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Durgeshnandini

@Durgeshnandini

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#481

Vanilla ice cream!

Welcome back, and dhonnobaad for this hariyaali update! Greenery is said to be essentially good for the mind and vision! And this was totally "mazaa aa gayaa" type update! 😉

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti
And this man Surya has wasted all the pages of his diaries by filling them up with all these ridiculous poems, that too addressing his girlfriend!! Idiot!

Here we Go Green! 😉

Could not he maintain a proper daily journal, if he had the habit of keeping diary? Who told him to write so many meaningless poetries?

And some more Green! 😉

The yellow torn pages of a daily journal- says a lot of story unknowingly. The truth had been suppressed for such a long time... But how long one can hide a truth?

The toxin of greed and cruelty has been mixed with the blood! The truth must be very hard but I will find that...

About what truth he is talking about?

If not the teasing Green of the possessive, it's the toxic green of greed, and and the sickening stench of the acidic half a clues of conspiracies - khela jome uthhechhe! 😛

Everything is fair in love and war...

Jalal's frown deepened again.

And deepens the mysterious game, along with his brows...

"You know what... I can't tolerate that anyone other than me will love you even more than me! I can't tolerate the fact that you can ever be a little bit concerned to any other man other than me! I just lost my mind reading Surya's love-poems and seeing your ornaments and photographs in his trunk!

Let's go Greener!

"ACHHA??? Jodha tried to imitate Ruqaiya Ahmed... "Jalal Sir, where are you... Jalal sir, please take care of yourself... Jalal Sir, don't stress too much... Jalal Sir, come on let's go for coffee... Jalal sir Jalal Sir Jalal sir!!! Just a subordinate right???

And greener still😉... Since Jodha has a dramebaaz rival too! 😉

That is... is just a fun and you know that well... but here the case was serious... And whatever Ruqaiya may do, she does not write poem for me, so it's pretty much justified for me to feel insecure!

Itni hariyaali! One can perform photosynthesis now😉😆...

"So... I want my compensation... Jalal winked. He cupped her cheeks in his palms, took his lips nearer to her lips and exhaled passion with his breath... "I will never ever fight with you Jo... Promise... He uttered and touched her lips...

Compensation?! Nah! Demand in style Jalal! Ask for your "parishromik"😉

"Not now darling... Jodha put her finger on his lip passionately.

Wonder how many hearts broke there! 😉

"Same goes for you, darling! Jalal touched her nose with his nose. "Now come on, come to my bedroom.

Only to join again 😉...

"What?? I just wanted to show you something! You naughty girl with nasty thoughts...Jalal winked.

Only to break yet again 😉... Stuti it's good that you're focusing on the mystery, with romance as a side track, Jalal is a clever chap, I'm sure he doesn't believe in advance. He'll take full payment once mission is successful... 😆

"I can remember one of these dates. 10^th Feb, 1997 is the death day of my uncle Sujamal Singh- I mean Sukanya's father.

Interesting 🤔

"Are you serious? Papa was willing to write the whole property in my name? Jodha picked one brow.

Okay so now there's this will angle! Am sure Jodha will have some curious and vital missing links to add to the case. This one was really short, Stuti! So do update soon! 😃

Edited by Tilottamaa - 8 years ago

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Shinning_Stuti

@Shinning_Stuti

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#482

Originally posted by: Tilottamaa
Vanilla ice cream!

Welcome back, and dhonnobaad for this hariyaali update! Greenery is said to be essentially good for the mind and vision! And this was totally "mazaa aa gayaa" type update! 😉

Baapre! 😆 Do you have botany in college? 🤣

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Shraddha

@lashy

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#483

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

Banner credit: Senapatichandri Aka Chandrima Di.. 😳 Thank you so much Di!😃

You're amazing Rima!👏

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Durgeshnandini

@Durgeshnandini

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#484

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

Banner credit: Senapatichandri Aka Chandrima Di.. 😳 Thank you so much Di!😃

Great job, Chandrima di! 👏👏

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karthika

@kattylovestammy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#485

first.. banner is super awesome..👏. and second.. stuti di i m here but little late.. no sooo late.. i accept.. tats bcoz i was little perplexed abt the clues.. so i had to revisit the story once again frm the start.. hmm coming to the story.. its getting interested chapter by chapter... i love crime novels and had read many crime novels in my mother tongue and this story is progressing in really perfect note like a crime novel.. this is exactly how the crime novel should be..my belief.. bcoz there r so many clues and hints but still we couldn't conclude who might be the killer.. and so many riddles in a riddle itself.. uff.. according to me... suriya might not be the killer bcoz if he is the killer ... then it will not be revealed like this at the start itself... definitely the killer will be revealed only at last few chappies.. again my belief.. bcoz tats wat happens in every novel tat we will have someone in our mind as a suspect but wen the identity of the actual killer unveils tat will be totally opposite to our assumption.. most probably he might be the person who we never thought would be... and ofcourse i except the same here too... and abt jo's family.. wat a weird family??? r they really a family? bcoz they dont seem to b a family at all for me... head of the family has been murdered.. but the so called family is all behaving normal... he might be a bad person still ... wat abt blood relations then??? okkk... let me leave all those thoughts at u for now.. and its gud to see tat jalal and jo hav sorted out their misunderstanding now... and i really want to mention tat wen jalal was shouting at tat watchman and mr.sahani for their irresponsibility.. i had really imagined ACP.Pradyuman...lol... and waiting for the mystery behind the murder and the will to unfold... not soon.😉. bcoz i would love to see many riddles too... so thrilling... and thank u for a wonderful story and waiting for next update or to be more precise .. the next riddle... update soon stuti di..😊.

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Anonymous

@ParijatDeewani

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#486

Woah awesome bana hai rima. Apt for this story 👍🏼

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RamSiyaRam

@RamSiyaRam

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#487

CHAPTER 6 aye haye, Jalal feeling jealous of Surya's poetries😆😆 Haan bhai Surya ko sochna chahiye tha ki future mei Jalal will snoop into his personal diary and may find it troubling so he should have kept it systematic😆

The toxin of greed and cruelty has been mixed with the blood! The truth must be very hard but I will find that...=Matlab ek se zyada murder hue hai?😕 Surya gave a huge hint😲 but who is profit and principle between Bharmal and Sujamal? Oh so Sujamal was murdered?😲😲😲

Jodha becomes RICH😆😆 so does that mean she wont need a certain Mr😉

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Senapatichandri

@Senapatichandri

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#488

Originally posted by: lashy

You're amazing Rima!👏

thank you di 😉😉

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Senapatichandri

@Senapatichandri

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#489

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

Banner credit: Senapatichandri Aka Chandrima Di.. 😳 Thank you so much Di!😃

dhonnobad onurag sohokare grohon korilam!!! ayusmoti bhabo!!!😃😃

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Shinning_Stuti

@Shinning_Stuti

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#490

Originally posted by: kattylovestammy
first.. banner is super awesome..👏. and second.. stuti di i m here but little late.. no sooo late.. i accept.. tats bcoz i was little perplexed abt the clues.. so i had to revisit the story once again frm the start.. hmm coming to the story.. its getting interested chapter by chapter... i love crime novels and had read many crime novels in my mother tongue and this story is progressing in really perfect note like a crime novel.. this is exactly how the crime novel should be..my belief.. bcoz there r so many clues and hints but still we couldn't conclude who might be the killer.. and so many riddles in a riddle itself.. uff.. according to me... suriya might not be the killer bcoz if he is the killer ... then it will not be revealed like this at the start itself... definitely the killer will be revealed only at last few chappies.. again my belief.. bcoz tats wat happens in every novel tat we will have someone in our mind as a suspect but wen the identity of the actual killer unveils tat will be totally opposite to our assumption.. most probably he might be the person who we never thought would be... and ofcourse i except the same here too... and abt jo's family.. wat a weird family??? r they really a family? bcoz they dont seem to b a family at all for me... head of the family has been murdered.. but the so called family is all behaving normal... he might be a bad person still ... wat abt blood relations then??? okkk... let me leave all those thoughts at u for now.. and its gud to see tat jalal and jo hav sorted out their misunderstanding now... and i really want to mention tat wen jalal was shouting at tat watchman and mr.sahani for their irresponsibility.. i had really imagined ACP.Pradyuman...lol... and waiting for the mystery behind the murder and the will to unfold... not soon.😉. bcoz i would love to see many riddles too... so thrilling... and thank u for a wonderful story and waiting for next update or to be more precise .. the next riddle... update soon stuti di..😊.

Awww!!! Thank you so so very much for such a grand comment. 😃 🤗 These comments always increases the hunger of writing more good stuffs... Thank you so much and hope you will be there always like this in the journey of solving the riddles after riddles... 😉

About the pre-assumptions you made, I have to admit that all your logics are very apt till now. 😆 Abb dekhte hay kya hota hay! 🤣