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Posted: 8 years ago

Lovely lovely lovely chapter stuti👏... short but very gripping!😈 gripping but, very short!

poetries are really not his cup of tea. And this man Surya has wasted all the pages of his diaries by filling them up with all these ridiculous poems, that too addressing his girlfriend!! Idiot!

🤣My sweet ACP Saab... man kartaa hai cheeks pull karoon tumhaari

The yellow torn pages of a daily journal- says a lot of story unknowingly. The truth had been suppressed for such a long time... But how long one can hide a truth?

The toxin of greed and cruelty has been mixed with the blood! The truth must be very hard but I will find that...

16th Jan, 1997... 18th Jan, 1997...24th Jan, 1997...1st Feb 1997... 8th Feb 1997... 10th Feb,1997... And underline under the last date.

"PARESH SINDHU"

Then series of various addresses and phone numbers- mainly of Mahabaleswar, Panchgani and Pune, but some from the core Mumbai too.

Clash of two brothers- Bharmal and Sujamal... Profit VS Principle... Greed VS Virtue... Bad VS Good! So the story also ends the same way??

Everything is fair in love and war...

🤔 Surya's poems, doodles, footnote, the vague sayings, the dates - they're going to lead somewhere. The secret that threatened to bring down the entire empire?

"I love you Jalal! I love you very much! Jodha wiped her tears on his chest. "Please never misunderstand me!

Awww...

"I love you too, darling! I am sorry for being angry on you! Jalal kissed on her forehead. "You know what... I can't tolerate that anyone other than me will love you even more than me! I can't tolerate the fact that you can ever be a little bit concerned to any other man other than me! I just lost my mind reading Surya's love-poems and seeing your ornaments and photographs in his trunk!

☺️

"Mr. Khan is so possessive about me! Jodha smiled heartily this time. "You were jealous of Surya?

Awww

"I still am! Childhood love! Great poet! Huh! My foot!! Jalal bent his lips. "Don't take his name in front of me; I will again start quarrelling with you! You know how irritating is the experience to go through all his poems written for you? Ridiculous man he is! He has filled all the pages of diary with his idiotic funny poetries! Huh!!

🤣

"Oh! It's a treat to see such a form of ACP sahab!"

true!😆

"ACHHA??? Jodha tried to imitate Ruqaiya Ahmed... "Jalal Sir, where are you... Jalal sir, please take care of yourself... Jalal Sir, don't stress too much... Jalal Sir, come on let's go for coffee... Jalal sir Jalal Sir Jalal sir!!! Just a subordinate right???

Ahaaa Jodha won a point here! 😉

"No mister. She clearly flirts with you and you enjoy that very much! Now it was Jodha's turn to start a quarrel. "And when I put my objection you laugh at me telling that I am insecure! Now? Who is insecure??

And whatever Ruqaiya may do, she does not write poem for me, so it's pretty much justified for me to feel insecure!

Ta dah! Point in favour of Jalal! 😆

"Men will be men!! Jodha shook head sarcastically.

"Okay okay I lose! Now don't start again my darling! Jalal affectionately pulled Jodha's nose. "So...

No you didn't lose you silly guy you won!

"So what? Jodha acted innocent.

"So... I want my compensation... Jalal winked. He cupped her cheeks in his palms, took his lips nearer to her lips and exhaled passion with his breath... "I will never ever fight with you Jo... Promise... He uttered and touched her lips...

"Not now darling... Jodha put her finger on his lip passionately. "

'Not now?NOO ... OOO... OOO... OOO... '

"Now come on, come to my bedroom.

"Are you crazy? Jodha popped her eyes!

"What?? I just wanted to show you something! You naughty girl with nasty thoughts...Jalal winked.

'NOO ... OOO... OOO... OOO... '

"Papa was willing to write the whole property in my name?".

"He wanted to make Surya the trustee of the whole property."

"The property will be equally distributed between you, your brother and your mother."

"Your grandfather had clearly written in his will that his elder son will get everything, and his younger sons will not have any right on those. Only Mrs. Bhagwati Singh, I mean your grandmother owns this house as per that will..."


The wills (I'm finding the wills part a bit confusing as to who's getting what - first it says Jodha was going to get all the property then it says that it's to be divided between Jo/Bro and mom. Then that only Bharmal will get everything, then it says house belongs to Bhagwati?🤔)

And why members other than Bharmal's direct children are not going to receive a share of the property? I'll wait to read the next chapter to see what more it has to say... because it's far too premature to say anything about these small clooos!

And you stopped at 'Kaki?' Like seriously???😕😡
Go cookly cookly type the rest!

🤗
Edited by lashy - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Mindblowing..
The story is going to an interesting turn..
Update nxt part soon
Thnx for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
amazing update
thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
Stuti , dil khush kar diya yr. 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing update dear😊.
Thanks for pm.
And please update next chapter soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Another awsm chap stuti 😃
Shucksss even I've got bored with those idiotic poems of Surya
And those dates what is this all about 😆
That name that diary ufff I still feel Surya isn't the killer😆
Woah Akdha paart was so cute 😳😳
Jalal wanted compensation🤣
Finally Jalal admitted that he was jealous 🤣
Ufff yaha bhi Rukaiya 😡
Maza tab aaya when Jalal asked Jo to come to his bedroom🤣
To be honest mujhe bhi wahi laga jo Jo ko laga🤣
Dirty minds 🤣
Wow case aur zada interesting hota ja raha hai
Bharmal's will shocked me the most 😲
Surya ko trustee 😲
He's really sick 🤢
Apne family ko chodke us pagal me bharosa kiya
Chaddo hume kya 😆😆
I wanna know what Jo wants to unravel with the farm ka thing 😊
Very well written stuti 👏👏
Update soon plz 😃😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
Very interesting chapter dear ...
Joja scene was too gud
Continue soon
Thxc 4r pm
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Bindu.

Hey Stuti, things are turning more and more interesting,dear..I'm glad Jo and Jalal sorted out their issues and are one again!

Surya is related to this family by blood..I feel..update soon!



Thank yo so much bindu di...
Hmm, your guess is nice and unique! 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
thanks
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Posted: 8 years ago
interesting update...waiting how Jalal and Jo decode Surya's poems...if the poems really mean something , that is..😉😆

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