NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 52 - CHAPTER 57 - UPD 28th Jan - Page 3

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

The lady in blue veil? 😕

Is it she?😲

Yay swine is no more.. 🥳

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Chapter 57.

Haikus:

A wonderful one

The chapter fifty seven

Oh my God! My God! ⭐️ 👏

The fight so thrilling

Make Lashy's running comments

Ustaad meets Kunwar!

To know more of this

And the result of the fight

Read the full chapter! 👍🏼

KK

Another gripping chapter that kept me on the edge of my seat. Lashy even to this date I'm not a fan to watch any fights in a movie and where possible I skip it entirely. But reading this chapter I felt I was strapped to my seat and until I was able to finish it that I would not be able to move. 😳

A doting father's lament of Chachajaan's was very touching. Another is where Heera is being prevented from attending and having to wait it out to know the outcome of the duel. The duel itself was brought to us vividly with your words. You always hold out an ace when you have to get AMK out of trouble & this time it was the wounded Lion's strategy - Superb!!! 👏

Then it was the veiled intro of the lady in the blue veil. Lashy I had a gut feeling you'd bring HER to the arena & you DID 😉. When it stuck me who it was I knew that one of my predictions of the future was going to come true, for you never waste a character's presence without having a solid use for it. I'm already waiting with bated breath to see what the Shehzadi had planned. Last point I want to note that was cleverly executed before the duel is the effect of Tejraj's knotty error.👍🏼

Duel & Mahendar's demise I'll reserve to write about it later. I need to re-read the chapter to grasp the nitty-gritty of it. We finally know the name of the guard & what a fitting one it is - Chota Zayaan.👍🏼

Shehzade was set on getting rid of all three of the dueling warriors. Though he initially doubted the Ustaad will win, now he ought to know that Khalil would also lose and he has already thrown a wrench by ordering AMK's men to report to Huzoor's duty. As customary, you have left us feeling so good on the one hand but on the other on tenterhooks how the finale' will play out from that wonderful mind of yours in this tale of HBAS. Just want you to know that along with those folks in the arena I too want to give a standing ovation to our dear writer for giving us such a thrilling episode.

For all the hard work you did to get us C57 I want to treat you with this 😃:

Originally posted by: Sabdabhala

UTSAAH HAI, ULLAAS HAI, AAJ SHANKH NAAD HAI

DRARIH SUAR KE ANTH KA YE PRABAL ANUVAAD HAI

(There is excitement, there is joy. The sound of the conch can be heard far and wide. A treacherous swine has met its end, and the sound is a befitting translation)

HAR KISI KO IS SUAR KE KARNAAME YAAD HAIN

GAGAN MEIN EK VEERAANGANA PHIR HUI AABAAD HAI

( Everyone can clearly recall the atrocities committed by this swine. Up in the heavens a brave warrior princess has been resurrected)

EK RIPU NE AAJ CHAKHA KARARI HAAR KA SWAAD HAI

DOOSRE KI BHAYANAK HAAR BAS KUCHH DER BAAD HAI

(One enemy has tasted a huge defeat. We all await the gruesome defeat of the other one, just round the corner)

'HOSLE BULAND HAIN' YE GHAAYAL SINGH KI DAHAAD HAI

HUM SABHI KI PRAARTHANAYEIN, ANEKON AASHIRVAAD HAIN

(A wounded lion roars to convey that his spirit and morale is high. From our side we send his way our innumerable prayers and blessings)

Originally posted by: lashy

What a chapter!! All the time waiting for this chapter various scenarios were crossing the mind but never thought of the superbly enticing,intriguing,and thrilling devised moves.Truly Lashy you have outlashyed this time over. Bravo!! BOUQUETS and Bouquets for your thinking process and your skills at devising the moves. Rupinder