NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 52 - CHAPTER 57 - UPD 28th Jan

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Kalgi22

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Posted: 6 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Vmanoh

Banna (Senior to be 😉 )

Yes he logged off at 199 to make us wait. 😆

So you guessed someone's entry.😉 but I do remember Jahnu made that Guess in very early. 😳

Good night Vathsy! 😳

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@old_charm

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Posted: 6 years ago

#32

Lashy di ur imagination...👏

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Shraddha

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Posted: 6 years ago

#33

Good morning Banjaras and Baisas 🤗

Edited by lashy - 6 years ago

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Shraddha

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Posted: 6 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: cute.manasi
Lashy di ur imagination... 👏

Really? I cannot believe it... I honestly never thought the readers would be interested by the end of the fighting scenes...

Omg omg omg omg... I am so relieved... 🤗 I can't tell you how relieved I am...

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Shraddha

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Posted: 6 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Sandhya.A
Lashy, still awake? 😲
Go sleep.😡 Everything else can wait.

Twice I posted and twice I lost the '4th edited version' to 'Message overlimit'

Extending my staying awake from 2 to 3 last night 😭

Originally posted by: Testmytest
Congrats Lashy dear for the new thread/new home for all of us baisas and banna!! 🤗
I just logged into my system, and saw your post!! 😃

It is really late for you, not sure if you are done with round 4 editing yet. Remember the mantra?

"Don't rush, don't stress"

I know... I didn't rush at all.. which is why 3 am 🤣

Edited by lashy - 6 years ago

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kruthik

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Posted: 6 years ago

#36

Lashy, you have beautifully penned down the feelings of chachajaan for HIS son.

'Please... please...'do not make me watch my child die... please do not make me live the last days of my life in abject heartbreak!'

Chachajaan had been with AMK since his childhood. His fear, feelings thinking that AMK would die in the duel is shown beautifully.

Ustaads men showed their loyalty to their master by not willing to serve their husoor though they didn't know ustaad would be alive or not.

Even Mahendar was thinking of what his father would think of him when he loose the duel. A little peace he had finally on his death for what he had done to Durga.

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Shraddha

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Posted: 6 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

What a Chapter Lashy! 👏
No words to praise you!🤗
Periyamma.

Omg... really? I cannot... I just cannot believe the reactions.. Periyamma when was the last time I felt this pulse from you? T'was during a special chapter...

I thought it'd start dragging since there's no scenes between leads etc ..

Edited and reedited so many times

But yeah I am so so so very happy enthralled and all such adjectives 🤗

Thank you for your blessings!

Edited by lashy - 6 years ago

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RDOLLY7PANNU

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Posted: 6 years ago

#38

What a chapter!! All the time waiting for this chapter various scenarios were crossing the mind but never thought of the superbly enticing,intriguing,and thrilling devised moves.Truly Lashy you have outlashyed this time over. Bravo!! BOUQUETS and Bouquets for your thinking process and your skills at devising the moves. Rupinder[/QUOTE Secondly I'd like to congratulate you for writing so well that the reviews and views of all the baisas, as they are addressed as,are so apt and entertaining that I'm forced to read them again and again and again! Like the wonder quip of KK "handsome;hand-many and handnothing ------hilarious,hilarious!!----AND then the final para the lady in the blue silk veil is she AMK's mother by any chance? To end the chapter, how you have doubled the suspense----Shezaade admiring AMK'S warrior skills and the elimination of the Kunwar but at the same time doubtful about the duel with Khalil. C58 will be much much awaited!! Hope you wont be in a hurry to wrap it off!! Would love to read MORE about the story Lashy. Thanks for the wonderful,amazing and suspenseful chapter thanks for giving an apt name to the NSS guard.Thanks .RUPINDER .

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kruthik

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Posted: 6 years ago

#39

Was SHE the one arranged for the the well wisher' guard to be posted at AMK's cell? It seems that sheshadi knew the the lady in blue veil was AMK's mother. Very well done Lashy, you have brought his mother also in his pathetic needs eagerly expecting their reunion.

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Shraddha

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Posted: 6 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: Vmanoh
CONGRATULATIONS TO ALL ON THE NEW
HOME !!!!!!!! 👏👏🥳🥳
Thanks Lashy for getting us into a new home. 👍🏼

Thank you Chella akka! 🤗

Originally posted by: Sabdabhala

THANKS FOR OUR NEW HOME AUTHOR SAHIBA 👏
🤗

AUNTY LOVELY MORNING MESSAGES 👏 YES WE ARE WAITING WITH BAITED BREATH TO SEE THE BADDIES GETTING VANQUISHED 👏

Hope it lived up to your expectation, Lavanya! 🤗

REKHA WE ARE CURIOUS ABOUT YOUR ABSENCE DEAR 😉 PLEASE REVEAL 😆

Ok... it seems this Rekha's mystical absence has been kicking up a storm... gotta go back to catch up on Suda Suda breaking news! 😉

LETS ALL HAVE A MAGICAL MONDAY 👏