NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 41-Chapter 46 - 6th Mar - Page 6

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Posted: 7 years ago
#51

'Deliberate' error? or error by 'lapse'?😕😲

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

Chellam there's so much I wanted to tell you.. But seriously I don't know how to tell you... 😭 I'm totally tongue-tied. Believe me it's not out of my laziness. I can't go through each and every line but I can tell you how I felt... Throughout the reading I felt the restlessness of what's going to happen next and worried about the things that gone our of their hands, felt helpless and prayed and then amazed at the way somethings went... Uffo... Really I felt all these feelings.. No doubt you're master of getting us involve in your story, forgetting the surrendering and forgetting that It's just another story... Brilliant, Chellam... 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

I don't know vague idea of how Chaupar playing but still I enjoyed that game as if i'm expert in that game. That's what I'm trying to tell you... You can attract us the irons like magnet and tightly hold us throughout the story. Well done, Chellam!! 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏


Though we're worrying how that messenger unknwngly ratted AKEERA's life but as I writer I think you made a very interesting and brilliant turn of events. That make us keeping in edge and thinking and worrying what's going to happen.. Uffo... You're such a shrewd!! 👏 👏 👏


Love you, Chellam!! ❤️ Thanks for everything and never ever stop writing. You're a born writer... 🤗

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kalgi22

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Yes the way she's holding and refuse to give it to anyone even in that situation... Heera sounds so child and so cute and I felt like pinching her cheeks... 😳 😆 Lovely review, Bond. 😳 🤗

>>Thanks akka.Yes,she's so cute sometimes.Her prayers for the dice to show up nine and the happiness thereafter too was cute.

And Chellam you don't believe it. I actually thought... Is there any chance Heera tasting his foods when I read that chapter where Heera's seeing AMK cooking.. and here she asked as a gift... The curiosity in her is making her so lovely and sweet.. 😳

>>Forgot to mention this,Heera surprised AMK and the readers with her request.Even I want to taste the pilaf cooked by AMK!😳😆

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Posted: 7 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: lghosh




Can I fall more in love with KS?? I guess so! The way he again prepared the groundwork before revealing the truth to Heera! Kahan Mahabharat ka chausar aur kahan yehan chaupar!? Mahabharat used this game to call for destruction but here Lashy, you used this means for enlightenment! Heera was given the opportunity to gain confidence to use her brains to beat KS thus readying her to face the ugly truth about the past and to come to terms with it. It all bottles down to intentions! Loved the part about her coming to terms with the truth, how she first disbelieved the dirty truth and slowly with help of KS she journeyed back to the past to realise the truth about Kaminasa! This is what I love about AMK, his calculated step in every aspect of life! He plans it out, thinks it through and then places his steps already thinking and knowing about the consequences! A true CIO!! 👏 And Heera is walking next to him matching his every step turning out to be the perfect Begum in lifestyle, temperament and intelligence! 👍🏼 And his helping her in stepping back, holding her hands to tread back carefully, guiding her to think through her brains rather than emotionally, probing her to realise the telltale facts staring at their faces...amazingly done, Lashy! 👏



Loved the way you've written this, Lana!! ❤️ and yes Sandy your piggy is here with all his glory 😈 😆 And Lana don't worry about your CS. He's safe and sound in his coujjin's hands.. 🤣
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Posted: 7 years ago
#54
C46 - An action packed Chapter !

Sayyid is in the middle of the action & what a predicament he is in. His actions display how well AMK has trained him and feel sorry along with him to witness the carnage. But his presence of mind serves him well & helps to tackle this important assignment.Even though the death of the safehouse men were a known factor for us it still felt scary to know what it's to be when you are in the spying business.

It was an anxious Heera we see testing the new concoction for Mohan Banna. She was also feeling proud about her sahib when she mentioned to him being able to flaunt the new crutches. But it was cute to see that she was not willing to share the new ivory lens with the aide. 😆 .

Mohan Banna's momentary anguish shows when he laments of what could have been avoided & then accepting AMK's reasoning. It gives Heera & us a sigh of relief. Even though the revelation of their truth takes Heera by surprise and finds herself stuck between them, she's glad Mohan Banna has accepted it. AKeera do not need any more enemies, especially within Parnagarh. Also loved it when he said both Khan Sahib & him carry the same principle of " serving their master".


In his chamber AMK studies the study lamp and ponders what his next action should be and in walks Heera and we get the cozy couples flirty interactions. Those knots on the tunic & how he uses them 👍🏼 a super sleuth he is & so is Heera for noticing the difference. With his invite for that much awaited Chaupar game you fulfilled our wish Lashy. It was an intense game & thanks for the curbside prime seats to watch it. I'd guessed Heera would win with strategy but it was more of luck at the end with AMK graciously conceding his loss with a purpose for I got the feel that he preferred that ending anyhow to convey his gruesome message. But the prize she ask's for the win brings back memories of the past .

I must mention here that AMK makes it his business to know what buttons to push when, how & where to get the results he wants even his close ones are no exception. After AMK reveals the " real enemies , Heera to her dismay astutely finds out that AMK was in his Ustaad mode all this while and once he explains his stance she reconciles with herself that this is how it will be going forward if they were to face their ruthless enemies. From their discussions it seems Kunwar Tejraj will be roped in somehow to help them out to trap the swine. Will wait & see how this will come about.

Finally we get to know what we feared all this while - that the messenger did get to the swine & now the Swine is in cloud 9 with the disclosure of Ustaad's deeds to protect Heera and it fell into his lap even without him lifting a finger. 😲 . Now all he wants is to march straight to Shehzaade. What he does realize is that to ambush 7 or 8 AMK's men he needed almost 10 times of his men to get the job done. Ustaad's shrewd calculations & speed will have to compensate for our leads to overcome this lousy swine's actions. We now know that Sayyid has given the slip & will likely be heading to Parnagarh as fast as he can go. We have to wait for the next chapter to unfurl and find out who is going to reach the capitol first or will the swine be stopped before that.

The lovely picture that you have edited gives a different feel with the change in their attire. Will keep gazing at them. The leads have teamed themselves for dual action & we await to see the duel action unfold. W&W for the next chapter !


Edited by Vmanoh - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: karkuzhali


'Deliberate' error? or error by 'lapse'?😕😲

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It was a mistake... 😆 I meant 'surrounding' 😆 and edited now. 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: Bindu.





>>Even I want to taste the pilaf cooked by AMK!😳😆

Me too. At least through Heera.. ☺️ 😳 😆

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kalgi22


Wish you all the best, Bond!! You both going to rock and Mahendar going to sulk... 🥳


Ah,the rhyming!😆 Thanks akka and Bindu.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: Vmanoh

C46 - An action packed Chapter !


I'm wondering here how could you write such detailed brilliant yet beautiful review in suda suda mode.. 😲 😲 Hats off, Vathsy!! 👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: Bindu.


Ah,the rhyming!😆 Thanks akka and Bindu.


Ah now only I noticed the rhyming... 😲 😆 🤗


Okay all is done in suda suda mode and I'm going to take it slow for second round. Lana I meant the reading and reading only.. 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

I'm wondering here how could you write such detailed brilliant yet beautiful review in suda suda mode.. 😲 😲 Hats off, Vathsy!! 👏


Vathsy this is suda suda reply😲?
Which means another one is going to come? This biggg?


Vathsy is going to think 'Like I haven't done enough for this girl already... she demands more!' 🤣

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