NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 41-Chapter 46 - 6th Mar

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Kalgi22

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Posted: 7 years ago

#41

Chellam there's so much I wanted to tell you.. But seriously I don't know how to tell you... 😭 I'm totally tongue-tied. Believe me it's not out of my laziness. I can't go through each and every line but I can tell you how I felt... Throughout the reading I felt the restlessness of what's going to happen next and worried about the things that gone our of their hands, felt helpless and prayed and then amazed at the way somethings went... Uffo... Really I felt all these feelings.. No doubt you're master of getting us involve in your story, forgetting the surrounding and forgetting that It's just another story... Brilliant, Chellam... 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

I don't know vague idea of how Chaupar playing but still I enjoyed that game as if i'm expert in that game. That's what I'm trying to tell you... You can attract us the irons like magnet and tightly hold us throughout the story. Well done, Chellam!! 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Though we're worrying how that messenger unknwngly ratted AKEERA's life but as I writer I think you made a very interesting and brilliant turn of events. That make us keeping in edge and thinking and worrying what's going to happen.. Uffo... You're such a shrewd!! 👏 👏 👏

Love you, Chellam!! ❤️ Thanks for everything and never ever stop writing. You're a born writer... 🤗

Edited by Kalgi22 - 7 years ago

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Kalgi22

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Posted: 7 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: Bindu.

He asked me to Just be safe..☺️ but I'm going to help him..

Wish me luck, Sahibas!

Wish you all the best, Bond!! You both going to rock and Mahendar going to sulk... 🥳

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binduprasad41

@binduprasad41

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Posted: 7 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

The shadows are for spies
Their ghostly entrance unknown
Arousing no suspicion
With their kindly gestures
The secret narrative in their hearts
Stays immersed in darkness
Swallowed by the mission ahead
With its delicate paths
Submerged in secrecy
The art of ghosts
Unexposed by light
Fortified by the ancient oath
The secretive oath of spies
"Reveal no secrets and die a spy

-Kenneth Maswabi.

This is superb 👏

Perfect picture 👍🏼

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Her eyes brighten my soul.
They give me direction in each new day.
The Hope that was dwindling away
Is restored when I look in Her eyes.

Her eyes show me how Love flows.
They fill me with passion and drive.
When I get weary and ready to faint
My strength is renewed when I look in Her eyes.

Her eyes have a calming truth.
That soothes an angry spirit or broken heart.
When my head is filled with anger or malice,
I am soothed into a sober mind when I look into Her eyes.

Her eyes hold the Truth, the Way and the Life.
That will take you over hill and through valley.
When my times get rough and unbearable,
I know that with faith I can make it when I look into Her eyes.

Her eyes I love and will love.
That specialness I feel in this relationship is this.
When I am alone and feeling low
I know she loves me when I look into her eyes.
[copied from internet.]

Aww i love this beautiful picture

Wonderful lines 😳

Perfect for khan sahib and his feelings .

Somehow it justify khan sahib exact feeling for his sahiba 😊

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Chapter 46.

Haikus.

He is a smart spy
Chaupar gets him an ally
Mission will succeed!

Success in the game
Is it in her favour eh?
Or in his favour?

The chapter's contents
Like cleverly moved counters
Wow! Readers' Win Win!

Karkuzhali.

Brilliant Patti ! 👏

Ofcourse readers are win in the end 😆

I love this haikus. 😳

Thank you so much Patti for wonderful wonderful treats 🤗

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Vmanoh

@Vmanoh

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Posted: 7 years ago

#44

Good Evening & Good Morning to all B&B's 🤗

Wishing you all a happy Hump day and with the update everyone must be super happy !!!

Coudn't finish to read the chapter earlier and only managed to finish the whole chapter undisturbed a little while ago. I wanted to write my suda suda review before I get to read everyone's post which I will have to do tomorrow.

I will say my GOOD NIGHT to all now 🥱

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binduprasad41

@binduprasad41

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

Wish you all the best, Bond!! You both going to rock and Mahendar going to sulk... 🥳

True 👍🏼

Best of luck bond 🤗

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Kalgi22

@Kalgi22

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Posted: 7 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

The shadows are for spies
Their ghostly entrance unknown
Arousing no suspicion
With their kindly gestures
The secret narrative in their hearts
Stays immersed in darkness
Swallowed by the mission ahead
With its delicate paths
Submerged in secrecy
The art of ghosts
Unexposed by light
Fortified by the ancient oath
The secretive oath of spies
"Reveal no secrets and die a spy

-Kenneth Maswabi.

OMG this painting... Uffo... One of the best so far, Periamma... So so loved it... ❤️ and yes it's such apt and nice poem about spies and their life.. 👏

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Her eyes brighten my soul.
They give me direction in each new day.
The Hope that was dwindling away
Is restored when I look in Her eyes.

Her eyes show me how Love flows.
They fill me with passion and drive.
When I get weary and ready to faint
My strength is renewed when I look in Her eyes.

Her eyes have a calming truth.
That soothes an angry spirit or broken heart.
When my head is filled with anger or malice,
I am soothed into a sober mind when I look into Her eyes.

Her eyes hold the Truth, the Way and the Life.
That will take you over hill and through valley.
When my times get rough and unbearable,
I know that with faith I can make it when I look into Her eyes.

Her eyes I love and will love.
That specialness I feel in this relationship is this.
When I am alone and feeling low
I know she loves me when I look into her eyes.
[copied from internet.]

Yes those eyes are his energy sources in every way.. So beautiful!!

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

Chapter 46.

Haikus.

He is a smart spy
Chaupar gets him an ally
Mission will succeed!

Success in the game
Is it in her favour eh?
Or in his favour?

The chapter's contents
Like cleverly moved counters
Wow! Readers' Win Win!

Karkuzhali.

Her favour or his favour. Actually he won so eventually she won too but who win is Reader and the gift is superlative chapter... 😉 😆 Lovely Haikus, Periamma!! 🤗

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Shraddha

@lashy

Trailblazer

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Posted: 7 years ago

#47

Chaupar

A quick tip - didn't want to get into too much details of the how the game is played. An expert Chaupar player would look at my description and frown. It took me viewings of 4 different videos and 3 websites to sorta understand the game!!!! It's complex with each player having 4 counters... And when 4 play, the opposite players become a team, strategize etc to defeat other pair. When it's only 2 players, they play against one another.

But I had to keep it simple - couldn't go around using terms that readers might not be familiar with or one would lose interest. 😳

So ... (though not entirely true) at the very basic level - ludo is like a basic version of Chaupar... If you've played ludo you'll understand the game as I've described it in the chapter.

By the way Chausar has 3 die (plural of dice) - hence the odd numbers showing up that wouldn't normally show in modern dice.

In spite of all of this, I cannot claim that I wouldn't have made some form of mistake in understanding/outlining the game. Anyway, being the oldest board game in India, over time, several versions of it have developed ... So hopefully, if and where I've gone wrong, it can be construed as a HBAS version of Chaupar!😆

Edited by lashy - 7 years ago

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Kalgi22

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Posted: 7 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Bindu.

BTW, I loved the possessiveness for her husband's gifts!😉😆

😆

Yes the way she's holding and refuse to give it to anyone even in that situation... Heera sounds so child and so cute and I felt like pinching her cheeks... 😳 😆 Lovely review, Bond. 😳 🤗

And Chellam you don't believe it. I actually thought... Is there any chance Heera tasting his foods when I read that chapter where Heera's seeing AMK cooking.. and here she asked as a gift... The curiosity in her is making her so lovely and sweet.. 😳

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Kalgi22

@Kalgi22

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Posted: 7 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: binduprasad41
Mahendra ... one thing i really wanted to appreciate about him.
He is not blind by power. ...he is not like who lost his sense in his happiness .
His mind work at a same time...he is very good pretender .
When everyone celebrating their fruitless success he knows his men are nothing infront of 8 mughals ( guards of safehouse )...
82 men surrounded 8 mughals but despite that it take half of day to take them down.
Ofcourse Ustaad's men they were so it's obvious for Mahendra to know about that.
But ustaad lost his loyal men.
It took so much to gain loyalty ...
Ustaad and his men always respect everyone ...Mahendra and Khalil never ever able to achieved what ustaad achieved by his gesture .
It's really touching when Sayyid think about dead bodies .
Really it's sin to disrespect someone dead body...they deserve honor.
They are Ustaad's men it show from their thinking only.