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Posted: 7 years ago
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Congratulations for the new thread, Baisas! 😃

Wow, thanks for the lovely surprise, di..🤗 You've done a brilliant job, as always! 👏 There are so many things in this update that prove,yet again, what an outstanding writer you are! 👏👏
So much has happened in this. The thing we have been dreading too has happened..I know it's inevitable for the story to take an interesting turn and for the real battle to begin. But I was hoping against hope that the messenger would pass away before revealing his message!

Things are gonna be more intriguing here on. We'll get to see Mr & Mrs Ustaad Sahib in one team against the cunning foxes!

Felt bad for Heera when she was recollecting those gruesome moments. Firstly, she wasn't ready to believe swine had a role in her jiji's death. It's not surprising, though..swine has been quite successful in portraying himself as a true Rajput..if Heera had felt so difficult to believe this, I'm sure Parnagarhis would find it even more difficult. It's gonna be a challenging task for AMK and Heera to prove his heinous crimes.

I think it's Sayyid at the end who infiltrated the camp! It's a torture to wait for 20 days, di..this devil incarnate is surely going to be more cautious now. He wouldn't leave any stone unturned to make sure Shehzaada gets to know of Ustaad's treachery. 😡

Like Heera, I was shocked too at what Mohan Banna murdered, but it's so thoughtful of Khan Sahib to reveal his true identity to the most trustworthy soldier of Heera's clan. The conversation between Banna and baisa was wonderful. It feels natural and convincing that Mohan banna felt hatred for the Ustaad initially. Heera's fear when she listens to that and the relief later on was touching. Surely, it's not easy for her to hide such an important thing from her own people.

BTW, I loved the possessiveness for her husband's gifts!😉😆

The game of chaupar..felt like I was there watching them play..that was really fascinating! It was a wise decision of AMK to tell her the truth in this way.. Loved the entire scene so much till the game ends with Heera's victory. It's always a bliss to witness their games..be it of chaupar or words!

And lastly abt the beginning scenes.. It was indeed disturbing to imagine the situation near safe house.. They were all loyal men of AMK.Was very surprised that eight men of KS showed hell to eighty men of the Kunwar. They proved to be Ustaad's men. Feeling bad for these ppl. AMK and Heera would feel guilty na.. This is what Khan Sahib wanted to avoid, but he couldn't deny Heera's request. And even before the letter reached the safe house, situation turned worse.

Thanks for the Women's Day gift in advance ,di! 😆 Hoping for more of such gifts and surprises..😉





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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: karkuzhali


Lavanya, did you see your Urdu translation of AMK's message posted in Abu Dhabi script, 'culled out' by the Investigating Team of the Daily Entertainer,on P190 of the previous thread?

Aunty.

I got your email... Will try the scroll... If it doesn't work I'll paste it straightaway

Btw Baisas... Yesterday, Periyamma called me over phone and we chatted
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Bonds here... Whopeee
But Bond I thought you'll be with Sayyid now ... Helping him out... 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thank you Lavanya, Pallu, Bond, Manu, Chellam, Cookie 😡 Mitu Adwi and anyone else I might've missed🤗 for the new thread!
Edited by lashy - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: lashy

Bonds here... Whopeee

But Bond I thought you'll be with Sayyid now ... Helping him out... 😆


He asked me to Just be safe..☺️ but I'm going to help him..


Wish me luck, Sahibas!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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😔 😒 👏
What a update lashy di ...
Brilliant set up everything ...superb is the small word to describe how the story is moving further .
So many things happened in single chapter.
Loyalty blind someone so deeply that it's loyalty only going to cost lot to their master.
One is Sayyid who couldn't even affort to die and fight with the enemies because he have to deliver very very important message to his master .
He knows the significance of the message.
He couldn't die before that.
Alone men surrounded by enemies.
And the other hand was the messenger ...
I just couldn't blame him what he does . Poor guy just wanted to protect his land and his baisa.
True Rajput warrior ...who fight so much and he didn't give up in front of Ustaad's men tortures.
One thing i fully agreed with Mahendar that messenger soul is in peace because he accomplished his last mission which sacrifice his life.
May he rest in peace .
He did what every good Rajput do that.
Mahendra is happy now because he just get jackpot ...but he just don't know Ustaad and his loyal men.
Ma bhavani never let culprit win no matter what .
I know Sayyid is there ...and he will try his best to handle that situation.
Oh so Sayyid manage to disappear infront of their eyes .
Great i hope Sayyid able to do something to save his master for further troubles.
Mahendra ... one thing i really wanted to appreciate about him.
He is not blind by power. ...he is not like who lost his sense in his happiness .
His mind work at a same time...he is very good pretender .
When everyone celebrating their fruitless success he knows his men are nothing infront of 8 mughals ( guards of safehouse )...
82 men surrounded 8 mughals but despite that it take half of day to take them down.
Ofcourse Ustaad's men they were so it's obvious for Mahendra to know about that.
But ustaad lost his loyal men.
It took so much to gain loyalty ...
Ustaad and his men always respect everyone ...Mahendra and Khalil never ever able to achieved what ustaad achieved by his gesture .
It's really touching when Sayyid think about dead bodies .
Really it's sin to disrespect someone dead body...they deserve honor.
They are Ustaad's men it show from their thinking only.


You know what lashy di ...why i like about your characters so much...in NJAPA also leads are so strong. ...they were never give up in any situations ...they will fight until their last breath.
Here also heera never give up nor khan sahib ...
She is trying her best to help mohan banna.
I hope this time her new experiment work on his legs .
God khan sahib each and every single thing keep remind us that he is Ustaad.
No one match him.
He even can handle small delicate flower and at a same time he can handle devil like Khalil .
His mind work every time ...his moves are so calculative.
I wonder his mind work even when he asleep .
He is like a man of the family who insure their families when he is not there with them...
Khan Sahib let mohan banna knows everything about him and his secret to ensure his sahiba safety .
Instant reaction of mohan banna is totally justify. ...but khan sahib explaination let him understand Ustaad's stand .
How couldn't he understand everything because both of them serving their masters and both can do anything for them.
And the other reason is that everyone can see khan sahib make their Sahiba happy and not only that he make and made everyone happy .
His simple and sweet gesture touch everyone heart .
Not only he take care of his sahiba needs but he take care of everyone under him.
Khan Sahib justify Mansabdar place. ...
How sweet of him to brought lighter churches for mohan banna. ...this is nothing special but this is something much more than. ...something every fatherly figure do that for their children .
So how can mohan banna hold grudges against someone like him.
Big thing is that Khan Sahib trusted him so much like his friends to share his life style with him.
I love this thought lashy di ...


Heera and khan sahib scene was beyond beautiful.
More like lover's now they are husband and wife .
Khan Sahib gesture is priceless.
So finally Ibrahim and khan sahib know about Mahendra involvement in durga case.
Khan Sahib handle everything but this is too dangerous for heera he knows that.
Something like heera character is in sake so khan sahib is very caution about this.
I love the way heera approach khan sahib in lighter mood despite mohan banna revelation .
Aww both are just compliment each other .
Little little gesture of heera and khan sahib are touching.
What a brilliant idea to play chaupar when heera think from mind not with heart to reveal Mahendra true colour .
So mirza Sahib taught heera play so well.
Aww khan sahib have to admit that.
I love the their chaupar game...more important how both played it.
Ofcourse heera happiness worth it...why not she defeated ustaad .
My my what a prize she ask for winning chaupar ...rarely opportunity how can she let it go easily.
Omg she want khan sahib handmade food ( pilaf ).
Which amazed khan sahib and us also.
Ofcourse his food is nothing infront of maharaj kakasa food but for heera it's priceless .
Khan Sahib know heera in and out.
Heera can play games and she can play politics also.
In Mahendra case he need heera help because she is the only one who know him personally also.
It's so hard to believe Mahendra involvement in durga case so natural reaction from heera.
Thank God khan sahib was there to make her understand everything and think clearly.
But this is ugly truth.
Durga loved Mahendra. ...her soul never rest in peace because she trust someone like him.
Finally heera realised Mahendra true intentions .
Tejraj ...he is always against Mahendra deeds but i never thought lashy di bring him up to help khan sahib .
Direct approach is not good idea so khan sahib has other ideas to gain informations.
True in this game...it's not necessary to always play fair. ...not infact so many innocent people involved in this .
Somehow heera have to play this game to protect everyone.


Akbar knit his brows into a resigned frown. 'Heera...' his hand slid along the edges of the table forming a quiet barrier between her spine and its sharp corner, thus making it easier on her

Leaning across, he pried the fruit and blade from her hand to make sure that in her state of alarm, she wouldn't injure herself by accident

My my...indeed heera is so lucky to have him as her husband.

her palm naturally slipped down to his chest to let his strong heart beat against her skin - something that'd become a subconscious habit lately,

I love this sweet gesture of heera.

And i love the new edit
So beautiful.


Thank you Lashy di 🤗



Edited by binduprasad41 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: lashy

Thank you Lavanya, Pallu, Bond, Manu, Chellam, Cookie 😡 Mitu Adwi and anyone else I might've missed🤗 for the new thread!


Ok 😆 🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: lashy

I got your email... Will try the scroll... If it doesn't work I'll paste it straightaway

Btw Baisas... Yesterday, Periyamma called me over phone and we chatted


Wow..😃 you must've talked about HBAS and the baisas too.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#39

Chapter 46.

Image result for gif pic of dice in game



Haikus.

He is a smart spy
Chaupar gets him an ally
Mission will succeed!

Success in the game
Is it in her favour eh?
Or in his favour?

The chapter's contents
Like cleverly moved counters
Wow! Readers' Win Win!

Karkuzhali.





Edited by karkuzhali - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Lana, author sahiba has promised a happy ending. Don't worry,even she loves her coujjin! 😆

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