FF-JUNOON:-WHATEVER IT TAKES,Chapter-49(pg-146)... - Page 23

chapter 7
amazing description of both's condition
loved prithvi's answers
"Did you come to haunt me,my Mango Tree Fairy?"He whispered huskily into her ears.
"If you are a Dayan,then I've to be a Bhooth,don't I?"Teased Prithvi.

and end is awesome activated gm😉😛☺️

Chapter 8
so he made up in his way as he suggested in their first meeting😉
but ended up again making her angry
areh 2nd meeting mein itana fast! kya kare atmosphere waisa hua toh but control control
so he decided to say sorry again😳
awesome update
but last line were amazing

But the last thing on Prithvi's mind,as he got freshened up was,
But she felt so wonderful in my arms...That fragrance,that fragrance of hers will keep haunting me all my life...Those eyes...And those lips...

☺️☺️☺️

Chapter 9
loved whole chapter though i missed meera lot
but action scene description was amazing
just felt happening infront of eyes watching it live
Action scene writing is difficult but u made it superb!
and tht action of prithvi first leaving then again came bouncing from nowhere! and last empty gun part was awesome!

Originally posted by: awida

Man in black !

It is a good chapter ..but I am not a fan of action movies.

You did a good job Tehsina .. And thanks for Binu for lending a helping hand to you . It is tough to write an action scene and make it imaginable like you did.

But I missed Meera also.
Now I guess This Prithvi-Ramdari meeting is very intresting .coz the laer should be in awe for the first.. I don't know why I feel Prithvi won't be happy that he saved that man. revenge? 😕

forget to thanks binu
thanku u very much binu 🤗

Originally posted by: Marathi_Mulgi

forget to thanks binu
thanku u very much binu 🤗

Originally posted by: awida

Man in black !

It is a good chapter ..but I am not a fan of action movies.

You did a good job Tehsina .. And thanks for Binu for lending a helping hand to you . It is tough to write an action scene and make it imaginable like you did.

But I missed Meera also.
Now I guess This Prithvi-Ramdari meeting is very intresting .coz the laer should be in awe for the first.. I don't know why I feel Prithvi won't be happy that he saved that man. revenge? 😕

I'll tell u a secret sweety!Evn i hate fights!So evn in books i try to skip dt part,except i didnt skip it in harry potter nd Twilight series...but dt dusnt apply here..Bout DT nd Prithvi,khullasa hoga..so kip readn..😉Nd i missed nt writn bout Meera too...😕

Originally posted by: Marathi_Mulgi

chapter 5
awesome update
so prithvi still remembering dayan
liked detailed history of rk's
but wht was in tht document ?

Thank u Vidya!Document?Wat Document?😉

Originally posted by: Marathi_Mulgi

chapter 6
loved the update
meera entered in khanna haweli
moonlight, rose franganance
wow atmosphere is very beatifully written
perfect for romantic night
lolz meera call prithvi Mr. thief

Hosh khone ki liye ek wajay to chahiye na?😉