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Posted: 6 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Kuki715



Even axe-gif girl was moved at Mahendar's death? 😲

>>>😒

Because we feel for the Kunwarisa... and Tejraj and a family that could've been... 🤗
Lashy di...you are something else
Had thought about some points but the Ustaad ones... Ufff👏👏

Really? ☺️

Sandy di...your views are always class apart 👏👏

Yes... she is a class apart!

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Posted: 6 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: Kalgi22



Sending you Lorry load of hugs and kisses.. ❤️ 🤗

After all she's my Chellam!


Omg after so long...

'Chhheeelll aaammm' Running towards Chellam in slo-mo
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Posted: 6 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: lashy


Sandy did you add these points after reading the one I wrote just above yours? 😆

J/K -🤗 see what I've written... it's the same! Mwah!



I made a few additions and corrections thrice,( each after proving i'm not a robot...😡) i see that we have both posted the edited post at the same minute.😆

Am off to read other reviews now.

And what is J/K?🤔 Jammu and Kashmir?😆 Having seen Uri yesterday that was the first expansion that came to my mind. 😆 Btw, thanks for the favourable review Lavanya, else i would have given it a slip. A good one-time-watch.
Edited by Sandhya.A - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: Sandhya.A


I made a few additions and corrections thrice,( each after proving i'm not a robot...😡)

India Forum doesn't doubt my loyalty when I post from laptop.. the minute, I post from a phone, I'm doubted left right and centre! 😒 Having to prove that I know traffic cones, and street crossings and shop fronts and cars and bicycles and whatnot!

I see that we have both posted the edited post at the same minute.😆

>>> Yeah! 😆

Am off to read other reviews now.

And what is J/K?🤔 Jammu and Kashmir?😆 Having seen Uri yesterday that was the first expansion that came to my mind. 😆 Btw, thanks for the favourable review Lavanya, else i would have given it a slip. A good one-time-watch.

J&K would be Jammu and Kashmir.
In e-lingo, J/k is just kidding! 😆

Yeah.. I'm hearing a lot about Uri.. will watch it when it comes on Amazon prime or Netflix...
I heard a lot about Parmanu - but was sorely disappointed. Turned out to be such a cheesy version of the whole Pokhran programme, with cliched dialogues and a typical vendetta to push!

On the other hand, Raazi (by Alia Bhatt) was so muted and a class apart!
(Both patriotic movies)
Let's see how Uri is!😊

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Posted: 6 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: Kuki715

Interested?! 😲 you don't know about our love story ☺️😲
Have you read TIP😳



Originally posted by: James12

oh my 😲so you are the one 😆



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Originally posted by: James12

It was instead of me being easy tough for me because😆
i am not very much acquainted with the Style of Dress
at the historic era of India😊 still I give a try to it hopefully
it do come as good 😊


Good on you for trying, James! 👍🏼
Edited by lashy - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#66

No, no Lashy Sahiba,you took these many days to give us such a short update! Not fair, not fair at all!😭

Took an hour to finish it. How long was it by the way? It was really too short! Can you please make a note of the length of an update at the end- would make an interesting titbit info.😊

The blue-veiled lady is AMK's mother ! 😲And what manoeuvre did she carry out to aid her son?😲

What a duel, Lashy Sahiba!👏 👏 👏

Yes, our hearts couldn't have borne it had both duels been fought in this update, Sahiba.😊

This one alone had us hyperventilating and our blood levels hitting the roof!👏

The excellent cat and mouse game the wounded lion played to slaughter his prey!👏

Every whoosh and clang- such sweet music to our ears and the final thrust into the core of Mahendar's heart- God!👍🏼

RIP, Mahendar! For now, we are at peace ,too, knowing the great Ustaad has vanquished one villain. Another has just stepped in to be dealt a similar fate.

You named the NSS!

LASHY SAHIBA! LASHY SAHIBA! LASHY SAHIBA! LASHY SAHIBA! 👏 👏 👏 👏

The same honour has to be bestowed on you, darling author, for this action-packed , nail-biting chapter! 👏 👏 👏 👏

Next, 8 pages of HW here and some on the previous thread-all after dinner!

Edited by roseraja1915 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: Vmanoh

Originally posted by lashy

Quote-

"Maybe when we face a tragedy, someone, somewhere is preventing a bigger tragedy from happening."
Kamand Kojouri


What does this quote signify? 😊
Lashy - Are you looking for us identify a corresponding scene in HBAS? 😕


Yes... I was Vathsykka! In the flurry of getting the chapter ready, I think I might have missed someone post something about this..

But, my thought was instantly Heera's mindset when she felt she was struck by tragedy when she was forced to wed Akbar... she hated him for it...
But, it was because of being forced to wed him, because of coming under his wing that a greater tragedy was prevented ... and that she is safe, her Parnagarh is safe and her people are safe
Of course, everything else in between added benefit! 😉
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Posted: 6 years ago
#68
Fantastic buildup to the Duel... culminating in the end of One Evil...
Awesome... Lashy👏👏
The overall Fear... of everyone related to Akbar...
Chachajaan's pain for his son, 😭worries of their people (combined ), Heera's panic and fear for her Husband.😭... All dissipated slowly just like how the fight played out...😳

I'm overjoyed ... right from when the Ustaad first defended with that CLANG...🥳
And more curious about the blue veiled lady...


.whatever I say is less... so have gotten a bunch of cute fellows to join me... in singing your praises...😉


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Posted: 6 years ago
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Chapter 57

'Please... please...' he buried his palms into his grey hair

do not make me watch my child die... please do not

make me live the last days of my life in abject heartbreak!'

Don't worry old men Khan is tough nut to get crack by that

Hand-nothing and Satan 😉 But i understand your plea

and be ware Jesus is very merciful he won't let his kids suffer

more then they already did 😊 but do pray as it's gonna work as

strong shield for him in the form of blessing by Jesus 😃


'Never...' hissed Sayyid and Azeez

'I'm not going to serve a master who's tortured

my Sahib with no mercy!'

'Nor will I'

Oh how much I like Sayyid and Azeez even all Khan men

but isn't what Mughal Prince fear the same 😆 that Khan men work for

Khan their loyalty lie with Khan and as Khan loyalty lie with him

they eventually work for him 😉 how can he think after what he done to

Khan his men will work for him is he lost the sense of using brain 😆

'Will Akbar live?'

'Chacha jaan...'

'Will Akbar live?'
'We have done all we can'
'It is up to HIM now! Up to Khuda'

oh my am I reading correct 😲he refused food 😒

his love for Khan should never be questioned

uff Old men you are giving everyone panic attack don't

ask such a question which they already dreaded to hear

and answer 😊because even they don't know what's going

to happen😒 but line spoken by Ibrahim make me smile a bit

as this is what my dad always say 😉when I go for exam do

and leave rest on him and as a kid I often ask if I am the

one who is going to do best then how can i left my result

on someone else won't he get my reward as well 😆

Nevertheless here his line was exactly like this we had done
all we could do and rest is on hand of Jesus now 😳

'Make peace? How?' How would anyone in her place
ever make peace? It wasn't humanly possible, and she
was no saint.
I wish you were😒 so that you could be in peace for a while 😊
but even if you are no saint 😳then to you possess the most
pure soul which have big heart uff heart filled with worry
for it's owner And mind filled with lot of dreadful queries how
can a person be in peace either 😒 but don't think Your chief maid won't
understand😊 she understand you better then any of your people 😊
but she is just trying to make you feel good admit success is far
from her reach as it's impossible to be in peace in such a situation 😒

'Heera!''You must be brave... you came this far...
then why aren't you holding onto your faith...

Easy to say Gauri hard to work on 🤓when the two sharp
edge sword is after your love how can a person be not afraid 😒
after suffering this much how can a person faith won't get shake on
Him 😒
Prayer and faith... cannot give up yet... must have faith
... faith that my Sahib will win...

A warrior never give up either even when he know
defeat is certain 😉 because when the victory is
certain even coward can win 😉so you can't give up either
Harka Sahiba 😳because victory is reserved for those who
are willing to pay the price and you already did still doing 😳


Satan 🤢
after having lost an arm, he seemed to have lost his
identity too - much like a stump that served no great
purpose to its tree.
mind having him hacked off from his framework today,
once and for all

Hand-nothing 🐷

The most aggravating thorn of the lot - a powerful Hindu

fanatic with traitorous ambitions - he would give anything

just to witness this thorn be publicly snapped in two!

my my This Mughal Prince is such complicated yet cool men 😆

Because unlike others he is seems to be always focused on his

Goal 😉he know making victory your slave is nothing but retaining

is👍🏼 and just like you can't get victory without help of other same goes

on the matter of retaining it 😉

'Only time would tell'


This line held such a power to make me always thoughtful

about my own action 😊even when I mount on my bike and

waited for signal to go on with the race 😉even when I get in

exam hall and held my pen to wrote my answer 😉 Jesus Christ

time will tell why always time why not our action but again

it's the hidden massage fate can't be discovered by

anyone as it's only in his hands what future store for

us most importantly time 😉

'It is because of those questions that I would not be able
meet him. Not until I have won back my name and honor'

wait whatt 😲you said Name and Honor🤣 it's seems a joke of century
like really hand-nothing the only name i given you got change
into hand-nothing 😡and you think you are going to get anything
so far you going to end is death bed for yourself that to at khan
feet mercilessly 🤓 forget about Honor and name Shithead 😡

Granted, he was about to fight an ailing sufferer, rather
than a mentor of warriors! Granted, the one now facing
him was half-the-man he used to once be. Granted, if
things went to plan, it should be his easiest victory in
battle yet.

Doesn't matter you underestimate him now or not😡 you
are going to be under six feet ground😉 soon so brace
yourself Hand nothing 😡at the end you did got something
that to at Khan hands 😉

'Dead... will die soon... almost dead'

It's seems this line suited on these evil Villain the most😆
dead by Honor power fame gonna die by heart as it's almost
dead by the nightmare he got braced at the form Of Durga Sahiba⭐️
arrival in his dream 😆 Satan dead by everything either it's hand sanity or
freedom gonna die by body as well 😆

Matching the thoughts of the Prince of Manswar, were the
shades of dilemma darkening the expressions of the Mughal
Prince too.

They are prince so their view got to be match for few
instance as surely they won't never even in wildest
dream think to underestimate their opponent nor they
will be blind eye to the present situation 😆after whatever
happen back it was always Khan spirit and physical strength
that made him what he is today isn't is the very reason why
Mughal prince used worse weapon to whip him mercilessly 40
times 😡

'Then, HOW?' Yes, the man always had the resolve of a lion.

But how was it that his body could be tougher than a lion's

hide too? 'Darn you... Akbar!'

my my this 🤣 🤣 🤣 Jesus it's worth reading and

imagining his reaction and expression 🤣

How would he be able to face two able warriors on his feet,

when it seemed the muscles of his legs were towing

behind, struggling to keep up with his body?

my my There two people are already at the edge of losing

their left over sanity with the very arrival of Khan and sight

or him walking and here such a well wisher his people are

worried about his condition 😒 but again this how people are who love

you and wish for the best for you 😳 I so feel for them 😊

'Have you seen how a wounded lion defends himself

from other predators?'

I did 😆 he let his opponent attack on him and be in defensive mode

till they get tired and when they did he strike on them and get to make

Victory it's slave 😉but I watch it on TV 😒 I don't think they had TV

at that era but again they need no TV when they themselves

got a pleasure of going on hunting to bad we can't go on

hunting as it's illegal 😒 anyway leaving this Tv aside I know

who he is 😉it's must be not so spiteful Guard 😆 Lashy sis if you

didn't reveal his name in this then 🤓 But i like the way how Azeez brain

got in active Curiosity mode of who the Youth can be 😉 I bet he must be

thinking is he my long lost twin or something😆

'Oh Lord... here we go again!' cringed the Shehzaade

through a yawn - 'What are you doing, Akbar?'

And here I way under the impression he may got what

his men planned to do so😆 nevertheless he know Khan is doing something

unlike Hand nothing who think Khan is doing nothing 😆it's better

he don't 😆oh my poor Prince got bore so soon and here we are enjoying

Hand nothing Frustration 😆

'Think you're the only one who can act?'

Mahendar 'Cannot fight anymore, Ustaad? Accept defeat...

surrender at my feet and I shall make it quick!'

not at all before you none can think that only they can

act As you are the one who fooled everyone anf got in trap

of death like this by your own arrogance and greed😡

Dare you tell him to surrender as at the end you will be the one

whimpering in pain try every trick yo have under you sleeve but

don't expect victory to be at your feet 😡

'Surrender?''I was only warming up!'

😎of course you were warming up😆 by giving everyone panic attack 😡

Come on Khan everyone already got enough attack it;s better you end

it now attack more mercilessly on him and torture him to no extend


'You... you... you do not deserve a victory...'

Say the one who deserve nothing huh Rot in hell 🤢

still going to get death 😡

'After how you let your woman suffer a million deaths

worse than what you are about to?'

not his😡 I hate this😡 she was never his not when she
was alive nor when she died she never ever can be refer as his 😡
and angel of light⭐️ can't belong to evil one 😡

Somewhere out there was his father watching.
oh damn just die😡 already don't think about your Father😡
it's make me feel bad for your end when you mention about him 😒
he may get another son I mean in the form of Tejraj to fill your place 😉

'This one is for you, my Heera!' With a sure single thrust, he cracked the armour - before its tip drilled its definite way down, into the skin of the prince's chest.
yesterday I had a party for no reason 😆today
it's really call celebration🥳 to good bravo 😃
what a writing skills 👏 Lashy sis you ruled it 👏

the first sentiment he felt was 'relief' from it all.

😡 i am not happy with this relief😡 because at the end he got free

from everything call me Sadist or whatever but he deserve more then

this death 😡

'You kept your word, Khan Sahib... you stood... you
fought with pride... and you remained my prop against
life's battles'

yup he did 😃and it's all for you😉 it's all for to get justice😳
it's entirely solely for Durga Sahiba ⭐️sacrificed and
your peoples 😊 and of course he is being Victorious warrior😎

he'll surely defeat the one-armed Khalil too... he did it

once... he'll do it again... he will!'

He will for sure😃 but Satan🤢 being one armed

then to he shouldn't be underestimated he is weak

Coward but wicked 😡 I can bet as soon he will know khan

won and he have to face him he will pull some trick

for getting out of the grave of death that evil jerk can go to

any extend 😡 he play to win fair unfair never bother him 😡

'I despise the Kunwar of Manswar with vehemence...

which is why I enjoyed the game and its outcome!'

Come on come with some better excuse men I expected better

from you on this result of battle 😆 admit you liked how your men

won admit you are proud of him even after getting whipped by you

admire him at how skillfully he fulfill your unasked wish with his own 😉

oh men 😆 I can bet it's just start at the end you will admit

you had no grudges in Heart against khan anymore 😉

I have this feeling from start of update but now i am

having expectation on this matter 😳 like Khan is having

a battle with villains this men is fighting with his own

Inner' Demons and like khan winning the battle he will

over power on his demons to and the outcome can be expected

best way in positive light 😊

'Akbar might have done it once... but, there's still

Khalil to face!'

yup indeed and the most wicked soul I might add no doubt like

everyone even I am assure he will defeat that Satan 😉

YES, he did it! I told you he would, didn't I?'

really 😲when you did as far as I know you just said about

watching lion way of defending himself and defeating his

predators 😉never said he will win liar liar pant on fire

taking credit of some other fortune teller huh 😆

No, he might not be unwelcome here. But, he wasn't

yet fully welcome either.

Brace yourself men's he will be the best new men in your

group soon😉 he now my favorite one after Azeez 😆

and he is worth of being in my like list 😉

'I told you - THAT is how a wounded lion defends

himself... by tiring his enemies out first!'

ya that you did 😉 so in a way you had predicted about his victory 😃

to good 👏
Well... go on... tell us your name then!'

Thanks Azeez for asking this Question 😃 I was having same question in
mind but not from now but from so long time 😉

'Chota Zayaan... or Chota as people call me'

Chota Zayan my😲 it's so similar name to Chota Faizan 😃
Azeez Brother whom they lost I can see someone fainting
in disbelief now 😆 Oh Lashy sis what a name you got for him 👏


'Ch... Ch...' was all Azeez managed to follow-up with,
when his message ended up fizzling into stutters of
disbelief.

Alright not fainting but stutter in disbelief for sure 😆

she let go of the Taveez from her clutches.

'No sign yet...'

who are you 🤔and for what sign you are looking for 🤔

Update wise you had a blast😉 truly worth waiting 👏👏
But seize of update 🤔
we are disappoint badly 😒
we want more and more as the heart beg for more 😒
next update should be before i get back in India 😉
and i will be back on 20 Feb so be a good Sis to us and
start working on update 😉



Edited by James12 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Good Evening 🤗 Grandma, Lashy sis, Lav sis,
Rekha sis , Mitu, Selvi, Bindup, Sandy, Kawsi ,Vathsy,
Kuki, Rose, Manasi and everyone 🤗🤗 🤗

🥳Congratulation for New Home as well everyone 🤗


All the while from start to end
this was my reaction But do I need to tell Lashy sis I hate
the end scene 😒as it's always make me come out of my dream 😡
of such a marvelous update why why I find it short 😒

Maybe i wanted both of their end in this update only🤔 or maybe
I wanted more torture on him that's why🤔 but most importantly
i am sure as Hell i wish for Harka Sahiba to be present and watch
entire end of Hand-nothing 😉instead of getting Late commentary 😒
damn that, Hand-nothing got defeated two time at the hand of Khan and
Harka Sahiba couldn't get to watch huh 😡

Satan 😡you are the only one left 😉 as Old egghead😡 run away 😆

Chota faizan or shall I say Chota Zayan 😉 Now one more good come and
that is now maybe Azeez won't miss much His lost bro Chota Faizan 😊
of course none can take his place still Chota Zayan will be having place
of his own in Khan men group 😉

Lashy sis you seems to love making us curious always about some other😆
before it was Chota Zayan now this blue veil lady I am least interested in her
if she turn out to be evil biological mother 😡of Khan but I will be glad if she is
someone else 😊 and reason you may know as like That evil god parents of
Harka Sahiba I have no feeling for her either as both were selfish self centered 😡

maybe one of the victim of both Satan and Hand-nothing 😉
who will cherish each moment of their merciless worse defeat 🤓

but but but I wish for more torture on Hand-nothing nevertheless you
didn't disappoint me by action packed update 👏👏

Now what next after watching death of Hand nothing we are sure as hell
Satan is going to his rightful place beside hand-nothing as well😆
but but you aren't going to let us go without questions of ours do you 😉
so you got to make me curious more but in a good way 😉
and as I am aware how you love to rub your ever so favorite line on us
and that is - wait and watch I am not going to ask either 😆

Leaving aside all the hate and disappointment from Hand-nothing I felt tiny
bit bad for the king his father I have no feeling for them but I can't help but
felt bad It's the worse any parents can suffer I know I know I always wanted them
to feel the pain after what they did with Harka Sahiba Still it's give me no pleasure
either to get them bear the worse pain any parents could bear in his life 😒
But only for his father I am feeling this way and a bit for his wife dare
anyone think I pity on his mother 😡

at last leaving this as well I ❤️ you for serving such a action packed update 😃
Hat's off to you for writing this marvelously 👏not for second i blink my eye 😉
when I was reading the fight part 😆I read re-read at least two time getting huge
pleasure by the way Hand-nothing life got end

already can't wait for next 😳 as it's now Satan turn to be dead meat 😆
do continue soon 😉 please take care as well 🤗you got to sleep late i don't
know why you people neg-elate your health like this🤔 when you all know
health come first 😒It's unforgivable as well by my side 🤓

Edited by James12 - 6 years ago

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