FF-JUNOON:-WHATEVER IT TAKES,Chapter-49(pg-146)... - Page 22

Originally posted by: irock321

No problem! I recently discovered this show and haven't been watching recently but loved the previous track! So decided on reading some FFs. I really loved this...I haven't seen very many FFs or OS' on this forum but the onesSo I have read...they are all really beautifully written! My name's Barayah. Thanks for the PM 😃

Hi Barayah!🤗I know dere isnt much FF or OS or SS on Mithvi...Bt I saw May nd Saba writing dose wonderful 1s..nd thought I shud help dm out(though m nt half as good as dm)...So i thought i shud try 1 FF to mk our Mithvi more popular!!!nd dey r such a wonderful jodi dt i cm up wid lots of scenes wid dm widout much hard work...😉Bt its difficult to put my thoughts in a story...😕so thanks for liking it!😛

Originally posted by: Junoonian

Hey Tehsina thanks for the shout out but seriously you have written that chapter completely :). All credit entirely yours love. And for someone who has never written action scenes before this is brilliant 👏

Good job.

Thank you Binu!But seriously I wudnt hv bn able to do it,if u didnt help😕..So da credit goes to u too!😉

Originally posted by: prem_diwani

Today u had my undisturbed attention tehsina -- Prithvi and fight scenes - knock me completely ... aur sahi scene tha ... jumps, kicks, goli, punches - and khali bandook ka istamal bhi !!!

ty very much ... kal ka intezaar rahega 😳

Thank you Anu!M so glad u enjoyed da fight!😃Bt I'd hv preferred a bhola bhala Prithvi,so dt i dint hv to come up wid fight sequences..😕Bt as he is our Prithvi,he has to be an action man!!!😉

Originally posted by: crazy-nut

Ha ha ha 😆 fighting sequence was like watching a main stream hindi movie.. ha ha ha.. gd gd keep it up.. keep more coming😉

Thank u Shanti!😉

Originally posted by: sabaSpeaks

👏

awesome Tehsina, the action sequence was too good , i dont know how to write it myself but you explained with so much continuity, no bloopers what so ever, every action was clear and in sequence.

I know how difficult it must have been and you passed with flying colors my dear friend.

AS usual my best part was

he goon let out a sigh of relief,as he saw Prithvi take the first step to leave,when abruptly,like lightning,Prithvi turned round and blew a hard punch onto the man's jaw,that made a loud crunching sound,of bone breaking,and the goon knocked unconscious,fell to the ground with a thud.

I just loved the way he came back and gave the unexpected final punch , just the way I like my prithvi

M so glad u liked dis part!It ws worth it dn!😃I came up wid dis idea at da last moment!Da cool Prithvi tryn to calm his temper nd dn sudden punch!😆
Nd bout bloopers,dt too ws tough..I'd to think lyk us,lyk wat mistake wud we hv found out...So its nice to see u lyk it!😳Thank you Saba!!!😃

Originally posted by: sue_21

Wow wow wow!!! You nailed it yet again!!! Fantastic combination of romance and action!!! Am loving it!!! 👍🏼👍🏼

Thank u so much Sue!!!😳Hope I cn kip u amused...😛

Man in black !

It is a good chapter ..but I am not a fan of action movies.

You did a good job Tehsina .. And thanks for Binu for lending a helping hand to you . It is tough to write an action scene and make it imaginable like you did.

But I missed Meera also.
Now I guess This Prithvi-Ramdari meeting is very intresting .coz the laer should be in awe for the first.. I don't know why I feel Prithvi won't be happy that he saved that man. revenge? 😕

chapter 5
awesome update
so prithvi still remembering dayan
liked detailed history of rk's
but wht was in tht document ?

chapter 6
loved the update
meera entered in khanna haweli
moonlight, rose franganance
wow atmosphere is very beatifully written
perfect for romantic night
lolz meera call prithvi Mr. thief