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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: --cute.manasi--

Part 15...

Loved the start...๐Ÿ˜†

>> ๐Ÿ˜† Me too๐Ÿ˜ณ

The devar-bhabhi convo was amusing & humorous...๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

The way pyari bhabhi took class of her little devarji was...๐Ÿคฃ & teased him in good way...๐Ÿ˜Ž

>> ๐Ÿคฃ Ideal Devar-Bhabi s are like this only๐Ÿ˜†

She is caring & helpful , did her work assigned to her & gave her point...๐Ÿ˜ƒ

>> Efficient Bhabi๐Ÿ˜‰

Must say jalal has a good , caring family & with jo soon to become part of it...it will be a complete family .

>> Yes... They have a small and happy family and Jodha will get a beautiful family here๐Ÿ˜ณ

Then his arrival to madhubani along with rishav , a beautiful surprise for his beloved & offcourse what a timing he again managed to impress her family in his way , bringing rishav at this point was totally unexpected for them . he was right in telling jo that its their story let them took their own decisions they're getting second chance which comes to very few though it's a big thing for sukanya to accept the things the way they r , but she knows the truth since the monster is no more nor is the inconveniences created by him so she can analyse things with clear mind & could move on while for rishav too this is his final chance too compensate for all the tough decisions he had to make & never betray her ever again .

>> Yes. ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜ณ And they will live happily ever after.๐Ÿ˜ณ

Radhika kaki , lady lied so much hence the mess but finally its all cleared now , thanx to neelu...๐Ÿ˜ณ

>> Bechari kaki๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜†

The final part of the chapter , u very well developed the tension across the surroundings before the real culprit could be conformed...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

>> Thank youuu๐Ÿค—

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: --cute.manasi--

Part 16...

Meenakshi...๐Ÿ˜ญ

A life long struggle , that too strangulating one...

>> Really!๐Ÿ˜ญ

It was high volatage emotional chap !

>> Yes. And very tough to deliver also. Both this and the last one๐Ÿ˜ณ

Jalal being a tough cop did his duty , despite of so many dilemma he managed to go with the right thing his principles couldn't be influenced by anything & he was true so was his point...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

>> He is my sweet Jalal. I love him the most among my other Jalals ๐Ÿ˜† (Equally I am fond of Destined Love's Jalal. He is โญ๏ธ)๐Ÿ˜ณ

Jodha , very sad revelation to her but what could be done when she is totally unknown to the truth the dark past yet she is a strong lady , will not be drowned in the difficulties readily .

>> She will cope up and will eventually become the strongest pillar for her family.๐Ÿ˜ณ

The lives of meenakshi & sujamal , too much is being stolen from them .

>> ๐Ÿ˜”

Rightly said once in a while person does loses his patience , gets edgy & do not depend on karma for settling of scores , now that is the case here with meenakshi after discovering diary there was no right or wrong she did what she can & how she can though her plan had many loopholes it was sheer luck which saved her for soo long .

>> Right!๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

Along with jalal I too doubted her from the first part itself her nervousness when joja found her near staircase was very telling if not assuring since many events took place that night...๐Ÿฅฑ

>> I said na, this was predictable ๐Ÿ˜†

Then maan , his worst fears , all his misleading couldn't bore much to him atlast what he tried covering for soo long is out...๐Ÿ˜ฒ

>> ๐Ÿ˜”

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: --cute.manasi--

Part 17...

Meenakshi , maan...๐Ÿ˜ญ

& dadi too...๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ

>> Yes!! ๐Ÿ˜ญ

She also the second wife & her husband too was no less...๐Ÿ˜ก

>> Bharmal's father na? ๐Ÿ˜ก

The silent sufferers , I really feel bad for them . the saddest part is nothing could change these facts as jodha has said , nor one could go back in time & do the correction .

>> Yes! Both of them suffered throughout their life!

Whatever maan said to jalal...๐Ÿ˜ญ

It all explains his nature , why so reserve...he has faced the trauma !

>> Writing about Maan's outburst was an emotional ride for me. ๐Ÿ˜ญ

In all her siblings jodha was the boldest hence she could progress by taking her chances , she put up a tough fight but in all this she could never scrutinize what her closed ones hv to go through .

>> Yes... So Maan had a little grievance on her too. You can find a hint in the chapter f his confrontation with Jalal and Jodha

Maan has been closest to his mother , he has seen it all from the tender age .

>> I have assumed that being the younger son he used to stay with his parents in his childhood hence he had witnessed everything in his own eyes...

Jodha might have stayed much with her Daadi and sisters.

Like his elder sister he might wanted his mother also to retaliate , protest but meenakshi always wanted to secure the peace even if she had to bear all sort of disgust for it .

>> Yes. ๐Ÿ˜”

Hope life gives them strength to overcome it all & this time jo should take it upon herself because above all maan needs her , he needs someone to assure him , understand him & be always there for him . time for brother sister to bond & be a shoulder of surety .

>> He will slowly get used to and will cope up with life in future. Jalal is too there along with Jodha now. All will be well. ๐Ÿ˜Š

Jalal did what he could not too professional yet in command but controlled hence maan reflected his emotions for the first time . together jajo can do something for him .

>> They will ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Then dadi jalal is totally right about her , nothing more could be done she too had her reasons & universe will decide for her .

>> ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Finally the closure part...

Two lovers sitting on roof under the sky must be thinking what they hv come for & what it has come to . for jodha...jalal is her strength with him her side she can overcome it all since she has someone who is always looking for her & will do everything possible to keep her away from any harm , & jalal...jodha is his one & only love...he has always gestured that , he has extremely cared for her & will keep doing that .

>> You described so wonderfully!๐Ÿ˜ณ

their love is strong , unadulterated & intense...โค๏ธ

>> And they make a strong couple together!๐Ÿ˜ณ

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

>> He is my sweet Jalal. I love him the most among my other Jalals ๐Ÿ˜† (Equally I am fond of Destined Love's Jalal. He is โญ๏ธ)๐Ÿ˜ณ


ohoo , ahaa...valentine ki hawaaa...๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: --cute.manasi--


ohoo , ahaa...valentine ki hawaaa...๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†


โ˜บ๏ธi am in love with my own created character๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti


โ˜บ๏ธi am in love with my own created character๐Ÿ˜ณ


good good...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

but this jalal is just soo understanding...
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: --cute.manasi--


good good...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

but this jalal is just soo understanding...

I know. ๐Ÿ˜Ž
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Posted: 7 years ago

kudos to u stuti...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti


Jodha had no relationship with his father 2 years back. After Surya got the diary and Bharmal promised to marry Jodha off with him Bharmal mended the relationship with Jodha and she started visiting the family again.

As far as I remember, I meant that only๐Ÿค”


okk , i got it i thought surya too tried talking to jodha & has a hand in mending the relation.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

Whatever maan said to jalal...๐Ÿ˜ญ

It all explains his nature , why so reserve...he has faced the trauma !

>> Writing about Maan's outburst was an emotional ride for me. ๐Ÿ˜ญ

In all her siblings jodha was the boldest hence she could progress by taking her chances , she put up a tough fight but in all this she could never scrutinize what her closed ones hv to go through .

>> Yes... So Maan had a little grievance on her too. You can find a hint in the chapter f his confrontation with Jalal and Jodha

Maan has been closest to his mother , he has seen it all from the tender age .

>> I have assumed that being the younger son he used to stay with his parents in his childhood hence he had witnessed everything in his own eyes...

Jodha might have stayed much with her Daadi and sisters.

Hope life gives them strength to overcome it all & this time jo should take it upon herself because above all maan needs her , he needs someone to assure him , understand him & be always there for him . time for brother sister to bond & be a shoulder of surety .

>> He will slowly get used to and will cope up with life in future. Jalal is too there along with Jodha now. All will be well. ๐Ÿ˜Š

Finally the closure part...

Two lovers sitting on roof under the sky must be thinking what they hv come for & what it has come to . for jodha...jalal is her strength with him her side she can overcome it all since she has someone who is always looking for her & will do everything possible to keep her away from any harm , & jalal...jodha is his one & only love...he has always gestured that , he has extremely cared for her & will keep doing that .

>> You described so wonderfully!๐Ÿ˜ณ

their love is strong , unadulterated & intense...โค๏ธ

>> And they make a strong couple together!๐Ÿ˜ณ

yes they make a strong couple...๐Ÿ˜ƒ

& yeah i too felt that grievance in maan during confrontation , hope with time he makes peace with all the sad things .

thanx for replying...๐Ÿ˜ƒ


๐Ÿค—

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