FF-JUNOON:-WHATEVER IT TAKES,Chapter-49(pg-146)...

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monalika

@monalika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#201

Prithvi in actionwa...live it. I missed Meera though :/ I love the fiesty Meera so much!!

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Hopeenlight

@Hopeenlight

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Posted: 12 years ago

#202

Wow! Tehsina! Romance and now Action!! Very good job! I'm looking forward to your daily chapter updates more than the show... I cannot watch it until DB leaves and Meera comes back as the real protagonist... THank you so much for bringing this to us when it's so sorely needed by Mithvi fans. Keep up the good work and churn out some more of these...

Excited for tomorrow's installment...

Asha

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Barayah

@irock321

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#203

Originally posted by: TehsinaJFJ

Hi!Thanks a lot for reading my FF!😛Nd m so glad u lykd it so much!😳
m Tehsina.Your name plz?😛
Will PM u.Thanks 1ce agn...😉

No problem! I recently discovered this show and haven't been watching recently but loved the previous track! So decided on reading some FFs. I really loved this...I haven't seen very many FFs or OS' on this forum but the ones I have read...they are all really beautifully written! My name's Barayah. Thanks for the PM 😃

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Junoonian

@Junoonian

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Posted: 12 years ago

#204

Originally posted by: TehsinaJFJ
Note:Ok friends before i start chapter-9 I'd lyk to thank my friend Binu,our JUNOONIAN who helped me a lot wid dis chapter.Thank u Binu!😉🤗nd to my frnds who r reading dis,if u lyk it,da credit goes to Binu,😉nd if u dnt,dn bash me,not her cos i wrote da chapter so my mistake..so here we go:

Hey Tehsina thanks for the shout out but seriously you have written that chapter completely :). All credit entirely yours love. And for someone who has never written action scenes before this is brilliant 👏

Good job.

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Anupama

@prem_diwani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#205

Today u had my undisturbed attention tehsina -- Prithvi and fight scenes - knock me completely ... aur sahi scene tha ... jumps, kicks, goli, punches - and khali bandook ka istamal bhi !!!

ty very much ... kal ka intezaar rahega 😳

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crazy-nut

@crazy-nut

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Posted: 12 years ago

#206

Originally posted by: TehsinaJFJ
Note:Ok friends before i start chapter-9 I'd lyk to thank my friend Binu,our JUNOONIAN who helped me a lot wid dis chapter.Thank u Binu!😉🤗nd to my frnds who r reading dis,if u lyk it,da credit goes to Binu,😉nd if u dnt,dn bash me,not her cos i wrote da chapter so my mistake..so here we go:

CHAPTER-9.

Prithvi quietly looked on,as the middle aged man in white dhoti and khaki kurta,was being forced to walk in the direction of the jungle.

Ha ha ha 😆 fighting sequence was like watching a main stream hindi movie.. ha ha ha.. gd gd keep it up.. keep more coming😉

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girlTalks

@girlTalks

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Posted: 12 years ago

#207

👏👏👏👏

awesome Tehsina, the action sequence was too good , i dont know how to write it myself but you explained with so much continuity, no bloopers what so ever, every action was clear and in sequence.

I know how difficult it must have been and you passed with flying colors my dear friend.

AS usual my best part was

he goon let out a sigh of relief,as he saw Prithvi take the first step to leave,when abruptly,like lightning,Prithvi turned round and blew a hard punch onto the man's jaw,that made a loud crunching sound,of bone breaking,and the goon knocked unconscious,fell to the ground with a thud.

I just loved the way he came back and gave the unexpected final punch , just the way I like my prithvi

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TehsinaJFJ

@TehsinaJFJ

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#208

Originally posted by: monalika
Prithvi in actionwa...live it. I missed Meera though :/ I love the fiesty Meera so much!!

Thank u Monalika!😛Yes i missed writing bout her too..😒In fct I feel like skipping everything nd just write Mithvi scenes..😉But da story needs odr characters nd scenes too...So hd to skip her...Bt i promise she'll be dere in next chapter!😉

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TehsinaJFJ

@TehsinaJFJ

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Posted: 12 years ago

#209

Originally posted by: Hopeenlight
Wow! Tehsina! Romance and now Action!! Very good job! I'm looking forward to your daily chapter updates more than the show... I cannot watch it until DB leaves and Meera comes back as the real protagonist... THank you so much for bringing this to us when it's so sorely needed by Mithvi fans. Keep up the good work and churn out some more of these...
Excited for tomorrow's installment...

Asha

Thank you so much Asha for making my effort worth it!🤗Yes DB scene is da main reason i try to update daily...Glad u like it!😳