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There is really something wrong with
the site Or maybe I am wrong on my way
but my post are getting deleted
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anyway I don't wish to get
restriction tomorrow just for ten
post so I am going to reserve the place
here for my Post hope you don't mind Lashy sis

Already I am done with few chapters and i was
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Chapter 19

Their glassy eyes came alive under the light of the moon -
alive with a cold flash of carnivorous spite as they glared
at his tall figure. He returned their glares with the same
intensity - his dark eyes arrogant and dauntless.

What a Daring guys you are Khan such adventure
lover not bad buddy😉 and woo men even So called
member of Forest to know you are danger for them
so they to get to retreat on there move 😉

the forests were his preferred haunt for a 'breath of fresh air'
on many-a-sleepless night. The sport kept his mind occupied,
the practice kept his skills sharp. And unlike other warriors
who used sand pits and fancy grounds to work-out, he liked
using the forests as his arena - to train his students sometimes,
but mostly for his own practice.

Using such a place which is entirely owned by Deadly
dangerous creature as his own practice arena
spoke what a Daring fearless guys you are Khan this is
so intriguing and Remarkable 😉

'She has to go... as far away from here, and from me as possible!'
even if it will going to hurt you pull you back
to darkness like you were in for all your life till now if you
are still firm on this for her good then hat's of to you men👏

he had taken her in his arms. He had touched her. And he
knew that for a chaste woman like the Sahiba, it meant far
more than any promise would mean - she would not let herself
be touched by another man hereafter.

yaa you are very much right here khan a dignified girl like Harka Sahiba
for whom pride honor moral mean everything will never be going to think about
anyone after getting so open to one men letting him be in her heart
And that's make Situation more difficult and Intriguing Altogether.😉

he would lose the Shehzaade's trust. Then, there would be
nothing to stop all his enemies from collectively setting upon
him. And if he was to die, there would be no one to protect
HER from his rivals. Especially from the likes of Khalil -
who would derive unimaginable sadistic pleasure in capturing,
enslaving and tormenting her, purely because she was the
wife of Ustaad!

If if that Satan khalil dare to caste his evil dirty eye on
Harka Sahiba that he will be send to hell by my for sure
aah how much despise the very name of him to urgh😡

woo even khan thought to get married with Harka sahiba
for her and for his own good to as which men will not
like to get his love in his life for forever so here his own
unsaid desire to noticed then 😉

but my my what a para it is the men who don't fear even
his own death is afraid for the first time that to by the
consequence of his very action which will from his view
going to very much against his love seems so sensible😉
yet it's seems unknowingly Harka Sahiba is becoming his
weakness

once his ugly reality was disclosed, not only would she despise
him, she would despise her own fate too. Thus bringing him
to another painful realization - he had neither the heart to
devastate her life with another massive betrayal, nor the spirit
to withstand hatred from a pair of hazel eyes that'd always
admired him so far.

Jesus Christ how the hell on earth i get to forget this😲
or shall I say get ignorant about this 😲
damn it's going to be very hurtful once Harka Sahiba
for to know the real identity of Khan
oh Jesus don't know how they both going to be
together 😕the more this thought make me uneasy that the journey
of both is not going to be peaceful it's intrigued me to no end
either to know how rough tough the path will going to be😉

He would have to spurn her in such a way that she'd never be
tempted to look back. It wasn't fair - but it was the only option
that might help her move on.

And it's going to hurt you ten fold more then it will going to
hurt Harka Sahiba Mr khan but if you get to do it then
again hat's of to you👏 as no one get to do it in real either
pushing your love your only hope away for there own good
by your very hand is not an easy job but you are an expectation
here Mr khan 😉

'But you've already shown your gratitude by saving his life...
isn't that enough? Why meet him again?' She'd tried explaining. However, the only answer Heera had given was 'All the more
reason I have to meet him, Gauri... once...'

Gauri Question is quite valid here😉but if only she knew
what occur at the canal place after she left to fetch for help
the n she may knew how important it's for Harka Sahiba
to meet Khan before leaving

A reflection that spoke volumes, meant to remind her of
who she truly was - Harka Bai, daughter of esteemed
Mansabdar Late Jagat Prasad Singh. Sister of the illustrious
Durga Bai. Mistress of all of Parnagarh and its 400 families.
And most importantly, a reminder that she was a Rajput woman.

well here Harka Sahiba needn't to Get remind of this by anyone
what she is what and how further she can go with her limits
as she is wise smart enough to be in her limit always😊
she know herself even if she wish and try hard then to she can't
forget her identity as a noble Rajput women no matter what
but it's seems at the time when emotions are over powering
on her it's quite sensible to get a bit reminder here for now😉

'I heard you wanted to meet me... personally...' Akbar turned
around, to face her 'something important to discuss, Sahiba?''

But this message could've been sent this through your
guards, Sahiba...' he suggested, tying his hand behind
his back 'why the need to arrange a private meeting for this...
the inconvenience could have been avoided, could it not?'

okay Lashy sis even I know it going to come and he will
act like this i ma pissed on him for his rudeness here 😡
because it's hurting Harka Sahiba more now
inconvenience like really Khan😡 uff lashy sis
even I know he don't mean this but it's
quite hurtful for Harka Sahiba here for sure and that's
pissing me off huh😡
there are more ways to get done with this but he😡
Anyway seems like pain is quite cool friend of
both Harka Sahiba and Khan that's why they always
go through pain

HAD expected, was a simple acknowledgement of what'd
happened yesterday and the days before. She'd hoped to
see him mirror her feelings. She'd hoped for some form
of reciprocation.

oh that's bad very bad as her all hopes go in drain
here because she couldn't get what she had expected to
A loss of faith. Of trust. Of heart. Of spirit. Of happiness. The
only element she hadn't lost so far, was a few fragments of
self-respect - which she would strive to preserve.

And this make me always admire this you Harka
Sahiba no matter what you don't let your guard down much😉
you ruled it here Girl Must say if she had got broken before
Khan now then i may had didn't like it as that's I don't
expect to see so thank you Lashy sis for not disappointing me
here on this very issue🤗

'I'm sorry Sahiba... for what I've done...'

He paused thereon, retracting his palm. The mellow haze upon

his expressions dissolved. His brows stiffened 'and sorry for

what I'm about to do...'

I knew it men you didn't meant what you spoken or act like but
now your guilt or unspoken apology hardly going
to make difference or shall I say mean anything as Harka
Sahiba is going with not so pleased note

'Just because I haven't been defeated till today, doesn't make me invincible. If someday, somewhere, my life was taken... who's
going to protect her from the likes of Khalil?

poor khan I hate to admit but you are so sensible on your
view here and that's what making me not to hate you for your
very action with Harka Sahiba yaa I didn't like that but let it be

'Besides... I cannot... should not... and WILL NOT be unfaithful
towards our Huzoor beyond this!'

And that's fair as well for sure Khan I would been got so angry
if he thought to go against M-Prince to after all it will be so wrong
with that so called moron to already the Satan like Khalil are
with him to pull him to his destruction if a wise person like you left
his side then it will be more bad but yaa if he himself push Khan
from him then his action and decision will be fair for me if then he
decide to go against him 😉
'I envision my future, just like how my present is... alone... so that
I don't have to constantly worry about someone's safety... so that
I never face such dilemmas in future... and can continue being the
best at my job!'

alright even I know it's serious conversation but But I couldn't help
laughed at this this how we all Single people think about
no lover no trouble no issue 🤣 go with the flow of life and
always have fun with friends but as soon we got someone
it's go in drain a bit 🤣 anyways it wasn't very cool to see
how khan is so firm on his view here to be single as he was all
way along in His life isn't like he don't wish to be with someone
it's just he left with no option actually so it's quite sensible
point he had here for sure

'Did I search for hope where there was none?'
'Then, did he deceive me, by leading me on?'

no you didn't misread him and neither he deceived or he did
but don't think this way Harka Sahiba it's just fate is not being
favorable to you for now I am sure the best is yet to come😉

'Maybe fate?' After all, fate had been unfairly targeting
her quite a lot, of late 'But, why me jiji? Why me repeatedly?'
you are strong that's why Fate is testing you how far you can
go through if you get to overcome this gracefully then the best
is yet to come for you 😉 I am very much hopeful here on this part😊


Another remarkable end of chapter😊 and woo it's end of part
one as well not bad Lashy sis😉 you had done praiseworthy job👏
in entire part one from starting to till now 👍🏼
from starting to till here I was very much intrigued by characters
and plot of story but what entertain me the most is
you Had done wonderful job is narration of your plot putting your
100 percent effort in giving detail of each action emotions place
lines and surrounding and I may had missed to praise but you
had used pics for updates to which was more wonderful 👏
well done lashy sis it's best novel for me for sure 😉
And even after getting done with first part I am in no mood to
left it before finishing this today but for now i have to
will be back here on night time for sure with my views
on your excellent job 😉

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Chapter 20
'And, you've been going behind my back too... I heard your
men assassinated one of his... so... dare NOT question my
decisions!'

'Give him a few days and he'll have news to bring... besides,
he is your mentor... show him respect...'

not bad M-Prince you did quite fine job here by shutting
this Satan good going😉 but I don't think any good about
you still you were in my bad book and you are and you will be😡
more ever whom you are saying to give respect to other I am sure
as myself this Satan don't even know what the word respect
mean huh 😡 so you are wasting time here on this Shit head guy
men 😡
'Then...' The prince raised his brows in disdain 'then, we'll see...'

Lashy sis do this prince have mind or not I mean really
it's seems so easy to make him get to change his view about
his own men that to by Shit head Satan like Khalil😡
I hate these two allot 😡

'Ma Bhavani will punish those horrible men responsible
for this state of ours today... Khalil... Shehzaade... and
everyone else who's helping them...'
yes men they will be punished for sure but how when
that time will decide but I am looking forward to this
as well I so wish to see them getting punish 😡

*Ahem* Charanjith spontaneously cleared his throat,
about to interrupt the hateful remarks.

but why men either you seems not comfortable with
these remark or somehow you seems related to this to
It's not liker this Old Doc was saying anything against you😕

Samarth Singh immediately took over 'If you were short of
helping hands, you must have let us know, kakasa...'

this name Well Lashy sis who he is till now there was no
men by this name taken entry is he another Stranger
Spy of M-Prince or R-Prince because Harka Sahiba didn't
send any massage back to Panargharh about herself 😕

'moving cupboards... heaving trunks... rearranging chests...
you both accomplished more than what 10 other men
could've done!'

hmm this guys seems quite powerful Must say then and very
helpful as well but who he is but after khan this is going to be
another intriguing person for me now let's see who he is 😉

that they were here to finish a task, which they had to wrap
up, as early as possible.
. And definitely not here to bond with ailing children.
task so these two are another grey people entry huh 😡
and by this line it make me think these two are definitely
not on the task which is not on favor of Harka Sahiba
'I... I... am sorry for troubling you again...' an abashed kaka
flashed half his teeth 'but may I have another one of our Maharaj's
laddus? You see... I... I don't know when I'd get to taste them
again... and...'

'By the way... I... I wanted to give you this... Maharaj
kakasa's laddus... the maids had mentioned that you'd
enjoyed them during the feast...'
Khan you you disguise and visit Panargharh to get royal scroll
did't you 😡 damn you but again there is nothing to blame you
for as it's your job if you didn't get Royal scroll to give that fool
M-Prince there are chance that he will give the task to That Satan
Khalil which will be more troublesome for Harka Sahiba which
no way in hell I want to see but did i forget to say i like this
name to must say you are quite cool in name to Lashy sis 😉

But gaining entry into the townspeople's hearts had been
possible only when they recognized the pouch in his hand.
and even if it's your task and way to get in I don't appreciate
this no way in hell I hate you for this you used Harka Sahiba gift
to get done with your task and you will be using her own
people to 😡 how the hell on earth Harka Sahiba will react
knowing about this damn you khan and that M-prince evil
desire of power to get hold on the land 😡

'When so many powerful Hindu kings have bowed down to
the Mughals, why are you so adamant about opposing them?'

it's like asking if everyone are going to jump in well
shall we follow the trend to🤣 if everyone bow that doesn't
mean other to do as well 😡 if it's not sensible and favorable
for you 😉so what Harka sahiba is doing is right I am with here👍🏼
it's not like she don't know how risky is it going to be
or it's already risky for her

'I have no issues accepting Mughal supremacy... I am not
challenging the prince... all I want... is that they don't destroy
our homes and fields for the sake of cheap iron ore...' 'and
of course, to bring Khalil to justice!'

see how well Harka Sahiba get to spoke Valid fact here I love
her wise sharp mind allot😉 but but for her maybe the iron ore
are cheap and hardly mean anything when it's come to her
people home and fields but for M-Prince it's no less then a
treasure those iron ore are very profitable to him and others
who are dying to get there hold on Panargharh and my my
do My respect increase for her😊 here after reading how firm she is
on her decision to get that Satan Khalil😡 punished for his deed 😉
good going Harka Sahiba 👏

'I thought Durga was stubborn... but you're just as stubborn
as she is!
'I shouldn't have said such a thing... but I am... I am
worried... I've already lost one child... I will NOT let anything
happen to you...'
so what both were sisters if one is stubborn how come another
will not be stubborn sibling gens did you forget 🤣
and here is notable point that one die for her people how come
another can be quite and do nothing to even get justice or stop
bad people from doing more harm but but I can't let the emotion
of mother here she is left with only Harka Sahiba defintly she will not
wish to see her get in trouble to but there is nothing To stop
her either so Instead of demotivating her she should stand by her
side at least when she know Harka Sahiba is right on her decision 😊

'a young prince... handsome... virtuous... the lone heir of a
powerful kingdom... and what's more... this Kunwar is aware
of all the problems Parnagarh is facing... yet, he's willingly
accepted this proposal...'

if I wasn't know who this so called groom is and what type then I
may be a bit amused by the wording by the lady here but knowing
she is talking about that bloody Traitorous R-Prince
Pissed me of to no stop😡 how I wish to just kill him alas i can't
because he is fictional character 😆

B... broken toys...' his voice ebbed and flowed, like the dwindling

strength in his frail body 'Harka baisa would've had them

repaired... but she's not here...'

'I hav a b... broken toy of my own too... sh... shall I show you?'

'My f... father had bought it for me... but he's not here either...'

broken toys Sick little chap wording here about how Harka Sahiba

would have toys repaired and how she is not present even his father

as well seem very bad and his little innocent wish voiced out verbally

to get to spend a bit time with Samarth Mean Khan seem

quite amusing yet heart wrenching for sure As Little kid are

always soft spot for me the innocent yet mischief actions

of them always lighten up my mood even after studies playing

football with quite few kids at park for quite few hours

here seems very Pleasant so I kinda like this part here😉


Another end of Wonderful update of second part

it's another entertaining end and very much praiseworthy job

you had done here Lashy sis👏 excellent loved this allot🤗


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chapter 21

'Foolish boy... your ammi has run away with her lover...

get that in your thick head! You have two choices - stop

fighting the disease and give up your life, so it'll save me

the medical expenses... or get well soon, get off that bed

and make yourself useful in the house! I am NOT going

to sit here and care for you... understood?'

how dare this old lady speak with a kid like this huh😡

even the one who is sick😡 damn Khan seems you not

only get to face dark phrase of life back in childhood but

you did get to face dark evil people to but this make me

bit fond of you that even after all this you emerge out with

Powerful sprite of never accepting defeat no matter what😉

Here stood a bitter young man in his place today.

And i don't blame him for this either and i don't get

why bitter line shall be used for him😕 he is very much

cool and dignified person in his way for sure now👏 in my

hate list even his mother and so called relatives are added

as well 😡

'we just heard that our Harka baisa's wedding has been

fixed...'

'Oh...' The smile that'd only just been born on his lips,

died out again 'I see...'

oh poor Khan what can be more painful then this the

girl he wish to spend entire life with but can't because

circumstance don't favor him to get to act on his desire

now get to hear her marriage is fixed uff I pity on you men😔

If not, he had been willing to support Paranagarh even

without any such arrangement, hadn't he? So he would

understand her, and as a gentleman, he would respect

her wishes, wouldn't he?

nooo a big noo that Ambitious Traitorous Jerk

will never be go on your wish because if he did it will

get to have him nothing and that to after he done lot of things

to get what he want just like that M-Prince 😡 so don't hope

or expect anything from him Harka Sahiba

'Your eyes... they're pretty... but they're...'

'I only hope the disability would not pass on something

unpleasant to my son's children... to the royal heirs of

our kingdom!'

Alright as much I was myself getting angry on the Queen

I do get to realized it's her way to test the future Queen not

bad though 😉but i don't get why they can't be polite on

there way to get what they wish to get or know

that was a bit rude line here but nevertheless I hardly

expect good from the mother of that Traitorous jerk 😡

'Protect the Parnagarhis? Or protect his own interests?'

Akbar grimaced 'You know what... maybe you're right...

I've been surrounded by scheming politicians for far too

long... I'm unable to trust anyone easily!'

no no buddy you are going on right track on your view about

that traitorous Ambitious R-Prince don't dismiss your view about

him like nothing Men

Akbar Mahmoud Khan had to bow out - by surrendering

something extremely precious. After all, this was the

man who could probably give her everything that he

could not!

Then again, that was how life was, wasn't it? Brutal!

yaa right but again you are right here on view about him

disliking him even from start I couldn't bring myself to like that

jerk how can you when you had to loose so unfortunate of you khan

but hat's of to you Lashy sis for displaying his emotion well

here on this the way he admit he even disliked the very name

of R-Prince was quite cool😉

'how have you been? We were all immensely worried

when we heard nothing from you!'

worried my foot you better shut your mouth as I know you cared

about your very plans how it may go in drain if you couldn't

get hold on Harka Sahiba so better don't act here 😡

'I'd warned her not to go... I'd offered to send my men along

... if only she'd listened... then... she would be here with

us... today...'

oh yaa you did but you were the very person who let all the information

disclosed to That Satan Khalil Which end her up with everything so you

d aren't to put blame on her and get out with clean chit😡

Maybe it was because he was a man that he was so much

better at holding back his grief. Maybe it was easier for

men to come to terms with such tragedies.

no it's because he is evil person and faking his emotion all along😡

don't think quite cool about him no one is dark as him till now

to me Harka Sahiba the people like him are always danger

to others as you can never be sure how and what they are in real

'I hope you would understand that I am not prepared to

go through with this arrangement... with this marriage!'


'Then you must remember that you'd given her TWO promises,

jijasa! And if you remember the first, you surely wouldn't

haven't forgotten the second promise... would you?'

a good graceful slap that jerk got by Harka Sahiba

As the reminder of his own promised given to Druga Sahiba

Even he did say this to Old king but he declined it by

his own view and words but here it's can't be dismiss

because Harka Sahiba is not in mood to dismiss this😉

I must admit here and do I forget to say she is daring

as well the way she had verbally in respectful manner

voice out her decision actually That she is not ready

for marriage that to with him was so cool 😉

and one more her instinct are so sharp as well she is very

food in judging people to even Durga Sahiba couldn't get doubt

on This R-Prince but she got it on her very first time close

meeting with him not bad 😉


Jiji ran around the Haveli ...

Every trick uncanny...

Every nook and cranny...

But never did she find me...

alright so even in her most emotional time she unknowingly

let Khan know about the clue Jesus I before I was having a hint

of doubt but never thought it really going to be the clue of

where the Royal scroll will in fact this is making me pissed of

to as I can't imagine how Harka Sahiba will going to react on this

It WAS a place where both sisters could run around.

It WAS a place that had no nook or cranny.

And it WAS a place from where you could look all around,

with eyes opened wide.

It was also the only place they hadn't searched yet -

the Hallways!

but must admit here Mr khan is Quite sharp in decoding

such a clue not bad but he is not known as Master for nothing

so it's important for him to be Sharp or else why will M-Prince

will give this task to him and why he will be the most close and

trustworthy person to him😉



so another entertaining end of update must say

it was quite intriguing emotional and very much

interesting as well but it do left me with lot

of queries as well 😉 but Hat's of to you Lashy

sis for writing each person emotions views in very

sensible way Specially👏👏 Khan and Harka Sahiba

I am already so much fond of Harka Sahiba and

you make me go more fond of her by writing her

part with excellence 😉


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Chapter 22
Durga Sahiba. A 17 year old noblewoman, who'd lived by her
principles - and sacrificed her life protecting them. The 'Ustaad'
in him could relate to those rare qualities. So he did what he
would do, when he met any other great warrior. Bringing his
palm up to his forehead, Akbar bent forth to offer Late
Durga Sahiba an 'Adab'.

I can't believe It that the so called Satan Khalil is his
Own very student once I mean Khan is the one who
trained him😲 look at his action towards the brave warrior
for now 😊and then that SO called Satan what that Jerk 😡
did is no way acceptable in any terms 😡while Khan action
is very surprising here but Expected from a Warrior men like
him 😉these very action make me intrigued by him Lashy sis😉
here I missed one part whre he let his guard a bit down and
gaze longingly at Harka Sahiba pic

'So you admit you miss my presence in your life, Khan Sahib?'
she seemed to giggle at his predicament 'Then, why are you
letting me go... why are you letting me get married to another
man?' the imaginary giggles then faltered, into a nervous sigh
'Why are you betraying me to your Shehzaade?'

even it's His illusion or Shall I say dream here but the very fact
how she will react after knowing everything is enough to
make me uneasy as well 😔she will be broken hurt and definitely
she will feel betrayed but seeing her broken state or shall
I say knowing about it Khan condition will get worse for sure
Poor Harka Sahiba and Khan hate to admit but fate from starter
seems Bit cruel to them first his own dark phrase of life
while her loss of Sister and other emotional pain while
his guilt and that's not enough it's seems it's like more are
yet to come

'I asskked himm to mendd ththe trrunk full off ttoys becausss
I din want ththe othther chilren to bee left withthout toys... I
promisse nott to trrouble him anymorre... pleassse ask himm
to comme talkk to meee...'

well Lashy sis aren't Leads Pain was enough that you made this
kid go through by pain to his innocent queries yet wise
wish seems so amusing yet painful at how he think he may had
upset Khan

'I jjusst wan tto meeet him once...'

I am sure you will get to meet him or that's what I hope for
Little chap😕 And here if for a time being if we ignore kid
what must be the mother going through make me feel worse
here

but this flimsy roll had cost one heiress her life, and sent the
other one into exile.

Yaa mere Royal scroll but held future of many for few it's
life of death game for few it's just a mere medium to get
what they want

'Jiji trusted him... and loved him so much... she wouldn't have
misread him! No... I must have misunderstood him... '

oh no she unfortunately did Harka Sahiba just go on
what your mind or Instinct say or else you will end up
in wrong way

'before we move on to other things tomorrow, we should clear
the air... I would like to give you another chance to explain
yourself'

you are fool or you are thinking Harka Sahiba a fool you moron😡
first you come to have private meeting by dismissing all the
Attended She or yourself come up with 😡 And after this you come
up with Such a foolish Question like really men what gotten on your
pant I think you are made to sit on fire by the shock you got by Harka
Sahiba in the form of oppose opinion on Alliance😉

'You are smart... you have it all figured out, don't you? Then,
you don't need me doing your sly work for you... you can explain
yourself to our families...'

you are inviting your death you fool this daring challenge
will end you up pretty hard I can bet on it Harka Sahiba
will definitely going to kick you hard on her own way 😉
as you are underestimating her here you fool an this will
go favor on her for sure😉

It was the betrayal. The horrendous betrayal from a man that

they'd considered their 'own'. A man, to whom jiji had devotedly

given herself. And to think that all of it was just a sham - that he

had been faking love for the sake of Parnagarh.

And this make me feel bad for Harka Sahiba here Lashy sis

as see how she got so much hurt just by realizing how wrong

she and Durga Sahiba was judging this very traitorous jerk

then how she will react after knowing the men she was now

thinking about allot I mean khan did Jesus Christ this is very

bad to even imagine for now poor Harka Sahiba

Did he have other ideas for the Farmaan too? Hopefully not.

Because ANY such thing would be too dangerous at this stage

- so dangerous that the aftermath was almost unthinkable!

Why I think he really have some plan under his sleeve

I mean I know he will handover the Royal Scroll to That

M-Prince but I am having a view he will do something

with the Addition of giving the Royal scroll to Prince😉

'you haven't answered me... where's Pappu?' He was looking

forward to surprise the boy with the trunk of toys. And he might

not openly admit it, but somewhere deep down, he was looking

forward to see the smile it might bring on his face.


'I thought you would've heard... but Pappu passed away...'

me to Lashy sis like Khan I to wish to had slight cheerful version of

that little Unwell chap but but you did disappoint me here by

taking life of that little chap how unfortunate it was he couldn't

get to meet Khan either whom he was so hopeful to meet at least

foe once even Durga Sahiba end time was nothing

but this Little chap death pissed me of for sure I mean when

I had read the end part of Durga sahiba then more then feeling bad

I was angry but here instead of anger i left feeling so disappointed😔

'it seems like that child did a good deed on his death bed too...

he ensured the other children here would have something to

be happy about!'

yaa that was bit Appreciable of how even at the end the little chap

could get to do good for other kids it's so so rare to see but this is

the reason kids are known to be the pure kind soul a little version

of Jesus itself 😊

had he made an exception that morning and visited Pappu first,

he would not have lost the opportunity to make a child happy.

He would not feel like he had betrayed the trust of a child - a

feeling he could really do without at this stage. And to think of it,

all that child had wanted, was to spend a few moments with him.

but now there was nothing left to do now he is gone

so your promise huh anyway Lashy sis this update was very

emotional even the last part more then other parts it was

Kid part who left me with so much emotion and i could hardly

get to express on it


But you again done a Marvelous job on you novel👏

this wasn't only entertaining but very much sensible

and emotional to Must say you do know how to make

all the reader to stick to your novel for hours and hour till

they to to finish it😉

Edited by James12 - 6 years ago
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I did ask and didn't wait to get
permission either Jesus 😆
sorry Lashy Sis But I am very impatient
person 😆
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Posted: 6 years ago
Not at all, James. You are posting your honest views. Go ahead 👍🏼 I shall wait for you to be able to update them tomorrow!
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Chapter 23

'Ranasa and Ranisa are not prepared to wait till you adorn

yourself to perfection... they have a few questions to ask, and

they want you there AT ONCE! Forgive me...' he quickly added

'these were their words, not mine!'

aright I am quite valid here to hate these king and Queen

for sure and none can have issue on it because i am quite

right here is this the way to call a noble Women in the court

like really in this manner not to even let her get in presentable

condition huh 😡

'A PROMISE jijasa?' A resigned smile crept on her lips as she

recalled where it'd all started from 'Like the many promises

of love you'd made to jiji?'

huh again false promise huh I hate this guy allot here

now but I am impressed by the way Harka Sahiba even getting

nervous didn't let him aware of her emotions good going

her wording always held more power then any weapon

of warrior it's seems and top of it she know when where

and how to use it as well 😉

'When Maharaj Chitranjan had brought us this proposal... he'd

praised your Goddaughter to the skies... but this morning, I've

come across quite a few disturbing facts that compels me to

question her upbringing... and even her character!'

oh women you are fortunate of being just a charterer

of fiction or else you don't have even slightest Idea what will

be on your plate by me damn you dare to spoke this way about

Harka Sahiba 😡 first do have slight look at your moron son

dammit😡

'Of course, I had assumed that since he loved jiji so dearly,

he would appreciate my gesture... maybe, even feel relieved

to hear my words...' she nodded humbly 'but I was mistaken...

he was perfectly fine... and on the contrary, he is looking

forward to the wedding...'

and here you go👏 what Slap a graceful one no one get to know

what she is doing but he shot got on target very well because

that so called Moron know what she is doing 😉 not bad

Harka Sahiba you are so well here good going👏


there is someone among-st us, who is more than eager... almost

restless that this marriage should go ahead, don't you think?'

good going 👏unmask this jerk😡 for playing dirty here

Harka Sahiba it's so so cool and entertaining part till now 🤗

I am so happy what a scene 👍🏼

a trap that SHE was supposed to be caught in, not HIM! '

You're accusing me? A prince? Of spreading gossip?

it's the consequence of underestimating Harka Sahiba you

moron now bear it with all your gut if you have any 😡

I am an Honorable son, following my parents' wishes here,

that's all...

oh my is it joke of century🤣 it's seems Honorable really 😲

my Jesus what a line men you moron you insulted all the

honorable men of century here by saying yourself Honorable😡

'Manswar will never accept such an arrogant young lady as

its Kunwari, anyway!

oh poor lady you don't have any idea if Harka Sahiba got to become

member of royal family of your😡 your son will be left with nothing😉

I assure you here for this but its good she will not 😡because you

bloody low people don't deserve her 😡 now get yourself out from
there as soon as you
can😡

'I mean... an unmarried Rajput lady, who defies society...

defies authority... and even her family... generally does it for

only one reason - her man!'

Lashy sis one request at the end kill him in such a manner

that other do get fear for there life I hate this guy so much now

no I despise him this traitorous dirty guy urgh I so wish to

chop his head of now for saying this to Harka Sahiba here😡


By gifting the Shehzaade this news, he would be gifting the

prince Parnagarh itself - a certain means of gaining more

power in court!

and what he was saying before how much he or shall I say

despise Mughal huh bloody liar jerk 😡 this is not end you fool

you are going to be doomed soon 😡I can bet on it and I am

unbeatable in Bets😉

If there came a time, that the people were forced to vacate

the valleys following Shehzaade's orders, he would use his resources

all the money, manpower and means that was practically

affordable - to help them rebuild a new life elsewhere.

and for this very view you ruled it khan 👏 what can

be the best way to do something for those people if they have left

with nothing sort of that's make me get bit fond of him to 😉


and yaa seems like i missed the one part where Khan was
wished with all his heart that the laddoo don't get finish like the
time he spend with Harka Sahiba how i wish the same for
once to but sadly time never stop so such a sweet as well

Anyway it was Fantastic update with enjoy each part
so much it was Hard to express here now for me as every
part was written with excellence Lashy sis kudos to
you again for writing so well 👏👏

Edited by James12 - 6 years ago

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