cannot control or something else? Oh so many mysteries Tehsina! Please kuch toh reveal karo!
and as usual lovely chapter - you are going great with this FF 😊



Thank u Binu...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: adianasr

Tehsina now I am going to scream!!! Pls reveal the secret!!! dying to knw what is it Prithvi has promised that he would do!!!



Dheeraj deary!Dheeraj!😆😉Khel shuru hone se hi pehle score kaise batadu?!!😲😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Tehsina tumhe emotional atyachar karna accha lagta hai kya? Poor Prithvi 😭 I want to give him a tight huggy & tell him that he's not alone 😳 The suspense is killing me, pleej update the next chapter fast 😳😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago


CHAPTER-23.


God was silent to his questions,like He always was'And Prithvi covered his face in a last unsuccessful attempt to control his turbulent emotions'As heart wrenching pain, wreaked havoc through his entire system and he desperately tried to stop the tears that silently fell through his eyes'

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very nice with a suspense😉👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago

Glued to the screen reading this chapgter, hoping it wouldn't end yet... Excellent work Tehsina! Keep it up, can't wait to find out the reason for Prithi and Meera's anguish... You know how to keep your readers thirsting for more.. :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: SahanaG

Tehsina tumhe emotional atyachar karna accha lagta hai kya? Poor Prithvi 😭 I want to give him a tight huggy & tell him that he's not alone 😳 The suspense is killing me, pleej update the next chapter fast 😳😳😳



Awww!Sorry!😲Bt I'd to show his sufferings...Evn i ws in pain while i ws writn dis..😭Bt hd to show his human side...Will update soon..No worries!😉
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Originally posted by: Hopeenlight

Glued to the screen reading this chapgter, hoping it wouldn't end yet... Excellent work Tehsina! Keep it up, can't wait to find out the reason for Prithi and Meera's anguish... You know how to keep your readers thirsting for more.. :)



Awww!Thank u so much Asha!🤗😃
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Posted: 12 years ago


Chapter 23-page 71...https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/86609374


CHAPTER-24.

Meera silently kept crying as she watched rain falling through the window,and was unaware of getting wet..The weather outside, acting as a catalyst to her falling tears..Her tears- resulting from the storm that had started brewing inside her..

Suddenly a strong gust of wind blew the window pane shut,startling Meera,when she realized she was drenched almost completely..

Bitto will scold me,if she sees I'm soaked..She thought,sniffing and rubbing away her tears..So she hurriedly changed into her night dress of a loose baby pink t-shirt and a pair of white loose slacks..

But as soon as she lay on the bed,cuddling her favourite pillow and also her childhood teddy bear, her tortured thoughts returned bringing tears along with them..

Papa and Bitto are always so proud of me!She thought..I've failed them today..I let a stranger hug and kiss me countless times..I shamed them..And today..Today I did not even move away..!In fact I deliberately invited him to touch me,to kiss me..Meera thought as she kept weeping hugging her teddy tight to her chest..

"How could I?!How could I behave so shamelessly with a complete stranger?!"She sobbed out..

I've always been a wild girl,but never a characterless one!Meera thought furiously.Always did my best,to stay away from guys or their company,just so that my parents are not ashamed of me..So that they are never questioned,on my upbringing..But today,I crossed the limits..!She thought as tears of guilt fell from her eyes..

Meera,the pampered only child of her parents,had been brought up in the village surroundings..So despite travelling to city frequently,and also being educated there,she always firmly held onto and also believed, in the traditional and conservative belief,that being a girl, getting close to guys or even hugging them,or holding hands with them,was crossing the limits..

What will Bitto say if she learns her Miu behaved so shamelessly!And to add,I had liked him touching me..!And wanted him to do more!I behaved like a complete shameless hussy!Meera thought furiously,sobbing into her pillows which were drenched with her tears by now..

The storm outside raged on,as Meera kept weeping..And finally she cried herself to sleep..

The next morning,had Prithvi walking towards the haweli,to invite Sudha Singh for the house puja,and also thank her for her help regarding it..The Pandit had fixed the date of the next day for the ritual and sent Prithvi the news through Ramu kaka..

Prithvi was looking forward to meet her favourite kaki again,with boyish eagerness,but was also reluctant and scared of any encounter with her spirited daughter..Not anymore...

Meera did not like him..Prithvi had finally concluded last night,after he recalled her reaction to his slight advances...And it suited him perfectly,he had decided finally last night,after he had calmed down..Right now or any other time,Prithvi could not afford her distraction or any other girl's..Not at the stake of his father's pride..Never at the stake of his father's pride and respect..Prithvi thought to himself with a grim face..

No matter how beautiful she was,no matter how much he felt attracted towards her,Prithvi had understood that his feelings were not returned by the girl..And he was not the type of man who chased girls for his amusement,or took it as a challenge to woo them back into his arms..Infact since adulthood he had to fight off girls who deliberately tried to flirt with him,or impress him..He had been sick and tired of their attention,knowing it was due to his being a business tycoon's only son and heir..Prithvi had always overlooked the possibility that the girls might be attracted to him due to his stunning good looks,height and broad shouldered physique..He always steered clear of girls and any involvement with them,and had never felt the urge to get to know any of them,until he had met His Fairy..

No..She is not my fairy..She is not my anything!He thought determinedly as he was passing through the village markets..

I am not thinking about Mee-Prithvi's thought was interrupted by a child's scream at the end of the market..

"Don't beat me!I am sorry!I am sorry!Please don't beat me!"The child voice was sobbing out,and Prithvi ran to the scene,parting the crowd of silent onlookers surrounding the happening,to find a small boy of about 8 years,being beaten by a fat man with a thick bamboo stick..

"Who is going to pay for it,you orphan?!!Your dead parents?!!"The fat man screamed as he kept beating the sobbing child.

Uncontrollable fury boiled through Prithvi's blood,and just when the man raised his stick again to beat the child again,Prithvi grabbed the end of the stick and easily wrenched it out of his hand,the sudden act making the fat man loose his balance,and fall to the ground..

"It's easy to beat the weaker ones.."Prithvi muttered in a cold voice.."Try this stick on me,I'm an orphan too.."Prithvi finished in a cold lethal voice,his eyes burning with uncontrollable rage,as the fat man stared back at him with a dumbstruck and scared look on his plump and sweating face..

"Come on!Get up!I said use this stick on me!Even my parents won't come back from the dead to stop you!"Prithvi snapped out in the same dangerously cold voice...

The man tried to drag his fat and heavy body backwards still lying on the ground,as Prithvi slowly walked upto him,and lowered himself down to the man's eye level..By this time the podgy face of the man was sweating profusely,as Prithvi stared ino his bulging scared eyes,with cold fury in his dark ones..

Slowly Prithvi raised the fat stick and brought it infront of the man's eyes,until he stared at it and gulped down in fear..And Prithvi smoothed his hand around the stick,and suddenly raised it and brought it down towards the fat man's head to hit him on the head,as the man let out a scream and raised his hand for protection from the blow..But the blow never came,and the man stared at Prithvi,with a horrified and scared look..And then he saw the stick was held just a few inches away from his head,and if Prithvi had wanted to he could have easily blown his brain out,but had stopped..

The fat man stared back at Prithvi,his face lost of all colors..

Prithvi brought the stick in front of the man's eyes,and slowly and easily broke the thick stick into two halves with a loud crack,as the onlookers gasped out together in amazement..

"I could easily break you into halves,like this stick here.."Prithvi said through clenched teeth.."But take it as a warning!If I ever see you raising your hand on a child or a weaker person ever again,or even hear of it happening from someone else,that will be the last day on this earth for you!"Prithvi warned him in a cold dangerous voice,and throwing the broken stick,beside the sweating scared fat man,with a last disgusted look,Prithvi turned to face the weeping child..

The little boy was bruised and had numerous cuts on his hand and skinny body..And the shirt he was wearing was also very dirty and torn..Prithvi's heart squeezed in pain,at the boy's miserable condition..

So Prithvi Khanna did something he had never done before in his entire life..He knelt down and picked up the skinny injured into his arms and hugged the sobbing child gently,so as not to hurt him,and patted him lightly on the back,while the child hugged him back tightly and wept even harder.

"Wow!!!What an emotional scene!City SUPPPERMAN is here to save village orphans!"Said a sneering voice,along with a loud clap...




Chapter 25-page 76...https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/86871253

Edited by TehsinaJFJ - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
What a satisfying chapter! :) I loved Meera dealing with her feelings if guilt n that Prithvi scene with the orphan child was just wow!
And is that Lakhan's entry? Ohmigod!!! Lakhu is back :)

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