FF: Pale Blue Dot Thread 6/19/2025 Chapter 44 Part2 - Page 29

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

Truth be told, we all pine and whine more about fictional people than real ones... real people are either boring or disappointing... what's your pick?

Very very very boring and highly disappointing is what I would say.

Seriously words are failed to explain my feelings after reading the update.Who knows fictional story will teach us life lessons.....you never failed to surprise us di....

What we imagine and what you gave...

Beyond our imagination you think and write.....

We always forget PBD Jalal is beyond our league.

PBD is something different and above from romance and love .

How beautiful and thoughtfully you present Jalal friendship here....

Gosh... can't believe Abdul and cheten are belongs to high profile ultra rich family. Most surprising Prithvi background...

How everything is connected like god himself conspire to build Jalal dream and his friendship....

I really like that part where Jalal express his gratitude towards his friendship.....he never forget or never will.

It's necessary to clear this thing so that Jodha never envy them in future....to make her understand he has go back his childhood memories.

Most important trust which Jalal friends has was unbelievable.

One of the beautiful and much needed late night ride of their relationship or in perfect timing also.

True Jalal has fault in Aliya and his relationship and he accept that .....both parties pay price because of this relationship.

Here we are thinking who will reject our Jalal but his thinking and calculation is beyond our imagination.....true his past relationship and his past nature and his past images of husband will surely rise questions in Jodha relatives and her parents.

For that Jodha has to be prepare to face all this...

Who said Jodha lost her parents look at

Saradhi ji ....his fear for her is more than any father have for his daughter.

His past memories, his love for his brother and sister in law....

No doubt god choose them as childless because since beginning he has to take care for his family like father and mother till now they are doing that....

How beautiful his dream future..... daughter, son in law, grandchildrens and all.... sounds so lovely again their home filled with love , family and laughter.

Waiting for the next one , di....drop in just to let you know I am here waiting for the next chapter..... silently daily come to thread just to know when you are updating next....

Big thank you for this beautiful surprise!

Hi Jhanu… You actually surprised me with this update. Whew, Chapter 44 Part 2 really hit me like a freight train of feels in the middle of a moonlit romantic drama! I came for the sweet chemistry between JJ, but stayed for the emotional therapy session. This wasn’t just Jalal’s love confession—it was a full-on TED Talk with bonus heart palpitations.

The whole debate between controlling vs protecting? Loved it. Jalal is not trying to lock her up in the name of marriage—he is just laying out his damage, trauma, and awkward charm like, “Here is my mess, please don’t run. And honestly? Respect. That “take me, woman” line? I am sorry, what genre are we in?! Romantic declaration? Corporate drama? Spiritual awakening?? Mahabharat crossover?! I need a moment.

Also, Jo deserves an award. She got kidnapped in a nightdress, had her hair rebelling against a scrunchie, and still managed to deliver a full roast session on "Mr. Control Freak" with the flair of a stand-up comedian. I was uncontrollably laughing. She is chaotic good and he is brooding order. Together, they are the best romcom couple we have ever seen.

It was quite surprising to learn the backstory of the ‘Four Wheels’ glam boys. The Four Wheels boys aren’t just about glam and good looks—they are a brotherhood. Jalal’s bond with them runs deep, filled with genuine love, loyalty, and shared memories. When he talks about them, you can feel the respect and connection—they have got each other’s backs, no matter what.

And let us not skip past the part where he basically told the world (and Jo’s relatives) to go jump in a lake if they doubt him. Romantic rebellion at its finest.

In conclusion: this man is ready to ditch the shallow life for one where Jo makes coffee and roasts him with love. And honestly? We are all rooting for him—even if he is a little extra. Lastly, I am fantasising about a night drive through an industrial estate. Bravo, Jahnu. You have officially ruined all other factory tours for me.

My version of the missing scene from Chapter 44 Part:2

Imagine Jo’s Reply (in her signature voice):

So… you kidnapped me in my night clothes, skipped your family, your work, and decided a midnight industrial tour was the best way to say “I love you”? Jalal Ahmed, you absolute maniac—I adore you.

Let’s get a few things straight:
Yes, you are a control freak.
Yes, your nose does flare like a war trumpet when you are offended.
And yes, you gave me a mini heart attack when I realised we were pulling into Four Wheels while I looked like I had escaped from a cozy asylum.

But then… you said all that stuff. About my sketches. My charity. About how I am somehow “above your league” (which is hilarious, by the way—because you walk around like James Bond with a conscience). And suddenly, I am no longer thinking about my mismatched socks or the tragic absence of mascara. I am just sitting here, stunned, while you hand over your heart like a signed Non-Disclosure agreement.

Also, sidenote: stop being so emotionally intelligent and romantic, it is messing with my sass levels. I am dangerously close to writing poetry about you, and no one needs that.

Look, I get it. You have been married. You have messed up. You have lived half your life inside a factory and the other half inside financial balance sheets. And now you are standing in front of me, saying you are done with shallow walls and hollow relationships and you want me—flaws, baggage, sarcasm, and all.

So here is my answer:
Yes. I will take you.
But only if you let me say “I told you so” every time your nose flares and you insist I can't eat pani puri from a street vendor.

Love

Rose 🌹

Originally posted by: Jeryl

And let us not skip past the part where he basically told the world (and Jo’s relatives) to go jump in a lake if they doubt him. Romantic rebellion at its finest.

@B : Let them f*ck themselves - it was

Originally posted by: Jeryl

My version of the missing scene from Chapter 44 Part:2

Imagine Jo’s Reply (in her signature voice):

So… you kidnapped me in my night clothes, skipped your family, your work, and decided a midnight industrial tour was the best way to say “I love you”? Jalal Ahmed, you absolute maniac—I adore you.

Let’s get a few things straight:
Yes, you are a control freak.
Yes, your nose does flare like a war trumpet when you are offended.
And yes, you gave me a mini heart attack when I realised we were pulling into Four Wheels while I looked like I had escaped from a cozy asylum.

But then… you said all that stuff. About my sketches. My charity. About how I am somehow “above your league” (which is hilarious, by the way—because you walk around like James Bond with a conscience). And suddenly, I am no longer thinking about my mismatched socks or the tragic absence of mascara. I am just sitting here, stunned, while you hand over your heart like a signed Non-Disclosure agreement.

Also, sidenote: stop being so emotionally intelligent and romantic, it is messing with my sass levels. I am dangerously close to writing poetry about you, and no one needs that.

Look, I get it. You have been married. You have messed up. You have lived half your life inside a factory and the other half inside financial balance sheets. And now you are standing in front of me, saying you are done with shallow walls and hollow relationships and you want me—flaws, baggage, sarcasm, and all.

So here is my answer:
Yes. I will take you.
But only if you let me say “I told you so” every time your nose flares and you insist I can't eat pani puri from a street vendor.

Love

Rose 🌹

This is sooooo sweet omg

Last line has my whole

Originally posted by: Jeryl

Hi Jhanu… You actually surprised me with this update. Whew, Chapter 44 Part 2 really hit me like a freight train of feels in the middle of a moonlit romantic drama! I came for the sweet chemistry between JJ, but stayed for the emotional therapy session. This wasn’t just Jalal’s love confession—it was a full-on TED Talk with bonus heart palpitations.

The whole debate between controlling vs protecting? Loved it. Jalal is not trying to lock her up in the name of marriage—he is just laying out his damage, trauma, and awkward charm like, “Here is my mess, please don’t run. And honestly? Respect. That “take me, woman” line? I am sorry, what genre are we in?! Romantic declaration? Corporate drama? Spiritual awakening?? Mahabharat crossover?! I need a moment.

Also, Jo deserves an award. She got kidnapped in a nightdress, had her hair rebelling against a scrunchie, and still managed to deliver a full roast session on "Mr. Control Freak" with the flair of a stand-up comedian. I was uncontrollably laughing. She is chaotic good and he is brooding order. Together, they are the best romcom couple we have ever seen.

It was quite surprising to learn the backstory of the ‘Four Wheels’ glam boys. The Four Wheels boys aren’t just about glam and good looks—they are a brotherhood. Jalal’s bond with them runs deep, filled with genuine love, loyalty, and shared memories. When he talks about them, you can feel the respect and connection—they have got each other’s backs, no matter what.

And let us not skip past the part where he basically told the world (and Jo’s relatives) to go jump in a lake if they doubt him. Romantic rebellion at its finest.

In conclusion: this man is ready to ditch the shallow life for one where Jo makes coffee and roasts him with love. And honestly? We are all rooting for him—even if he is a little extra. Lastly, I am fantasising about a night drive through an industrial estate. Bravo, Jahnu. You have officially ruined all other factory tours for me.

My version of the missing scene from Chapter 44 Part:2

Imagine Jo’s Reply (in her signature voice):

So… you kidnapped me in my night clothes, skipped your family, your work, and decided a midnight industrial tour was the best way to say “I love you”? Jalal Ahmed, you absolute maniac—I adore you.

Let’s get a few things straight:
Yes, you are a control freak.
Yes, your nose does flare like a war trumpet when you are offended.
And yes, you gave me a mini heart attack when I realised we were pulling into Four Wheels while I looked like I had escaped from a cozy asylum.

But then… you said all that stuff. About my sketches. My charity. About how I am somehow “above your league” (which is hilarious, by the way—because you walk around like James Bond with a conscience). And suddenly, I am no longer thinking about my mismatched socks or the tragic absence of mascara. I am just sitting here, stunned, while you hand over your heart like a signed Non-Disclosure agreement.

Also, sidenote: stop being so emotionally intelligent and romantic, it is messing with my sass levels. I am dangerously close to writing poetry about you, and no one needs that.

Look, I get it. You have been married. You have messed up. You have lived half your life inside a factory and the other half inside financial balance sheets. And now you are standing in front of me, saying you are done with shallow walls and hollow relationships and you want me—flaws, baggage, sarcasm, and all.

So here is my answer:
Yes. I will take you.
But only if you let me say “I told you so” every time your nose flares and you insist I can't eat pani puri from a street vendor.

Love

Rose 🌹

Hi Rose di How are you ?

The review, Its so beautiful especially Jo's reply.

The take me woman part is my favourite too in this update.

Are we eloping? Is that why we are driving out of the city?”

My mind started playing do diwane shahar mein though with jalal's credentials they won't have any problem with finding aashiyana

I love their banter and it's interesting that from her point of view where she doesn't have the context of a murderer at large, jalal does sound a Little bit control freak

The plant is shut down. You won’t see or meet anyone. We don’t even have to get down. You’ll get to see Four Wheels and tick off the top item from your ‘unfinished’ list.

Not only is her wish fulfilled but also at her terms. What a sweetheart he is.

I know what to regard, what to ignore. You don’t have to stop blabbering on my account!”

Tedha jalal makes an appearance

Is it the moon? When did it escape for my hold and descend on earth

I can visualise this scene in my mind and this also reminds me of the Chaudhvin Ka Chand ho scene which had the same magical feel to it. (I tried finding the chapter but couldn't find it)

otherwise why’d the trees bow down in a row like curtsying to an angel?

Such enchanting ambience you create with your words!!

Also love the entire description of Four Wheels!

She beamed, having finally come face to face the sum and substance of her man’s wajud.

Haaye!! What perfect description especially after reading the later part where he calls it his obsession.

from that moment, it became a lifetime slave of the sorceress tipping her head up and giggling under the canopy of moon.

ufff! All my heart 💘

I loved the deep dive in the history of four wheels, and how the Trio came together to make fourwheels the entity it it today and also their different backgrounds and support given by their families.

More so like God’s grace, deep pockets, burnt backs and toiled nights!

Ahaan indeed all factors are equally important!!

One is syndicate money, one is pushtaini money, one is self-made money

This one thing explains so many of his actions as well as his ambitions and workaholic Nature.

League is defined by a person’s character Shekhar bhai, not by his net worth’…”

Jalal's father is a hero!

The fourth wheel of Four Wheels comes from humble beginnings?

You are a wordsmith!! The backstory of how the friends came to be together and prithvi's father with heart of gold. How rare it is to find people like him in real life.

How he missed those full moon nights after a heavy snowfall! White terrains, white buildings, white trees with white rays streaming onto them and deflecting in all directions making everything gleam whiter

Jalal instating her in all parts of his life including his best memories 💘

Once you meet all kinds of superfluous, pretentious, offhanded snobs; once you socialize, patronize, acclimatize, why, even entertain them in our very homes with a buffoon smile, then you’ll see that ‘daunting’ doesn’t even cover it!

Wow!! Interesting how when you see it this way, we can see how us common folks are lot more free to choose with whom to interact and whether we want to interact or not and how to live our life in general. This part is indeed not much talked about.

We will not have many shippers, Jo.

I'm sorry but you do have many shippers jalal

What Sara is to Abdul is what Four Wheels is to him?

How I love the callback to that iconic line

My parents cautioned that marriage needs work but Aliya and I laughed it off.

I was glad I didn’t have to divide my time between family and work, unlike others.

I'm so glad jalal admitted to his own faults and how the whole premise their marriage was based on, was the main problem.

Also interestingly Aliya's father also mentioned how he recognised this fact and that's why he approved the marriage. He really did think of Jalal too as he said.

Also love Alia wasn't painted as a villain. She very obviously has her own faults but so does jalal

Simply when they got married, they were pieces of puzzle put together that worked for a while and when situation changed and they stopped fitting together, they had to separate.

If only I knew how to assure them that the Jalal their daughter is getting is not the Jalal that Aliya got

How simple and how true!!❤️

as long as you zip up all that – I don’t deserve you, I’m out of your league sh*t and take me, woman. The question is… will you?”

This

This dialogue reminds of the dialogue from queen Charlotte of bridgerton series.

I will stand with you between the heavens and the earth. I will tell you where you are. DO YOU LOVE ME?!

Should he have stopped Jodha? Was he too laid back? It’s all too sudden to react but still… what’d Raghu do in such situation? Would he have called her back? Shucks – he has no experience playing this full time father role for a girl – is he mucking it up?’

Ah my heart hurts for saradhi ji... After watching his young brother being such an exemplary parent to his kids and rethinking his actions and then mourning him for himself and mourning him for jodha!!

May be it’s the responsibilities that he had been shouldering since early in life that didn’t make him feel the emptiness of a childless home, as direly as Prameela did.

Ouch the backstory is so tragic!.

That girl had been such a chatterbox and a spitfire, a welcome change from coy girls of the era!

Oh jodha has so much of her mother in her😭❤️

You always have a home Vasu.” His brother would tell his wife. “Home is where we are together.

No wonder then that jodha thought that she has no one and no home....

Where will Raghu and Vasu go? Jodha was their jaan! Isn’t it said that a loving soul that had to abruptly leave will come back as a child in the same family to finish off their karma?!

I have no words 😭

So poignant and heartbreaking

Okay this got out of my hand and is quite long as I quoted way too lines but what divine chapter di! I'm forever in awe at how rich you make all their conversations and their inner lives with all the details.

This chapter was sobering and painful but also in a way this pain felt final like now is the time of letting go and realisation that love always stays with you even when people go.

Thank you so much for the new chapter jhanu di❤️

Hi,

Hope you are well.

Still thinking about Jalal’s ‘take me, woman’ phrase.

All divorce lawyers have to change their jobs if the world has full of our JJs.

Originally posted by: Jeryl

Hi,

Hope you are well.

Still thinking about Jalal’s ‘take me, woman’ phrase.

All divorce lawyers have to change their jobs if the world has full of our JJs.

True True

Originally posted by: Priyaadarshini

Is it the moon? When did it escape for my hold and descend on earth

I can visualise this scene in my mind and this also reminds me of the Chaudhvin Ka Chand ho scene which had the same magical feel to it. (I tried finding the chapter but couldn't find it)

Ye wo chapter hai where his friends are at home for work. After the infamous rickshaw ride 🤣

and Jalal comes to know the meaning of what Jodha said - tvameva sarvam wala

He was supposed to wish her night before 12 or 11 pm 🥰🤩

Chapter 36 Part 1 or 2 ig .. if i remember correctly 🥰

One of my fav parts...him talking to sleeping Jo