FF: Pale Blue Dot Thread 6/19/2025 Chapter 44 Part2 - Page 28

Originally posted by: nushhkiee

Read Goa wala comment and I was like .. Hein? Ye kab hua?

Fir click hua you are commenting for previous chp 🤣

Late lateef madam is catching up... and phir bhi itna chotu sa comment for my 40k worded two parts... what should we do to her Nushkie?

Originally posted by: nushhkiee

One question jo mujhe humesha se puchna tha

Like really. What planet are you from? How can you write like this? From where you imagine all of these? I would like to ask the same thing to Lashy Dii as well .. given I just finished re readin HBAS for the nth time

>> You can always ask Lashy... let me know if you want to personally ask her... she's too busy but I'll find out if she can respond

and imagination often arises from life's experiences... you're still young so it might sound improbable... but wait some more years. You'll be the baap of all of us!

I swear if this was a show.. I’d binge it in one night.. then rewatch it with a notebook just to annotate every Jalal line.

You have this terrifying ability to make a reader feel things they didnt sign up for I come in for some romance and slowburn chemistry and suddenly I’m 30 minutes deep in economic analysis, industrial land acquisition, emotional trauma, and existential questions about ambition and love. Like??? Mam.. I was just trying to relax.. why am I now questioning my life choices?

>> arre... don't question now. Leave that drama for forties I got your hidden complaint behind the compliment too - slow burn romance is what you come for! Got ya girl!

You weave Jalal past mahakatha, business, romance, pain, AND humour… into one coherent addictive story There’s never a throwaway line haan .. beautifully written and placed

>> why just limit to one flavor when we can have it all?

I'm so invested here I tell ya .. Not ony here but in HBAS and NJAPA too coz I cry my heart out when there's there break up scene in NJAPA or Khan Sahib and Heera prison scene ...I keep forgetting these are fictional people. I’m reacting to them like they’re my own friends (or crushes. hello Jalal 😩)

Logging off now before I turn this into a thesis

edited - Also, what's with your grammar? I had to exit IF page and go to google to search the meanings - atleast 15 times

Truth be told, we all pine and whine more about fictional people than real ones... real people are either boring or disappointing... what's your pick?

Originally posted by: nushhkiee

I will reply to your above "what jo is to him" comment tomorrow morning pakka... going to sleep now

But yeah ..Here are few words...I mean these are new to ME

aplomb

delinquent

Castigation

ostentatious

There are more.. like 5 - 6 more

but no issues .. mujhe seekhne mil raha hai 😆 keep using

oh okay... yeah I get you. I used to keep 'dictionary.com' open whenever Lashy used to update.. In some chapters, somewhere in between, I used too much of Thesarus and would pick complicated words but then I felt the essence is getting lost amidst language.. hopefully the vocabulary now is not too much like a 'stone' in a morsel of rice that ruins the experience.

Originally posted by: Sardar001

Love you Jahnavi Dii...

The chapter is splendid . One of the bests .

Not to mention am typing this with dampened cheeks. 🥹🤌❤️

dampened cheeks why re? Is it about Saradhi's reflections? Come here...

Originally posted by: manu_ak

OMG what was this ? Now I'm the one feeling ungrateful for not taking out time last night and sitting and properly putting my thouts into words. Sachi sachi bolna aap ye sab thoughts laate kaha se ho ? Tantrik ho ? Maya jadu aata hai apko ?

>> we all are the same species... at some level we all think the same.. that's where I bring the thoughts from and that's why you connect to them

Agree with the ungrateful part... because I'm shameless and selfish like that

How do you manage to captivate us so so much that everything fades away for those few moments?

You wouldn't believe and I've said it so many times ki now it'll feel sappy but when i say PBD is the solution for so many of my problems, IT REALLY IS.

>> I do believe Manu You didn't have to go all Caps on me I know PBD means a lot to all of you who're still clinging to it even after 11 years and keeping my inspiration in tact. Honestly, I thought I'd never resume after the 4 year gap after chapter 41... but just the 4 of you patiently carried it on your shoulders all those years and made me realize my wrongdoings.

I seriously don't understand!! Do you read minds ? Par vo bhi karne ke liye you need to be here right?

Chalo chodo jo bhi ho.. ab lets drive into the story.(drive hi hai mene koi spelling error nahi kiya.. itni acchi story hai bhai usme kudenge kyun? Iss se accha ek long drive lete hai aur story enjoy karte hai )

>> Madam's pun is back.. should we thank Jodha for that?

“Did uncle and aunty reject me?” She asked, squinting her eyes. “Are we eloping? Is that why we are driving out of the city?”

No one but Jo can bring up such questions instead of enjoying the view 😜

She does have the ability of to make even a frustrated irritated person laugh so heartily. My first heart felt full blown chuckle of the day.

I owe you Di I seriously do. Thankyou ❤️

>> That's nice to hear that it brought your first smile in 24 hours but that's kind of sad too. Laugh more girl! It suits you (I stalked you on Insta)

“I know how to persuade them. And don’t worry about yours either. They’re very sensible people. I’m sure they’ll listen to reason.”

Such unrestrained trust in her parents. In the world where people judge their parents so fast here is our girl believing in them with such ferocity. This shows the upbringing and sense of security she received from them.

>> yeah... well said! And homes should be such trusting and happy places. As future mothers, hope you'll stash away this in your heart and see to it when time comes

And oh my god "the karnaame of Badshaah Jalal Ahmed of Jallad-dom"

They were truly and madly hilarious 😂 😂

One moment I'm laughing and then the next moment I'm like no this is not happening!! But oh yes it did happen and the first thought that came was "unko pata tha hum sab beach sochenge so she thought lets twist it into something more meaningful and valuable"

>> haye! I already hinted at how beach could not be a possible option when Jodha asks before to take her to Mangalore beach- its 3 hours drive each way... Not my fault you ignored the hints

The little nok jhoks between them have full heart.

They are always the best parts of your updates.

>> The sweating I do to think of all those nok jhoks between the sassy queen and the cocky king

And the clipped J has its own different charm.

Its beautiful ❤️

>> hai na... I too like it.

Its awesome

Every thing is to the point and yet so magical.

Hats off to you di.

This is only the first part of my comments. Abhi I've to write more and that i will do tomorrow.

But for now don't think I didn't notice ,

You literally brought the Geeta down in the story. Khup khup aabhar. 🙏

>> Oh if it were up to me, I'll fill the whole chapter with the Gita or Krishna

Signing off

A very sleepy and ready to dive into dreams of Mr J,

Manu ❤️

If you're done dreaming, would love to hear more on the other parts! Till then love ya

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

Take a salute for your time and your love that I can never repay... it almost feels like Krishna and the vraj-vasis! He feels so indebted taking all that love that He couldn't see them in the eye and leaves to Mathura! Same with me... what can I do to payback? Except writing the next one soon!

All good for now Nushkie... how about you? You're always prompt with feedback... so no explanations required

>> That's because I believe it's better to read and review immediately...while I'm still in that moment...fully immersed

arre khul ke haso... kaun rok raha hai?

>> Pitashree Well, it's just my parents...if it were anyone else..they'd probably think I'm crazy...Actually, that HAS happened to me you know. Remember Lashy Dii’s 65-inches OS? I was reading it while travelling Mumbai local.. laughing throughout and people were literally staring at me

Was it too much? I thought he had to be candid to one person that mattered.

>> Yes it was too much .. 'too much' as in thoda emotional ho gaya .. deep you know

Feeding her kisses... such a beautiful way of saying it. you've knack for words, girl!

>> All thanks to YOU! I pick up new words from your FF and end up using them while chatting or even helping my mom with her journal publications… and that makes me feel soooo

Take a salute for your time and your love that I can never repay... it almost feels like Krishna and the vraj-vasis! He feels so indebted taking all that love that He couldn't see them in the eye and leaves to Mathura! Same with me... what can I do to payback? Except writing the next one soon!

>> Arrey nahi Dii! You’ve already given us so much through your writing...it’s we who feel indebted...But if your “repayment” comes in the form of another chapter…toh hum bina interest ke le lenge woh bhi

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

Late lateef madam is catching up... and phir bhi itna chotu sa comment for my 40k worded two parts... what should we do to her Nushkie?

We should escalate the matter to Mr. Saradhi

Court kacheri ke chakkar sudhaar denge unhe

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

Truth be told, we all pine and whine more about fictional people than real ones... real people are either boring or disappointing... what's your pick?

I got your hidden complaint behind the compliment too - slow burn romance is what you come for! Got ya girl!

>> No, I wasn’t complaining at all… like I said, you just have this talent for making even the most boring explanations... like land, port, registration, and all that... actually interesting

Truth be told, we all pine and whine more about fictional people than real ones... real people are either boring or disappointing... what's your pick?

>> Haha same here...fictional all the wayReal people rarely stand a chance…fictional ones just get us and we get them Be it fictional men or fictional people

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

>> That's nice to hear that it brought your first smile in 24 hours but that's kind of sad too. Laugh more girl! It suits you (I stalked you on Insta)

Manu Dii is incredibly mature that way

Thanks to the algorithm, I now have a few Mahabharata and Bhagavad Gita reels in my feed...because she’s liked them

Ahaaa stalking people on Gram Check ur PM I have something to tell you

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

If you're done dreaming, would love to hear more on the other parts! Till then love ya

Aur thoda dreaming baki hai on a serious note, I was reading the chapter again so will post the other part after I complete reading.