NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 48 - CHAPTER 53 - Page 173

Chapter 7

When it came to his animals, Akbar Khan despised

any kind of bad news.

Hmm So khan Seems A Reserved type of Person

with Many Skills Quite Cool And He is Quite fond

of Pets And reason because he found them loyal more

then Human Cool👍🏼

Akbar preferred lofty actions from his people,

not such lofty gestures - and his employees were

well aware of his preferences.

Not bad Again now I am Quite impressed by Him

As In this Even every human like to get this only

But the respect people get by others gesture Boost

there So Called Big Fat ego always but he is not fond of

It Interesting Very Interesting Person indeed 😉

'Bahadur' stroking the back of the animal that

was his closet friend and pet; Akbar spoke in a

language that only the two of them understood '

Chase him around the fields... tire him down...

and lead him back here...'

Oh Jesus this was So Much Unexpected at least for me

Getting the Errant Horse back at it's place he send his

other horse And not only This but I left speechless by

the way Horse act on his Wish this was Superb 👏👏

And I like the name Bahadur As well.

'THAT horse' has been patient with you... I have been

patient with you... if you cannot learn the job properly

... you cannot be worthy of my employment... consider

yourself dismissed!'

good we should deal with undeserving candidate for job

in this way only no matter what .👍🏼

'Mirza Sahib... please speak on my behalf... please

tell Khan sahib that I'm sincere and dedicated...'

But, please tell him what I told you... that I have

three mouths to feed...

'Please Mirza sahib...' the boy paused to wipe a tear

'My brother will die, out of hunger!'

Being Manipulative here aren't we now 😡Huh see the dare

of guy he is not Speaking direct to Khan but trying his luck

With his Another Best men when Khan Is present there

'Khan Sahib knows and decides for himself who can stay

and who can leave... I work for him like you do...'

Good Going Ibrahim👏 you shouldn't never go against

the right thing It's best thing to do as this not only

Show how loyal you are for your Master come mentor

or Guardian and how Much you respect him good 👍🏼

'So, how is bhabhijaan?'

'Then you must be beside her now...'

You requested some time off, Ibrahim. When was the

last time you did so?' his voice ebbed into a gentler wave

'Go on...spend some time at home... later on, you can join

us at the auction...'

hmm never judge book by it's cover and here I just

by reading few part of Khan thought bad about him

but I am not the one to blamed for it when Author itself

letting me know about his Grey shade bit by bit and i am

being slow reader here😉 and so what I come to think

about him is He seems Well I shall not say anything about

him now as I am not sure what I will get in next part so let

it go for now 😉

'Ai Khuda' his jaw tightened. Neither did he have the time,

nor the patience for this 'I leave it to you to save this lady

from my wrath this morning!'

well is that because he got Quite Silly remark by

Harka Sahiba Maid or is because he was Already foul mood

I mean why his Reaction partly get change Quickly again

that to in anger but seems like it's because lesser time

And impatience like you had Written Author So I will

not give much thought to this Now🤣

That the merchant mentioned 'Aidabad' but never told us he

belonged to this place?'

Or that he owns a mansion here...

quite Sensible or Shall I say Suspicious Question

Spoke By Daya And Mohan Bro why he didn't reveal it

but again Harka Sahiba Answer made sense Still

Time to time I having Doubt on this Khan for sure

Reason I have many for now but I am letting this go

As I have Idea in upcoming part either my Doubt will

Increase more or I will Be having It clear in strong way😉

'The manner in which he dismissed that boy was

frightening... the manner in which he dismissed

me was humiliating...'

awe Poor Bindiya but somehow serve right to her

Didn't she insult him to so for me it was like tit for tat

I must confess, I do not think very highly of this strange man!

neither the guys think highly of you and they Simply

point it as well By saying unkind maid Specially the mean

guy I mean Khan 🤣

'Me neither...'

'Me too...'

'No wonder he lives all alone...' a disgruntled maid

added 'He's found no wife yet...'

'Obviously... who'd want to marry a man like him?'

now again they are doing same thing Bindiya Done bacj

isn't it uff before it was just one comment on him now

they are being a Judgmental about his lifestyle and

Loneliness to good job one tit for tat game is needed

for them it's seems as well 😉

A handsome and powerful young merchant'

Dhani added, unable to help her usual Frankish

self 'With no wife, no mistress and no weaknesses!

What a pity!'

😲 reading this I was like really how come they think

it's pitiable for men it's matter of pride and Quite Amusing

That he had no weakness to get defeat by others.

if I let the Matter of loneliness part go and now this explain

Khan Nature and his way of action to It's Quite more

Interesting person then I thought him to be till now👍🏼

'I wonder what made him come to the conclusion that '

you' are our baisa... or that you're incapable of being rude!'

well valid question must say with loyal caring Harka Sahiba

is Surrounded by Smart people to and that's quite Cool to

know but Again Harka Sahiba don't wish to disclose this

so it's like caught of guard question for her.😉

Another entertaining End of Marvelous Chapter

and with each passing update I am getting

fond of your Excellent Skills of Writing the novel.👏

Chapter 8

It's European steel, Ustaad!' reiterated the prince,

replacing the Tahar back upon the stand 'Cost me a

fortune... this is why we need our own iron ores...

this is why I need places like Parnagarh! '

And yet, I was removed from the 'Parnagarh'

assignment!' a voice from behind rumbled with

calm contempt 'Adab arz hai, Shehzaade...'

Ustaad This name well isn't he is the one who

train monster Like Khalil to be what they are

I have no Good feeling regarding this men for

now But what Pissed me more off was Prince didn't

Even Punish this Satan Khalil yet for what Monstrous
Sin he committed 😡He just removed him from the

Assignment given to him that's all still he is being

A cry baby Like really 😲

I admire you, Khalil... and you remain my most

trusted general... but even the best soldiers suffer

a bad day, and this seems to be yours... besides,

it's better this way... stay away for a while... the

Hindus will be out for your blood, very soon!'

well this line Aah this Mughal Prince is making me

hate him more then i hate this Monster khalil

for what he did. Like seriously after what he done

he admired this Disgusting Guy huh 😡 And he needn't

worry about Khalil even As a prince because of Hindu

as no matter how Angry The Hindu are they will dare

Not to Kill him and get on Prince bad Book
After all he is Powerful Enough Or Else till

Now They may had revolted Against him But

they Didn't Anyway So in my hit List I mean

In my hate List Two people are for now First

this Khalil second this Greedy Selfish Prince😡

'When I'd said use any means to get me the Farmaan,

I thought you were shrewd enough to NOT let things

go this far... that too, with a Mansabdar's daughter!

And to what means... she fooled you... despite everything

you did to her, you ended up with a fake document,

not the real Farmaan.'

Okay so this Mughal prince didn't like the fact for

Sure how Khalil did take wrong way to get and

it's pissed him more realizing how he didn't get

the thing he desire even doing Such Sin cool.

But bravo Durga Sahiba even at the End you

didn't let Only Chance hope for People to retain

there land for themselves to go in drain.👏

Strike when the iron is hot

East, West, North and South of Parnagarh,

where news of the tragedy would have spread by now.

Where people would have just learnt of what horrible

fate befell Durga Bai. Currently, emotions would be

running high-and-raw in those regions. And it was

these 'high and raw' emotions that was going to help

achieve her goals.

'I'll get in touch with every province, big or small...

every influential person, prince or noble... anyone

and everyone who has been affected by that monster

Khalil, and his army of murderers...'

'I'll write to them... appeal to these people's sentiments...

move them to tearful distress... make them feel such pangs

of sympathy that they would HAVE to support me in court...

I have no money or army... so I'll use the only armor I

can lay my hands on -'people's support'

good but be cautions as well you never know

that it can be troublesome for you but Again I don't want

her to Seek help from others by sending Scroll

what if It's give that Mughal prince her current whereabouts

and don't forget how He is having his hand on entire nation

for now and All people even if they hate him are loyal to him

for there own benefit they can use her to and wish to get

track on her to as he didn't get what he wanted for now

so it can be dangerous for her nevertheless she can't keep Quit

as well after all she wish to seek justice for her sister.

Kudos to you Author👏👏 for writing this Magnificent way

I couldn't ignore these para even If I wish to so I include it

In my view as well.😉

'One of Khan sahib's men...'

'And that man was secretly meeting up with someone

else... another Mughal... possibly handing him some money...'

What if he was selling us out, baisa?'

'What if he was betraying our whereabouts to

a Mughal soldier?'

Alright so this left me a bit uneasy now for second but

then thinking they don't who they are for now there are

no possibilities yet for them to Sell there Information

or Am I wrong and They know who they are and from

where they are then this Matter shouldn't let it go like

nothing 😊

'I saw something in the dining chamber...'

'I noticed all of them relishing it now... but Khan Sahib

has touched none of it... his plate has nothing but that

dry dish prepared by Chacha Sahib!'

well how come it's a news to let Harka Sahiba Know

it's doesn't matter what Khan eat right his tummy his

life his wish aren't they are being bit more observant

on khan anyway it was really Surprising for sure

I mean when the Guard of Harka Sahiba had the food

made by Chacha Jaan It was enough to make them get

Stomach ache Later But Khan who is the owner have

that food Seems Quite odd for sure 😕

'Languages... medicine... and numbers too?' he frowned

, a hint of sarcasm prevalent in his pitch 'That's quite a

few areas you're skilled at...'

what gotten on his Head why he was being Sarcastic now

this men as soon I try to see him bit Cool he wrong me 😡

'But, you're not far behind yourself, Khan Sahib.

'That was quite some display that night, at the canal...

I must say, I haven't seen anyone else possess such

good aim!'

okay so not only he Harka Sahiba to got on

Questioning mode Good Going Is that because

she get to know His men met Mughal or is it

General Curiosity come in the form of bit remark

to get back on his Comment 😕

Was that a compliment? Or another one of your

underhanded investigations... like the one you've

just sent your guard on, Sahiba?'

oh Jesus He got to know That's Embarrassing for Sure now

His Comment Make sense Damn I didn't learn yet not

to be Quick in judging Specially this mean Guy I mean
Khan when he always come up with Surprise to me 🤣

'I am a businessman in a competitive world... my travels

take me through dangerous routes... my success has

made me many enemies...'

'If I have to stay alive and afloat, I must know how to

defend myself... and be aware of who's tracking my men!

Okay so this make sense how he got to know And how he

Is well skilled in his job to he seems very much Sharp mind

Person but how come he get to know his men was tracked

but harka Sahiba men didn't that they got in the knowledge

for there investigation when they are more Skilled in there job

Is that because they weren't being so Careful in there task

or Khan Men or his sense are far more better then them

if it is then it's not good sign for Harka Sahiba As he is businessmen

if Her men can't over-smart him then how are they going to

Compete with Mughal Prince😕

Their parents were found guilty of burglary few years ago...

ever since, the town has abandoned the children too... so,

I help them out whenever I'm here, because I think it's wrong

to punish a child for a parent's fault! But, why did YOU have

me investigated?

this line Khan you ruled it here No one should be punish

for something other had done like even now If Kids do

wrong we held Parents and there parenting on Question

If Parents Do wrong So kids Got blame a bit.

'I apologise for having offended your sentiments

... but I had to be vigilant...'

There have been threats to my life... in fact, m...

my sister's life was brutally taken away... barely 10

days back...'

And The Question in last Ask by Khan was caught of

Guard for Harka Sahiba but she get back in good

way by Answering Calmly and Quite sensibly

but it would been painful for her to voice out

for sure

'Thank me?' he took a few calculated strides towards

a side table 'For?'

'For helping me out that night... and saving my life.'

'I had to fix the bridge... and you were in the way...

that's all...' Akbar had scoffed in response, like she

was a mere inconvenience to him then

😲huh I am not going to say anything about him

from now can't he acknowledge a Simple Thanks

As well that to by A Girl he is Urgh let it be.

And if you let me know where I can plant them...

I'll bear in mind to stick to the boundaries...'

'So, I don't inconvenience you, by coming in your way!'

that's what i say a Quite Cool yet Gentle Slap or A

Little calm Payback Good going Harka Sahiba 👍🏼

you are Quite 👏

this was a juncture where he found himself

failing in front of Harka Bai's perfection. Yet again!

good he deserve to get bow before her for his action no matter

what don't be so full on yourself from now 😉

Another End of Entertaining Chapter of Wonderful

Story Author And no matter what i say at the end

you are ruling on my mind by such a Intriguing

Plot of Story kudos to you for this praise full

effort once again for Your detail effort on Novel 👏👏

Chapter 9

Well, most days, are good... and I can use my

sight to get by... on those days that are bad, I use

my senses to get by...'

well she seems habitual to her this Issue anyway

that to with a Positive Attitude this is Cool I like her
Spirit here 😊

Was this how it always was?'

Same Question come in my mind to And

I didn't get disappoint as in nest Author Had reveal

it very Nicely 😊 but it did sound very bad to know

it's Childhood incident and It Made both Sisters

to Loose there Joyful day in bad term

one with Guilt so other in Suffering but

both had managed well that's Something

praiseworthy 👏

'I wish I could, Maharaj... but, I'm unable to... because...'

he said haltingly 'Because not an hour goes by that I... I...

don't think of her...' he stopped, unable to continue further.

well I feel bit bad for the Prince here Poor guy even getting

Back on his royal Hot blood mode to avenge he couldn't get

calm Emotionally.

'We serve the Mughal Emperors because they promised to

let our people alone... we have to let them know we shall

not be treated like this! Soon, I shall call for a meeting of

other Hindu provinces...'

'But first, I will avenge Durga's death! I will ruin that beast

Khalil... and his soldiers... and his followers... and his Ustaad...

and all other generals who threaten Rajput honour! I will restore

Hindu pride!'

Sound Good and very Much Sensible plan It will work

for sure I think so. but his next words seems bit odd to me

I mean it's like he is trying to delay to act on his plan

I mean how he is going to avenge first when he is not

even trying to Get his hand on his own Army or Upgrading

them in More better way. Is he really what he is seems to be

now or He is quite black soul here to pretending to be nice😲

'Please acknowledge my proposal and accept

Harka bitiya's hand in marriage...

'It has been barely 10 days since she passed away

... I assumed you were here to offer your condolences,

not bring me a proposal...'

Now this seems very much unexpected for me Like

Really how do they think it's possible. and forget about

Him think about Harka Sahiba how she

is going to react on this unexpected turn of event she

saw Prince as her Elder Sister Fiance how hard it will be

for her to accept this even there is no long day had

passed when she lost her sister for forever oh Jesus this

is so so hard and unexpected even cruel

'You know as well as I do how difficult, society

can be towards an unmarried lady... think of it

this is bad it's like all are seeing Harka Sahiba there true color

like really if only Her Sister Durga Sahiba would be here

then do the people had thought this way about her like really

Harka Sahiba is so young to be get married that to the person

Who was The Fiance of her late sister. King advise don't seems

to sensible to me in anyway.

he had persisted with his attempts because the world

was no longer a safe place for his child. And the father-figure

did what most other worried fathers did when times were

uncertain - using all means to seek a good alliance for his

daughter in the hope of safeguarding her destiny.

okay the next term of para do make sense but he is not dying yet

can't he protect her till he is alive at least for me it's like he is

trying to get free from her in the form of trying to get her married

to Prince

that the Shehzade and the Shehenshah were not blamed in

any way, or the aftermath would be catastrophic - especially

if the letters fell into the wrong hands. If caught writing

anything disrespectful against the Empire, she would be

accused of treason and suffer the fate of a common

traitor - a horrifying death in a public execution.

If I was on her place i may hadn't care about Mughal

Prince So called Reputation or Sentiment But here

it did make sense why is it important for her to be

cautious about this 👍🏼

Oh my Lord!' Dhani was suddenly caught murmuring

to herself 'Look at Khan Sahib's horse, Bahadur... without

doubt, he is the most magnificent of the lot... isn't he?' As

expected, it hadn't taken long for the frisky maid's focus to

shift from the herbs in front - to the apparently more

interesting spectacle of horses-and-men in the distance.

Can't they being more attentive to there own task instead of

Getting distracted by Khan and his horse But must say the

Detail seems That both are Quite Attention Of center and

very much Distraction for girls Either it's Khan or His horse😉

Oh my...' Dhani raised an alarm, snapping her

out of her speculations

Chapter 10

Why were they pointing fingers at us and giggling?'

Ibrahim whispered to his companions 'And what

are they up to, in the gardens?'

'I can guess what they would've been chuckling about...'

'They must find it funny that in less than a week... they've

managed to take over the 'eminent' Khan Sahib's guest

quarters... his kitchens... and currently, his gardens too!'

okay this seems entertaining Part of Starter for this update

As how no matter what girls do they get noticed by them

and what make it more Hilarious that they don't learn either🤣

But baisa...' a lady quizzed unhappily 'Why were

the men laughing at us, a few moments ago'

'I'm certain they were ridiculing us...'

'I agree...'

'And it's rude to stare, anyway!'

'True! They are all rude...'

okay didn't they were doing the same sometime back

and how easily they get to judge on Lads for there

action it's quite surprising and Entertaining must say🤣

'And I don't think it's the first instance they've mocked

us either...' the men continued amongst themselves

'It's obvious from their comments that they have no

sense of gratitude...'

'I have a good mind to teach them a lesson...' Azeez

added 'I mean... a 'gentle' lesson...'

Azeez Must say he seems Interesting yet Quite joyful person

so he will do something for sure I can bet on this but it will

be fun anyway 😉 and About girls well now for me they

are bit mean here am I going Smitten by the Reference

word mean here it's seems 🤣

'The soil here may not be as rich as the soil in your

hometown... but... but... but it is not so harsh that

we can't grow our own flowers here!'

okay must say the plan was really Cool Azzez Well done👏

Not offending in anyway but he did let them get a nice

Payback for sure 😉

'If only I could walk up to that group with a proposal

of marriage... then, I would request for their Maharaj

Sahib as part of the wedding gift!'

must Say the men conversation seems More entertaining

to me then Harka Sahiba Maid Maybe it's because Author had

written this Part more joy full way Or maybe it's Because

as A Boy I had taken quite likeness on this😉 whatever

the reason maybe But It's Awesome for sure I like this😊

'But I haven't finished yet...' Azeez placed the scroll

down 'Chacha jaan, I do have a good solution to

this... Harka sahiba!'

😎 well done Good going Azeez But be aware you do get

to miss the shot of Dagger done by Khan or you are gone 🤣

But Azeez wasn't intimidated by the sight of a dagger..

😎 Daring aren't we I like this guy.

My men, I've heard Harka sahiba is quite the healer...

she should have a magic potion that should help our

Khan Sahib lighten up...'

And I am Quite More fond Of Azeez Guy because he is
Daring Even knowing The temper of Khan he don't

Get back on his Action and Words He seems Smart

Daring Prankster and Quite Bold .😉 And For A similar

Reason I Like Bindiya To 👍🏼 as for me Both Are

Bold And Bit Daring And jolly People 😊

For, Ibrahim insisted upon proclaiming the results next

'The match is equally poised. Akbar gets a point for his

aim, as usual! And Azeez, a point for his suggestions

on consulting Harka Sahiba!'

okay this was Cracked me up pretty hard I was off

my couch Reading this part 🤣 that how coolly

Ibrahim Made remark on the Action of khan and Azeez
Words like a Judge 🤣 was so hilarious

But, why such a response? Wasn't she supposed to

be only a stranger to him? Someone he'd met barely

4 days ago, and someone he'd never meet 4 days later.

Then, why the anger?

Hmm it's Seems Khan got Quite smitten by Harka

Sahiba Her emotion her nature her Way of living

Made a Quite interesting Impression on Khan Mind

Good going it's seems Pretty more intriguing for sure

Let's see what will be up for him. for now he seems

Confused or even he get to realize then he is on complete

Denial mode which quite sensible to😊

well author this update of chapter seems very light

and entertaining I enjoy allot while reading this one.😊

Chapter 11

The conversation between King Chitranjan and

King of Mnaswar and Queen was Quite sensible

yet very much Serious.

And I hate to admit but Author you had done remarkable

job In portraying each person point of view in very dignified

manner not only here but from the entire Start of Story till

now.👏

But this was not liked by me at least as I thought these king

and Queen are royal it's there job to make sure everything

goes with people well but here they disappoint Me badly by

there wordings but hats of to you that you made them quite

right on there part to 👏

But as A reader we sympathize like hate or Get Quite

Smitten by character even knowing it's fictional

and on the basis of our own emotion we either take there

side or We don't. So here as A Quite Admirer and Impressed by

Harka Sahiba her suffering and Journey made me feel angry

on King and Queen for talking this Way about Harka Sahiba

for sure But they weren't wrong on there part to that's what

Pissed me of Because i couldn't get to decide I should be

angry on them for this or not.😕

a few years down the line, if my son decides to marry again

... maybe for the 2nd or 3rd time... and if you've still found

no suitors for Harka Bai... then... we might reconsider

this proposal...'

but yaa I hate Queen here for her this Wording for sure😡

and Author can't be offended her by this. As this line seems

so low to me. I mean what the heck she think here about

Harka Sahiba don't know how many had taken a huge

relief when the King Chitranjan got up to leave after getting

Offended But i did for sure.😊

after this I taking Deep breath let them go for now Will shall

Give Handful Wording on them later if they act just like

now with the hope that there Author have mercy on me

and don't give them a Sensible reason for acting this way 😉

This also meant that the information Chota Faizan was

bringing him, had been found out - which is why a lady

had been sent to finish Akbar off! This rivalry was turning

uglier with every passing week, wasn't it?

Alright don't know about other But Khan is not simply

A businessmen for sure that I can bet on this much smart

and sharp I hadn't saw even that Mughal Prince to

but again this Person seems Very mysterious to😕

and very strong not to forget The way he got his

Answer out by Girl mouth was Quite Cool 😉

'As a child, I was the one who used to like hiding in

urns and planters... now you've been hiding in here

all these days, jiji... maybe it's time, you came out...'

no matter what i say I get speechless here for Sure

never have I ever feel this way for a Fictional character

but you did make me do it Author by such a wording and

Emotions detail job on the Story in the form of words.😊

A tug that encompassed a confusing mix of emotions -

some of which he understood, like pity, empathy and

guilt. But some of which he couldn't even begin to understand.

okay this guilt emotion I don't get why he felt is that

because he is guilty for his past action and wordings

with her or is it something else.😕

'Everything has worked out favorably though... and I

shall soon be getting what I've wanted all along...' 'Parnagarh!'

oh so this R Prince was not what he pretend or showed of

huh disgusting I should have know this but nevertheless

Now i know it was all his act damn It was so low for him to

do any of act like this 😡

Oh! So, NOW you wouldn't consider Harka Bai below your status?'

'success' of any sort with the other two 'If I recall correctly,

you considered even Durga Bai your inferior...'

Now it make sense huh it was all his crying bloody

Act of Being Romeo to He was not having any feeling

for her even if he did it was for his own greed or maybe

Lust to but bravo he fooled Durga Sahiba by his act to huh😡

And this Line of him thinking Durga Sahiba lower front

Of himself make me Feel Like kill him now only 😡

However, today, Harka Bai is the sole owner of a land that is more

precious and powerful, than status or prestige... a land that'll help

me gain great authority at court... probably help me cut a deal

with the Shehzaade... so... I tell myself, that I'm doing this for

a greater good...'

oh don't know about others greater good but you are

going to be doomed for sure Bloody Selfish Jerk a low
Disgusting human aah this was So bad Author what

a Unexpected turn of Change Character you did I

really didn't expected this Author really it's so shocking

must say.

And apart from being the most stunning lady I've come across...

Harka Bai is humble and meek... a combination that is difficult

to turn down... which means, it would be easier for me to take

ownership of Parnagarh with Harka by my side, than it would

have ever been with Durga... so if anything, these turn-of-events

have actually worked out in my favor... for which, I

must thank the old man...'

well I can bet he is not going to get what he desire to get

as I am sure as myself Harka Sahiba is not what he think her to

be she know what where when to do She may not be warrior

Like Durga Sahiba but she is Quite more Smart in judging people

Action and reaction even mind and I am sure she is going to be

the medium of his Destruction for sure but after seeing unexpected

twist in the story I am not sure to 😕

because had Maharaj Chitranjan not brought up this proposal...

the plans that'd taken you months to formulate, would have

gone to waste, following Durga baisa's unfortunate death!'

so go celebrate but as for now definitely everything is on favor

on you but only for time being as people say time never stop

good or bad It had to pass for sure. But I am hating him

already now uff so my list number of hate increase here

first M-Prince then that Khalil now this R-Prince and his family

add them to. these are for now and I hope my list will

be till here only Author 😉

realizing that despite his deviously ambitious ways,

the Late baisa's death was a sore spot for the prince.

And would remain so always. Besides, his feudal mind-set

would never allow a lowly courtesan to disrespect a brave

Rajput, like Durga Bai.

even if he is going to die my thought about him is not going to change'

it's take hell lot for me to hate or like someone but when I do

I do with full passion of heart in this Issue I am never been kind.

It was totally unexpected yet a Marvelous chapter of your

Novel. Author must say words always left my mind to praise

your wonderful job for the detail effort the plot the very little

bit Wordings with full of wise yet sensible Views it's really

praiseworthy Author 👏

chapter 12

'Aapa... aapa... I did it because I was hungry... I beg you... please

don't tell anyone that you saw me here!' A tear sprung up in his bright little

eyes 'The Sahib is a heartless man... I've seen how cruel he can be...

he will beat me till my body turns black and blue...'

Alright I admit that khan can be Quite scary sometime his anger and

his action are really something but recalling how he was kind of helpful for

few kids in previous update let me get doubt on this kid wording here

either he is tricking them or maybe he may right but i had a gut feeling

Khan will don't do like the kid said just now for sure 😉

'Apparently, even the Kotwal Sahib and the townsmen have arrived...

to settle matters... I heard that Khan Sahib is furious!' his voice

was rife with dread 'If our Gauri is found guilty, she might

be taken away... and imprisoned... what are we going to do, baisa?'

uff her life is so troublesome poor Harka Sahiba already there

are Quite lot of serious issue to handle and her attended and fate

increase the pressure on her more huh

'We will do what we've been doing for so long... tackle the situation sensibly. Let's go!'

now by getting disturb is not going to help them So here

her calm persona is Quite Cool for sure 😉

'The accident... Bahadur's injuries... forced to postpone

my inquiry into Chota Faizan's death...'

alright even fate don't seems so favorable to Harka Sahiba s

Maid As Khan is already in foul mood and this issue is

going to provoked him for sure but wait he is Sharp head

with quite good Scary anger I can bet he will be able to handle

the case pretty well 😉

'I have several other important matters to tend to...

and I possess neither the time nor the tolerance for this'

Authorrr you can't make me wrong every time like this

here I thought He would be sensible but he anyway can't blame

him he is Quite impatient men don't like to waste his time

unnecessary so I am letting this go again

She would reveal nothing about Parnagarh - not even if

her life was taken away

Alright here I left stunned by Gauri Dare for sure even her

loyalty as well she is Quite Brave lady 👏👏👏.

'Please order your guards to put their swords down...'

he conveyed as plainly as possible, his pitch an angry

murmur 'if there is a bloodbath... I will be the lone man

left standing... I assume that's not what you want...'

👏Dialogue of Entire story this is Remarkable I loved it

what a Line khan well done I mean his line, not he alright

I didn't like the way he try to Be Have upper hand on Harka

Sahiba by his Dangerous yet Quite powerful Dialogue.

It was Like he was trying to dominate her maybe I am

wrong to But this khan is out of my mind to understand him

yet maybe it's because Author had portray him In Unpredictable

way😉

if not, I'll make sure you're imprisoned for a long long time...

and your brother shall never find work in this town again!'

'It was all my brother's idea... not mine... I'm innocent...

please give me a chance, Sahib!'

'Oh really? An 8 year old's idea?

woo this was really Intriguing part of Chapter must say

this Gafhoor Huh disgusting for saving his own neck he

try to put blame on his Little bro it was so low and foolish

of him to do either he think himself to smart or Khan fool

but whatever it is he is going to be doomed for sure👍🏼

Like the way Khan tackle or Shall i say broke Hand Of

Gafhoor it was fun and very much cool Well done author👏

What a Fantastic update i was just waiting for action and here

it was for short but it did come 😉 And I enjoy it to😊

you are Praiseworthy Author for Giving detail of each

work place emotion action of people and everything.👏

SO here I get done with my one day post

will Answer tomorrow Again but for now,

I will like to say you guys are free to call me

as you guys wish But I am not more then 20

so don't make me Oldie😆

Thanks for Wonderful Story Author😊

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Chapter 13

Hear O ladies, what's on my mind,

About the stable-boy Gafhoor, a creature so sly.

It was his luck that the young Sahib was kind,

For had his cruel punish er instead been I

His filthy hands and legs I'd tightly bind,

And break them ALL, till I heard him sob and cry

wonderful lines Author must say these short Poetic

lines are always Pleasant to read With few words

yet very meaningful always😊

I would love to see this Author if she could done this 😉

Alas you left that so called Gafhoor With broken Hand only

So baisa... this egoistic businessman does have a couple

of redeeming qualities about him, doesn't he?'

No wonder then, that Khan Sahib possesses over

everyone else, such unquestionable power!

Does he now, Bindiya?'

this very girl had vowed never to think highly of the man.

okay I am quite surprised to see It's Bindiya who is

talking About Khan in such a pleasant way just like

Harka Sahiba got amused by her wordings I am as well😉

But I would been more surprised if She didn't praise him to

or at least got to think about him in a bit good way.

after what he did😊

Why? Did she not want to see the Sahib in a positive light?

Or, was she afraid to let her baisa see him in a positive light?

Maybe the second part is quite right to think about her

not sharing view about Khan As Like a true companion of

Harka Sahiba and well wisher she may don't wish to see

Others to get quite Attach to Khan and his men for there act

or it's because they have to leave soon so what's the need of them

to think about Khan and his men and getting Quite more judge

mental on them so she may let the issue go😕

'her soul will be appeased that a great cook like myself

ate a feast in her honor!'

don't know about Durga Sahiba Soul but my soul couldn't

stop laughing reading this part for sure 🤣

Hmm so Harka sahiba is not veterinarian still Kahn Chacha

Insist her to take a look at Khan Horse Bahadur interesting 😉

'Nothing will happen to you, my friend... I will drag that

stubborn Hakim here, if I would have to use force to do it!'

having patted its neck supportively, the determined young

man then stood up 'Ibrahim... Azeez... handle the stables...

Sayyid come on... let's go...'

The best part Must say As Quite lover of Horse I am

very much Impressed By khan emotion for his own lovely

strong friend.

his reaction to the news of Doc will be not available before

the sunrise was Quite Sensible and very much cool😉

Well... this Hakim is a respected professional...

he has been treating my horses all along... and

'HE' is the only one I trust my animals with!'

Have you treated animals before?

Then, I can't let you handle my horse!'

Aah Khan you are so cool here I am impressed more then

think of his question were quite valid and not getting

Satisfactory answers his reaction were sensible to

I will not even let anyone glance at my horse if he is hurt

forget about taking the help of someone who had never treated

pets or have any ounce of idea how to treat them no matter how

well they are in the job of treating human but again here the

lack of time and fate is not favorable for khan and Bahadur

so He can't waste his time to.

'I am hosting a feast today... in honour of my sister...

'Sahiba... please, take a look at Bahadur...'

good going Khan you better know how to get things on

your own favor but let me say with girls it

s never easy job and this i learn from My class mate

allot the guy who never explain himself and say sorry or please

is now quit acquainted with these words now very much

and I don't regret this either 😉

Could you possibly sing him a song, then Khan Sahib?'

her tone sounded sincere 'To try and lull it into a slumber...

so I might start the treatment?'

oh Jesus this was I am not sure Author and other reader

got to laugh at this 🤣but I definitely of the couch again

by laughing loud 🤣 even imagining the scene is To 🤣

'Absolutely not... the flustered young man

was about to protest

🤣 Author this is So so Jesus I uff loss of words

Flustered young men 🤣 🤣🤣

Alright so here interaction between Khan and Our Harka

Sahiba was quite Cool I like it it was Dignified yet filled with

Pleasant feeling.😊 the way Harka sahiba was Quite amused

to see Khan interaction with his Pet Bahadur was really Cool

Must say Author you are marvelous in your job to write such

a scene with so much Detail is so so Awesome👏

So you weren't joking when you said, you've

grown tired of cooking for me, Chacha jaan?'

Here Khan search for food and his reaction for finding

not a single morsel in the kitchen was quite amusing

even his line here is Quite Interesting.

Even at 12, he was a handsome youth, but one would have

to see through layers of sweat, tears, dirt, blood, illness,

exhaustion and scars of abuse to recognize that.

A kid Suffering like this😲 that we have to see his

Clear look after scars illness dirt pain hat's so bad

The salt in the food would sting his chapped boyish palms and

bleeding knuckles, like acid on a burn - but raging

twinges of hunger would numb all of that. The rice

would be under cooked and coarse, the meat over-spiced.

But, he would relish each morsel.

that's shows the power of hunger that the kids pain of injuries he get

and it's sting him to no hell by getting contact with Salt he will still

get to have his Little food which he get to have by old men help

'Chacha jaan...' the 12 year old would smile with gratitude

ever so often 'when I grow older and become a big man...

I'll take you away with me... I'll care for you... and I promise...

I'll eat no one else's food, but yours... I've become so used

to your delicious dishes...'

oh Jesus this is so so bad all the joy i had till now reading

chapter go in drain as this Part did moist my eyes . Anyway

so this is the reason even they get to have the Share of food

made By Harka Sahiba Attended he refuse to even glance at them

hmm Impressive and very much sensible as well .

There come many time my stomach hurt by laughing

so there come time my eyes got moist a bit must say

author you have strength to make me go through

by same emotion as the character of the Story go

through Author really a praiseworthy job must say👏