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Posted: 6 years ago
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I can think of many others... but really, after everything, if Heera and AMK haven't shown the path of acceptance, who has?
Heera forgave him for being the mentor of Khalil and lying to her despite to see the bigger picture... accepted his past and supported him all through!
Akbar has overlooked the past of his men and supported their present and encouraged a fresh future.
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Who is going to be the Right and who will be Left?

😎 Whattta quote.. saravedi like Chellam says!

Originally posted by: Vmanoh


Good Afternoon P'amma 🤗 A splendid quote on good relationship. 👏👍🏼

Both our Leads relationship with each other survived the turmoil and thrived due to their acceptance of the past - Heera his deeds as Ustaad & AMK her partial eyesight the only 'flaw' even if you can call it that. Their support for each other born out of mutual awe, respect and love, afforded them to overcome the other's past and encourage the future..

This same philosophy was applied by them to their respective clan and as such they enjoyed the fruits of their support not only in the present but will be in the future too. 😊

Omg Vathsykka... I wrote what I wrote before I read your words and we mirror each other!🥳
Answer to your question :

All those who have done Right will all be left,

All those who were wrong will bite the dust!

All the ones who are upright will pass the test,

All the ones who are evil minded will be bust!

Whistle podu! Should put this up on page 1... because of how much power these 4 lines pack

SUPERB QUOTE ON RELATIONSHIPS AUNTY PERSONIFIED BY OUR SAHIB. RIGHT FROM THE START HE ONPY HAD HEERA'S WELFARE IN MIND AND ALL HIS DECISIONS WERE TO WORK TOWARDS THAT AIM

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VATHSY LOVED YOUR QUOTE TOO 👏

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kalgi22



'And even as his body slipped into another realm - a realm unknown - every prideful cell of his body had to admit that for a lone passing moment, the first sentiment he felt was 'relief' from it all.'
'

And Chellam when I read the lines I don't know why I felt mixed emotions..


Originally posted by: kruthik


Lashy, you have beautifully penned down the feelings of chachajaan for HIS son.
'Please... please...'do not make me watch my child die... please do not make me live the last days of my life in abject heartbreak!'

Chachajaan had been with AMK since his childhood. His fear, feelings thinking that AMK would die in the duel is shown beautifully.
Ustaads men showed their loyalty to their master by not willing to serve their husoor though they didn't know ustaad would be alive or not.

😭

Even Mahendar was thinking of what his father would think of him when he loose the duel. A little peace he had finally on his death for what he had done to Durga.

Yes!


Yes... this chapter was a bit of a farewell from one set of characters to another set... (Mahendar to his family, Tejraj to Mahendar, his father whom he never met at the end etc etc)
also a small farewell from us readers to a couple of these characters too...

These characters have been a figment of my imagination and I've spent the part 3 years nurturing them..

So, I know exactly what you both mean... as I put myself in Mahendar's father's shoes (bemoaning a life wasted) as I put myself in Chacha jaan's shoes - unaware of future, it was difficult!

One more thing Kruthi chitti - we have always seen Chacha jaan as a happy-go-lucky man... never seen this 'broken' side to him! That made his grief all the more palpable.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Good afternoon/evening/morning lovely Sahibas and James Banna.🤗

Periyamma, Lashy Sahiba, Chellam, Bindup, Shruthi, Manu, Selvi, Lana, Vathsy,Lavanya, Mitu, Sandy Begum, Bond, Shagun, Rekha, Rashmi, Kruthik,Rupinder, Tanya, Jiya, Muskan and 6Bs.🤗

Congratulations Lashy Sahiba and Baisas ! We have moved on! 🥳

Straight to Chapter 57 and Sahibas you will see when you see me!😳

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Posted: 6 years ago
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OMG!! Somebody pinch me...

Khan Sahib... The Ustaad did it... . .
Lashy di my heart was in my mouth reading his entry ...😭 the poisoned kataar 😲 but he did it.😎..the fight my my... What strategy ⭐️⭐️👏Felt like I was there watching everything and everyone... So real it was it all your magic ⭐️⭐️🤗
Mahendra died...felt little sad, not for him maybe for his family and wife never mind... Khalil's next

The lady in blue veil is she Khan Sahib's mother 😲
OMG ! I am so happy ...
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sabdabhala


UTSAAH HAI, ULLAAS HAI, AAJ SHANKH NAAD HAI
DRARIH SUAR KE ANTH KA YE PRABAL ANUVAAD HAI

(There is excitement, there is joy. The sound of the conch can be heard far and wide. A treacherous swine has met its end, and the sound is a befitting translation)


HAR KISI KO IS SUAR KE KARNAAME YAAD HAIN
GAGAN MEIN EK VEERAANGANA PHIR HUI AABAAD HAI

( Everyone can clearly recall the atrocities committed by this swine. Up in the heavens a brave warrior princess has been resurrected)


EK RIPU NE AAJ CHAKHA KARARI HAAR KA SWAAD HAI
DOOSRE KI BHAYANAK HAAR BAS KUCHH DER BAAD HAI

(One enemy has tasted a huge defeat. We all await the gruesome defeat of the other one, just round the corner)


'HOSLE BULAND HAIN' YE GHAAYAL SINGH KI DAHAAD HAI
HUM SABHI KI PRAARTHANAYEIN, ANEKON AASHIRVAAD HAIN

(A wounded lion roars to convey that his spirit and morale is high. From our side we send his way our innumerable prayers and blessings)


👏⭐️🥳
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Posted: 6 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: karkuzhali


Chapter 57.


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Haikus:

A wonderful one
The chapter fifty seven
Oh my God! My God! ⭐️ 👏

The fight so thrilling
Make Lashy's running comments
Ustaad meets Kunwar!

To know more of this
And the result of the fight
Read the full chapter! 👍🏼

KK


Superb , Patti 👏
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Posted: 6 years ago
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I went back and read these portions from Sandy's review for 56... how befitting!👏 Especially the underlined...
Originally posted by Sandhya.A



The not-so-spiteful guard...naam kya hai unka? Day Dreaming He seems to have garnered a soft spot in everyone's heart...including our leads. Hoping to see him as Ustaad's fourth aide by the end of the ordeal.Embarrassed

his simple gesture of refusing Durga's ring despite realising its sale value - compare him to the foul swine who despite knowing Durga's value and worth, sold her out to the devil.Angry

The roasting process of the swine has begun.Dancing And his conscience ( that went for a holiday when he cornered Heera and humiliated her to appease his ego inspite of knowing that he had orphaned her ) is the first ember. The tyrants always fear the ones they oppressed despite all their acts of bravery and Mahender truly fears the Ustaad. Unlike Khalil he has been raised in a proper family and is familiar with 'truth alone triumphs'. He fears that his treachery will bring about his downfall. He fears Durga's spirit will cause his defeat. He fears Ustaad's shadow too and is not assured despite the fact that the Ustaad is a mere shadow of what he was. He fears the consequences if he lost. His country will lose its heir, prestiege and he will lose his life and credibility. He will , i am sure, collapse at the mere sight of Ustaad when he marches into the arena in his usual smart self. Me waiting waiting for the day.Day Dreaming

Was it like how you'd imagined, Sandy?😊



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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kalgi22

Yay FS already ran away for his life.. 😲
Yay swine is no more.. 🥳
Yay Durga's soul finally is in peace.. 😭
Yay Heera's pride returned. ⭐️
Yay Khalil is end nearby.. 🥳
Yay got to know not so spiteful guard's name... 🥳
And he's twin brother of chota Faizan.. 🥳

Shehzaade is having good time after long. Can we expect 'A change of heart?'

AMK mother making entry.. 😲 😲 and she did something in secret to help AMK? 😲 what's that? 😲 something to do with khalil? Now I'm so excited than ever.. 😲

'And even as his body slipped into another realm - a realm unknown - every prideful cell of his body had to admit that for a lone passing moment, the first sentiment he felt was 'relief' from it all.'
'

And Chellam when I read the lines I don't know why I felt mixed emotions..

And all in all what a mass chapter, Chellam with our mass hero.. the one in millions.. Ustaad! 😎

Sending you Lorry load of hugs and kisses.. ❤️ 🤗

After all she's my Chellam!


Your suda suda reaction... After so long.. What a treat

Agree about mixed feelings about Mahendra... Till the very end I was enjoying his downfall but that line.. It made me
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: karkuzhali

The lady in blue veil?😕

Is it she?😲


Originally posted by: Kalgi22

AMK's mother 😲 😲


Originally posted by: kruthik

Was the lady in blue veil his mother. God.


Hmmm...🤔 wait and watch... 😉

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vmanoh


Another gripping chapter that kept me on the edge of my seat. Lashy even to this date I'm not a fan to watch any fights in a movie and where possible I skip it entirely. But reading this chapter I felt I was strapped to my seat and until I was able to finish it that I would not be able to move. 😳

A doting father's lament of Chachajaan's was very touching. Another is where Heera is being prevented from attending and having to wait it out to know the outcome of the duel. The duel itself was brought to us vividly with your words. You always hold out an ace when you have to get AMK out of trouble & this time it was the wounded Lion's strategy - Superb!!! 👏

Then it was the veiled intro of the lady in the blue veil. Lashy I had a gut feeling you'd bring HER to the arena & you DID 😉. When it stuck me who it was I knew that one of my predictions of the future was going to come true, for you never waste a character's presence without having a solid use for it. I'm already waiting with bated breath to see what the Shehzadi had planned. Last point I want to note that was cleverly executed before the duel is the effect of Tejraj's knotty error.👍🏼

Duel & Mahendar's demise I'll reserve to write about it later. I need to re-read the chapter to grasp the nitty-gritty of it. We finally know the name of the guard & what a fitting one it is - Chota Zayaan.👍🏼

Shehzade was set on getting rid of all three of the dueling warriors. Though he initially doubted the Ustaad will win, now he ought to know that Khalil would also lose and he has already thrown a wrench by ordering AMK's men to report to Huzoor's duty. As customary, you have left us feeling so good on the one hand but on the other on tenterhooks how the finale' will play out from that wonderful mind of yours in this tale of HBAS. Just want you to know that along with those folks in the arena I too want to give a standing ovation to our dear writer for giving us such a thrilling episode.


For all the hard work you did to get us C57 I want to treat you with this 😃:



Same here😆 lovely read Vasthy di 🤗

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